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best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R (Page 14)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Loved ur FF.... pls add me to ur PM list

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hey when will u update next

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
hey Every one ...
Thnx for ur lovely comment.....
Sorry ... i am late in updating ...  will update a bigeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr  part in compensation ....



muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

love you all

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
PART 8



"DEV AAJ TUM SE MILNE AAYA THA "


Geet and pari looked at each other terrified....

pari - Maan ... tum kab aaye .... tumhe to ye sab baatein nhi sunni thi na ...

Maan - han nhi sunni thi ... but accha hua ki mene abhi aagaya ... kam se kam ye to sun paya ki DEV aaj isse milne aaya tha ... warna tum dono to muze kuch bate hi nhi ...

Geet - nhi maan aisa kuch nhi he ... ab wo kabhi b nhi aayega muze pareshan karne ... bhabhi ne use warn kr diya he ...

Maan - hmm thik he ... chlo ab jake so jao ... mene guest room ready karwa diya he ...

Pari and geet left the place with a smile ... they thanked god that maan didnt heared their talks.... Warna Dev was gone ....

next day

Maan entered guest room  at 12pm... he was bored of watching TV .. every one was out for picnic... maan geet and pari had already decided that they want to spend time together at home... as he entered he saw both of them sleeping .. he called them .. but they didn't waked up.... finally he pored a bucket full of water on them...

pari - WTH !! maan ye kya hai hun ??

Geet - Teddddddddddddyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy barish horhi he ... plezzz chata(umbrela) lao.. me Bheeg jaungi.....

pari and maan turned their heads towards geet who was still sleeping and had covered her face with  her hands... they both laughed and worked geet up...
After some time three of them were sitting in the living area....

Pari - yar ... aaj Sunday he Tv pe kuch aacha aanhi rha... chalo hum koi movie dekhte hain ..

Maan - yaa gr8... kon si movie dekhen (he looked at them )

Pari - DDLJ

Maan - par ham wo kitni bar dekh chuke hain ?? plezz koi aur dekhte hain


Geet - Nhi DDlJ hi dekhenge.... par muze bhuk lagi he ....

Maan - kya karen ??

Pari - movie se pehle Lunch banale with a song

Geet - yesss!! hurreyyyyyy !!! wese b MAAN ka gaana sune bahut time hogaya he ....

Maan - han chalo thik he ...

IN the kitchen ... maan was cutting vegitables and pari was mixing flour to make roties... while geet was sitting at far end of kitchen with a sullen face ....

Geet - MCHhh guys .... plezz kuch to karne do na ..
.

PAri - miss Geet Handa ... aapki wajah se hum kitchen 1 bar clean kr chuke hain ab chup chap betho ... warna hum din bhar kitchen me hi bethe rahenge...


Maan - arre pari ... daant mat use... geet .. come here ...  chal me gaana gaunga aur tu table baja okk ...

geet rushed to him....

MAAN - ab jo me sunaunga na wo ek dum original composition he meri ....


AALU KO BEGAN SE PYAR HOGAYA .....
PEHLI NAZAR ME DIL BEKARAR HOGAYA .....
PYAAZ AUR TAMATAR DONO GHAYAL HUE ....
ITNE ME BHARTA TAIYAR HOGAYA
....


geet and pari looked at each other and laughed uncontrollably ... they made food with singing and then watched DDLJ after that  they talked about nothing and everything happened in last  4 years... they shared their future plans... remembered their childhood days....


As the three frnds were together again after a separation of long 4 years... the gud time was also back ....they were enjoying their life at the full .. Maan joined his fathers business .. Pari was perusing Her Masters degree while geet joined an engineering college as an Lecturer.... Everyone at home was surprised at her decision ... as they all want her to continue her studies but Geet was admanent... While Maan ,pari, Brij and riya supported her decision....


MOnths Later

geet had almost forgotten about dev .. as he never come in front her after that day .... she thought that he is busy with his own life and  forgot her ..... well that was nt the truth .... the two most Caring and possessive men in geets life had settled the matter in a hush manner...  even Riya don't have any clue about their involvement in this matter ..... Men have kept it under the covers so that dev would never come in front of geet .. and she can lead her life normally ....
 on the other side Geet was leading her life normally ... with her best frnds around. In College her colleges  loved her for her lovely nature and intelligence while students loved their GEET MaM FOR HER BUBBLY NATURE  and her support and help in their problems... She turned 21 last month.. she was happy with her carrier .. these were some things which encouraged her parents to think about her future... they were searching a Bridegroom for  their lovely daughter ..... one day they called her and asked IS she was ready for getting married..? for First few days she was ignored the topic... but due to emotional blackmail she finally agreed.... one fine morning.. maan called geet

Maan - Geet?? where are you ??

Geet - Getting ready for College... why ??

Maan - want to talk you about something important.. i will drop you college today .. get ready i m coming in !5 minutes..


hey here comes the part 8 ...
i know this part is nt big enough ....
i am writing another part .. will post it in hour or two ..Smile
plezz hit the like button and comment ....Big smile

love
rinki


Edited by lovelife21 - 10 April 2011 at 12:16pm

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

oh god did maan listen to everything she said.................
argh.............devAngry just wanna kill  him........Censored
hey pl cont soon..........cant wait to know abt maan's reaction if he heared her that she committed suicide............


Hey ...
thnx for ur comment preethia....
I hate Dev TOO....

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shah10

supreb.
love it.


thnx Smile
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonali_N

awesome updateSmile

thnx
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

awesome update
loved it


thnxSmile

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