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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 76)

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Thnx for d pm
jst lovd d part
U r an awsome writer <3

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
part 48
awesome di...
all problems solved...
Kripa is so luck y to have such lovely friends...
Prithvi and family are so nice and close...
Angad realized his mistakes and Kripa has forgiven him...
true relationships are strong compared to anger, misunderstanding and grudges...
everything will be fine now...
they both are learning and realizing and rectifying their mistakes amongst themselves...
every important in a relationship filled with love and marriage...
cont soon...

PS - u r from US right? are u too from NY like Pallavi di?

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vamita

Originally posted by spvd

Di u wrote Innocent Love, that was my first of ur writing...
but u also were writing one more ff, dont remember the title but some American born C something Desi, right?
when will u update that?
gimme all ur links of ur ffs Di...
 
Hey Deepa,
  Yeah, I wrote Angreji babu Desi mem, which I have yet to complete...Others I wrote are Soulmate, Innocent love and Dreamss...I will definetely concentrate on that one, once I finish this one...!!
 
Here are the links for those ff...
 
 
I don't know, if I ever posted Dreams on this forum...as I am not able to find it...
 
Love
Mitu
 
 


oh thank u di...
i dont think i read the soulmate one...can u gimme the story of Dreams too?

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Awesome , superb and Fantastic Di
Angad realized his mistakes.this is called true love and understanding ..

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
A lovely, happy part after long time!!...so everything is fine now...well it was expected that kripa will forgive him soon n her birthday was the perfect occasion...wow...its been a year in this ff bc i rem that after leap it started with kripa's birthday...Kripa is really lucky to have best frnds like prithvi n his family...they are soo lovely esp. damini in this part...who did soo much for her just like a mother...n i dont think kripa did anything wrong for not telling them abt her birthday...bc if i was in her place i wouldnt tell any1 either...i feel too awkward to go up to some1 n tell them that its my birthday...great part,,,looking forward to next part n knowing whats in store for AK next...plz continue soon!! :)

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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Hey another awsome part... continue soon..

Can't wait to read more.. thanks for the pm..

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Thanks Friends...

   Here is the next part...Now I will post only on Wednesday, as festivals are all lining up...
 
Lots of love
Mitu...
 

PART- 49

 

Next day, Kripa was first time late in all four months to get up…..It was 9 by the time her eyes opened……Angad's hands were on her waist and his face on her shoulder near her ears….She felt his breathe and closed her eyes, shivering a little……..Angad's hands tightened over hers and she knew he was awake…..She felt shy to look at him…..Her cheeks were red…..She slowly tried to take out his hands from his and escape…..but Angad smiled and caught her more tightly kissing her shoulders and neck……

 

K: Angad uthne do na….bahot late ho gaye hain….dekho na 9 baj gaye….Divya bhabhi ko nashta bhi dena hai…..unhe bhook lagi hogi…..she said trying to take his hands out……Angad shook his head and got on top of her trapping her…..Kripa looked up shyly and blushed……

 

A: Aaj tumhari chutti…..he said starting to kiss her….Kripa shivered and hugged him tightly, not wanting to leave him yet, as well…..after an hour more, Kripa slowly escaped to the bathroom when Angad fell asleep again……She quickly took shower and came out all dressed, drying her hair…..After brushing her hairs and applying cream, she went to wake Angad……

 

K: Angad utho na…..jakar naha lo….bahot late ho gaye hain…..she said shaking him….But Angad started pulling her down again…..Angad…..utho….she said chuckling and pulling him up…..Aab jao….jaldi jakar naha lo….she said pushing him to the bathroom….Angad frowned and made faces, but did as she told….Kripa chuckled and slowly made the bed…..Once done….she checked herself once again and opened the door a little embarrassed….It was so late….She looked at the closed door and sighed….She quickly went down and walked in the kitchen where she found Divya making chapatis…..Wide eyed, she ran to her….

 

K: Bhabhi….chaliye….aap hatiye mein bana dungi….Sorry woh subah ankh hi nahi khuli….she said looking at the watch….she bit her lips….it was already 11…..time to make lunch instead of breakfast…..

 

D: Mein samajh sakti hun devraniji…..ankh kyun nahi khuli…..mein ye kar lungi….bas aur do hi karni hai….aur sabji bhi ban gayi hai…..tum dal bana do phir khana kha lenge…..she said chuckling….

 

Kripa blushed a little but did not speak a word….she quickly prepared dal and kept everything on the table, blushing from time to time like a new bride……….Divya kept looking at her from time to time and was happy to see her happy……

 

K: Sorry bhabhi aap ko khana banana pada…..Kripa said a little guiltily…..Divya looked at her wide eyed….

 

D: Kripa, tumhari information ke liye…..mein bilkul thik hun……Ye to tum aur tumhari fauj, mujhe kuch karne nahi deti, nahi to mein aab saab kar sakti hun…pehle jaise…..bas thodi thakan hoti hai, par ye to normal hai, pregnancy ke iss stage mein.…..doctor ne bhi to kaha tha…..she said going to her and pinching her cheeks…..Tumhe itna pareshan hone ki koi jaroorat nahi….balki aaj to kitne dinon baad kuch karke acha lag raha hai….nahi to bor ho gayi thi mein yahan….she said chuckling……Kripa smiled at her and nodded……

 

Divya started cleaning, but Kripa stopped her and sent her out…Divya rolled her eyes and went out….Kripa started cleaning the kitchen and was done in few minutes…..She kept blushing thinking about last night……She was washing some dishes, deep in her own thoughts when she felt a hand on her waist…..She knew it was Angad and smiled looking up……Angad went near her and kissed her cheek…..Kripa smiled and continued her work, while he kept kissing her…….Suddenly, Kripa stopped what she was doing…….

 

K: Angad, meine ek faisla kiya hai…..she said looking at him…..

 

A: Kaisa faisla Kripa? He asked confused, looking at her serious  face…….

 

K: Mein ye phd ki padhai chod dungi…….she said looking down slowly starting to wash the dishes again.…..Angad removed his hand and stared at her stunned, not speaking a word, while she sighed and continued her work without a word more.…….Suddenly, he stopped her and turned her around………

 

A: Kya? Par kyun? He asked frowning…..

 

K:Woh bas yun hi…..mein soch rahi thi ki tum sahi keh rahe the……she said smiling sadly and looking down.……dekho na mein itna busy ho gayi iss padhai ke chakkar mein ki tumhari aur to bilkul dhyan nahi de payi…..na kabhi tumhe samajne ki koshish ki…..she said sadly…..Tum bas mere sath kuch samay bitana chahte the….aur mein hun ki……waise bhi padhai se jyada jaruri rishte hote hain….Aur apna rishta to saab se atut hai….aur meine isse hi saab se last priority diya…..she said looking at him with tears…..

 

Angad looked at her for a long time and slowly held her shoulders  and sighed shaking his head…..

 

A: Nahi Kripa…..tum padhai nahi chodogi…..balki aaj se, tum apna pura dhyan padhai mein dogi, he said sternly looking in her eyes…….Kripa stared at him with disbilief…….Na tum kitchen mein aaogi na bhabhi……Kripa started saying something when Angad put a hand on her lips……..Do mahinon ki to baat hai Kripa, he said holding her cheeks..……Phir saab pahele jaisa ho jayega…..Please, mere khatir tumhe ye karna hai……tum padhai nahi chodogi…..Mama papa ke bahot arman hai tumhe lekar……..mein janta hun……unhe pura karna hai tumhe…..aur mein bhi yahi chahta hun…..ki tumhe apni manzil mile…..tumhare sapne pure ho…..he said caressing her cheeks and smiling at her with tears.……..Mein galat tha Kripa, mein galat tha…..mujhe bhi sabra se kaam lena chahiye tha, tumhe time dena chahiye tha…..mein janta hun, ki agar yahi mauka mujhe mila hota, to tum din raat mere liye ek kar deti, taki mujhe apne sapne pure karne ka mauka mile…..to mein kyun nahi……he said looking in her eyes……Agar tum mujh se pyar karti ho, to tum ye degree hasil karogi……aur duniya ke samne mein garv se kahunga ki tum meri patni ho, jisne apne mehnat aur lagan se namumkin ko mumkin bana diya……Itne age nikal gayi ki jisse chune ka kayin log jeevan bhar khwab hi dekhte rahe…..he said smiling and kissing her forehead……Kripa hugged him with tears…...he wiped her tears…..aur aab agar kitchen mein najar ayi na, to tumhe tumhare kamre mein lock kar dunga…..she started to chuckle at the joke, when he looked at her sternly…..Chahe mujhe India se fedex mein lock kyun na le ana pade, darwaje pe lagan eke liye…..he said looking at her…..and after a few seconds, they burst out laughing together hugging eachother happily…….

 

They ate their lunch together and Angad sent Kripa and Divya up, while Angad cleaned up everything……..He went up and found Kripa studying and kissed her head and took his laptop and started working…….

 

Two days later Kripa and Angad gave a surprise to Divya and Kartik, as it was their marriage anniversary………

 

They arranged dinner with flowers and candles…….They bought a cake with their names on it……They waited eargerly for them to come from walk……..As soon as them came in and went to the dinning for their dinner, they grinned looking at the beautiful arrangement…….Divya chuckled and went and hugged Kripa and Angad and thanked them for doing this for them……Kripa and Angad touched their feet and congradulated them for their anniversary……They asked them both to cut the cake and feed eachother….…Later, Divya fed Angad chuckling, when he kissed her on her cheeks grinning, while Kartik did the same with Kripa…….They all grinned and toasted for eachother taking the soft drinks and had their dinner together……They sat down with their deserts in the family room……..

 

Ka: Bhai, aise kaam nahi chalega……Kripa aaj to tumhe gana gana padega…….Kyun Divya……..

 

D: Haan Kripa……..Kuch sunao na……please……..Kripa smiled and nodded looking at Angad, who grinned at her…….

 

Kripa blushed a little and slowly got up….and looked out of the window and started singing…….

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xZlut3JAwgQ

 

(Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar) - 2, Koee Aataa Hain

Yoo Tadap Ke Naa Tadapaa Muze Baar Baar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar

 

(Usake Daaman Kee Khushboo Hawaaon Mein Hain

Usake Kadamon Kee Aahat Panaahon Mein Hain) - 2

Muz Ko Karane De Karane De Solah Singaar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar

 

She slowly came and sat on the chair and continued the song, smiling at them and then looking at Angad in between shyly…..Kartik gathered Divya in his arms, as they sat on the sofa with a grin……..Divya just smiled and kept her head on his shoulder………

 

(Muz Ko Chhune Lagee Usakee Parachhaeeyaan

Dil Ke Najadik Bajatee Hain Shahanaaeeyaan) - 2

Mere Sapanon Ke Aangan Mein Gaataa Hain Pyaar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar

 

Angad too went and sat besides Kripa, and started gathering her in his arms, when Kripa got up with a coy smile and went to the window and looked at him, when he frowned…..She chuckled a little and continued singing…..

 

(Ruthh Ke Pahale Jee Bhar Sataaoongee Main

Jab Manaayenge Wo Man Jaaoongee Main) - 2

Dil Pe Rahataa Hain Ayese Mein Kab Ikhtiyaar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar, Koee Aataa Hain

Yoo Tadap Ke Naa Tadapaa Muze Baar Baar, Koee Aataa Hain

Dheere Dheere Machal Aye Dila-Ye-Bekaraar

 

Once she was done, she grinned and went to Angad and sat next to him as he smiled and gathered her in his arms…..

 

D: Sach Kripa, tumhari awaz mein to jadu hai…..Thanks…….Ye marriage day, humme humesha yaad rahega……..she said smiling at her……

 

A month went by busy for everyone……Kripa kept her promise to Angad, just as he did and studied day and night…...coming down only for eating or drinking milk…….Angad, massaged her shoulder or head, when ever she was strained and prepared tea for her……He was quite good with his promise and supported her in everyway he could……...Divya was feeling better too and helped Angad in kitchen…….Angad after initial few days gave up and let her help, after she scolded him sternly, saying she would go back to India, if he acted with her as if she was invalid…….She helped with cooking and that was the end of it….Angad did not allow her to do any thing more than that……

 

In the evenings after they finished dinner, Kripa would sit with Angad on the bed relaxing on his shoulder, while reading her books….Angad would keep massaging her arms and shoulders and many a times they would get carried away…..After wards, Angad would make her get up and ask her to study, while he went down to bring milk or coffee for her……..They did video chatting with their parents regularly and some times even Divya's parents joined them……Kartik took over the office work again and did  many things him self……while Angad worked during nights, giving Kripa company……

 

Divya was in her 37th week and was ready for delivery……..she started feeling exhausted and her back ached by the end of the day….kartik took over Kripa's task and massaged Divya's back and foot daily, asking Kripa to study instead…….Divya's illness and pregnancy brought them closer to eachother…..They were not as shy to hold eachother as they used to be…..Divya would hold his arms and sleep on his shoulder while watching TV…..They would walk arm in arm outside in the evenings…..Kartik even kissed her couple of times, when they were all sitting together...Kripa and Angad were more demonstrative and were always glued together……..Kartik and Divya would be surprised if they sat separately for even a second……All 4 had formed a very unique bond together…….Divya was very open with Angad too…..She did not hesitate to ask for help, if she did not feel well……She ordered him around and pulled his ear, when she thought he was not behaving good…..He was like her little brother, she never had……..Kartik too treated Kripa like he treated Aliyah…..He was more demonstrative towards her too and never missed a chance to tell her that he would never forget what she did for Divya and their baby……

 

Kripa was relaxing a little after a full day of study….She had her head rested on the head board and her eyes were closed…..Suddenly she felt Angad's presence next to her and his head on her shoulder and she smiled…….

 

K: Ho gaya kaam tumhara…..?

 

A: Hmmm…….he said sighing….he was tired as he had been on the phone since afternoon, as they had few problems with the workers……….

 

K: Tum abhi aaram karo…..mein aaj khana bana lungi…..she said carrsesing his hairs….

 

A: nahi….mein thik hun…..Tum padhai karo, mein bana lunga..…..

 

K: Angad, kitne thak gaye ho….padhai to badmein bhi kar sakti hun…..tum aaj aaram karo…..Angad smiled and nodded…….They sat there together for a long time…..Kripa was reading few books…….

 

A: Kripa ek baat puchon…..? he asked getting up a little and looking at her………

 

K: Kya…?

 

A: Kripa, tum itna padhai kar rahi ho…..itne mehnat kar rahi ho…..par Udaipur mein kya tum khush reh paoogi…….wahan kya future hai tumhare liye..…..kya karogi wahan? He asked with concern……Kripa smiled at him and hugged him…..she now knew what was troubling him……

 

K: Angad, meine apni manjil dhund li hai……Aur uski shuruvat to Udaipur se hi hai…..Mein to ye padhai aur degree apne interest ke liye kar rahi hun…..aur agar successful rahi, to jo mein karna chahti hun, uske liye bhi bahot acha rahega….Angad raised his eyebrows with surprise….He had not known that she had already decided what she wanted to do in her future……..Then Kripa told him, how she wanted to write books on the artists in Rajashthan and other people about their work…..Their life…..new techniques they use to create unique items which are bought by people all over the world….She told him that her degree would mean, that she would be well respected in between some well known people and her books would mean some  thing to many of them, if they recognize her talent…..She told him, how she wanted to set funds for the rural developments, which she get from her books, so they could develop their state of living and this in turn will help their company as well, as it will also be well known among the people who admire art and people would know about their products, it would mean free publicity as well and in turn again help the artists..…..Angad was speechless, at her vision and so huge ambitions, that too not for her self but for some other people who she had met just a few months back…..He smiled at her with admiration……He could not believe that she had already choosed her path this early in life and already had started working towards her goal…..He had been afraid that she might not like to live in Udaipur after this achievement…..But the truth was she was doing it for going back there again……For contributing to peoples welfare…..He looked at her innocent face which glowed, when she kept telling what else she wanted to do……describing it with smile……He slowly smiled at her, and held her face in his hands……..Kripa stopped what she was saying and looked at him confused…….Angad touched his lips to hers and tasted her…..After a long time, Kripa opened her eyes surprised………

 

Angad smiled at her and chuckled at her surprise…..

 

A: Woh tum baat karte waqt itni cute lag rahi thi, ki raha nahi gaya…..he said grinning…..Kripa blushed and hugged him with a smile…..Angad carrsed her hairs…….Acha ye batao, tum ne ye saab karne ka decision liya kab…..mujhe pata hi nahi tha, ki tum itni ambitious ho…..Mujhe to laga, bas shadi ke baad tum mein aur bache…..he said chuckling…..Kripa hit him playfully…..

 

K: Bachon ke liye abhi waqt hai……abhi nahi…..she said making faces…..

 

A: Kyun? He asked frowning…..

 

K: Dadi to Divya bhabhi ko shadi ke ek saal baad bache ki mang ki…..tum to 6 mahine nahi hue ki shuru ho gaye…..she said rolling her eyes…..Angad chuckled and kissed her head…..aur woh bhi itni jaldi…..bhabhi to mujhse 4 saal badi hai……

 

A: Acha baba…..jaisi tumhari marji…...aab jao padhai karo…..mein niche jata hun…..aapke liye dinner banane…..Kripa grinned…..

 

K: Aise hi chalta rahe to kitna acha hai na……tum khana banate raho, mein tumhare haat se khati rahun……she said chuckling….

 

A: No way madam…..aur ek do mahine…….India jane ke baad meri chutti…..haan mein khilane ka kaam kar sakta hun…..he said grinning and kissing her cheek…..and starting to get  up…..Kripa held his hand and pulled him down….

 

K: Aise kyun dur bhag  rahe ho…..she said hugging him……Angad smiled…..

 

A: Dur nahi bhag raha hun…..he said hugging her, tumhe padhai karne ke liye time de raha hun…..agar aur thodi der yahan reh gaya na to subah tak tumhari koi padhai nahi hogi…….

 

Kripa smiled and kissed his neck and chin……She slowly put her hands in his shirt and started carrseing……

 

A: Kripa…….

 

K: Hmmm…..she said closing her eyes…..trying to savour his presence…..

 

A: padhai karo…..ek mahine mein tumhe thesis complete karni hai…..he said pulling her up and then making her sit on the chair…..Kripa made faces at him and he grinned……I promise, dinner ke baad…..he said in her ears kissing and biting her ear slowly…….Kripa blushed and looked down……Angad left the room laughing……

 

Kripa tried to concentrate on her studies…..but could not….after some time she just walked out to take a break……..She had been studying 12-14 hours a day since last one month and still had so much to do…..She was planning to get an extension of a month to finish her thesis…..She went down and found Divya and Angad cooking…..Divya looked at her and smiled…..

 

K: Bhabhi aap baithiye aaj mein bana dungi……she said going to her…..

 

D: Hmmm…..thik hai…she said shrugging with a smile……Mein jara bahar jakar dekhti hun ki ye kya kar rahe hain…..she said going out……..

 

Angad raised his eyebrows looking at Kripa……Kripa blushed and started making chapatis besides Angad…….Angad left the spoon down, which he was using to steer the curry and caught Kripa by her waist…..

 

A: Padhai karne ko kaha, to niche kyun chali ayi……..he asked in her ears……smiling knowingly….

 

K: Bas maan nahi lag raha tha…..she said chuckling…..

 

A: Hmmm…..iska ilaj to karna padega aaj……nahi to tumhari padhai ka kaffi nuksan hoga……he said frowning…..Kripa bit her lips and turned off the stove….she slowly turned around and hugged him tightly……

 

D: Devarji, woh jara gas band kar denge to acha hoga…..nahi to meri sari mehnat pani mein jayega……ya yun kahun ki jaal jayega..…Divya said grinning at them…..Kripa and Angad looked up at her and chuckled a little…..Angad turned, without releasing Kripa from his arms and switched off the gas……

 

A: Aab aap please thoda privacy denge humme……he asked shamelessly……Divya rolled her eyes but chuckled and left the room…..Kripa blushed and hit him…..

 

K: Angad…..she said chuckling…..

 

A: Kya hua…..tum bhi to yahi chahti ho na…..he said grinning….and then showed her a sweet…….Kripa looked up at him grinned…..

 

K: Bhabhi ne banaya? She asked smiling……Angad nodded….Kripa started taking the sweet when Angad stopped her……She looked up with raised eyebrows well aware of what he was asking….

 

A: Happy 6th month wedding anniversary dear wife…..he whishpered…...looking at her……his forehead touching hers…..Kripa looked at him surprised….Bhool gayi na…..Kripa nodded smiling at him…..Aab tumhari saaja….he said putting the sweet in between their mouths…..Kripa chuckled and they both slowly ate the sweet together kissing and savouring the moments……

 

K: Happy 6th month anniversary…..she said and then looked at him……yeh laddu bhabhi ne nahi dadi ne banayi hai….she said looking at him……Angad chuckled and nodded……

 

A: Yahan ka mera manager, India gaya tha kaam ke silsile mein, to dadi ne thode laddu bhej diye sath mein uske…..aaj dopahar ko wahi lene gaya tha…..he said grinning…..Kripa smiled hugging him…..

 

K: kitne din ho gaye na saab se mile…..abhi to aur do-teen mahine hai…..India wapas jane mein…..she said sighing sadly…..

 

A: hmmm……par dekho na, iss waqt dhersari khushiyan lekar jayenge…..he said grinning…..Kripa smiled and nodded…….

 

D: Devarji...Kripa…..aap donon ka ho gaya ho to khana kha le……bahot bhook lagi hai…..kasam se….she said making faces….Kripa and Angad chuckled at her, when Kartik came and hugged her from behind…..

 

Ka: Angad privacy chahiye, to bedroom hai upar, wahan chale jao…..philhal meri biwi aur baby donon bhuke hai……he said frowning at him……Divya bit her lips, but chuckled after a while, as Kripa blushed……

 

K: Mein abhi khana laga deti hun…..she said trying to wriggle from his arms…..Angad held her more tightly and then lifted her…..Kripa looked at him with horror….Chodo mujhe Angad…..kya kar rahe  ho…..she said embarrassed….Divya and Kartik chuckled while he started going out……Angad…..she said her face red with embarrassment…..Chodo….Angad just grinned at her and walked and then slowly kept her down on the chair…..She bit her lips and looked down with a smile…..she was thinking, he was really taking her to the bedroom……Angad chuckled looking at her knowing what she had been thinking….Kripa looked at him angrily and he winked……

 

A: Kaha na, dinner ke baad…..he whishpered in her ears and grinned at her and Divya as well who came and sat on the table……He left the room and started bringing everything on the table…..Divya chuckled at Kripa who blushed looking at Angad, everytime he came…..

 

They had wonderful time together, teasing eachother and feeding eachother without any hesitation…..Later, Kripa and Divya went up to their rooms……Kripa went up and had a shower……she grinned at the night gown she had bought couple of weeks before…..and wore it……She slowly opened the door and found Angad sleeping on the bed peacefully…..She made faces at him…..Here she was dressing up for him and there he was sleeping peacefully…..She went to the dresser and applied cream and combed her hairs and went near the window to see at the night sky……Very few stars were visible…..she thought about the nights in India, on the terrace,with sky full of stars…..there meetings at night……she smiled thinking about them…..

 

A: Aise hi muskurati khadi rahogi ya yahan mere paas bhi aaogi……Angad asked looking at her from the bed…..She looked absolutely beautiful in the silk nighty……Young and wonderful…….Her skin glowed in the moonlight…..her soft hairs caressed her cheeks…..he had the urge to go to her and tuck the hairs behind her ears…….but just kept looking…..Kripa looked up startled……

 

K: Mujhe laga ki tum so gaye ho……she said slowly……..

 

A: Angad Rathod apna vada nahi todta….pehle woh bigda hua tha…..par aab uski biwi ne usse sahi rasta dikhaya hai……aab woh apna wada pura karne ke liye, apni jaan bhi de sakta hai……he said smiling at her……..Kripa smiled at him and slowly walked to him……She sat next to him and felt his fingers carrssing her arms……Kripa looked down shyly and Angad pulled her down with him……

 

Another month passed by and Divya was overdue……The doctors checked her out and then decided to induce labour….Divya was all for it as she was tired and her back ached badly…….She was admitted in the hospital…..after 12 hours, still there was no sign of labour…..atlast the doctors decided to operate…..Divya was taken to the operating room…..Kartik and Angad both paced restlessly and Kripa was just waiting excitedly chuckling at the two lions in front of her……They frowned at her and continued pacing…..Soon the nurse came out congradulating them saying Divya had a baby boy…….Kripa grinned at them and both Angad and Kartik sat back with relief…..

 

N: Divya is calling for Kripa…..the nurse informed after some time……Kripa got up smiling and went with her in the theater…..it looked a little freaky inside….but she sighed and went in any way……Divya was conscious and looked at her with tears in her eyes…..

 

D: Mein chahti hun, ki mere bte ko saab se pahele tum god mein uthao…..she said looking at her…..Kripa had tears in her eyes and nodded smiling at her…..she slowly wiped Divya's tears

 

K: Congradulations…..bhabhi…..she said kissing her forehead…..then the nurse bought the baby to Kripa and Kripa took the tiny bundle from her grinning at the baby……She bought the baby's soft cheek to hers and hugged him lightly……The nurse took the camera, which Kripa had handed her before going to the operating room and clicked few photos of her and the baby, then she took some photos with Divya…..Kripa took permission to take the baby out side and they told she could after  a little hesitation, as it was against the rule, but then agreed, and asked her to bring back the baby immediately……She went out with a big grin and smiled at Angad and Kartik……They got up at once and came near her looking at the baby…….Kartik had tears in his eyes….He smiled and hugged Kripa thanking her again and then kissed his baby…..

 

K: Bhaiya lijiye na isse…..Kartik and looked at her with wide eyes…..and she chuckled…..

 

Ka: Na baba…..tum hi lo….hum dur se hi pyar karenge……Angad too agreed with a grin and kissed the baby lightly……Nurse came to her and said that they needed to take the baby in and keep him warm……Kripa nodded and went in and kept the baby in the bassinett……She went to Divya who was looking at her…..

 

K: Bhabhi hum room mein wait karte hain……aap ko thodi der mein wahan lekar jayenge…..Divya nodded squezzing her hand…..

 

Soon Divya was bought to the room…..Kartik and Angad called home and let them know…..Everyone in India were over the top……..They asked them all to take care of Divya and the baby and asked when they were coming back…..Angad explained to them that it might take another 2 months before they came….as Divya has to undergo some more tests after 6 weeks and once the reports were clear, then they would book the ticket…..Everyone agreed and told them to send the photos….

 

D: Kripa….tu aur Angad ghar jao……kaal raat se yahin ho……Yeh hai na mere paas..…she said holding her hand……Kartik got up at once…..

 

Ka: No way……Kripa tum hospital mein hi raho……aur baby ka aur Divya ka dhyan do…..hum ghar sambhal lenge……he said afraid to be alone with the baby……what would he do if the baby started crying….Divya was not in the position to get up…..

 

Divya and Kripa frowned and looked at him…..

 

D: Kartik, kya hua aapko….

 

Ka: Kuch nahi Divya…..par, ye kitna chota hai…..philhal isse uski chahi ko hi sambhalne do……mein ye bada ho jaye na tab lunga…..he said looking at the tiny bundle……Divya started to argue…..but Kartik stopped her with a kiss on her lips……Divya was shocked as well as blushed and looked down….Kripa ko rehne do yahan…..woh jyada achi tarah sambhal payegi…..Kripa tum saab kaam chodo, sirf iska dhyan do…..mein saab sambhalunga…..khana bhi banana sikhunga……saab karunga……he said looking at her and then looked at the baby with a smile…..He did not want to leave…..but had to……he was too afraid to hold the baby…..He looked so tiny…..The baby made a mewing sound and he grinned…..Dekha ye bhi haan keh raha hai….chal Angad……Mujhe khana banana sikha jara…..phir tuzhe akele saab nahi karna padega…..Angad grinned at him as well as the ladies, while Kripa and Divya chuckled……

 

D: Kripa dekho na……kaal tumse milke pure ek saal ho jayenge barabar….Kaal Nishant aur Kanan ka first marriage anniversary hai……aur is ek saal mein tumne to humari puri zindagi badal di….she said looking at her……Kripa smiled at her and then her gaze met Angad's……They both remembered their first visit today at the Srinathji temple, a day before the marriage…..They smiled at eachother with love…..Those 5 days and this 5 days had changed Kripa's life for ever….Those 5 days were a life turning point in her life, where she met and fell in love with Angad and this 5 days in hospital, she would have a first hand experience of mother hood……

 

Next 5 days Kripa stayed with Divya and the baby in the hospital…..She bought her books and studied whenever she got time……She had got a months extension to complete her thesis……Divya was not able to feed the baby……so, Kripa fed the baby with the small bottles and learned how to burp him…….She cleaned his diapers and even sponged him couple of times……She had asked Angad to bring the clothes she had bought for the baby,which she had washed and arranged in Arjun's cubboard…..She took out lots of photos of Divya and the baby along with Angad and Kartik……They took out some snaps all together and sent them to their parents…..They were all delighted and eagerly waiting for them to come home……. They named him Ayush…..

 

Prithvi and Harshini came to the hospital along with their parents and gifted the baby with toys and many other things….Many other people, whom Divya came to knew, came to visit her and congradulate her……

 

At the end of 5 days, Divya was released and was back home…..Kripa did aarati at the door step and Kartik took her up to her room…….Angad was carrying the baby seat, when the baby started crying…..Angad looked at him worried and Kripa chuckled……She slowly, took out the baby from the seat and took him in his arms, patting him softly and speaking to him in low voice…..Angad looked at her fascinated…..It felt like this was their child and Kripa was the mother of this baby……He kept looking at her till, her eyes met his…..She smilied at him slowly and whispered to bring all the stuff up……she took the baby upstairs carefully and was delighted to see Kartik's room filled with color ful papers and balloons…..The bassinett was assembled…..The toys she had bought were kept next to it…..It all looked so wonderful…..She slowly went to the bassinett and kept the baby down…..

 

As soon as she kept him down, he started crying…..Kripa shook her head and slowly lifted him again…..Divya chuckled at her….

 

D: Chachi….lene ki aadat dal di na…..aab ghumo lekar…..she said chuckling….

 

Kripa grinned and patted the baby….she tried to give the baby to Kartik for carrying for a while, but instead he said to keep him on the bed…..Kripa and Divya just smiled looking at eachother……

 

Days passed by quickly after this……Kartik and Angad took care of the house and Divya while, Kripa was incharge of the baby completely…..In fact Ayush was so attached to Kripa that he did not even stay quite with Divya sometimes……Divya was never jelous of it, but loved their bond, saying Kripa was his choti ma…..and started addressing her as Choti ma in front of Ayush……Kripa was over the top and loved to be called choti ma instead of chachi…..

 

Angad and Kripa both kept the laughter alive…..saying jokes, talking to the baby, playing and laughing with Ayush.…..running around eachother like kids, fighting for small small things…..then making up laughing and kissing…..Divya and Kartik enjoyed their small pranks and playful times with their baby……Laughing as they ran around eachother fighting like kids…..They all created a wonderful bond together and Ayush was like a topping over the ice-cream…….

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6QISLJlxn0

 

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