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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 (Page 140)

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged

all parts brilliant

pls more plssssssssssssssssssss
this for both of yu

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Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Muskan smiles and said umm, raja is not stupid.

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan:-phir.

Maan:-then raja is searching his life, his soul, his angel and after lots of searching he founds his angel and with another little angel.

Muskan claps and said wah.

Geet looks at maan and try to go from there when muskan said mama' st'stay here na.

Geet:- beta,I have some work to finish,

Muskan:-pls''mama.

Geet try go from there and want to cry but her tears also dried up now.

Geet sit in her place.

Muskan:-thanks ma.ma..

Maan look and noticed geet carefully.

Muskan:- da..da.. boliye.

Maan:-umm then said then raja foundhis angel is changed from outside, his angel very cold from outside, every one feared to see his angel but raja knew very well his angel is same from inside, same innocent, bubbly, sweet , kind hearted, who selflessly love her raja, who always forgives her raja, who always give, loves to her raja, who always'.but maan's voiced chocked. He stops there.

Muskan listen all and said phir'.

Maan look at geet who closed her eyes tightly and turns.

Muskan again patter man's hand and said phir..kya'hua'

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan shouts almost phir..kya'hua'

Maan:- then the raja know his angel have another nanhi angel, their love, raja's feel content, raja feel proud, raja want say many things to his angel raja want to take her in his arms . raja want to give her all love.

 By then geet stand up and leave the room.

Maan noticed and said but his angel is sad and hurt and left him with their little angel.

muskan:-ummm then

Maan:- then , raja sits with his angel and want to find a way to tell his angel sorry for his all behavior

Want to his angel pls forgive him.

Muskan again hit her head and said uff, raja is really stupid,uff, no raja is not stupid but little dumb. Still he want to say but when he will say when his angel go away from her really.

Maan looks at her and feared about it and say no, I'll not,I'll not repeat my mistake again.

Muskan confused and asked dad..da'what r u saying.

Maan kissed her head and said now it's very late dea,r let's sleep, tomorrow I'll tell rest story and till then raja will complte his all work.

Muskan smiles and said ok


Clapcontinue....continue...Day Dreaming
now plz tell me he will go to geet to talk...
 
i cant like your post....these IF rulesAngry not letting me...Cry

thnku thnku
karti hoon
let's see maan ka brain aur curage sath dete hain iya nehiLOLWink
it's ok.I can understand

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Hahaha..maan ki choti sherni :p
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

all parts brilliant

pls more plssssssssssssssssssss
this for both of yu


thnku thnkuEmbarrassedHug
I'll

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
right now, muskan is online asked her for an update

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged

muski pls update

we are dying to read
plsssssssssssssss


Edited by simi91 - 05 March 2011 at 11:19am

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right now, muskan is online asked her for an update


ha ha ha good one sis

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Muskan update

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