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best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R (Page 5)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
awsome update.
love it.

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Awesomeeeee update
loved it
Gr8 part
continue soon
thank u

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Hiiiii
Interesting start
Poor geet
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Plz add me 2 ur pm list
Thankssssssssss

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 1:19am | IP Logged
loved the part..................hope maan gets to know abt geet's suicide attempt...............

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
hey Every one....
thank you sooooooooooo much for your comments .......

here is the next part

PART 3

Dadi smiled at her innocence.. and maan clicked a photo of her angry face.... Geet turned towards him ....

Geet -
Meri pic kyun li tumne ?? aur ye camera kahan se aaya tumhare pass..daddy ka liya tumne ...?? wo yahan hi he tumne unka camera chua ... ruko aane dounhe me bata dungi unko sab...

Maan - bata dena... wo hi to laayen he ye mere liye ..

Geet - daddy wapis aagaye ??? (she rushed towards maan's parents room ) DADDYYYYYYYY aap agaye wapis... mere liye kya laye ??? pata he aap nhi the na to mamma ne muze danta aur teen bar sorry b bulwaya ...

Daddy - ohh ... my princess.. hum mamma ko datenge okk....

"Flashback ends"

Maan -
Kash meri wo geet wapas aa sakti ...  but now she doesn't want to talk to me ...

After 2 days

Pari went to meet Geet at Brij's home... she was shocked to see a pale and weak geet ... although she pretended to be normal... but later she asked riya about her health and a sudden trip to Goa.... Riya told her everything... Riya was hoked ... geet didnt told her any thing about her Breakup with dev .. She broked up wid him 8 months ago... and she didn't told her bestfrnds anything.... riya told her about the suicide attempt too..

PAri -
geet why did you do this.. tune muze batana b jaruri nhi samza..

geet -tu pareshhan ho jati na isliye .. aur vese b i m fine.. but promiss me to ye bat kisi ko nhi batayegi maan ko b nhi....

Pari - par geet ... he is your best frnd too...


geet -
par i don't want him to know any thing ....

pari nodded... they spend their day chatting ... in evening pari informed man that geet is fine & was happy to ...

Next day

Geet -
(on phone)why don't you understand i don't want to talk you ...  i don't need any one plezz stop calling me plezzzz.........

riya -
(she came running as she heard shouting )kya hua geet ...

geet -
bhabhi can you tell maan that i don't want to talk to him ....

riya -
par kyun ?? he is your best frnd ....

geet -
bhabhi ... he loves me.. and i dont want to hurt him... and i dont want to talk him ..why ?? .. i don't know bhabhi ... i  dont know.. bus bahut hogaya ye pyar  mohabbat... ab aisa kuch ni chahti me apni life me .....
plezzz bhabhi (she starts crying)

Riya -
geet ... stop crying plezz ... i will tell him okkk....

later in the evening

riya was working in kitchen when door bell ranged....


Riya -
geet plezz open the door...

geet opened the door and was shocked to see the person

Geet - YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Hope you all liked the part ...
pleezz hit the like button and comment


love 

RINKI




Edited by lovelife21 - 10 April 2011 at 12:09pm

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
nice part 
cont soon 
thnx for d PM 
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
wow thats an awsome one yaar
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:02am | IP Logged
nice part i am sure its maan @ the door i think maan shud know the truth abt geet..........only he can make her live her life again.........

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