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best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R (Page 4)

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
interesting concept... do continue.. pls add me to yr pm list....

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PART -- 2

Geet - Bhai i m sorry ... i m really sorry .... meri wajah se aap aur bhabhi itne pareshaan hue....(started crying)

Brij - tu aisa bol rhi he ??? life me muze jab kisi apne ki jarurat thi u was always there... Hum dono kabse ek dusre ko sorry aur thnx bolne lage hmmm....

Geet - Nhi bilkul b nhi .....

Brij - we r nt going to talk about it okk... u r my strong sis ... u will get over him ..... or vese b we r going Goa tommorow... mene uncle se b bat karli he ...

Geet - sacchi .. (hugged him ) i love you bhai .. u r the best ....

Riya - hey ... saara credit apne bhiyya ko hunnnn... Plan to pura mera tha ...

Geet - are bhabhzzz aap bestest ho tabhi to bhai best ho paye na ... ..


Next day they boarded flight for Goa... although In the starting geet was quite and sad... but after 2-3 days she was back to her normal self... loving caring bubbly geet... Brij and Riya were happy for getting their little angel back but little did they know that she is pretending for their sack...

while Maan and pari were back to India ..... they expected that  Geet would come to receive them .. but she was nt there..  it was so unlike her ...

They rushed her home and found it locked.. they were tensed... they called on her no but it was switched off.... finally they have to call Geets parents .... they informed that she was in Goa with Brij and riya ... they left for their houses.... everyone was out of town .. Pari and Maan thought to surprise everyone by their sudden appearance ... they were busy in their exams so didn't called home from last 15 days... but they have informed geet ...

Maan entered his house.. servants were pleased to see him back.... he went to his room .... and smiled sadly ....
everything in his room was according to Geets choice... colour of walls, painting, curtains , furniture everything.... she had arranged everything... Maan smiled and turned towards a wall which was filled with pictures of Geet,Pari and himself. of course Geets picture covered most of area... he was smiled seeing different picture of her .. every pic had a story behind it.... his smile widened while seeing a pic of Geet in which she was making an angry face ....... he still remembered that day ...
she fought wid boys of the colony and had beaten them badly.... their parents came home for complain....


*Flashback*

parent - bhabhi ji  aaj to geet ne had hi kar di dekhiye kitni buri tarah se maare he bechare shivam ko...

Geet - wo muze chida raha tha ... aur bol raha tha ki Maan mere dadaji ei tarah behave karta he.....

Geets mom - geet chup karo .. chalo maafi mango shivam lse...

Geet - Par mammi .. usne muze chidaya ..

Geets mom - GEET...

Geet - sorry ...

and she ran away to Maans house...

DADI - aaj meri ladli gusse me kyun he ???

Geet - dadima .. aaj mamma ne fir se sorry bulawaya huh ... hamesha muze hi sorry bolna padta he .. me nhi jaungi ab us ghar main....

Dadi smiled at her innocence.. and maan clicked a photo of her angry face.... Geet turned towards him ....

Geet - Meri pic kyun li tumne ?? aur ye camera kahan se aaya tumhare pass..daddy ka liya tumne ...?? wo yahan hi he tumne unka camera liya ?? ... ruko aane do unhe me bata dungi unko sab...



Hey frnd ...
howz you all doing ???
hope you liked part -2...
All of you gussed it was Geet about whom maan was talking...
i will update character sketch ..





Edited by lovelife21 - 10 April 2011 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
nice update....

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
hey lovely update...plsssss update ASAP....

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
nice one dear

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
nice concept....loved it.....
plz do cont soon.......plz add me 2 pm........
tanx

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
amazing part
but pls next longer
sorry i'm turning greedy
but love it  pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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