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OS Waiting For You... Part 2 in Page 4 "COMPLETED" - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey that was nice
i do like os a nd i m so so so sorry tht i hvnt been reading ur ffs or anyones

cos everything in my head turns khichdi  and i cant keep track of who is who.. i hope u understand

os is ok coz i read it at one glance and it doesnt muddle my head..

this was very cute cud imagine both avdesh and arpita this way..


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey priyaaa
this is amazing
i mean very romantic too good
i don;t know waht to say
butttttttttttt awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey priya
you have done a great job
this is really awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello YogaPriya,
nice story. Much needed in such depressing times on GKD.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Priya!!!!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—

My Sweetu!!!!!!
πŸ€—πŸ€—

That was really an awesome surprise!!😳😳

U really lightened my mood.....
Why...why can't we get such nice...& sweet scenes in the show...

Ur OS & FF are always close to my heart as I can interrelate myself with them...They are so simple yet make a huge connection!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Loved it!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
πŸ‘πŸΌ

Love ya a lots!!!
😳😳

 

                 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very good priya...u are a very good writer nd let me tel u honey, u made my day....
i loved it sooooooo much....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: prash_t

Hieee PriyaaaaaaπŸ€—πŸ€—

 
 
 
Wooooww Priyaaa....................
 
 
Kya OS hai yaar!!!!!! I looooved it sooo Much ..!
 
 
This is for you........................
 
                     
 
 
 
Muaah Priyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... U are a sweetheart...........
 
 
Both avi and arpi are chweeties....😳😳😳
 



Prashuuuuuuuuuuuuuu πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—


awww love you more for than my chocolate ice cream πŸ€— πŸ€—

muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah prashuuuuuuuuuuu πŸ˜³

love you πŸ€—


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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Well Done Darling.. I really liked it.. Do me a favour.. Post the link in the Fan fiction index so dat I can update it on the Main page once Im back.. Love Ya. Bye


hey ramona πŸ€—

i am glad you like it πŸ˜³

sure i will do that😳

all the best for exams πŸ˜‰

luv ya πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: NVBGKY

Hey Priya, great short story πŸ‘. Would love for you to continue it.....


hey nila di πŸ€—

thanks very much for reading it πŸ˜³

take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Sidda8

Priya, thank you for this os. The events of GKD has stopped me form watching the episodes and your os enlightened me. Aww, Avi is playing the waiter boy, a perfect way for Arpi to keep ogling him.


hey sidda πŸ€—

thanks for very much for reading it😳

i am glad you like it πŸ˜³

@bold even for us πŸ˜‰

luv ya πŸ€—