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Next:-

Muskan smiles and said umm, raja is not stupid.

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan:-phir.

Maan:-then raja is searching his life, his soul, his angel and after lots of searching he founds his angel and with another little angel.

Muskan claps and said wah.

Geet looks at maan and try to go from there when muskan said mama… st…stay here na.

Geet:- beta,I have some work to finish,

Muskan:-pls……mama.

Geet try go from there and want to cry but her tears also dried up now.

Geet sit in her place.

Muskan:-thanks ma.ma..

Maan look and noticed geet carefully.

Muskan:- da..da.. boliye.

Maan:-umm then said then raja foundhis angel is changed from outside, his angel very cold from outside, every one feared to see his angel but raja knew very well his angel is same from inside, same innocent, bubbly, sweet , kind hearted, who selflessly love her raja, who always forgives her raja, who always give, loves to her raja, who always….but maan's voiced chocked. He stops there.

Muskan listen all and said phir….

Maan look at geet who closed her eyes tightly and turns.

Muskan again patter man's hand and said phir..kya…hua…

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan shouts almost phir..kya…hua…

Maan:- then the raja know his angel have another nanhi angel, their love, raja's feel content, raja feel proud, raja want say many things to his angel raja want to take her in his arms . raja want to give her all love.

 By then geet stand up and leave the room.

Maan noticed and said but his angel is sad and hurt and left him with their little angel.

muskan:-ummm then

Maan:- then , raja sits with his angel and want to find a way to tell his angel sorry for his all behavior

Want to his angel pls forgive him.

Muskan again hit her head and said uff, raja is really stupid,uff, no raja is not stupid but little dumb. Still he want to say but when he will say when his angel go away from her really.

Maan looks at her and feared about it and say no, I'll not,I'll not repeat my mistake again.

Muskan confused and asked dad..da…what r u saying.

Maan kissed her head and said now it's very late dea,r let's sleep, tomorrow I'll tell rest story and till then raja will complte his all work.

Muskan smiles and said ok

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskaan_cute19

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=jyoti_l]Maan took a deep breath .. aacha usse phone do
mk - mujhe nahi baat karni & cuts the call

maan now gets seriously concerned abt her...
he knew that last time when she was angry n crying ...she ran madly towards the roads....n was abt to be hit.....he just closed his eyes not wanting to remember it...
maan again calls...geet picks up...
geet -- mk aapke daddy ka call hai...
mk-- i dont wanna talk to him...n tries to cuts the call...but instead the call gets answered...
geet -- mk (shouts)
mk starts to cry...
maan on the other hand hears it n again says...usse kyun chilla rahi ho....
mk hears his voice n again starts to cry louder...n says da...da...doesnt love mk...
maan understands she is talking abt him as she calls him da...da...
geet -- to maan -- look what u did....
maan -- plz just put the call on speakerphone...
meanwhile they sit in the police car...
maan -- sweetheart...i'm sorry...look i'm holding my ears....n saying sorry....
mk pouts n turns her head in a no...
maan -- honey dont do this..i said i'm sorry...
geet confused but happy that maan could sense what mk was saying...
maan -- ok sweety...aaj aap jo bhi bolengi ...i'll do..anything u say...
mk after hearing this is happy but tries to hide this...
mk -- promise...
maan now smiles as she was relenting...
maan -- pakka promise...jo aap bolen...
mk -- then ..aaplo...


then what did MK say?

mk -- mamma...hum kahan jaa rahen hai...
geet -- home sweety....
mk -- no...no....i want to go to da....da....yy....
maan is still there on the call but not on speakerphone....
geet -- beta..he will be busy....he will not be able to see u....
mk -- to maan -- da...da....r u busy....with tears in her eyes...
maan -- how can i be busy for u sweetheart...
mk -- to geet -- he is not...busy...
geet -- -ok fine...takes the phone from her hand...
geet -- to maan -- can u meet me at ambience mall...mk wants to c u...
maan after hearing this feels sad....coz he felt like geet was not his ...as she was asking for his permission...little did she know that 2days maan would do anything for mk...the geet that he sees in her...he will still do anything for her...
geet -- aap sun rahe hai naa...
maan -- yes...i'll meet u there in 20 min...
now mk snatches the phone from geet's hand...
mk -- da...da....my first wish is....
maan -- yes princess....
mk -- u will spend the whole day n night also with me....
maan with a smile on his face...== n 2nd wish...
mk -- 2nd is that...

 
mk -- 2nd ...hmm...i'll tell u when u meet me...
maan -- ok then...will c u soon...
mk -- da,....da......u ther...with a sad face....
geet thinking is maan angry or what ...since he used to give her silent treatment as well.....when she was just abt to take the phone frm mk's hand....her own phone started ringing....it was frm khan....
geet -- khan...kya hua...kuch pata chala...??
khan -- aapko abhi office aana padega...
geet -- abhi nahi ho payega...
khan -- commissionar ka order hai....
geet thinking she cant leave mk alone with maan...she was afraid that she might say something...
geet -- to khan -- saala comm gaya bh***me...
she was abt to abuse him once again when she saw mk..
mk -- ma..mam....bad word....to maan...
kahn -- tumhe aan ahi padega...
geet -- ek baar bola naa....
khan -- ye davis se related hai...
then geet thinks that she has to go now...since it is related to maan...
geet -- to khan -- main 1/2 ghante se aa rahi hun....
khan thinking -- there is defo something i'm missing...gk taking too much interest in this case,,,
geet --

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by muskaan_cute19

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

[QUOTE=jyoti_l]Maan took a deep breath .. aacha usse phone do
mk - mujhe nahi baat karni & cuts the call

maan now gets seriously concerned abt her...
he knew that last time when she was angry n crying ...she ran madly towards the roads....n was abt to be hit.....he just closed his eyes not wanting to remember it...
maan again calls...geet picks up...
geet -- mk aapke daddy ka call hai...
mk-- i dont wanna talk to him...n tries to cuts the call...but instead the call gets answered...
geet -- mk (shouts)
mk starts to cry...
maan on the other hand hears it n again says...usse kyun chilla rahi ho....
mk hears his voice n again starts to cry louder...n says da...da...doesnt love mk...
maan understands she is talking abt him as she calls him da...da...
geet -- to maan -- look what u did....
maan -- plz just put the call on speakerphone...
meanwhile they sit in the police car...
maan -- sweetheart...i'm sorry...look i'm holding my ears....n saying sorry....
mk pouts n turns her head in a no...
maan -- honey dont do this..i said i'm sorry...
geet confused but happy that maan could sense what mk was saying...
maan -- ok sweety...aaj aap jo bhi bolengi ...i'll do..anything u say...
mk after hearing this is happy but tries to hide this...
mk -- promise...
maan now smiles as she was relenting...
maan -- pakka promise...jo aap bolen...
mk -- then ..aaplo...


then what did MK say?

mk -- mamma...hum kahan jaa rahen hai...
geet -- home sweety....
mk -- no...no....i want to go to da....da....yy....
maan is still there on the call but not on speakerphone....
geet -- beta..he will be busy....he will not be able to see u....
mk -- to maan -- da...da....r u busy....with tears in her eyes...
maan -- how can i be busy for u sweetheart...
mk -- to geet -- he is not...busy...
geet -- -ok fine...takes the phone from her hand...
geet -- to maan -- can u meet me at ambience mall...mk wants to c u...
maan after hearing this feels sad....coz he felt like geet was not his ...as she was asking for his permission...little did she know that 2days maan would do anything for mk...the geet that he sees in her...he will still do anything for her...
geet -- aap sun rahe hai naa...
maan -- yes...i'll meet u there in 20 min...
now mk snatches the phone from geet's hand...
mk -- da...da....my first wish is....
maan -- yes princess....
mk -- u will spend the whole day n night also with me....
maan with a smile on his face...== n 2nd wish...
mk -- 2nd is that...

 
mk -- 2nd ...hmm...i'll tell u when u meet me...
maan -- ok then...will c u soon...
mk -- da,....da......u ther...with a sad face....
geet thinking is maan angry or what ...since he used to give her silent treatment as well.....when she was just abt to take the phone frm mk's hand....her own phone started ringing....it was frm khan....
geet -- khan...kya hua...kuch pata chala...??
khan -- aapko abhi office aana padega...
geet -- abhi nahi ho payega...
khan -- commissionar ka order hai....
geet thinking she cant leave mk alone with maan...she was afraid that she might say something...
geet -- to khan -- saala comm gaya bh***me...
she was abt to abuse him once again when she saw mk..
mk -- ma..mam....bad word....to maan...
kahn -- tumhe aan ahi padega...
geet -- ek baar bola naa....
khan -- ye davis se related hai...
then geet thinks that she has to go now...since it is related to maan...
geet -- to khan -- main 1/2 ghante se aa rahi hun....
khan thinking -- there is defo something i'm missing...gk taking too much interest in this case,,,
geet --


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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Muskan smiles and said umm, raja is not stupid.

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan:-phir.

Maan:-then raja is searching his life, his soul, his angel and after lots of searching he founds his angel and with another little angel.

Muskan claps and said wah.

Geet looks at maan and try to go from there when muskan said mama' st'stay here na.

Geet:- beta,I have some work to finish,

Muskan:-pls''mama.

Geet try go from there and want to cry but her tears also dried up now.

Geet sit in her place.

Muskan:-thanks ma.ma..

Maan look and noticed geet carefully.

Muskan:- da..da.. boliye.

Maan:-umm then said then raja foundhis angel is changed from outside, his angel very cold from outside, every one feared to see his angel but raja knew very well his angel is same from inside, same innocent, bubbly, sweet , kind hearted, who selflessly love her raja, who always forgives her raja, who always give, loves to her raja, who always'.but maan's voiced chocked. He stops there.

Muskan listen all and said phir'.

Maan look at geet who closed her eyes tightly and turns.

Muskan again patter man's hand and said phir..kya'hua'

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan shouts almost phir..kya'hua'

Maan:- then the raja know his angel have another nanhi angel, their love, raja's feel content, raja feel proud, raja want say many things to his angel raja want to take her in his arms . raja want to give her all love.

 By then geet stand up and leave the room.

Maan noticed and said but his angel is sad and hurt and left him with their little angel.

muskan:-ummm then

Maan:- then , raja sits with his angel and want to find a way to tell his angel sorry for his all behavior

Want to his angel pls forgive him.

Muskan again hit her head and said uff, raja is really stupid,uff, no raja is not stupid but little dumb. Still he want to say but when he will say when his angel go away from her really.

Maan looks at her and feared about it and say no, I'll not,I'll not repeat my mistake again.

Muskan confused and asked dad..da'what r u saying.

Maan kissed her head and said now it's very late dea,r let's sleep, tomorrow I'll tell rest story and till then raja will complte his all work.

Muskan smiles and said ok


Clapcontinue....continue...Day Dreaming
now plz tell me he will go to geet to talk...
 
i cant like your post....these IF rulesAngry not letting me...Cry

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all parts brilliant

pls more plssssssssssssssssssss
this for both of yu

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Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Muskan smiles and said umm, raja is not stupid.

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan:-phir.

Maan:-then raja is searching his life, his soul, his angel and after lots of searching he founds his angel and with another little angel.

Muskan claps and said wah.

Geet looks at maan and try to go from there when muskan said mama' st'stay here na.

Geet:- beta,I have some work to finish,

Muskan:-pls''mama.

Geet try go from there and want to cry but her tears also dried up now.

Geet sit in her place.

Muskan:-thanks ma.ma..

Maan look and noticed geet carefully.

Muskan:- da..da.. boliye.

Maan:-umm then said then raja foundhis angel is changed from outside, his angel very cold from outside, every one feared to see his angel but raja knew very well his angel is same from inside, same innocent, bubbly, sweet , kind hearted, who selflessly love her raja, who always forgives her raja, who always give, loves to her raja, who always'.but maan's voiced chocked. He stops there.

Muskan listen all and said phir'.

Maan look at geet who closed her eyes tightly and turns.

Muskan again patter man's hand and said phir..kya'hua'

Maan:-ummm.

Muskan shouts almost phir..kya'hua'

Maan:- then the raja know his angel have another nanhi angel, their love, raja's feel content, raja feel proud, raja want say many things to his angel raja want to take her in his arms . raja want to give her all love.

 By then geet stand up and leave the room.

Maan noticed and said but his angel is sad and hurt and left him with their little angel.

muskan:-ummm then

Maan:- then , raja sits with his angel and want to find a way to tell his angel sorry for his all behavior

Want to his angel pls forgive him.

Muskan again hit her head and said uff, raja is really stupid,uff, no raja is not stupid but little dumb. Still he want to say but when he will say when his angel go away from her really.

Maan looks at her and feared about it and say no, I'll not,I'll not repeat my mistake again.

Muskan confused and asked dad..da'what r u saying.

Maan kissed her head and said now it's very late dea,r let's sleep, tomorrow I'll tell rest story and till then raja will complte his all work.

Muskan smiles and said ok


Clapcontinue....continue...Day Dreaming
now plz tell me he will go to geet to talk...
 
i cant like your post....these IF rulesAngry not letting me...Cry

thnku thnku
karti hoon
let's see maan ka brain aur curage sath dete hain iya nehiLOLWink
it's ok.I can understand

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Originally posted by simi91

all parts brilliant

pls more plssssssssssssssssssss
this for both of yu


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