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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 107)

Munchkin. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 27 September 2010
Posts: 4513

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Yay! I'm first! Lalalalalalalalala! Dancing

Coming to the installment:-

One word:- SHOCKING!

How, when, why? Like this was something I least expected right now! I mean robbery and all...That's harsh! I mean....It's terrible! Their dream house......

But I guess that's what I like about TWOS....The reality aspect....! You make the story so real I actually feel I'm present there!

Keep it up girl! Thumbs Up

Hope you continue soon (just like this previous time! Wink)

x x 

Edited by Dmg8594 - 22 March 2011 at 9:16am

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rinku28 Groupbie

Joined: 03 April 2009
Posts: 116

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
OMG...I can't believe you updated so quickly....Clap

*comment updated*

At least WWR wast a total waste...Riddhima learned something LOL....

when the part started....I thought, one way or the other they'd end up in their cottage....but it's so a way I'm glad they didn't come here by themselves.... you've surprised all of us with an update...surprise us again and finish this part quickly...I know always greedy....never satisfied....but that's because you're an awesome writer and we appreciate all your efforts....especially those that are so unexpected....


Edited by rinku28 - 21 March 2011 at 3:15pm

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armaania13 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 February 2010
Posts: 3800

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
This is a very SWEET Surprise, Zepphhhhhh!!!
And THANK YOU so very much for such a super-fast update!
Will read and then comment!!!!

Awww--- Riddhima finally overcoming her shyness and sitting, rather sleeping off in Armaan's lap.. That bit was chhhhhhhhho chweeeeeeeeeeeet!!!
Felt so happpy for Armaan!

And what the hell happened to their dream cottage!!! How could someone just vandalize it like that!!
I had guessed they would reach the cottage, but didnt think that it would turn out like this!!!
Poor AR!!! Ouch

Edited by armaania13 - 21 March 2011 at 3:19pm

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Hazel-eyez.e.p.h.y.rAanya.SankiPagal Goldie

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Posts: 2171

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
thanku zapsss.... loved the insc.    well but wat happened to the cottage..... Shocked

Edited by Tia_0810 - 21 March 2011 at 3:13pm

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anushkajain Goldie

Joined: 08 June 2010
Posts: 1599

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
 u updatedShocked Big smileso nice of u................. u surely deserve a pat ......... sabash zappy love u muaaah
wow riddhima getting used to pda.........atleast in her sleepy stateBig smile
omg!!!!!ShockedDisapprove what happen to their dream cottage
i think u took us seriously................ab  toh they have to seriously clean it u know asli wala not that mushy wala..Wink.LOL.............u na never stop surprising as well as shocking us...........with ur  uniquely designed brain
u r right we should expect unexpected from u
continue soon

Edited by anushkajain - 21 March 2011 at 4:08pm

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Jinal3patel Goldie

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Posts: 1516

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
thank u rach!!
what a surprising surpise?!!!
really enjoyed reading the parts...

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KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 December 2009
Posts: 22539

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved girls vs boys
there fights r hilerious
dont like AR fighting
glad they made up
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm 

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-RabiaKSGKaJen- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 January 2010
Posts: 6474

Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Yesh You Deserve A Pat On The Back....
Thank You Sooo Much For Updatin Shuper Fashttt <3..
Oye Hoye.. Riddhima Has Overcome Her Shynesss <3..
OMFG... How Can The Gang Vandalise Someone Else's PROPERTIES..
And Plus It Belonged To ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA..
Their Dream Cottage :(...
Goddd Zephhhyyyy You Need To Update The Nxt Partt Soon..
Wanna Read It ....

Once A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jeni'ian.. Always A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jen'ian <3

Edited by -RabiaKSGKaJen- - 22 March 2011 at 9:55am

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