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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 (Page 52)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Teenage.dream

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

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Originally posted by Teenage.dream

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Originally posted by rsroopali

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok


aww cute and sweet.
loved it.
phir


maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together



brilliant then
ok as per all of u say I'm writing a long scene , wait don't go any whereLOL


Arre yaar.. Hum kahan ja rahen hai.. Waiting!! Embarrassed
me tooooooooooo waitinggggggggggggggg

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
maan got to know about gk and she is DSP of delhi and she is none other than geet khurana.
then stuck it maan , they r married in lodon and geet always claim herself as his wify but he forgot it, maan hated himself for it.
 then he understand about jr mk and went to know about it in details to kashmir and he  search and found jr mk's birth certificate then relaise that time geet came to told about her pregnancy. he falls on his knees and cring for his stupidity .
 crying for geet's loneliness and helplessness . maan search more and went to geet's home and knock there.
one of servant told him that madam is not here now, she is now on delhi but then the servant recognize  maan and welcomed him.
MAan shocked to see it but he enter and then he shocked to see the house .
 he seen all over wall full on pics of jr mk ,geet with maan. every moment of jr mk after her birth with maaneet.
Tears falls from maan's eyes continuously .


kaise hain bolo. then I'll continue

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by Teenage.dream

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by rsroopali

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=jyoti_l]got it...the story continues...as in maan telling mk the story....

wo raja ne usse bahut dhhondha....par pari nahi mili...
mk -- phir ...
maan -- phir ek din wo pari raja ko achanak se dikh gayi...par wo akeli nahi thi....
mk -- to phir...kaun tha....
maan -- uske saath ek aur nahi si pari thi...
mk -- nanhi pari...mere jaisi...
maan -- haan ...bilkul aapke jaise...
mk -- phir...
maan -- raja ne socha ki usse jaakar mile....par wo nahi gaya...
mk -- starts crying -- wo kyun nahi gaya....wo nanhi pari se to mil sakta tha naa....
maan -- haan, par pari to gussa thi naa usse...to wo kaise jaata...
mk -- guss...gussaaa...??
maan -- haan...
mk -- pat wo nanhi pari to raja ki bhi nanhi pari hai naa.....
maan cant believe what she just said...he starts to wonder or actually realizes that he might be wrong abt her...so he asks...
sweetheart...aap kaunsi class me ho???
mk -- da dad...y r u asking this ?? u know i'm in .......
then geet enters.......... take phone from MK........
geet--bacha kisse phone pe baat kar rahi ho.........
MK-- mama.....da..da....da.yyyyy.......se
geet-- shock........ (maan sense geet on phone)
maan-- geet......woh MK ne phone kiya........story sune kiliye

OR
mk sleep n phone is still on....... geet alarm goes on at 530am.......like before........maan hear thts........or aage

[/QUOTE
geet nahi aayi par alarm baja aur mk uth gayi n starts crying mamaaaaaaa
n maan senses tht geet is nt there n nt able 2 stand mks crying rushes 2 handa haweli


maan reach handa haveli
maan- hugging MK.......kya huya sweetheart...aap theek toh ho....(thinking where is geet)
MK--- mama.......na...hi hai
maan-- mama kaha hai ........sweetheart
MK--- woh..... then geet enters shock to see maan n MK crying
geet-- kya huva baccha......ap theek toh ho
MK-- mama n cries hugging her (but doesnt let go maan's hand)
geet-- its ok .........its ok....... mama is here



Geet- Mk.. you need to sleep.. Kal aap kaise kelohgi?
MK- Mujhe da da da yy ke saat sona hai..
Geet looks at Maan.. and Maan nodes..


MK-- mama.......story suna woh na
geet-- confuse (how will see tell story to MK in front of maan)
geet-- baccha apne story suni na
MK-- pp...aa......rr
geet-- aapko kal khelna hai na
Mk nodes yes.....board game with da...da.....dayyyy.....geet looks at maan......maan smile
maan-- theek hai sweetheart.....hum khelege kal
geet gives weak smile
geet-- theek hai......par ab sojavo.....ok


aww cute and sweet.
loved it.
phir


maan kiss MK forhead.......n .........says good night
Mk-- good night .........da.......da.....yyyy
geet kiss her same place where maan had kiss
geet-- good night baccha
mk-- good night mama
mk holds geet hand n maan hand while sleeping
mk sleeps
maan n geet remove their hand n walk out from room together



brilliant then
ok as per all of u say I'm writing a long scene , wait don't go any whereLOL


maan-- walk toward front door
maan-- good night (he wanted to ask her where was she all this time but didnt have courage to do so)
geet-- good night (to herself i wish we could be in each other arm just like before...n...give her herself weak smile
maan thinking same
rano sees this from distance.........
maan leaves ..........
geet to herself --- u left again n walk back
sees rano standing there with questions in her eyes
geet-- give her weak smile n says good night n leave to her room to sleep with her n maan princess
(in all this phone is still on..........at 530 am maan's watch alarm goes off........ n.......tht wakes maan up .........n.........he start thinking about it...as y does geet have tht now......(i hope)


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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

maan got to know about gk and she is DSP of delhi and she is none other than geet khurana.
then stuck it maan , they r married in lodon and geet always claim herself as his wify but he forgot it, maan hated himself for it.
 then he understand about jr mk and went to know about it in details to kashmir and he  search and found jr mk's birth certificate then relaise that time geet came to told about her pregnancy. he falls on his knees and cring for his stupidity .
 crying for geet's loneliness and helplessness . maan search more and went to geet's home and knock there.
one of servant told him that madam is not here now, she is now on delhi but then the servant recognize  maan and welcomed him.
MAan shocked to see it but he enter and then he shocked to see the house .
 he seen all over wall full on pics of jr mk ,geet with maan. every moment of jr mk after her birth with maaneet.
Tears falls from maan's eyes continuously .


kaise hain bolo. then I'll continue


awesome........continue.........Day Dreaming

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

maan got to know about gk and she is DSP of delhi and she is none other than geet khurana.
then stuck it maan , they r married in lodon and geet always claim herself as his wify but he forgot it, maan hated himself for it.
 then he understand about jr mk and went to know about it in details to kashmir and he  search and found jr mk's birth certificate then relaise that time geet came to told about her pregnancy. he falls on his knees and cring for his stupidity .
 crying for geet's loneliness and helplessness . maan search more and went to geet's home and knock there.
one of servant told him that madam is not here now, she is now on delhi but then the servant recognize  maan and welcomed him.
MAan shocked to see it but he enter and then he shocked to see the house .
 he seen all over wall full on pics of jr mk ,geet with maan. every moment of jr mk after her birth with maaneet.
Tears falls from maan's eyes continuously .


kaise hain bolo. then I'll continue

ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai....
continue...

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

maan got to know about gk and she is DSP of delhi and she is none other than geet khurana.
then stuck it maan , they r married in lodon and geet always claim herself as his wify but he forgot it, maan hated himself for it.
 then he understand about jr mk and went to know about it in details to kashmir and he  search and found jr mk's birth certificate then relaise that time geet came to told about her pregnancy. he falls on his knees and cring for his stupidity .
 crying for geet's loneliness and helplessness . maan search more and went to geet's home and knock there.
one of servant told him that madam is not here now, she is now on delhi but then the servant recognize  maan and welcomed him.
MAan shocked to see it but he enter and then he shocked to see the house .
 he seen all over wall full on pics of jr mk ,geet with maan. every moment of jr mk after her birth with maaneet.
Tears falls from maan's eyes continuously .


kaise hain bolo. then I'll continue
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww bt i thought maan knew tht geet is only of maan 
n jr mk is his daghter
bt luved d reaction of maan seeing d house filled with manneet n mk pics
bt plzzzzz add a name 2 mk

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Priya beautiful then continue kar
 thanks jyoti and priya karti hoon
i'm,writing now

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rsroopali

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

maan got to know about gk and she is DSP of delhi and she is none other than geet khurana.
then stuck it maan , they r married in lodon and geet always claim herself as his wify but he forgot it, maan hated himself for it.
 then he understand about jr mk and went to know about it in details to kashmir and he  search and found jr mk's birth certificate then relaise that time geet came to told about her pregnancy. he falls on his knees and cring for his stupidity .
 crying for geet's loneliness and helplessness . maan search more and went to geet's home and knock there.
one of servant told him that madam is not here now, she is now on delhi but then the servant recognize  maan and welcomed him.
MAan shocked to see it but he enter and then he shocked to see the house .
 he seen all over wall full on pics of jr mk ,geet with maan. every moment of jr mk after her birth with maaneet.
Tears falls from maan's eyes continuously .


kaise hain bolo. then I'll continue
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww bt i thought maan knew tht geet is only of maan 
n jr mk is his daghter
bt luved d reaction of maan seeing d house filled with manneet n mk pics
bt plzzzzz add a name 2 mk


maan doesnt know anything about JR MK......n......think geet has moved on Cry

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