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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 114)

maanu Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged

heyya rachna............

i know i m late.... but actually ur early in posting next part that i m late...

so thats not my fault...........

now abt the part... it was awsum...

i specially liked ...

1. basket next time meri aakh use karege... that was simply very armaan.... and ridzi asking chance maar rahe ho....

2. basket i love u wether u need my sperm or not.... that was very cute... the wwe 3 was very sticky... i really think how can anyone be maturely childish... but they surely can.......

3. i really liked that for once armaan was actually forcing riddhima for his own feelings.. though she was a part opf it... but once for himself he was using his force that shows that he really thinks he owns riddhima for which he can do that....

4. the outburst of armann... it was apt but here i thought ridzi wud actually kiss him and they wud go to cottage....

5. ridzi manaoing armaan... she has truely learnt so much from armaan.... and here i liked the whole chocolate issue and ridzi telling armaan tum kaise ho.. main chance de rahi hu aur tum le hi nahi rahe.......

now the next part..

i liked for once ridzi forgetting everyonr and conciously being close to armaan.... 

but i hated it hat u have wrecked the beautiful cottage...

better repair the cottage asap......

eagerly waiting for the next installment


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angelic_ridzy Groupbie

Joined: 01 February 2011
Posts: 108

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged

This is a SHOCKING installment.....i too dint expect dis happen ...common yar it was their dream cottage after sad for ridzy...and armaan too....Shocked

So after all Dr.Riddhima Gupta has learnt her lesson...Ouch Shanky papa was weird to sounds weird now also while i write can neva change i guess...

I am juz ur writing..ClapClapClap .how cum u remember every small detail that has they wer in a hurry so they dint lock the cottage and now itz a total wreck..Yeah u have made this a real fan fiction..v can visualise what u write...I wish KAJEN would act on this wud b really nice to c their WW3 and the first basket ball match and all other scenes...

I cudnt comment on the earlier post here i go...
The WW3 was awesum and it has brought its on lessons for ridzy...I tell u dis riddhima is such a NAUTANKI..she has (what do i say) utilised,i gues..armaan's weakness....The soft corner armaan has for her ankle...M confused is he in love with her ankle???LOLLOL
What about my sperm?? this is armaan at his shameless best..he has to try and win every argument..he juz cant let go...How daft could he get...he dint get any of the hints that riddhima had given him..
hope i dint forget nethn...
i dint knw u upd8td...thank god my xams over and i chckd this thread...Wink

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Riddss IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11141

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for the installment
continue soon


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jiyaa_m IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 October 2009
Posts: 14243

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
what the hell

gang is impossibleeeeeee

no plzzzzzzzzzzzz zeppyyyyyyyyyy dont do it

complete it soon

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ARCaskettFan Goldie

Joined: 26 October 2010
Posts: 1218

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Awesum part!!

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z.e.p.h.y.r IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 January 2010
Posts: 16698

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
ohhhh nooooCry
their dream cottage is ruined :(
 i felt sorry for them the gang hav to listen once in a while
continue soon x

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gupta.aditi20 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 September 2010
Posts: 3374

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
poor ar...
their dream house.......
yaar i wanna see reactions of all frndz......
after finding out whose place is this!!!
pls pls pls........

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z.e.p.h.y.r IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 May 2010
Posts: 3373

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaishiksg

oh by the way zappy i wnated tell u that i hav recommended ksg's dad to read ur ff...... n i hav provided him the link too....hehe

oh that's really sweet of you..  but if he is KSG's dad then he's obviously older than my parents.. lol!! and i dont think my parents would enjoy what i write.. seriously.. so even if he does read it i'll be damn embarrassed yaa!! Embarrassed
btw.. you friends with his dad!! that;s so cute.. TongueEmbarrassed

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