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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 20)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
aweeeeeeeeeee the part was way too cute adorableTongue
i just love the part in which mini n rounakn were teasing eachother Big smile
n than complaining abt eachother to armaan
i found minnie as mischievious as armaan
the part in which armaan supported mini 4her naughtiness in her class n caught riddhima glaring at him 4 that that was jus superb
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loved it Big smile
excellent work Clap
continue soonSmile

Edited by anushkajain - 04 March 2011 at 4:22pm

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Mind-Blowing Part Zappy..
Aww Minnie Was Scolded.. :((
Lol Raunak Is Kinda Mean.. Coz He Snitched Of Minnie..
Hehe Ammy As Primce Charming..
Well Hes Every Girls Prince Charming <3..
Love Da Way Riddhima Comforted Armaan.. Showing Dat She Is Der For Him..
Love AR/KaJen
Continue Soon

Lots of love Rabia
Once A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jeni'ian.. Always A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jen'ian <3



Edited by kajen4lyf - 04 March 2011 at 5:24pm

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
Relief I felt after Reading TWOS...I had missed TWOS Sooooo Much :-(

Thank you for update.Smile

Minne going on Armaan way..Loved it

God u make me go back to DMG1 and I have to see some Minne and her Boyfriend Scenes

You Make me Miss DMG1 more with your fab Gang scenes..
I always like them to together
Thanks Zappy for nice update ..thank youSmile


Edited by taniyaarman - 04 March 2011 at 6:42pm

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
Congrats hun well deserved <3

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged

Even awesome fails to descibe this part....these characters are so true to their personalities, that even when Armaan - Ridhhima are fighting this silly fight, a sense of others presence in the most subtle way remains. That is what true love is, you dont need mush or words, just the heart understanding the heart. Update more soon!

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DMG fan

Even awesome fails to descibe this part....these characters are so true to their personalities, that even when Armaan - Ridhhima are fighting this silly fight, a sense of others presence in the most subtle way remains. That is what true love is, you dont need mush or words, just the heart understanding the heart. Update more soon!


you caught exactly what i was trying to get through. glad you read their love between the lines and loud noise.. i thought i was being too subtle.. good to know i wasnt! Smile
will definitely continue tonight!

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged

Lovely part, i actually enjoyed the whole scenerio between Minnie and Raunak, and it brought back good memories of my childhood..lol though im not that old, but those were the days lol

You also described their emotions really well, and Armaan loves them both equally lol
Also, though there werent any AR scenes in particular..but their love was shown especially with that one gesture...when riddhima put her hand on armaans shoulder...their relationship has truly grown to another level :) And throghout the entire FF, youve expressed and illustrated ARs developments into individual characters and as one soul PERFECTLY :) And i love it when Riddhima stands up for Armaan even when theyre bickering :)
Cant wait for you to finish off the part Big smile


Edited by Armaan-KSG - 04 March 2011 at 9:40pm

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Ok so thats just a brilliant part ! So adorable ,so cute and if I may say so ,so Armaanish LOL .Him and kids are a treat to read !
Raunak and Minnie are almost Junior  versions of AR ,they bicker like they would when they didnt know they'd actually ever even like each other ROFL 
I feel bad for Minnie ,she is getting it from all the sides LOL
I miss AR Disapprove but since I know you do too ,I hope the next update has them ! 
Thanks a ton for updating in all the work you have ! A brilliant suprise to wake upto Big smile

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