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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 (Page 113)

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and  come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

 

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise  daddy , wasie beti.both r  same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.


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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and  come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

 

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise  daddy , wasie beti.both r  same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.

rakhi no 2mrw want sm more 2day
waitinggggggggggggg

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

sorry yaar...nahi ho paayega...block hai sab kuch...2day i'm in the viewer's...i mean reader's place n just enjoying...
hey jyoti when yu gonner update
ur FF its long time my dear i miss
reading

i know...its been a long time...
will update on 10th most prob...was busy with project...
will give a big long update...

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Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and  come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

 

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise  daddy , wasie beti.both r  same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.



awesome........no.......no.......... u cant do these to US........add some more Embarrassed

thnks darling,
kal baki ka karungi
 ek short kya hain continue dekho jara
kaise hainLOL

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and  come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

 

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise  daddy , wasie beti.both r  same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.


Cry we want it now...plz...

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskaan_cute19

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and  come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

 

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise  daddy , wasie beti.both r  same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.


oooo loved it
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thnks dear
don't cry darling,
kal karungi continueEmbarrassed

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
wow both parts were
super duper mindblowing
 oh forgot tomorrow
saturday no classes
pls cont soonnnnnn
tomorrow pakka
promise yu guys
gonner write
It Doesn't Seem Enough

I want to tell you "Thank you,"
But it doesn't seem enough.
Words don't seem sufficient--
"Blah, blah" and all that stuff.

Please know I have deep feelings
About your generous act.
I really appreciate you;
You're special, and that's a fact!


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