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best frnds (MG) Part 10 updated PM L8R (Page 12)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
nice can't wait til next oneWink

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia


hey read ur updates 4 & 5...............nice one..........argh..........hate devAngry.........

hope maan gets old geet back................

can u pl add me to ur pm list...............


thnx preethia ..
i hate dev too ...Angry
old geet is on her way ..Wink
have added u in my pm list

Originally posted by sonali_N

I jus love dis trio ...Smile
cont soooooooooooon


THNX ...
hope u love next part ...

Originally posted by kashndsel4eva


awesome update
loved it
haha funny
loved them three
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm



thnx dear.....

Originally posted by Shalve


lovely update...

Originally posted by maanujaanu


awesum
amazing update
 


thnx dear
Originally posted by millie_maaneet


awesome update
loved it


thnx dear ..
Originally posted by ARMAANKSGFAN


hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
good 2 c da bubbly geet that we love
she was hilerious blaming pari
cant wait 4 da past
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

ps
thanks 4 da cs


heyyy
thnx...

Originally posted by sharmake11


wow love the bond three of them they have  so funny love it brilliant update pls longer update if yu dont mind my dear
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm


thnxx dear...
i hope u r satisfied with length of part 7 .. will try to give more longer updates....

[QUOTE= shah10]

awsome update

love it[/QUOTE]

thnx dear .....

Originally posted by kuhu18


 hi..... awsome ff and a very lovely update do cont soon


hey kuhu ...
thnx for liking ....
Originally posted by MSgayatri


awwe
this was really sweet
best frndz doin chit chat
plz PM me as well
[/QUOTE}

thnx dear ....
[QUOTE=maanetsangel]
heyy ... superb ... mast update tha .. continue soon ..

thnx dear....

Originally posted by skjgmd


nice can't wait til next one


thnx dear... sorry for the delay...




LOVE

RINKI




Edited by lovelife21 - 28 March 2011 at 10:10am
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
PART 7

Geet - WHAT YAAR ??? mene kya kiya hunnnnn... ye sab pari ka idea tha .. u know name kitni sabhya aur shant ladki hun .. mene to use mana b kiya ki pipe se jaana risky hoga hume lag jayegi .. par ye to meri sunti hi kahan he .. Dekha pari kabhi to meri bat mana kar hum seedhe seedhe gate se hi aajate .. but nhi ab kha  DAANT ...

PAri looked at get shocked while MAAN roled his eyes

they turned their back to her ...geet smiled at them... she whispered in a low voice ...

GEET - I MISSED U BOTH ....!!

MAAN & PARI - we missed you too geet .. we missed you too... (trio gave a group hug to each other)

MAAN - geet .. u can stop pretending... we know u r not fine... we know u r just pretending to b happy and naughty bcoz you dot want us to be sad... we r ur best frnds.. we should know the truth...

Geet
- what do  u want to know teddy ?? u know na ki muze nhi pasand ki koi muze week samze... i m nt week maan... i know i m hurt .. i m shattered.. i may nt be able to trust  someone else in my life but i will be fine...

Pari
- we know geet ... we know that u r strong... but if u will share ur pain with us ... u will feel light...  we r ur best frnds .. we will b their with u .. no matter wt happens.... it was you jisne hume khud se dur kar diya... hamari bachpan ki dosti ko bhul gayi... pichle3 sal me jitne b bar hamne bat ki mushkil se 5-7 min ki hogi ... bcoz u were busy...


geet
- me kya karti  ... us insaan ne meri soch .. mera jeene ka dhang sab badal diya tha.... jab tak tum log sath the tab tak sab kuch thik tha .... fir tum yahan se chale gaye  aur me akeli hogayi... phone aur video- chat to hum roz karte the pr sab kuch vesa nhi raha tha na... aur jab muze sab se jada frnds ki jarurat thi .. Dev ne muze support kiya ... dheere dheere me uspe dependent hogayi .... Me to use bus apna accha dost samazti thi ... fir tum logo ke jaane ke 3-4 months bad jb muze uski aadat hogayi ... usne muze propose kr diya ...mene use mana kiya .. bcoz i never felt that thing for him... bu then he stopped talking to me ... he ignored me ... me fir se akeli hogayi ... one day his frnds called me and said that he is drunked and wants to talk to me ... i talked to him ... and his voice his words .. muze laga bcoz of me he is there ... meri wazah se use itni takleef ho rhi he .... after sometime when he was in deep sleep i just turned off my cell ... i thought If my  yes could make him happy i would do this ... and i called him next morning and that I love him too... every thing was good in the starting... wo meri bahut care karta tha.. muze bus dekhta rehta.. lec ke beech me meri copies me  I LOVE YOU  likhta rehta.... kabhi kabhi muze feel hota i m the luckiest girl in this world... me usse shayad sach me pyar karne lagi thi ....
                   but then sab kuch badlne laga... use meri aadtein.. mere dressing sense ... even muzse b problem hone lagi.. me ph b bat karti aur uska ph waiting pe aajata to wo muzse jhagda karta .... me apne kisi frnd se yahan tak ki tumse b bat karti to use lagta me kisi ladke se bat kr rhi hun... use shak tha ki mere or maan ke beech me kuch he .. aur me tuzse bat karti to use lagta main maan se bat kr rhi hun.. aur fir meri 19th bday party me jab maan ne muze I LOVE U  bola to use laga me uske sath cheat kr rhi hun... mene use samzane ki bahut koshish ki pr wo nhi mana .. uska kehna tha ki agar me usse(dev se) pyar krti hun to tumse bat krna chod dun.....(
she statted sobbing)

MAAN - stop it plezz geet .. muze aur kuch nhi sunna plezz...

PAri
- MAan use bolne de.. usne ye sab kisi ko nhi kaha hoga... uske dil se ye sab bahar aana jaruri he....

maan
- par pari .. me nhi sun sakta ki geet ko kisi ne itna hurt kiya he plezz...

pari - agar tuze nhi sunna to tu chala ja yahan se.. (maan left the room )

geet was crying hysterically.... pari hugged her from side.. and encouraged her to speak...

geet - i m sorry pari .. mene tuze aur maan ko itna hurt kiya .. par me kya karti muze dev ke aage kuch nhi dikha ... hamari dosti b nhi ... tum dono ne hamesha mera sath diya aur mene tum dono ko hi chod diya...

Pari
- geet bhul ja wo sab baatein.. hum sath he aur hamesha rahenge kisi dev ke kehne se hum alag nhi hojayenge.. samzi.. kya ye hi wajah thi tere aur uske alag hone ki...

geet - nhi .. ek din jab hum jhagda sort out karne ki liy mile.. to usne kaha ki wo muzse ek hi shart pe fir se relation continu karega..

PAri - kya condition geet ??

GEET - .............(she kept mum and stsrted crying again clutching pari's hand)

PAri
- nooo he cant do this .. did he really asked u to do that thing wid you ..

geet nodded her hand while pari lokked around.. hoping maan nt heard their talks...

pari
- but he loved you so much wo aisa kese ... may be he was drunked or something else would have happened....

geet - muze b aisa hi laga .. pehle to me uski bat sunke shocked reh gayi... mene use samzaya ye sab galat he to wo bola ki agar me nhi to aur bahut si ladkiyan he jo ye sab karne ko ready hain aur wo ladkiyan muze hazar guna sundar aur rich he... mene use jhapad mara and i left that place....

pari
- accha kia tune khota kamina sala huh.. uski himmat kese hui ye sab kehne ki... maan ko pata chala na to bhuta bana dega uska...

geet - (looked up with a worried expresion) pari agar MAan ko meri poison khane wali bat pata padi to wo ye seh nhi payega.. wo abhi ye sab sunke hi itna hurt tha baki pata padne pe i dont know wo kya krega...

Pari - tuze ek jhapad marega aur kya... aur wo nhi marega to me pitwa dungi us kamine ke liye tune aise harkat ki dhor kahin ki...

Geet
- me kya karti pari ... use kisi aur ladki ko kiss karta dekh ke muzpe kya beeti wo me hi janti hun aur upar se wo apane frnds se keh raha tha ki i was an challenge for him.. kyunki col ke first day pe mene use ignore kiya tha.. he was just trying to make it even wid me .. magar me uske hath nhi lagi.. i was so disturbed ... aur mene suicide attpt kiya.. pr ab jab me usse 3-4 months se nhi mili thi to muze pata pad gaya ki wo mera pyar nhi meri aadat tha sirf ek buri aadat....

PAri
- aur tu itni sure kyun hai ki it was not love ??

geet
- kyunki aaj subah use ghar pe dekh ke muze na usse nafrat maehsus hui na pyar ...



"DEV AAJ TUM SE MILNE AAYA THA "



pari and geet turned towards the voice




Edited by lovelife21 - 10 April 2011 at 12:14pm

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
oh god did maan listen to everything she said.................
argh.............devAngry just wanna kill  him........Censored
hey pl cont soon..........cant wait to know abt maan's reaction if he heared her that she committed suicide............

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
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