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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 9)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by love_KYPH

amazin update di!!!
wow iPhone on b'day.....lucky kripaWink
loved kripa-arjun scene
waitin 4 AK 2 meet
cont soon....
Thanks love_kyph.....
 
Ha ha.....and lucky me........!! Got my latest one from my dad too!!
 
They will meet in their own time!!

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShelDev

Lovely part as usual Mitu...
Awesome....Love how her parents really care for Kripa's feelings....
Prithvi is a good friend.....
I love the little convo btwn Arjun & Kripa...very sweet...
Waiting for Angad's entry now....
Pls continue soon
Thanks
Thanks Shel!!
 
Yeah, that's the way our relation should be!!
 
Angad will be there soon........Now that Kripa is on the scene, why not Angad.......!!
 
Will surely update today!!
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nine2

aww..Kripa n arjun scene was so cute...n kripa is 21!!...her mom's thinking abt AK marriage n her dad doesnt wanna remember it....oh i hope prithvi doesnt love kripa in here and turns negative...does kripa wanna go to london for studies...if she goes there then she will prob meet angad n they can prob fall in love...plz cont. soon n thanks for the pm!!  :)
Thanks Nine2
 
Surya's family is close to eachother and they are a team........!! Lets see how they go forward with it......!! Friendship is good!! Some times, friendship is good than any other relation, as we don't expect any thing from other.......!! We just be there for eachother without expectations!! Lets see if Prithvi is a true friend or spoils the innocense of the pure childhood friendship!!
 
Hmmmm....Kripa going to London!! Not a bad idea.....lets see!!
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by malluangel

hiiiiiiiiiii
my names aish!
i am loving this story! its very nice Big smile
i love how kripa is and i love that her dad chose to break away from all that because omg i wud hate growing up like that... wow... i mean like my dad wud freak if i was married at the age of 4[:S]
please continue soon!
and pm me please! also, could you please put up an index on the first page? it wud be really helpful Smile
Hey Aish....Thanks.....I am glad you are enjoying it!!
 
Yup, it's difficult growing up like that.........But it's the fact........You won't believe it, but i had see it happening......Though she was not married so early, her marriage was fixed early, when she was around 6......And, she was married to the same boy, as per the promise both familes gave......But to her fortune, the boy was good, but not her in laws......They wanted more dowry and the boy seperated and came to US....It's difficult situation.....
 
Sure will pm you !!
Ok....Will do it......
 
 

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
Thanks Iqbal Neha.......!!
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged

 

PART-5

 

 

London……..

 

A: Abbe Josh ke bache…..kitni baar jagaya…..magar tu hain ki uthne ka naam nahi le raha…..apni to flight miss karega…..meri bhi miss karayega….he said…..taking a water jug and dropping some water straight on Josh's face………

 

Josh got up immediately angrily……….

 

J: Angad teri problem kya hai…..subah subah  roj chalu ho jata hai…..he said wiping his face of with the blanket….

 

A: Hello sir…..agar mein nahi uthata…..to tu haar roj pehle 2 lectures to miss hi karta…..ye jo itne ache marks aye hain na tujhe, ye meri wajah se hain……he said smirking at him…..10 baj chuke hain….aur 3 ghante mein humari flight hai…..agar 10 min me taiyar nahi hua na….to mein airport ke liye nikala…..waise hi security ka line itna bada hota hai….mujhe meri flight miss nahi karni….samjhe….Raat raat baithkar majnu ishq ladate hain…..aur subah uthne ka naam hi nahi lete…..he said looking at him angrily…..

 

J: Abbe tu kyun jal raha hai……itni badi line thi ladkiyon ki tere piche….mud ke ek baar bhi dekh leta na to aaj akela nahi rehta….meri tarah shadi ke bare mein soch raha hota…..suhaag raat ke sapne dekh raha hota……

 

A: Jelous….aur tujhse…..he said rolling his eyes…..teri girl friends tujhe mubarak….he said folding his hands…..mein aise hi thik hun…..aur ye mishiti madam se to milke ek saal ho gaya hai…..kya pata woh tere sath time pass kar rahi ho…..aur bagal mein koi aur rakh liya ho……..

 

J: aaaaaaaii…..sambhal ke baat kar…woh tere hone wali bhabhi hai…..he said holding Angad's collar……….

 

A: Angad just shook his head and  took his bag, frowning at him…..mein niche restaurant mein breakfast karne jaa raha hun…..he said going…..aa jana…..10 min….

 

J: Haan haan ja…..waise bhi India jane ki jaldi tujhe hain…..mujhe nahi….he said loudly…..but he got up anyway and went to bathroom immediately and got ready in 10 min and went down with his bag……..There was no guarantee about Angad…..he was crazy sometimes……

 

They were both going to India, after there MBA…..They had moved to hotel for last 10 days…to have some fun and travel around Europe with some friends…..but Angad was eager to leave now………It was 1 year since he saw his family, and wanted to reach there, before kartik's marriage anniversary……he had missed his home, his parents and especially his dadi…..and food….nothing can beat a full home cooked rajasthani meal…...It felt like ages since he had last visited India……..He sat there in the restaurant and sipped his black coffee, making faces…..Though he got used to it, he still did not like it, but we don't get what we want always!!…....He saw Josh coming in and smiled…..so his trick had worked…..he laughed at his expression, when he saw the clock on the wall……..It was still 8 am in the morning…….

 

J: I can't believe it…..man…..meri sari neend kharab kar di……I did not even take bath properly……and you are laughing…..he said looking at Angad angrily, sitting on the opposite chair.…..Angad tried to suppress his laugh, but could not help himself…..he laughed out looking at Josh's angry face…………

 

A: Aur kya karta…..apni flight miss karta……4 ghante pahele pahuncho to bhi line mein der ho jati hain……and you are….he said shrugging, chuckling at his friend, again.……..Mujhe har haal mein kal tak Udaipur pahunchana hai……Samjhe…..now have your breakfast…..dekha….jaldi uthaya, to kum se kum khane ke liye to waqt hai tere paas aaj….nahi to roj ki tarah bhuka reh jata…..Josh made faces at him and looked at the breakfast, Angad had already ordered for them…..

 

J: you have a point there friend, he said shaking his head…..no point being angry at his crazy friend….he thought...... Next 10 hours.....flight food...eew....but I still can't believe man....8 o'clock.....aur mere watch ka time bhi change kiya....he said shaking his head.....

 

Angad just chuckled and continued eating..... He knew Josh very well....they were roomates for 2 full years....Josh was a wonderful friend and they had become quite close....They finished there breakfast in silence…..Once done….they took there bags and started leaving, for the airport…..

 

A: so, Josh what are your plans for future?

 

J: for next 2 months.....no plans no early wake up.....just pait puja aur sona.....Angad smiled....

 

A: Hmmm.... tere girl friend ka kya hoga….

 

J: Sounga to khwabon mein aa jayegi….

 

A: Kabhi fursat mile nind aur khwabon se to mere gaon aa jana.....

 

J: are yaar....gaon mein kya rakha hain? Tu hi aaja Mumbai....Tu to bussiness kahin se bhi chala sakta hai....

 

A: na baba.....mein gaon mein hi thik hoon.....Kabhi ake dekh…..wahan ki raunak……jane ka maan nahi karega…..Mumbai mein kya rakha hai…..wahi bhid bhad….

 

J: Mumbai ki baat hi alag hai yaar…..par chal thik hai.... Tu jeeta.....aaounga jab time mile tab....magar tuzhe bhi Mumbai le jaunga kabhi…….he said challenging him….

 

Angad laughed at his challenge…..

 

A: Teri shadi par jaroor aunga …..dekhte hain….kismet kahan kahan le jati hai humko……..they walked out and caught a taxi and left for their country in few hours……..

 

Enjoy song from Veerzara - aisa desh hai mera

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ay5oBk3kBic

Ho.... oh.... oh......
Ambar hethhaan, dharti vasdi, ethe har rut hasdi, ho....
Kinna sona, des hai mera, des hai mera, des hai mera....
Kinna sona des hai mera, des hai mera
Des hai mera, des hai mera…


Dharti sunehri ambar neela ho...
Dharti sunehri ambar neela, har mausam rangeela
Aisa des hai mera, ho.... aisa des hai mera
Aisa des hai mera, haan.... aisa des hai mera
Bole papiha koyal gaaye...
Bole papiha koyal gaaye, saawan ghir ke aaye
Aisa des hai mera, ho.... aisa des hai mera
Aisa des hai mera, haan.... aisa des hai mera
Oh.... kothhe te, kaan bole aayi chithhi mere maahiye di..
Vich aane da vi na bole aayi, chithhi mere maahiye di..
Genhoo ke kheton mein kanghi jo kare hawaayein
Rang birangi kitni chunariyaan ud ud jaayein
Panghat par panhaaran jab gagri bharne aaye
Madhur madhur taanon mein kahin bansi koyi bajaaye, lo sun lo
Qadam qadam pe hai mil jaani
Qadam qadam pe hai mil jaani, koyi prem kahaani
Aisa des hai mera, ho.... aisa des hai mera
Aisa des hai mera, haan.... aisa des hai mera

Oh.... oh.... oh....
(Hoy hoy hoy hoy hoy hoy hoy!)
Oh meri jugni de dhaage pakke jugni os de moonh toh fabbe
Jinu sat ishq di lagge, oy saanyi mereya oh jugni
Veer mereya jugni kendi aye, oh naam saayin da lendi aye
Hoy hoy hoy hoy hoy hoy hoy
Oh dil kad litaa ee jind meriye

Baap ke kandhe chadh ke jahaan bachche dekhe mele
Melon mein nach ke tamaashe, kulfi ke chaat ke thhele
Kahin milti meethhi goli, kahin chooran ki hai pudiya
Bhole bhole bachche hain, jaise gudde aur gudiya
Aur inko roz sunaaye daadi naani ho..
Roz sunaaye daadi naani, ik pariyon ki kahaani
Aisa des hai mera, ho.... aisa des hai mera
Aisa des hai mera, haan.... aisa des hai mera

Sadke sadke jaandi aye mutiyaare ni
Kanda chuba tere pair baankiye naare ni
Oy, ni adiye kanda chuba tere pair baankiye naare ni
Kaun kade tera kaandra mutiyaare ni
Kaun sahe teri peed baankiye naare ni
Oy, ni adiye kaun sahe teri peed baankiye naare ni
Ho ho ho, ho ho ho ho
Mere des mein mehmaanon ko bhagwaan kaha jaata hai
Woh yahin ka ho jaata hai, jo kahin se bhi aata hai
Aa aa aa aa....
Tere des ko maine dekha tere des ko maine jaana
Aa…aa…aa…
Tere des ko maine dekha tere des ko maine jaana
Jaane kyun ye lagta hai mujhko jaana pehchaana
Yahaan bhi wahin shaam hai wahin savera… oh....
Wahi shaam hai wahin savera
Aisa hi des hai mera jaisa des hai tera
Waisa des hai tera haan jaisa des hai tera

Aisa des hai mera ho.. jaisa des hai tera
Aisa des hai mera haan.... jaisa des hai tera
Aisa des hai mera haan..
Waisa des hai mera

 

Delhi Airport………

 

J: Ok Angad…….ab tu ja apne gaon….mein jata hun….amchi Mumbai….he said winking at Angad…..shaking his hand….They hugged each other and looked at each other smiling….

 

A: Milte hain……apna vada yaad rakhna…..

 

J: Josh apna vada kabhi nahi todta…....bye…..dost….

 

They parted ways in Delhi, each to their own destination………….

 

Udaipur Airport………Kartik and Dilip were eagerly waiting for Angad's arrival…..as soon as they saw him, they went to him and there was joy and laughter on there faces……Angad was excited to be in midst of his family once more……

They reached home in record time……..and Angad jumped out of the SUV….

 

D: Are ruk beta….maa aarti ka thal to le aye pahele…..andar mat bhag jana….woh naaraj ho jayegi….

 

A: Angad grinned at Kartik, who was smiling…. and stood near the door, while Avantika came to the door and did his aarati…..

 

Av: Mere bte ko kisi ki najar na lage…..she said hugging his son…..Angad touched her and Dilip's feet as well as Kartik's feet……….

 

A: Dadi kahan hai…..?Aur bhabhi, Aliyah…? He said looking at Avantika….

 

Andar to chal….she chuckled at his eagerness……as they all entered in…..

 

AL: Bhaiya…………Aliyah came running to Angad and hugged him hard…..

 

A: Are baap re tu to tufan mail se bhi jyada tez hai…..he said smiling at his little sis……….

 

AL: Kya laye app mere liye London se?

 

Av: Are use saans to lene de Aliyah…..ate hi bichare ko pareshan karna chalu kar diya….Peir nahi chuhogi apne bhaiya ke……….

 

AL: Sorry…..she said and touched Angad's feet……

 

A: Sukhi raho bachi…..aur ye le….ye puri bag teri hai……he handed her his handbag and chuckled at his little sis…..

 

AL: Sach….thankyou so much bhaiya….kya hai isme…..she said hugging him once again…grinning…..

 

A: Tu jake khud hi dekh le……abb details mat puch…..

 

Aliyah took the bag in her room…..excitedly….

 

Then Angad saw Divya standing there with a smile on her face…….He had come to the wedding last time, but could not even see his bhabhi properly, due to so many traditions of marriage………She was always in ghunghat then…..

 

A: Bhabhi…..he said going to her and smiling at her affectionately…..he then touched her feet…..kaisi hain aap?

 

D: Mein thik hun devarji….Congratulations……Inhone bataya, ki aapko MBA mein bahot ache score mile hai……..bahut khushi hui sunkar……

 

A: Thanks bhabhi….aap sab ke ashirwadon ka phal hai…..he said grinning at her….and then handed her a small gift……Ye aap ke liye…..

 

D: Iski kya jarurat thi devarji……….aap aa gaye…..bas yahi kaffi hai……sub kitne khush hain….khas kar dadi….

 

Dadi: Are beta ye to shagun hai, Angad ki aur se tumhare liye……Devar to bhai jaisa hota hai…..mana nahi karte……..

 

A: Bilkul sahi kaha aapne dadi……aab to humara gift apko lena hi padega bhabhi….he said taking her hands and giving the gift to her……

 

Divya took the gift shyly and thanked him……

 

Dadi went to him and touched his cheeks……….

 

D: Kitna dinon ke baad aya hai beta……..tujhe dekhne ke liye to ankhein taras gayi thi…..she said with tears in her eyes…….

 

A: Dadi…..I promise…..mein abhi apko chod ke kahin nahi jaunga…….he said hugging her and then touching her feet……..

 

D: Khush reh beta…..duniya ki sari khushiyan tuzhe mil jaye…….she said touching his cheeks and head…..Chal naah kar aa aur srinathji ke darshan kar le…….phir khana kha lena…….thak gaya hoga na….

 

A: Ji dadi…..bas thodi der mein aya……Kartik and Angad took his bags to his room and Angad came down after some time….fresh after the shaving and showering in nice warm water…..It was little bit cold in the evenings…….The old house was much colder.....

 

He went in the small temple of the house and prayed bowing his head in front of the idol……Dadi put tilak on his forehead and gave him some prashad……

 

D: Srinathji humesha tumhe aise hi khush rakhe…….

 

A: Sach dadi…..aaj ghar chodne ke baad paheli baar itna sukun mila hai…..nahi to roj ki bhaag daud….aur exams ki padhai……pichle baar aya to 4 din shadi ke, bas dekhte hi dekhte chale gayein….

 

D: Haan beta…..aab thode din aaram kar le……office baad mein join karna…..mujhe bhi tere sath dher sari baat karni hai…..

 

A: Ji dadi….

 

Avantika: Ma….khana lag gaya hai……chaliye…..Avantika said to her mother-in-law…..Chal Angad aa ja…..she said smiling at him……she went to him and hugged him once more…….Sach ma…..aaj kitna acha lag raha hai na….saab sath sath hain…..do saal se iski kami bahut mehsus ho rahi thi…..Avantika said to her mother in law….

 

A: Ma….ab chalein….khana kha le….bahut bhook lag rahi hai….aur mujhe to suji ke halwe ki khushboo aa rahi hai…..he said grinning…….pulling them both out….before they get more emotional…..

 

Dadi and Avantika laughed at him and they went out to have dinner…….

 

After a nice dinner and chat with his family, Angad went to his room exhausted………he fell on his bed and was asleep within minutes……….

 

Next day they went to Srinathji temple and did the Abhishek and Puja, as it was Kartik and Divya's marriage anniversary……...In the evening, Dilip and Avantika arranged for a party for Kartik and Divya as well as Angad's success……..All the family and friends were invited including some of Angad's college friends……..Angad got   re-acquainted with many of his friends, some of whom were married……..Angad was really happy to be back and loved being with his family………

 

Next day Nishant, Kartik's childhood friend came to their house to give his wedding Invitation card……

 

D: Are Nishant, aao beta….kaise ho? Kal tum log aye nahi? Mittal Ji bhi nahi aye…..

 

N: Namaste Uncle……Sorry kal hum nahi aa sake….woh…

 

K: Aabe saale….teri to…..meri party miss kardi tune…..kartik came in with a frown….Nishant chuckled when Kartik hit him on his back…..

 

Dilip laughed at them…..

 

N: Sorry yaar….woh darasal baat ye hai ki papa ki tabiyat kal thik nahi thi…..to…

 

D: Kya hua Ashok ko? He asked with a frown….

 

N: Ji last week sugar bahut badh gayi tha….aur kal phir se wahi hua…..woh unhe diabities hai….abhi abhi pata chala……

 

D: Aab tabiyat kaisi hai?

 

N: Abhi thik hai…..woh main apne shadi ka card dene aya tha….Papa khud ana chahte the….par…

 

D: Koi baat nahi beta, tum aao ya tumhare papa, kya pharak padta hain…..congradulations….kab hai shadi….

 

N: Thanks Uncle…..Ji shadi dhai mahine baad hai…..papa ne invitation jaldi dene ka plan kiya, kyun ki isase pata chale ki kitne log aa rahe hain….to woh Kanan ke papa ko bata sake…..

 

D: haan…ye baat thik hai….nahi to bahut pareshani ho jati hai…..tumhara huspatal kahan tak hua hai….

 

N: Ji building to puri ho gayi hai…..interiors aur equipments ke liye connections vo sab abhi baki hai….

 

K: Congrats yaar……Kanan bhabhi kahan hai? Kartik asked with a grin….

 

N: Woh philhal tour par gayi hai…..Shadi ke 10 din pahle lautegi…..he said smiling….

 

They talked for some more time and then Nishant was gone…..

 

Meanwhile in US, Kripa became busy with her studies…….she needed to submit her projects  this weekend and was busy with it…..She sat in the college library till late evenings….She some times went to Harshini's house and they studied together arguing about some or other topics……

 

H: Kripa…..tune papa se baat ki…..apne college tour ke bare mein…..

 

K: Nahi yaar……. pata nahi is baar himmat hi nahi ho rahi….puchane ki…...jab bhi India jane ki baat kahti hun to ghar mein sannata cha jata hai…..kayin baar iski wajah maa se puchane ki koshish ki, par woh sirf itna kehti hai ki taya tayi ke accident ke baad, papa wahan dubara nahi jana chahte….bahut dard hota hai unhe…..May be this trip is not for me….she said sadly…..Prithvi bhi kab se piche pada hua hai…..

 

H: Haan….par woh kahan aayenge tere sath…..tu to class tour ke sath ja rahi hai….bus 2 mahinon ka hi to tour hai……aisa chance tujhe phir nahi milega Kripa……aur isbar pichle saal ki tarah, phir se tu agar apna detailed study karke likhegi, to kya pata tuzhe future studies karne ke liye scholarship mil jaye…….Pure college se 10 students ko hi chuna gaya hai…..Kyun miss kar rahi hai aisa chance…..aur waise bhi tu India kitne saalon se jana chahti hai…….Mujhe malum hai….uncle aunty man jayenge…..agar chaho to mein bhi aa sakti hun…..unse baat karne….

 

K: Nahi….mein hi puchakar dekhti hun…...aaj….she said doubtfully……..

 

H: Kal to application ka last day bhi hai na…..abhi jake baat kar le…..2 weeks se time tha….magar tu hai ki……tere papa mama to tujhse kitna pyar karte hain…..phir darti kyun hai…she said frowning….

 

K: Itna pyar karte hain, isiliye to unhe dukh nahi pahunchana chahti……she thought sighing…..may be she will just try once…..if they tell no, then she will not ask again……

 

At home, everyone were settled for the night, by the time she reached …..She had called before to let them know that Harshini's mom had asked her to stay for dinner…..

 

She slowly opened the door with her spare keys and went to her room……she freshened up and went to her parents room to tell them that she was back…….and talk to them about the trip….

 

Gayatri and Surya were talking about something……. they stopped immediately when they saw Kripa….

 

G: Aa gayi tu beta…..Hum teri hi baat kar rahe the…….

 

S: Tune hume India Trip ke bare mein bataya nahi……..Mr.Scott ka phone aya tha ajj office…….Suryabhan said a little angrily…..

 

K: Woh papa…..mein batane wali thi…..she said slowly……looking down….

 

S: Kripa, ye tumhare future ka sawal hai beta……Mr. Scott ne kaha hai, ki is trip ke baad….tumhari assignements ko dekhakar, university scholarship denge……age ki padhai ke liye…..aur tum itna acha mauka haat se jane de rahi thi……pure college se sirf dus bache chune hai…..aur ismein tumhara naam hai…..hume tum par bahut garv hai beta……acha hua Mr. Scott ka phone aya….nahi to itna acha chance tu miss kar deti……aur pata hai mujhe ki tujhe India dekhne ka kitna shauk hai…….Kripa looked at her dad with tearful eyes…...kal last day hai na apply karne ke liye…..Kripa immediately smiled and nodded, wiping her tears……..To kal hi hum chalenge aur forms fill karenge…..tu India jayegi….aur Mr. Scott bhi to hai tere sath……he said putting a hand on her shoulder…..

 

K: Thanks papa……she said hugging her dad……

 

S: Pagli kahin ki…..tumhe laga, tumhare papa mana karenge……tumhare bhavishya ke liye hi to itni mehnat karta hun beta……tum jane ki tayari karo…..sirf 2 weeks reh gaye hain….Aur bharat mein jo itihaas aur kala chipi hai, woh duniya mein kahin aur nahi hai……he said looking far away……Aur tuzhe scholarship mile na mile, tum kayin salon se India jane ki zid kiya karti thi……To issase behatar chance kab milega…….He said looking at her putting a hand on her cheeks……..

 

K: Thank you so much papa…..goodnight…..goodnight mama….she said hugging her mother……..

 

Once she left, Surya turned to Gayatri….

 

S: Khush….he said looking at Gayatri………

 

G: ji bahot….she said hugging him, wiping his tears…….keeping her head on his chest………Surya sighed praying that he had taken right decision……

 

So, next day Kripa went to her college, with her dad and filled out necessary forms and applied for her visa…….

 

She was so excited for the upcoming trip…..she couldn't believe that her dad had himself told her to go….she did not even had to ask…..May be mom was right…..She thought sadly……His brother and sister-in-laws sudden death, was a painful memory, which made him decide not to go back to India……She could understand his pain…..

 

She, went to Mr. Scott, who was their trip co-ordinator and conveyed him about her decision…..He was happy about her decision and gave her some papers containing information about their trip  details and the places they were to visit and hotels, they would be staying in during those trips…..He asked her to study about the history of those places and art and architecture behind each monuments….so she would be ready, for exploring the monuments in detail……..She thanked him for everything and went to Harshini's house excitedly….

 

K: Harshini….Harshini…..I am so happy today……..vow I can't believe it…….I am going to India……she said grinning at her…..

 

H: Really….vow….uncle agreed……?

 

K: He did not have to agree any thing….because, he was the one who him self told me to go……

 

H: Vow…..that's a surprise……….

 

K: Haan….mein ajj itni khush hun…..

 

H: woh to tumhe dekhte hi pata chal raha hai……she said laughing…...So, which places are you going?

 

K: Here is the iternary….she showed Harshini grinning…..

 

H:Vow…..Ajanta……..Ellora……..Trivendrum…….Kanyakumari……Madhurai…..Konark…..Agra…….Delhi…….Rajashthan……….vow…..you are in for  a lifetime trip dear……..Kripa grinned at her…….

 

K: Yeah….I know…..isn't it wonderful….I wanted to visit India….and here I got a chance to visit many of the wonderful architectures of India……….

 

H: I am jeleous….how come you get to travel so much……For last 4 years….you are the only student who got a chance to tour famous landmarks….and this year you are getting it again……she said….but laughed at her…..I am happy for you…..Kripa…..I hope you will have a wonderful time……

 

K: Thanks Harshini......She said looking through the forms…When she looked up grinning at some thing, she found Harshini in deep thoughts…….Harshini……kya baat hai, pareshan lag rahi ho…..Harshini looked at Kripa and then nodded……

 

H: Woh Prithvi……

 

K: Oh God, don't tell me you fought again…….Harshini made a face, but stayed quite……Harshini knew that some thing was bugging Prithvi, he was not his usual self from last few days……and he had not even talked to her properly……….she sighed and went to Harshini and kept a hand on her shoulder…….Kya baat hai……Harshini looked at her and shrugged…….

 

H: Pata nahi kya baat hai Kripa, par Prithvi thode dinon se pareshan lag raha hai…..pucha to bol raha tha ki kuch office ka problem hai…..but I am doubtful……she said sighing……..

 

K: Harshu, keep patience……may be really he is having some problem in office…...Aur waise bhi abhi tujhe thodi na saab confess karega…….abhi tak tumne usse tumhari dil ki baat kahi?…..nahi na…..so give him time……..If he really loves you, then one day he will come and tell you for sure…..she said smiling…….Harshu nodded……Chal mujhe jana hai….I need to pay 50 % of our trip cost till tomorrow…….papa ke sath bank jana hai….draft nikalne…..mein chalti hun…..kal milte hain college mein…..ok….

 

H: Ok….girl….sweet  dreams……..aur ek min dear…..prithvi ko phone karke bata dena…..akhir usine to Mr. Scott ko tumhare papa se baat karne ke liye kaha…..

 

Kripa turned surprised…..

 

K: Ye kya keh rahi hai…..?

 

H: Haan Kripa…..Jab Mishti se pata chala, ki aaj application ka last date hain….to prithvi ne mujhe phone kiya, aur pucha ki tumne apply kiya ya nahi….

 

K: Ye….Prithvi bhi na…..she shook her head and smiled…..Chal chalti hun aab…..use ghar jake baat karlungi…..bye….

 

H: Bye

 

That night, she called Prithvi and gave him the good news….

 

P: Vow…..good for you…..

 

K: Vaise mujhe malum hai ke ye saab tumhare karan hua hai….

 

P: Kya matlab….

 

K: Bano matt…..Harshini ne mujhe sab bata diya…..Thanks Prithvi….

 

P: Ye Harshini ke muh me bhi koi baat nahi chipti…..Any ways…..Mujhe thanks bolne ki koi jarurat nahi….meine kaha tha na ki uncle mana nahi karenge….Itna acha career chance, kitne kum logon ko naseeb hota hai….aur tu hai ki miss kar rahi thi….chal ab jana hai mujhe…..Aaj kaam hai thoda office ka pending…..bhuk bhi lagi hai….

 

K: Abhi bhi office mein baithe ho? She asked frowning…..

 

P: Hmmm…..ok see ya….bye….

 

K: Bye…..she said and kept the phone down…..

 

Two weeks pass by in a blaze……Kripa became busy, studying about the places and taking notes, etc….She worked till late night each day, and got every detail she needed and notted down..…Gayatri took Kripa out, to shopping to buy some more Indian dresses……she purchased light shawl and sweater…….as it will be cold in many places……packed Indian home made food……Suryabhan gifted her a camera and camcorder…..and at last, Kripa was all ready to go to India………

 

Couple of days before leaving…..

 

G: beta jane se pehle ek bar damini ke yahan chale.....Woh tumhari yaad kar rahi thi.... Aur ghar ane ke liye keh rahi thi.....

 

K: thik hai mom.....sham ko chalte hain....app mujhe phone kar dena....mein college se direct pahunch jaungi.....

 

G: thik hai beta....sambhal ke jana....

 

K: jee ma and she left for college.....she got a call from her mom in the afternoon asking her to reach damini's house by 5…..

 

It was around 4, when she stepped out of college.....immidiately she saw prithvi there.....

 

Surprised she went to him....

 

K: Aree prithvi tum yahan...

 

P: ready.....bandha tumhe ghar le jane aya hai.... Moms order.....

 

K: that's so nice of aunty....but there was no need....I could have caught subway....tumhe Khama kha takleef hui....

 

P: Are isme takleef ki kya baat hai....don't worry so much Kripa......Aaj, office nahi gaya tha.....thoda bank ka kaam pending tha....usi silsile mein aya tha....tabhi maa ka phone aya tha.....ki mein agar yahin aas paas hun to tumhe pick kar lun.....

 

P: aab chalein ya sari batein yahin khade khade karna hai…. He asked smiling at her....

 

K: chalo.....

 

P: tumhari trip ki tayari ho gayi

 

K: haan almost ho gayi hai....

 

P: so which places are you gonna visit?

 

Kripa detailed him about her impending trip enthusiastically....

 

P: vow....long trip.....hmmm....

 

K: waise prithvi....mishti aaj kal dikhayi nahi deti hai....

 

Prithvi sighed....

 

P: Aab tumhse kya chipana Kripa…..she is in love with some one….and mom doesn't agree to her relationship……

 

K: Really….Mishti…? Kaun hai?

 

P: Hai koi Josh naam ka ladka…..They met a year ago in London…..he was doing his MBA there…..Mishti gayi thi na apne friends ke sath ghumne…..wanhi mili….aur phir ek saal se ye internet chakkar chal raha hai…..

 

K: Is the boy not good or some thing….

 

P: Nahin aisi to koi baat nahi……..par woh sirf 5 din saath the….aur phir ek saal se woh kya kar raha hai kuch pata nahi….na gharwalon ka pata hai…..and she wants to go marry him…..

 

K: Vow, so he stays in London….

 

P: No….he stays in India……..

 

K: Indian…..Hmmm….so what do you think…..

 

P: Pata nahi….I never met that boy…..I don't know any thing…..Aur papa bhi ghusa kar rahe hain…..he is not sure of it as well….keh rahe the, ki pata nahi kaisa khandan hai, kaise log hai….aur kya pata woh ladka accha bhi hai….ya sirf Mishti ke saath khel raha hai….ye saab batein sunkar, Mishti left home…….he said sighing…..

 

K: What? Kripa looked shocked at Prithvi….Phir woh abhi hai kahan?

 

P: Woh apne saheli ke yahan reh rahi hai…..

 

K: Oh God….I can't believe it…..she said looking out…..after some time she looked back at Prithvi…..Magar mujhe lagta hai, ki aunty uncle ko wahan jana chahiye, aur ladke ko dekhna chahiye…..may be he is good…….may be he is genuinely in love with Mishti…..

 

P: Tumhe kaise pata…….he said frowning….

 

K: Aur tumhe kaise pata….ki woh kharab ladka hain……ho sakta hai ki woh bahut acha ho……Unless you meet him, how can you form an opinion about him….…may be he is really her prince charming…....she challenged……Prithvi shook his head…….girls and their fairy tales.…he thought…..and sighed……

 

P: Khair…..woh sab jane do….. Let's see what mom and dad decide…..mein jyada nahi bolta unke bich…..waise hi bahut tension hai ghar mein……..

 

K: Hmmm…..

 

They reached his home in half hour …….Know Kripa knew what was bugging him from last one month…..He still did not tell Harshini about it…..Yeah it is true, that they were both friends just like she and Prithvi, but Harshini fell in love with him some time in these four years and tried to confess couple of times and he had ducked out…..She knew Harshini loved him, but no one knew if Prithvi loved her or someone else……They had some snacks and drinks, once they reached home……Damini was a wonderful host and prepared many dishes for Kripa…..she never allowed her sadness to come in between her hospitality…….She just said, that we will see what to do about Mishti, once her dad cools down a bit……..In the evening Surya and Arjun also came and after dinner, they all left……..

 

It was late night, when Kripa called Mishti….

 

K: Hi Mishti….

 

M: Kripa…..vow this is a surprise….kaho kaise yaad kiya aaj…….

 

K: Kuch nahi aaj tumhare yahan khana khane gaye the….prithvi se mujhe tumhare bare mein pata chala…..

 

M: Leave it Kripa……They don't even want to meet the boy…..that is so pathetic….they are forming openions about him, even before meeting him…..Oh for God's sake he is an oxford graduate……….she blasted…..

 

K: Calm down Mishti…..I can help you…..

 

M: Tum….aur woh kaise…..she asked little taken aback…..

 

K: I am going to India in two days…..

 

M: Reallly…..she said all excited….

 

K: Haan….where does your prince live?

 

M: Woh abhi Mumbai mein hain….

 

K: That is so wonderful…..I am going to Mumbai first….we are going to stay there for 2 days…..I can go meet him…..want to send him some thing….?

 

M: Hmmm….ok….I will come by tomorrow at your place……tumhari flight kab hain?

 

K: The day after tomorrow……..4 o'clock in the evening……

 

M: Ok….see you tomorrow then….bye Kripa and thanks so much….

 

K: You are welcome Mishti…..I will see you tomorrow….and she kept the phone….

 

Next day Mishti came with a gift pack and a letter…..and gave it to Kripa to give to Josh…..

 

Kripa promised to meet him there and then talk to Prithvi later…..May be prithvi would make his parents understand and decide to meet Josh…………



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Hello dear..............
long time no see................Wink
very happy that u r writing another fic on Angad Kripa.................
till part 4
very nice concept and really very beautifully written..................
does Angad and Kripa remember each other?
cant wait to read further.............
add me to ur pm list and dont forget to pm me...............
cont soon dear.................

glad that u will continue ABCD too................missed ur fics so much............
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Hello dear..............
long time no see................Wink
very happy that u r writing another fic on Angad Kripa.................
till part 4
very nice concept and really very beautifully written..................
does Angad and Kripa remember each other?
cant wait to read further.............
add me to ur pm list and dont forget to pm me...............
cont soon dear.................

glad that u will continue ABCD too................missed ur fics so much............
Hi Deepa....Thanks so much....
 
Yup....got some mood after a long time....had a bad year, but things are good now !! Missed you all too.......
 
Will surely pm you.....
 
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