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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
@Devu: I love your comments tehe :$

No, today is my reading FF day! I'm reading an OS atm and then I have other FF's to catch up with :D 

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Hawwww that last part was so freakin well written! You described the emotions and the scene so so so well! It was an awesome experience just to read it, I could feel myself wondering oh nooooo what's gonna happen next?? lol
I love that he cares enough about her to leave the party cause she isn't feeling well there. Glad that someone entered his life who he will listen to more than Vivek and that other dude (can't even remember his name :P)
and the part where they came back home toh was OMG out of this world! So so so well written! Seriously! :)
Even in his drunken state I love how he realizes that she is shying away from him cause it's her first time, and it's so cute how he is actually taking time to enjoy those expressions of hers as well!
Awww she had to stop him in the end, but I guess better that way than him going ahead with it and acting completely oblivious to what conspired between them in his drunken stupor.

And ohhhh have to mention, really loving how you portray RM in here. So sweet of them that they hang out with Armaan to keep him in check even though they hate the company he is with. And also they are just adorable how they are hanging out in the corner by themselves cuddling with each other! <3

Waiting eagerly to read more!!

-Shilpa

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
  update

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TheMelody.

Originally posted by MaitreeluvKajen

Ok,LOL My third comment!
When are you Updating?
I'm DYYYIIIIIIIIIIING to read MOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEE

LOL Maitree, you're cute <3


Ah, I'll update tomorrow. But no promises, I might start writing tomorrow and post it on Saturday! :) xx
YAY I'm CUTE I'm CUTE LOL LOLLOL
Okay,Update soonish! Still dying to read more LOL LOL
 
 
You are a ROCKSTAR!
xoxoxo'
 
Oooh,Forgot to add,
Madame, you have my 4 OSs due to read. You better Do that and comment.AngryLOL


Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 18 March 2011 at 2:46am

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
plz plzzz try ur best anywayz!!!!!

cant wait for more u c!!!! longing for an update!!!

btw. .... Hi am a new reader of ur ff!!!! nd i SUPER SUPER SUPER LOVE IT!!!!!Heart
THE WAY U PORTRAY EACH of their emotions nd feelings is like WOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!Thumbs Up
I LOVEE ur storyline nd the concept!!!! 
nd nw the last part was.......EmbarrassedLOL

so plzzzzzzzz try updating!!!!!! am hungry for more!!!!Wink

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
loved this ff
continue soon

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
updateeee fast..
cant wait...
the ending was to crucial to wait for so looong...
hehe!!
 i am desperate i know!

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