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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 (Page 81)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
He is the main reason for her change n he is thnking why she changed
Wah Zakham bhi khud do aur marham lagene bhi khud aao
I hate Maan
Loved MK she really missed Maan a lot
All the thgs she culdnt do back in 7 yrs is dng now

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
 
mk n maan convo was awesome. d endless call reminded geet of all d endless calls they had made to eachother.
 
the dialouge
she cried: kuch bhi tho nahi badla
Geet - na aap na halat..her voice trailed off in the most disappointed tone. He had never heard her so hopeless, helpless. The tone wretched and etched in pain, as if she is left confused almost numb inside.
 
was just heartwenching, had tears n felt like crying at d pain of geet n maan.

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
ooooooo i just loved the part dear
it was just fabulous every bit of it every single line of it every single dialogue of it every single emotion of it every single expression of it
was just amazing
i just loved father nd daughter conversation ooo that was really sweet nd then she slept just like her mother reminded sum of the very sweet memories
 
then liked the way geet n maan talked that too after so long
loved the way both realized that they were on the line after a long tym
hearts of both were restless by listening to their breath it felt so ggod that how ur heart can easily recognize the 1 u love

wen i read ur update i felt like i was dreaming

by reading ur update 2day i went 2 sum dream world of theirs


the dream which we all dreamt of he telling a story 2 his daughter nd she slept she came nd then they chatted a bit nd then sumwhere she also felt asleep
maan really missed a beat wen he heard  geet saying sum1 "woh" refering sum1 as mk fathers  nd hers wat he tnks he could b their if wudnt have done all that he did

both wanted 2 say sumthing 2 each other desperately wanted 2 cry their heart out after all these yearz

bt both didnt say a word abt theirself like its lost sumwhere long ago that wat they feel 4 each other bt non realize that they still living 4 each other o lord wat a LOVE
the way they discussed their daughter that who she is like the way they fought sweetly softly they  would have alwayz abt which geet alwayz dreamt off but

she wanted this she loved the way he still cared nt 4 her only bt 4 them that he was confused nd worried on other side that wat why many questions lingering in his minds bt still he never spoke like ver he was he didnt changed it seems bt everything changed within them except their LOVE  their CARE their unspoken WORDS which no1 can hear except them
still they were way far 4rm each other bt still close to each others heart
still in each others life

still the separation couldnt stop them 4rm loving each other MADLY
well just with hope would like to say
 
hopefully everything will sort out soon or later bt it will
muski darling loved the part nd thank u so much 4 such a long update loved it
it was amazing i slept peacefully dreaming abt them

keep writing dear
du post the next part soon

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
loved mk-maan talk...ab toh mk ka naam bata do......update soon

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l

muskan be ready for another flood of scenes 2night....
since u have changed the situation...so now we have to come up with new ones...LOL
what say rakhi....i believe raat to 100 pages to cross kar hi lenge...Wink

yes jyoti
we will come wiht new scenes today and I'll continue my old scene today and complete it today,
yes more than 100 cross karegi sureLOL


hey dear i just read ur parts those were awesum really loved it hope u cont. soon me too added in a waiting list

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Hi muskan. After a long time I was happy with the update. Loved the phone conversation, first the father and the daughter conversation and then was happy for Geet and Maan. Atleast she might have slept for some time peacefully after hearing his heartbeats.

Y do I feel that you r going to make Maan visit Baramulla, to Geet's place and let him find out that she and MK have been virtually living with him as a family and MK is his daughter.?

Waise what name have you finalized for MK?

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Once again, as usual, after every update, I am demanding for GEET MAAN RE-UNION.

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskaan_cute19

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l

muskan be ready for another flood of scenes 2night....
since u have changed the situation...so now we have to come up with new ones...LOL
what say rakhi....i believe raat to 100 pages to cross kar hi lenge...Wink

yes jyoti
we will come wiht new scenes today and I'll continue my old scene today and complete it today,
yes more than 100 cross karegi sureLOL


hey dear i just read ur parts those were awesum really loved it hope u cont. soon me too added in a waiting list


OMG we have fans waiting for our bakwas scenes..........hailaShocked LOL

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