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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 (Page 57)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

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Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



at breakfast table........dadi, annie, anjali, nt, dev, devash, arjun (if he is ghar-jamai)
dadi- good morning beta
maan- good morning dadi
anjali n devash: good morning mamu n uncle
maan-- good morning with smile
dev-- kya baat hai bro aap aaj bohut acche mood me hai
maan- smile n remember MK n his promise to play broad game with her
maan- ayesha kuch nahi hai (maan yaar baata do iss clan ko MK ke bare mein if u dont want MU)
everyone smiles
DADI-- maan bete woh aaj party hai ghar pe toh
maan- aap janti hai i hate parties
dadi-- janti hu par (in her mind :savitri think fast agar maan nahi aya toh woh announcement kese karugi)
dadi- lekin bete ......yeh party toh un officers ke honor mein rakhihe..... u have to attend.... what will they think.......humari izzat ka kya hoga
maan-- he was too busy thinking about geet n MK---- said ok.....jaisa aap thik samje dadi
dadi-- smile....thank you bete
maan give weak smile to dadi n gets up saying bye
but then remember something n returns
maan- dev
dev-- yes bro
maan-- cancel all my meeting
everyone is shock to hear this
dev-- all meeting still trying to digest wht he just hear
maan --- yes i will not be coming to office today........ n.... adi will help u ........call me if u need me
dev-- but
maan---gave him angry stare
dev--- ok
maan-- thanks
left khurana mansion


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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



daadi sees maan has a smile on his face...so she is also happy as its been a long time since he had a genuine smile on his face...
daadi -- dekha annie maan aaj kitne khush lag rahe hai..
annie -- haan daadi maine bhi notice kiya...pata nahi kya baat hai...
daadi -- hame sab pata hai...
annie -- as usual dead brain -- matlad...
daadi -- hamne kal sameera se bola tha ki unse baat kar le...n hame lagta hai sam se baat karne ke baad hi ye sab hua hai...
annie -- sach me daadi??
daadi -- ab hame pura yakin hai ki hum sahi kar rahe hain...aaj raat ki party me hi hum inki engagement announce kar denge...
annie -- party me
maan till then comes down from stairs -- party??
daadi -- wo beta...hame jis inspector ne aaki jaan bachyi thi uske liye party rakhi hai...
maan -- daadi aapko pata hai mujhe ye parties bilkul pasand nahi...
daadi -- maan hum kuch nahi sunna chahte...bas aap party attend kar rahe hain....hum us sajhs ko ...kya naam hai..
annie -- gk..
daadi -- haan gk...use thnx kehna chate hain...
maan when hearing the name starts thinking once again...
since he already has doubts abt it...so he thinks kets c  who he is...n jab tak mai uski thodi info bhi pata kar leta hai...
kahin nera shak sahi to nahi...n us pvt investigator se bhi mujhe milna hai...


can I kill these two phir se maaneet ko alag karne ki sajis
sach mei yaar 
y do thy assume things 
cnt thy just go n ask n hope here devansh n anjali tells dadi n annie abt mk  calling maan daddy

they will not, this annie and dadi , pichli baar bhi confusion , mu create kye the indirectly .
and sure rehena iss baar bhi karegi
 and devansh and anjali, hope these two kids told every one about  mk calling maan daddy

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



at breakfast table........dadi, annie, anjali, nt, dev, devash, arjun (if he is ghar-jamai)
dadi- good morning beta
maan- good morning dadi
anjali n devash: good morning mamu n uncle
maan-- good morning with smile
dev-- kya baat hai bro aap aaj bohut acche mood me hai
maan- smile n remember MK n his promise to play broad game with her
maan- ayesha kuch nahi hai (maan yaar baata do iss clan ko MK ke bare mein if u dont want MU)
everyone smiles
DADI-- maan bete woh aaj party hai ghar pe toh
maan- aap janti hai i hate parties
dadi-- janti hu par (in her mind :savitri think fast agar maan nahi aya toh woh announcement kese karugi)
dadi- lekin bete ......yeh party toh un officers ke honor mein rakhihe..... u have to attend.... what will they think.......humari izzat ka kya hoga
maan-- he was too busy thinking about geet n MK---- said ok.....jaisa aap thik samje dadi
dadi-- smile....thank you bete
maan give weak smile to dadi n gets up saying bye
but then remember something n returns
maan- dev
dev-- yes bro
maan-- cancel all my meeting
everyone is shock to hear this
dev-- all meeting still trying to digest wht he just hear
maan --- yes i will not be coming to office today........ n.... adi will help u ........call me if u need me
dev-- but
maan---gave him angry stare
dev--- ok
maan-- thanks
left khurana mansion



nice one
I'll kill dadi , again indirectly responsible or want to create muAngry.

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

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Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



daadi sees maan has a smile on his face...so she is also happy as its been a long time since he had a genuine smile on his face...
daadi -- dekha annie maan aaj kitne khush lag rahe hai..
annie -- haan daadi maine bhi notice kiya...pata nahi kya baat hai...
daadi -- hame sab pata hai...
annie -- as usual dead brain -- matlad...
daadi -- hamne kal sameera se bola tha ki unse baat kar le...n hame lagta hai sam se baat karne ke baad hi ye sab hua hai...
annie -- sach me daadi??
daadi -- ab hame pura yakin hai ki hum sahi kar rahe hain...aaj raat ki party me hi hum inki engagement announce kar denge...
annie -- party me
maan till then comes down from stairs -- party??
daadi -- wo beta...hame jis inspector ne aaki jaan bachyi thi uske liye party rakhi hai...
maan -- daadi aapko pata hai mujhe ye parties bilkul pasand nahi...
daadi -- maan hum kuch nahi sunna chahte...bas aap party attend kar rahe hain....hum us sajhs ko ...kya naam hai..
annie -- gk..
daadi -- haan gk...use thnx kehna chate hain...
maan when hearing the name starts thinking once again...
since he already has doubts abt it...so he thinks kets c  who he is...n jab tak mai uski thodi info bhi pata kar leta hai...
kahin nera shak sahi to nahi...n us pvt investigator se bhi mujhe milna hai...


can I kill these two phir se maaneet ko alag karne ki sajis
sach mei yaar 
y do thy assume things 
cnt thy just go n ask n hope here devansh n anjali tells dadi n annie abt mk  calling maan daddy

they will not, this annie and dadi , pichli baar bhi confusion , mu create kye the indirectly .
and sure rehena iss baar bhi karegi
 and devansh and anjali, hope these two kids told every one about  mk calling maan daddy


yeah........paka DADi-n Annie will do something stupid.......... if anjali n devash tell maan about MK....but i doubt as they dont like her.......bc remember she threw their broad game away....... n will tell how bad she(MK) behaved with them........n........dadi n annie will start their ramayan again

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



daadi sees maan has a smile on his face...so she is also happy as its been a long time since he had a genuine smile on his face...
daadi -- dekha annie maan aaj kitne khush lag rahe hai..
annie -- haan daadi maine bhi notice kiya...pata nahi kya baat hai...
daadi -- hame sab pata hai...
annie -- as usual dead brain -- matlad...
daadi -- hamne kal sameera se bola tha ki unse baat kar le...n hame lagta hai sam se baat karne ke baad hi ye sab hua hai...
annie -- sach me daadi??
daadi -- ab hame pura yakin hai ki hum sahi kar rahe hain...aaj raat ki party me hi hum inki engagement announce kar denge...
annie -- party me
maan till then comes down from stairs -- party??
daadi -- wo beta...hame jis inspector ne aaki jaan bachyi thi uske liye party rakhi hai...
maan -- daadi aapko pata hai mujhe ye parties bilkul pasand nahi...
daadi -- maan hum kuch nahi sunna chahte...bas aap party attend kar rahe hain....hum us sajhs ko ...kya naam hai..
annie -- gk..
daadi -- haan gk...use thnx kehna chate hain...
maan when hearing the name starts thinking once again...
since he already has doubts abt it...so he thinks kets c  who he is...n jab tak mai uski thodi info bhi pata kar leta hai...
kahin nera shak sahi to nahi...n us pvt investigator se bhi mujhe milna hai...


can I kill these two phir se maaneet ko alag karne ki sajis

of course dear...anytime..we r with u...but i want them to get humiliated first by maan ...coz i think geet will not say anything to them....waise jr mk to hai hi...WinkLOL

yes me too want maan give them nice ansLOL
waise me complte 20000 postEmbarrassed

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by rsroopali

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



daadi sees maan has a smile on his face...so she is also happy as its been a long time since he had a genuine smile on his face...
daadi -- dekha annie maan aaj kitne khush lag rahe hai..
annie -- haan daadi maine bhi notice kiya...pata nahi kya baat hai...
daadi -- hame sab pata hai...
annie -- as usual dead brain -- matlad...
daadi -- hamne kal sameera se bola tha ki unse baat kar le...n hame lagta hai sam se baat karne ke baad hi ye sab hua hai...
annie -- sach me daadi??
daadi -- ab hame pura yakin hai ki hum sahi kar rahe hain...aaj raat ki party me hi hum inki engagement announce kar denge...
annie -- party me
maan till then comes down from stairs -- party??
daadi -- wo beta...hame jis inspector ne aaki jaan bachyi thi uske liye party rakhi hai...
maan -- daadi aapko pata hai mujhe ye parties bilkul pasand nahi...
daadi -- maan hum kuch nahi sunna chahte...bas aap party attend kar rahe hain....hum us sajhs ko ...kya naam hai..
annie -- gk..
daadi -- haan gk...use thnx kehna chate hain...
maan when hearing the name starts thinking once again...
since he already has doubts abt it...so he thinks kets c  who he is...n jab tak mai uski thodi info bhi pata kar leta hai...
kahin nera shak sahi to nahi...n us pvt investigator se bhi mujhe milna hai...


can I kill these two phir se maaneet ko alag karne ki sajis
sach mei yaar 
y do thy assume things 
cnt thy just go n ask n hope here devansh n anjali tells dadi n annie abt mk  calling maan daddy

they will not, this annie and dadi , pichli baar bhi confusion , mu create kye the indirectly .
and sure rehena iss baar bhi karegi
 and devansh and anjali, hope these two kids told every one about  mk calling maan daddy


yeah........paka DADi-n Annie will do something stupid.......... if anjali n devash tell maan about MK....but i doubt as they dont like her.......bc remember she threw their broad game away....... n will tell how bad she(MK) behaved with them........n........dadi n annie will start their ramayan again

un dono ke ti main Angry
hope maan aapna dimag jaldi lagayeLOL

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=Teenage.dream][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=rsroopali][QUOTE=komlika][QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok
maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together

maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)




maan wake up n try to hear it again (guys its been 7 n half year)....by the time geet switch of watch alarm...n goes back to sleep.......n........maan thinks he was dreaming about it n feels sad
maan goes to do morning excersice n think about his time spend with MK n compare geet with MK........ thinking how similar they r........n.........a smile appear on his face
maan comes down to breakfast table
 (ok now someone continue with khurana clan conversation then i will continue MK-maan-geet meeting



daadi sees maan has a smile on his face...so she is also happy as its been a long time since he had a genuine smile on his face...
daadi -- dekha annie maan aaj kitne khush lag rahe hai..
annie -- haan daadi maine bhi notice kiya...pata nahi kya baat hai...
daadi -- hame sab pata hai...
annie -- as usual dead brain -- matlad...
daadi -- hamne kal sameera se bola tha ki unse baat kar le...n hame lagta hai sam se baat karne ke baad hi ye sab hua hai...
annie -- sach me daadi??
daadi -- ab hame pura yakin hai ki hum sahi kar rahe hain...aaj raat ki party me hi hum inki engagement announce kar denge...
annie -- party me
maan till then comes down from stairs -- party??
daadi -- wo beta...hame jis inspector ne aaki jaan bachyi thi uske liye party rakhi hai...
maan -- daadi aapko pata hai mujhe ye parties bilkul pasand nahi...
daadi -- maan hum kuch nahi sunna chahte...bas aap party attend kar rahe hain....hum us sajhs ko ...kya naam hai..
annie -- gk..
daadi -- haan gk...use thnx kehna chate hain...
maan when hearing the name starts thinking once again...
since he already has doubts abt it...so he thinks kets c  who he is...n jab tak mai uski thodi info bhi pata kar leta hai...
kahin nera shak sahi to nahi...n us pvt investigator se bhi mujhe milna hai...


can I kill these two phir se maaneet ko alag karne ki sajis

of course dear...anytime..we r with u...but i want them to get humiliated first by maan ...coz i think geet will not say anything to them....waise jr mk to hai hi...WinkLOL

yes me too want maan give them nice ansLOL
waise me complte 20000 postEmbarrassed


he better say something otherwise he is so Dead Angry.......congrats Party

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