-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 - Page 97

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

<font color="#996633">update update, wiating for another update.
waiting to see how sr mk will manaofy jr mk
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Rakhi...hey how r u?....where is our mini TM scene

a peice of thought for this couple

 

Maan's POV

NO MORE PAIN

Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Rakhi...hey how r u?....where is our mini TM scene

hi priya
I'm good.
 how r u?
 wait mini tm will come , first love at first sight will be post then mini tm😆
tab tak tum aur jyoti continue karo

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

hi priya
I'm good.
how r u?
wait mini tm will come , first love at first sight will be post then mini tm😆
tab tak tum aur jyoti continue karo

Hey I have class so I can't write today....sorry...u guys continue ....I will comment here n there

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

hi priya
I'm good.
 how r u?
 wait mini tm will come , first love at first sight will be post then mini tm😆
tab tak tum aur jyoti continue karo

ok no prblm.
I'll after  one ud goes then .
 till the jyoti jee u can continue

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

ok no prblm.
I'll after  one ud goes then .
 till the jyoti jee u can continue

bechara maan. living a lonely life n regretting giving pain to geet. accepting mk as his lifeline. now he wiil have to manaofy mk as he has broken his promise an made mk angry😡

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

<font color="#9900CC">no no no....😲</font>

<font color="#9900CC">yaar abhi viewers...readers kahan hai....hamare mini TM ke fans to raat ko hi aate hain...😆</font>

<font color="#9900CC">continue raat ko hi hoga...😉</font>

<font color="#9900CC">jab tak priya bhi shayad free ho jaaye...what say???</font>

Ur right jyoti...but I might just be reader today bc when u guys start writing I will be in school

nice update. so officer khan has noticed different behavior of geet in front of maan. mmk is really like geet. love her anger. lets see how maan can make her calm. I guess there would be some dangerous situation now made by davis. continue soon...........

Originally posted by: smj1977

a peice of thought for this couple

 

Maan's POV

 

Despair
By Radica Sooknarine

If only you could see what is in my heart,
maybe then you won't have torn it apart.
With a resounding echo memories surface from the past,
maybe you and I were never meant to last.

But what of these emotions? Why do they feel so right?
Why must you fill my thoughts every single night?
I try to turn away; I try so hard to hide;
but the further I went away, the more a part of me died.

Now I am without an answer - I have not even a clue,
of what else I can do to stop myself falling again for
you.
I look at my life and connect the dots of pain;
Pain! - You are doomed to haunt me over and over again.

Despair has overtaken me,
Loneliness reigns by royal decree.
I can no longer fight this torment -
Quietly I shall fade away, into nothingness I shall be sent.

 

Geet's POV

NO MORE PAIN

by Sofie I Ferraz

 

There's no more pain in me for you,
The pain that filled my sleepless nights
Where the darkness brought tears
Cold tears my eyes have shed

Each and every lonely one,
Brought memories filled with love.
The love i once felt for you
Still, as long as it let's you go...

But now I live to hide away
Where I belong from you...

There are no more empty days
Feeling the blame
For your endless space filled with regrets,
Of words left unspoken,
   hugs left apart,
    kisses left in tears,
     touches left in pain...

Now take your touch and walk away
With the pain in YOU for me.

comendable choice of poem for Geet . . . 👏