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TuJoSaathHai (A NivRen Story)..FF..Ch 31/Pg 93

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Hello guys...didnt have much to do so i got one more reason...to bore u even more.
 
I'm starting a new FF on NivRen...its kinda like a short story...n i hope u guys will like it...here is the intro...
 
 
 

Tu Jo Saath Hai

 

It's a story about two people who know each other but never realize their love for each other''..its only when fate brings them together that they know how each feel for the other.

Nivedita Sharma:'''.known as Nivi to her family''..She lives in a joint family of seven''..including herself.

Viren Sood:''''..Youngest in the family''''..has been the most pampered kid in the home'..but that didn't made him forget his responsibilities or his sanskaar.

Both their families are similar as in the show.

 
 
Index
 
Chapter 1:...Page 1
Chapter 6:...Page 11...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=11
Chapter 7:...Page 13...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=13 
Chapter 8:...Page 15...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=15
Chapter 9:...Page 18...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=18
Chapter10:...Page 19...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=19
Chapter11:...Page 22...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=22
Chapter12:...Page 25...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=25
Chapter13:...Page 28...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=28
Chapter14:...Page 32...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=32
Chapter15:...Page 37...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=37
Chapter16:...Page 41...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=41
Chapter17:...Page 46...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=46
Chapter18:...Page 50...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=50
Chapter19:...Page 54...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=54
Chapter20:...Page 59...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=59
Chapter21:...Page 62...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=62
Chapter22:...Page 64...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=64
Chapter23:...Page 68...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=68
Chapter24:...Page 75...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=75
Chapter25:...Page 78...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=78
Chapter26:...Page 79...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=79
Chapter27:...Page 84...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=84
Chapter28:...Page 86...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=86
Chapter29:...Page 88...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=88
Chapter30:...Page 90...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=90
Chapter31:...Page 93...http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1627541&TPN=93

 

 

LINKS TO MY PREVIOUS FF'S FROM OTHER FORUMS


Kasamh Se
Aap Jaisa Koi (A Love Story) :   
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=382153

Aap Jaisa Koi (A Love Story) (2) :    http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=792066


Bidaai
HUMTUM (a RagVir story) :   
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1048530

Choti Bahu
Sirf Tum (A RaDev Story) :  
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1137399

 


Edited by starz4me - 22 April 2011 at 10:14pm

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Aaaaahhh Sonal amazing intro looking forward to it SO much!!! x

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Thanks Anisha...................I know that the intro sounds a little old-school..............but i dont know if all of u guys will like it or not.
 
But anyways................here i go with chapter 1.
 


Edited by starz4me - 01 March 2011 at 2:47pm

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
No Sonal not at all it sounds amazing!!! EVERYONE will love it I'm sure!!!

Okayyy will be waiting!! x

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Chapter  1

 

Sharma House:

Naintara…..doing pooja……..asking god to bless her family…….and if they cant get more….then atleast keep them happy in whatever they have……………she was bz in her prayers…..when she hears Nivedita calling yash……..she turns to find Nivi in the kitchen preparing breakfast for everyone……….Naintara turns to god n says…….that she has taken so much responsibility in such a young age……..please give her a chance to live her own life…….fulfill her own wishes……………..she had tears in her eyes……..when she feels someone hugging her from behind.

 

Nivi……feels bad whenever she sees her dadi crying for her……she hugs her tight n kisses her on the side of her neck n says…….why do u think I don't live my life…….i love whatever I have got dadi……..my wishes are connected to each one in this home…………everytime someone achieves something…….u shud think that one of my wishes are fulfilled.

 

Dadi looks at her n says…….silly girl……u r talking like me……..i know dear……u love this family a lot…..but I want u to get what u deserve…….u deserve someone in ur life…..who will love u for who u r…….n will appreciate ur words……ur views…….n shower u with his love.

 

Nivi smiles n tightens her embrace n says……..dadi….....i've u already……who feels that way for me……so why does it have to be a guy

 

Dadi looks at her n caresses her face n says……what when I'm not there……I want to die knowing that u r happy….otherwise my soul will also not rest in peace.

 

Nivi smiles at her again n says……oh ho dadi…..u r taking everything to ur heart……but realistically thinking……….who knows……if there is any one like this who exists on earth………i think dadi….now u'll have one more thing to do…….that is to pray god to send someone like u described for me……so that ur tensions are over.

 

Giving another tight hug to her dadi…...Nivi goes back to her routine…….yash comes down n she serves him breakfast…….n before they cud chat……their father joins them…..n both of them keep quiet…….so as to avoid saying anything……that wud irritate him.

 

After a while Yash n Nivi both leave together……..its their routine…..yash goes to his college…….n Nivi goes to her office…….that is coz she works in the Event management company………n she likes working as she gets time to be busy in something totally different for her.

 

 

Sood Mansion:

Vandana is in the kitchen n is excited that its Viren's first day in the office……after he had come back from USA……..She liked it when both Sid n Viren did something together……..but it had been long since both the brothers were together.

It was when Viren was 10 years old……that he went to boarding n Sid continued his study in Delhi……..n after boarding Viren went to USA…….but he always maintained contact….with his family back home……..he used to chat with his brother Sid………..but missed the togetherness of being here……close to everyone………n now he is back……and the most happiest was Sid n Vandana n his dadaji.

 

Vandana was lost in her thoughts when she hears Viren voice…….who says…….whats this tayiji……I've missed ur food so much when I was away……n now when I'm here…….u r not even asking me to eat.

 

Vandana smiles at his mischievious attitude……n says…….Viren……u will not change…..u'll be the same…..n I like u that way…….but u r wrong n one thing……coz I'm not only asking u to eat…….but I'm asking u to eat ur favorite gajar ka halwa.

 

Viren's eyebrows raises in excitement……he just sntches the bowl away from her hand n eats like crazy n says…….u know that's why I love u tayiji……..otherwise mom don't even know what gajar ka halwa is.

Vandana smiles n says……..dont say that she knows what it is…..its just that she doesn't know how to cook.

Viren keeps the bowl away…..n puts his hands on her shoulder n says………that's he thing na tayiji……unless mom makes it…….i wont believe u that she knows the dishes names.

Both laugh……n Viren hugs her n says…….Ok I'm off…….Sid might be waiting for me……n dadaji…..he'll start lecturing if I'm late…………….n he runs to the door n to the car where really both Sid and dadaji were waiting for him………..so to avoid any lecturing he says………what?.........why re u looking at m like that??...........dont u guys ever eat anything ??....................looking at him saying that…….both smile n so does Viren.

 

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Awww Sonal this is AMAZNG!!! LIKE SERIOUSLY AMAZING!! I love it soo much sis. love the bond between VD and Viren soo cute and love the way you have portrayed Viren Its so much like him its seriously AWESOME!! continue soon x

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Hi Sonal, liked the intro and first chapter. It's amazing. Can't wait for next chapter. Please continue soon.

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Lovely start. Sonal. Look forward for more.I'm glad Nivren are responsible working people here.Smile

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