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best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
loved it
plz continue soon

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
hey ...
thnx for lovely comments ....
lets see who is there ???Wink

will update soon
love u all ...

and a request ...
cab we b frnds ... like  i dont know you guys at all...
and would like to know you all ...

so it me Rinki Baheti  from jabalpur.....
i m in 12th std....


love rinki

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
PART  4


Geet -YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


GUY -
yes darling ... you know how much i love you....dont you ?? (he said touching her face with his hand)

Geet -
Dont you dare to touch me samjhe....

Guy -
ohh ... don't say like this honey ... i love you so much ....and you love me tooo ... that's why you tries to suicide.. right na(tries to kiss her forcefully)

Geet -
No ... you don't love me ..and what i felt for you was nt love ..i can never love a b*****d like you ... you never loved me ... all you wanted was ... chi ... me yad b nhi karna chahti tumahre words samze tum .. just leave from here ....

Guy -
so what honey ... isn't it love hunnnn...

Riya - (
shouting) WHAT R U DOING HERE ??? just leave my house right now... samze tum ... warna i will call police... LEAVE MY HOUSE RIGHT NOW...

GUY -
ohhh ... so miss riya "the socialist" is back hunnn... but you cant save her ... nops....

Riya -
just leave DEV ... just leave .....(she pushes him out and locks the door ) then she moves towards geet .. who was sitting on the floor crying bitterly ...

Geet -
how could i love him bhabhi ... how could i ???

Riya -
shhh baby ... you admitted yourself that it wasn't love... it was attraction ...a mere attraction ... now go to your room .. and take rest ....

Geet lays down on bed and goes to sleep still crying.... on the other hand Riya makes a call and asks some one to come home in evening ....
geet wakes up in the evening with sound of Doorbell... she wondered who is it ... brij comes home after 8 ... and its only 6.... she moves towards the sitting area and peeps through the curtain ... IT was him ... her bestest frnd... a frnd who was there for her always ... at every step of her life ... and what she did to him ... broked his heart for an Cheap heartless man ... she even lost her best frnd.. she than thinks about her conversation with him in the morning....

Geet -
(to her self)i cant hurt him any more .. no i will not hurt himm... i  will not give him any false hope... may be he has forgotten me ...

Riya -
  geet .. wahan kyun khadi ho... come here ... look who is  here to meet you...

geet goes and sits near riya... riya excuses her self and went away to bring some snacks...

Maan -
Hii  Pari ..

Geet -
(smiles a little listening the her pet name after a long time )hey teddy ... how was ur exams...

Maan -
thik the aur tere ???

Geet -
thik ..

Maan -
teri tabiyat thik nhi he kya ???

Geet -
nhi i m fine ... was aise hi thoda  cough and cold nothing serious..

Maan -
hmm... so howz life ... howz Dev ...

Geet -
We r nt together ... (she says in a shaky voice)

Maan -
(shocked) What ??? but you ... he .. arghhh.. and you didn't told me ... kya me itna gair hogaya hun ???

Geet -
nhi teddy .. me tuze aur hurt nhi karna chahti thi ..pehle hi

Maan -
(cuttting her in between ) Don't lie geet .. you cant lie to me ... i know you ... i know you more than anyone .. more than yourself.. you thought ki tumahara break up hogaya he to i would try to get you .....

Geet -
nhi teddy ...

Maan -
rehno do geet .. i dont think tumne muze kabhi apna frnd b samza tha ... (he leaves the house )
 



so here is the part 4 ...
i hope you all like it ...
plez hit the like button and comment
love

rinki



Edited by lovelife21 - 10 April 2011 at 12:09pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
nice part 
hate dev Angry
cont sooooon
thnx for d PM Smile

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
great update.
hate dev.
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
amazing job rinki
luved it babes
 
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
hiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
h8 dev
poor maaneet
hope they sort of their misunderstandings soon
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
nice update....

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