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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 96)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 6:58pm | IP Logged

"wow"

'that was awesome"
 
oh gosh i mean i dont even know how to say this or how to describe this part
cuz it was amazing
just great
GOOD JOB!
cant wait for the next oneee!!

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
That was a simply fantastic update, Zeph. 
I dont know why you called it crappy!! It was just too good. 

I , for one, loved seeing Riddhima manaoing Armaan for a change. 
Armaan is just a darling and probably the most perfect boyfriend/fiance ever known!! And Riddhima sure takes him for granted sometimes.. So it was really nice seeing her go after him!! 

Loved the passion you portrayed in just a simple kiss!!!
You have such a way with words, its like actually watching the scenes live! 
This FF is clearly one of the BEST Ever ! 

And the line that had me in splits at the end was Armaan  saying :: "And what about my sperm?


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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
WWR it was...or still is....or will always be...cause with all of them involved they're always looking for reasons to create WWR3....lol...

Great update...I know you said you'll be updating only on Sunday's...but that doesn't help readers like me..who can't wait for the next part...so continue soon...

Love,
Khyati

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
Lovedddddddddddd the last part Blushing

finally an AR scene LOL
ahh that WW3 fight had gotten me so angry...I was waiting for it to end LOL

I love the part where she says there is a chocolate made especially for you and he doesn't get it at all
D'oh and then he teaches her seductive moves when all she wants to do is kiss him on the lips LOL

ahh loved the 3rd installment Big smile


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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
Good Morning................TWOS..I run to read now :-)
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Hey Rachna Di...:)
First of all....a BIG CONGRATULATIONS to u for reaching thread 8...:) it's a commendable job...n luv this ff alotttttttttttttttttttt...<3
well the part was amazing...wud def be an understatement...... because it was way tooo special....<3
AR's feelings..they way u brought it out was out of words....glad Ridz understood that Armaan cannot be taken for granted all the time.... loved the way she manaofied him...it was highly cute...awwwwwn Armaan is sooooo over protective even if he is angry with her..wowwww Luved n lived each moment happily...<3
thanx for the pm n cont soon...:)
tc :)
Preet <3

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
oh gosh i read ur upd8 last nite ..... n the whole time i was lik awwwwww hw cute, hw hot n then bang this line jus  took me off frm awwing mode..
i jus couldnt stop laughing at it

He looked back into her eyes lovingly and kissing the back of her hand asked her seriously, "And what about my sperm?.."

omg , this is was so hilarious.....i was lik armaan tu kabhi nahi sudhar sakta n thats wat happened tooo, ridzi said the sam ething.....
aww i so love him.... 
haha i knew minni wud tak all the bhav she wud want. she's is a typical girl......my ammy's little girlfrend

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
yayyy you finally finished the part :) 
it was greattt :) 
would it be too greedy to ask for another one soon?
hehe 
Love, 
kriya <33

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