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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 101)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
HEY AWESOME UPDATEEE...

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
mindblowing
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Superb part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
t.c.
Update soon.

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Hey Zappy!!!Hug
it was so long..Day Dreaming.Dancing...luvd it n i  m sure d ww3 is not gonna end ever....it is a combo of small fights........
d fights were cute n d makeout session was sensuous...Blushing

luvd it n njoyed it thoroughly......

post the next part soon
tc
luv
nandini

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
res (c u after 5days)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
O.K ..
i really hav no words !!
m speechless Stern Smile
HEAVENLY it was Day Dreaming
however, i Must say , the "Electricity Motion" part was A-W-E-S-O-M-E !!
Day Dreaming
so HOT Blushing

cont. soon please !!!

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 3:50am | IP Logged
WOW that was an amazing part ,I lovee the way you writee ,the way you express everything is just so brilliant that one cant stop being as addicted as we all are to the story ! The best part is that you've presented  the characters really well about how their own upbringing or atmosphere they have lived in ,makes up for what they are and affects them in whatever they say or do ,its all so inter connected and you've shown it amazingly ,which is not what everyone can do !
The whole chocolate part was awesomee ROFL My fav from the whole part ! I love it when Riddhima sets out to manao Armaan ,he is such a sweetheart it takes a few Sorry's and love you's and there you go Armaan melted already Embarrassed 

I am sooo glad they have sorted out their differences,it honestly was way too long since they had been bickering ,over serious or non serious issues.Riddhima had been taking Armaan for granted from way too long she needs to know where she has to draw the line .Even though I did think that Armaan let go off the matter really soon for all that she told him LOL,she was really unfair ,but well anyways she knew she was wrong  apologised which is what was needed !!and its true she has always cared a lot for him despite everything , she is such a nautanki though I think that part of her is because of her Sangati (her Armaan LOL )

A lots been going on between then since they came back from Singapore and I hope now things are gonna be ok for a while atleast :) even though a lot has been spoken about his parents I believe there should be a time when he speaks out to her about all the good moments he has had with them ! 

P.S Riddhima needs to stop getting so shy when they are around people LOL he is her fiance 


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lovely part

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