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best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R (Page 8)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
h8 dev
hope maaneet sort their misunderstanding out
love their names 4 eachother
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
amazing update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
great update.
hate dev.

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
nice update dear

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
hey ...
thnx for lovely comments ...
here is the next part ...

PaRT 5


Maan reached home ina very bad mood....he was upsate ... while his family was shocked ... he rarly gets upsate..
butwhenhe is upsate its better toleavehim alone... while on the other hand geet was alsoupsate...


geet -(to herself)I knew it will hurt him.. thats the reason I didnt told him about my break up..he would have left his studies in middle....matlab that's what i really thought..okk this is what i think now... till yesterday i thought that he would try to make me understand .... but the minute i saw him ... i know he would never do something which would hurt me..... may  be by  being with an dirty minded person ..i also started thinking like him... huh .. that kamina ...khota ...ullu ka pathha...******* ****...... wow i feeling gud after this GALI session ...... she started giggling ...



GEEEET ......... GEEEET

Geet - hunnnn... umm wo han bhai ...

Brij - geet ... kya soch rhi ho?? and why u r giggling hunnnn....

Geet - nothing bhai .... bhai aaj ke liye me pari ke yahan chali jaun ?? plezzzzzzzzz

Brij - but geet its late... 9 baz raha he ..

Geet - (rolling her eyes) Bhai .. its only 9 ... aur uska ghar he kitne dur ... 15 minute b nhi laenge muze scooty se jane me....

Brij - han han that scooty of urs.. use to tum jet plane samaz ke udati ho... muze b jane me 25-30 min lagte he ....

Geet - bhai chalo isi bat pe shart lagate he.... for 1 chocolate ice cream ... agar yahan se nikalne ke 15 min bad mene aapko shree ki mom se bat  karwayi to aap haare ... aur nhi karwayi to me jeeti ... thik he

Brij - HAN HAN .. fine lag gayi shart .....

while riya stood amused at the far corner of the room ... only 15 min with maan and geet was back to her normal self... and her stupid husband... he thinks that he is the only intelligent person this planet earth (giggling she hits  her head )


AFTER 10 MIN

Geet - Bhai you are going to loose the Bet .. i m telling you .... be prepared with the ice cream ... bye bhabhzzz.. kal jaldi ghar aajungi .. (and she zoomed)

Brij - huh ... dekh lunga kese harta hun ...(shoutiing)

riya - tum har case me haroge .. tumne suna b tha usne kaha kya tha ??
 
Brij - hmm i know... wo smile kar rhi thi that was inuff ... pichle 15 dino me pehli bar use dil se haste hue dekha he (he hugged riya with tears in his eyes)

Riya - dont worry Maan aagaya he na .. sab  thik ho jayega...


Brij - Maan aagaya aur sab thik hojayega ?? kya matlab


riya tells him everything ... Dev coming home... their arguments ,maans visit and his fight wid geet ...



so here is the part 5 ...
will send pms after some time....
hope you all the part ..i know its small .. will try to update another in night ...
plezz comment and hitthe likebutton








Edited by lovelife21 - 10 April 2011 at 12:10pm

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged

nice part

geet ki bet kafi aacchi thi.
but maan aur geet ka toh jhagada hogaya hai na?toh phir woh kaise sab theek karega

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
WOW.... THIS IS REALLY INTERESTING ONE YAAR. UPDATE SOON A LONG PART.

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
hey nice one ... nxt update soon plz ...

plz add me to ur pm list ..

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