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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 109)

sjain IF-Addictz

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged

Rhea.KaJen Goldie

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
I will srsly kill the gang!
I mean how could they ??
i was crying while reading tht part where they break the window and the door... :'(
I'm still sniffing....
I'll comment later! After the part will be completed!

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SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
ohk thanx for the upd8.........
bt i m crying nw..........
stupid idiot who the hell that chor that idiot cant....steal my ar's belongings.. tahst nt possible. zappy i want all teh belongings bak..... or else i will kill u seriously.........

bt it wud so much wen they(gang) get to  knw that its AR's cottage.......

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SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zephyrr

ok.. i see many of you think the gang wrecked the house.. but no.. they got robbed and some random third party has vandalized the place.. you cant leave your house unlocked for days together and expect anything better, can you.. 

thanks for all your sweet comments for the previous and this part.. i am sorry but i cant really individually reply to all you guys.. all i can say is a thank you.. and keep reading! :)

i understand that zappy bt itsa fictious story rite. dun gt too realistic yaar........
i dunno y bt its painning lik hell. its as if i can very much feel ar's loss..... becoz that cottage is really close to my heart too.... gosh yaar...
i jus hope that.. unki zyaada kuch valuable cheezen na khoyi ho..... i will die..... frgt abt me my AR will die of grief n i dun think ne one of us want that

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Suvarna.... Goldie

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Oops ....  who destroyed their dream home? Anyway, opportunity for AR to weave new dreams and build their home again. Atleast now it will be strong enough and would remain cherished.

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Hazel-eye Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:03am | IP Logged
awwwww... Rachna Thank u so much!!!!
It was truely a SURPRISE!!! i Loved it!!!
I was thinking frm d time when dey got stuck in d traffic jam tht they'll surely land upto AR's dreamland Cottage...n dat only happened!!!
I want to CRYCry...My AR dream cottage is destroyed by Gang...I'll Kill ThemAngry..good for nothing...aaarrggghhhh!!!
It seems like my AR dreamz are shattered!!!
I seriously want both of dem to shout on Gang "ki yeh Humara cottage hai for godsake don't destroy it!!!

Edited by akufull2mad - 22 March 2011 at 12:16am

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sakshilovesAR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged

omg zeffy u updated!!!!!

u r fast in puttung the 1 installment but then you just slow down as a turtule but anyways u updated!!!i am gonnna read it now!!


aww finally riddhima overcomes all her shyness and all

i  guessd that thy would find their dream cottage but didnt thought that it would be like a junk yard but how did this happened ?????did i missed sum thing in the previous parts????

complete the part soon

Edited by sakshilovesAR - 22 March 2011 at 1:09am
-Anku- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
OMG you updated Big smile thats a pleasant suprise and you do really need a pat on the back because its the third in 2 days !
OMG thats sad their dream house in the sad condition Unhappy but alls gonna be well coz they are together,am sure they'll make it better !
Oh but am more intrigued to know whether the gang finds outs its their house !! Oh the bit in the car where she finally decides that how not being shy and giving him the much needed attention is whats needed is what I loveeed ,am glad they took this step forward !! I always thought she should stop shying away ! 
Its a lovely part as usual cant wait to read more !
Thanks a ton for the update 

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