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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
awesome work mel!!!! i loved it as expected!!!! but why so short? i mean i love you FF so much that every time i read a part i am like.....i want to read more more.....cz this is a really nice FF!!!! and why did you made us wait so long??? but whatever....it was fab!!! Big smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClapBig smileClap

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
short and sweet update
thanks for  such a passionate part i
 
 
 
poor rids she has fallen for him so badly but cant even tell him
awww feeling bad for her
hope to read armaan's diary soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
amazing part
continue soon

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
i liked it...
bt im so confused abt armaan;s behavour
matlab at 0ne tym he is acting so luving n other tym so rude arrongant n angry....
so waiting for the mystery to unfold.......

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
hey mel,

Awesome part..WinkClap
Loved it..EmbarrassedTongue
Thanx 4 d PM..Big smile
Continue soon..Smile

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Edited:

ahhh loved the part!!! I'm glad Ridz stopped him
it wouldn't be right otherwise

and Armaan's anger...ah well can't wait for the diary entry Embarrassed

his caring nature in the beginning was so adorable...Embarrassed blowing on the mark and then asking if it hurts Embarrassed aww he's so caring!

ahh can't wait to read the diary entry! I kinda have an idea of why he's angry but I'll keep my assumptions aside LOL


Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 27 March 2011 at 12:44am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Part 15.

Ahhhhhh! I didnt know how you'd follow up Part 14 because it was SO AMAZING :$ :| and I was dyying to read what you'd wirte next. I knew you wouldn't disappoint and I aint surprised that I was RIGHT =D LOOOOOOOOOOVED THE UPDAATE SO MUCH! <3 It was a bit teeny bit short pshht ROFL but totally totally worth the wait (another one I'll be rereading for suree!)

First off... The beginning part was .. HOT :|  LOL (I love the little disclaimers/'lil notes' you have in red at the beginning of an update =)) needless to say Im never uncomfortable :) ROFL)

I'm soo glad they didn't go too far << with him being drunk, it would've been wrong and it would probably have just made their relationship go backwards rather than progress. Althought right now, with their confusion and all, there's also a slight fear as to how this might affect their relationship (esp with Armaan getting angry) I dont thiink it'll cause too big a problem...coz Armaan may be angry but he's no longer the Armaan he was before..her presence in his life (and the way she intoxicates his mind) is something i think has changed him forever! =))

I think my favourite part in the update was in the morning when she walked in with the tray and he realised she's behaving like she used to earlier, and then he saw the mark on her neck and blew on it/rubbed it, appologising and asking if it hurts :$ ahh :| that MELTED MEEEE big time :| LOL

Loved the update. LOVE this FF. And SERIOUSLYYY LOOOOOVE the way you write, Mel! Amazing job! x

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Hey there Mel! Im a silent reader, and i love ur ff to death! Its so intense and amazingly-written! U have skills mel!! Plz continue!! Dont disappoint ur so many other fansl plz mel! U have
To continuee!
Love,
KaranJennifer99

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