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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 72)

vamita Goldie
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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 9:46pm | IP Logged

Kripa sat on the bed sighing...it was hard but she wanted to do this...if she achieved this degree it would be too good to be true... Already she was 2 years ahead of every one... She had finished her degree at 21 when every one did it at 23 or 24...she had skipped 2nd and 6th grade, giving exams...and took admission in 7th directly on her teachers recommendation...her parents were worried if she could cope or not...but she had did it with flying colors...this success was still a dream...but she wanted to give it a try...and do her best...yeah but still her first priority would be Divya...she knew Angad and she wouldn't get much time together, but it was just for 5-6 months more...then everything would be as it was...

 

PART – 44

 

But she was wrong...things started changing in a month, but not for the better...Angad became more and more distant on the pretext of work or just saying, he was just trying to give her space from studying……..He did not even come close to her……...Kripa missed his warm hugs and kisses...she missed his warm touch...she sighed closing her eyes...too tired to think much about it after a hectic day of work and studies……..Angad had gone for a walk, saying that he had an head ache…….She sighed...well a few months and it would be alright she thought...

 

Except, the distances between them increased as did the tension...Angad got angry on small small things...he started pointing her mistakes, even if it were as little as she missing salt in the food...Kartik and Divya too noticed, but thought it was due to work load…...Kartik started working as well some times when Divya was asleep...to relieve Angad of some work...but no one knew the reason for their distance was some thing else...

 

Couple of times Kripa was late due to traffic and Angad got frustrated and took out his anger...accusing her of forgetting about her real reason for being in US...Kripa was heart broken, but, tried to be on time after that...she was careful to avoid streets which were busy, and came usually on time...

 

A month went by in the same pattern... It was mid July month...Kripa was having tea, when she remembered that they had got notice for moving the lawn...she had completely forgotten about it...prithvi had told surya that he would give the house to some contractor, who would maintain the house and lawn for them...but they were back here within a month of their shifting to India...she had never moved a lawn before…..so had no idea about it...she sighed and called prithvi and told him about it...Angad was not at home and Kartik and Divya had gone for walking...prithvi arrived in half hour with oil and fuel and explained to her how it worked...he showed her for some time and then handed over to her and left, as he had some important errands to run...Kripa was almost done and was cleaning the yard waste when Kartik and Divya were back... Kripa was tired and sweating badly...Kartik frowned and went to her...

 

Ka: Kripa yeh saab tum kyun kar rahi ho...Kripa chuckled...

 

K: bhaiya yahan saab khud hi karna padta hai...companies hai thodi jo yeh saab karti hai, par aaj tak papa ne khud kiya hai...she said putting the waste away and standing straight...her back was hurting...she still had to do edging and asked Kartik to take Divya inside as the dust might not be good for her, Kartik frowned but then took Divya inside...she did the edging, next 15-20 minutes and watered the lawn, putting some water on her face and sat on the steps totally exhausted...she did not knew how much work it took to do all this till today...she looked at the time and sighed...she needed to start with dinner...she saw Angad coming and smiled...Angad frowned looking at Kripa sitting on the steps...sweaty and wet...small grass sticked to her dress...he parked his car and went out...

 

A: Kripa ye kya halat bana rakha hai...aur yahan aise Kyun baithi ho? He asked frowning...

 

K: kuch nahi...bas lawn move kar rahi thi...to thak gayi thi...

 

Angad looked around...same time Kartik came out..

 

Ka: Kripa jaldi aao na...Divya ki tabiyat thik nahi lag rahi...Kripa quickly marched in...Angad looked around frowning...he knew how much work the lawn moving takes...he had done it only once before they all left for india...he shook his head and marched inside, to see to Divya...

 

Divya had passed out after vomitting couple of times...Kripa was sprinkling some water on her face wiping her sweat... Kartik was in panicky state, but soon Divya opened her eyes...Kripa sighed tensly and helped Divya get up...Angad sighed and went and straightened the pillow for her……

 

Kartik and Kripa helped her back on the bed...she asked Divya if she was alright and once Divya said that she was ok she went to take quick shower...

 

She was back in 10 minutes...she went down and took some crackers and Ginger ale for Divya and asked her to have some...Divya felt a lot better after some time and fell asleep within minutes...Kartik sighed...doctor had told them not to panick if she passed out after vomiting...because it was due to strong medicines she was taking...they had gone to emergency room last time and nurse had explained Kripa what to do at such times...Kartik got all frightened during such times...it was always Kripa, who calmly took care of things...

 

K: bhaiya aap bhabhi ke pass baithiye, mein khana bana leti hun...

 

Kartik nodded sighing and sat carresing Divya's hair...his hands still shivering a little at the thought of she passing out...from the day he had known she might have cancer and their fears came true, he was a nervous wreck...the thought of some thing happening to Divya scared him to death...thankfully Kripa had a good calm hand...he did not know if he would have been able to handle it alone or not...

 

Kripa prepared dinner and took two plates for Kartik and Divya...Angad was caught in a meeting, since the time he had come...so she asked them to have dinner and she and Angad would eat later...

 

After they were done, Kartik gave Divya her medicines and vitamins and she was asleep again...Kripa kept their plate in the kitchen and went up to her room and sat on the bed tired...Angad was still talking on the phone, and typing some thing on his pc...he was fully concentrated and Kripa smiled slowly looking at him...he looked so cute...soon she was asleep...

 

Angad still talking turned around and found Kripa sleeping with smile on her face...she looked worn out, but she looked beautiful...he wanted to go there and wake her up…..take her in his arms…...he kept talking looking at her and then kept the phone after an hour or so...he slowly walked to bed and sat next to her...he touched her cheeks and slowly moved her hairs from her face and tucked it behind her ears...Kripa smiled a little moving on one side and soon was fast asleep...Angad sighed and slowly got up...he covered her with blanket and switched off the light and went out...

 

He walked to kartik's room and asked about Divya...

 

Ka: abhi thik hai Angad...tum donon ne khana khaya?

 

A: Kripa to so gayi...he said sighing...thak gayi shayad...

 

Ka: haan...pata nahi kitni der se bahar kaam kar rahi thi...mujhe to hairani ho rahi hai ki yahan itna kaam hota hai ghar mein...india mein to sare naukar hi sambhalte hain...humme kuch karna hi nahi padta...he said shaking his head...Angad sighed and went down...he felt bad that he had not taken the notice more seriously and did the work...he had seen the letter two days back on her table...

 

He filled his plate and ate his dinner...he cleaned up few dishes he saw in the sink and went up...he had some work he needed to finish...

 

Kripa got up middle of the night, hungry and groaned...she had fallen asleep at 7 and it was 1 am...she tried to sleep, but couldn't...at last she got up at 2 and took a glass of milk...once she was done...she was wide awake...she went up and found Angad sleeping in spare room...she frowned but slowly closed the door...she went down with her books and started studying...

 

Around 5 she went up and took bath and finished cooking...she sighed looking at the sink...and started cleaning the vessels...the work was never ending...it was nice that she was not staying here for ever she thought making faces...at least in india we get people to do the work...She really for the first time appreciated her moms patience…..they had so carelessly kept taking new plates, each time they ate and kept it in the sink, without even rinsing…..left the open boxes on the counters, left their plates and glasses, where ever they studied….it all fell on Gayatri to clean up, like it fell on her today…….She sighed…..we never appreciate any one's work, till we do it our self and know how much energy it took to do it all, she thought sadly……

 

A: Kripa tumne kuch khaya? Kal raat aise hi so gayi thi...Kripa turned around to look at him surprised...it felt like ages since he talked to her...he looked at her frowning when she did not answer...she came out of her thoughts and shook her head...Angad just looked at her angrily...khud apni sehad ka dhyan nahi dogi to bhabhi ka kya khayal rakhogi...padhai ke liye to raat bhar jagi thi...khana khane ke liye time nahi mila...? He asked angrily...Kripa sighed and looked away...

 

K: khane ka maan nahi tha...mujhe der ho rahi hai...tumhe breakfast chahiye ya baad mein loge...mein bhaiya bhabhi ke liye upar lekar ja rahi hun...

 

A: tum nahi khaogi? He asked frowning...

 

K: nahi subah subah tumhari baton se hi pet bhar gaya... She said angrily filling plates...Angad turned away angrily...

 

A: mein khud le lunga...meri chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai...Tumhara time barbad hoga...he said walking away...Kripa shook her head a little angrily and went up with the tray...she greeted Divya who was having crackers...

 

D: Kripa thoda aaram bhi kar liya karo...kitni bhag daud karti ho...she said taking the plate...

 

K: bhabhi...pehle aap apna dhyan dijiye...kal bhaiya ko to acchi tarah dara diya tha aapne...she said chuckling...Divya smiled

 

Ka: bilkul thik kaha Kripa...yeh to kisi din mujhe heart attack dene wali hai...he said shaking his head...Divya frowned at him angrily...kya? He asked looking at her

 

D: kuch bhi bak bak karte ho tum...she said frowning…

 

Ka: mein aur bak bak? He asked with raised eyebrows…….

 

D: haan...she said angrily, eating her breakfast...Kartik rolled his eyes shaking his head and started eating...After a while he smiled and looked at her……..

 

Ka: waise ek baat bolun Divya, aaj pehli baar shadi ke baad tumhari daant khayi hai...he said chuckling...mujhe laga ki tumhe to kabhi ghussa ata hi nahi...he said grinning at Kripa...Divya blushed and smiled at him...Kripa looked at them both and slowly left to give them some privacy...

 

Why did all other couples looked so happy together, but them...Angad was angry for every small things now a days... He did not even come near her any more...she knew her studies took a lot of time, but he had said he would support her if she wanted to do it... And it was not as if she was ignoring Divya's needs or partying around...why was he so distant now a days?...she thought sadly…….

 

She quickly got ready and left for work without eating...Angad came down after he saw her driving away...he sighed looking at the breakfast angrily...She had not eaten after all...she was being total stupid, stubborn and unreasonable...he thought filling his plate angrily...

 

He had his breakfast and went for a walk...

 

Next month passed by more or less same way……Divya was much better but her nausea still continued…..She had couple of tests later and thankfully there was no sign of replase still, though it was early……her baby was fine and growing day by day……Kripa accompanied her on her doctors visit regularly and changed her timings accordingly…..but the amount of study constantly increased every week….She now studied for around 8-9 hours daily after her house work and institute work…..She got up by 5, did all the work till 8 and then went to institute….came by 1 then had her lunch with everyone and after cleaning the kitchen would start studying….In the evening she would prepare tea and simaltaniously prepare dinner for everyone……They would eat by 7 and then study till atleast 1-2 at night……Saturdays and Sundays she did the laundry and Ironing and cleaning the house…..

 

Prithvi and Harshini met them regularly……Though, Harshini had started job and was busy as well….They some times met in the weekends for dinner or lunch, but that's it……Divya spent her spare time reading Kripa's book….though she couldn't do it much as her nausea still made her weak and she took naps daily for 3-4 hours…..She went for walks in the morning and evening, with Kartik as Angad and Kripa were busy…..Kripa massaged her back as it hurt due to pregnancy……even her foot were swollen and Kripa everyday applied some oil and gave her some hot water to relax her feet, as per dadi and her moms suggestion…..Divya felt those massage and water thearapy quite relaxing and thanked her for it….

 

Divya tried to do the work but no one allowed her to do a thing…..She was getting tired day by day though…..

 

D: Kripa…..subah ka thik hai tum khana banao….par raat ka to mein manage kar lungi….akele aise kab tak karogi…aur mein bhi to bor ho rahi hun…..iss tarah baith baith kar to mein pagal ho jaungi……Aab to meri tabiyat bhi bilkul thik hai…….she said frowning angrily, one evening when they were sitting and having tea….. Kartik and Angad were out at their shop, just for visit……Kripa looked at Divya, sitting relaxed on the sofa, wearing soft cotton pant shirts……at first it had been so difficult to make her wear them….as she felt uncomfortable….but slowly she got used to it…..she smiled slowly….

 

K: Thik hai bhabhi….aaap mujhe khana banane mein thodi help kar dena sham ko…..aapka bhi time pass ho jayega….par bas, ussase jyada aur kuch nahi…..she said seriously……

 

D: Thik hai meri ma….utna to karne de……she said chuckling…….Kripa grinned at her….

 

In the evening Kripa let Divya cut the vegetables and she started preparing dinner…..Her phone started ringing……Kripa took the call and it was from the institute…..she was about to turn off the gas for some time, when Divya stopped her and asked her to take the call and said she would look till she came back…..Kripa nodded and went up, to get the details they needed and was telling them about it when Angad came in angrily……He closed the door and looked at her……Kripa after 5 minutes looked at him and frowned…..

 

K: Kya hua Angad….she asked looking at him…

 

A: Kripa bhabhi kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai? Kripa agar tum se nahi hota to ruk jati….mein kar leta…..par bhabhi ko….

 

K: Angad aisi koi baat nahi….mein to sirf woh phone….

 

A: Kripa, tumhe to malum hai na….ki unhe aram chahiye…..doctor ne kaha na ki chemothearapy aur radiation na dene ki wajah se unhe kabhi bhi phirse relapse ho sakta hai…..phir bhi tumne…..Kripa looked at him angrily….

 

K: Khana mein bana rahi thi…..mera phone aya tha, isiliye bhabhi ne kaha ki woh dekh legi do minute….mein bas kuch information chahiye tha mere collegues ko to woh dene ayi thi…..mein apni jimedari janti hun, yun har waqt mujhe unka ehsaas dilane ki koi jaroorat nahi……..Aaj tak muh nahi moda mein ne apni jimedariyon se, padhai ke liye bhi nahi…..she said looking at him angrily…..mujhe niche jana hai….she said holding the handle of the door….Angad moved away still angry and Kripa went down….Since their confrontation they hardly talked to each other…..This was the first time, they had said so many words, but were filled with anger…….both were busy and Kripa more than him...…They had not even hugged each other or just sat together and talked for couple of mintes…...

 

Kripa went down with foul mood and took over the cooking and soon was done…..She asked Divya to rest, while she finished cleaning and kept the food on the table……She called everyone to eat……Once she serverd everyone and sat down for dinner…..She hardly touched her food…..When Divya asked her why she was not eating she said she was not hungry as she had eaten the snacks late, which was true……After dinner Kartik took Divya for the walk, while Angad went up for doing his work…..Kripa cleaned the table and kitchen and then went up to do her studies…..She had a lot to do…..She took her books and sat on her table, while Angad sat on the chair with the laptop on his lap…….Angad did his work till 11 and then took the pillow and went to the spare room to sleep, without a glance at Kripa…..Kripa frowned when she saw him going out of the room with pillow…..She shook her head angrily, still angry at his outburst and kept studying…..It was around 3 she fell asleep…….

 

After their fight over Divya working….Angad  and Kripa started living like strangers in the same house…..They hardly interacted with eachother….just a passing comment like I am leaving or pass me this….etc went on between them….Angad did not even come to help in the kitchen any more….Yeah he was busy, but not so very much…..But Kripa started feeling the strain of doing everything alone……Kartik spent lots of time with Divya and took care of her and did his office work when she was asleep……Kripa let Divya help a little so she felt good, but did all the major work herself…..Kripa's Saturday and Sundays also became hectic after a month more…..She had to finish her thesis in next 3 months….and she wanted to do her best…..she some times stayed in the institute library for couple of hours more after her class or borrowed books for references….generally they were not allowed to be taken home….but as they knew about the medical problem about Divya they let her take it…..It was mid September…..

 

Angad practically started living in the guest room, where he first used to stay……Divya and Kartik tried to ask them about it, when they said that Kripa needed to study and he wanted to sleep so he was sleeping in spare room…..They accepted the explanation, knowing that Kripa had 3 more months to complete her thesis and after that everything would be alright…..Divya started showing up quite a lot…..She felt lose pant shirts more comfortable, as her 3rd tremister started…..She had nausea and vomitings and some times fainted due to weakness…..Doctors kept weekly checks on her and said it was just weakness, as the medicines were strong and there was no problem at all……

 

Kripa on the other side was working in the kitchen, when she felt her head spinning a little…….She held on to the kitchen platform and stayed there till she felt a little better…….Once she was ok, she frowned thinking about it…..This was not the first time it happened…… She decided to go to doctor, as she did not want to fall sick at such crucial point…….she went to tell Angad about it still a little dizzy…….She held a hand on her head trying to stand still and waited for Angad to look up…..when he looked at her she slowly sighed……..

 

K: Angad mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai….

 

A: Kripa abhi mere paas time nahi hai….

 

K: Vow….bus do min…kuch kehna tha…..woh……

 

A: Kripa…..abhi nahi…..badmein…..please mujhe pareshan mat karo…..he said angrily…..Kripa looked at him for a few minutes and left the room sadly, her throat chocked and her eyes filled with tears...She decided to call her doctor instead and took her appointment…...Kripa did not approach him after that, even though she felt weak at times….….She went to her family doctor one day while coming back from institute and her doctor did some blood tests for her……Her doctor told her that it was just over strain and she was a little anemic and asked her to take some vitamins daily……Kripa thanked her and started taking vitamins…….She started taking at least 4 hours sleep daily to get some rest……

 

Couple of weeks later, she still was weak and was given another appointment with her doctor, to re-check her blood……She was already late for her appointment and on top of that, it was raining cats and dogs…..and there was a full traffic jam……She sighed and sat there waiting for the traffic to go forward……

 

She reached her doctors office after full 2 hours delay and was further delayed as her appointment was cancelled…..She requested the lady for taking her in and after looking through the schedule asked her to wait for half an hour….Kripa sighed and sat down….She took her phone but it was discharged….she sighed and requested the lady, if she could make one call……and tried calling the home no. but the number was engaged…..

 

 After her appointment, she was walking to her car tensed as she was very late, she did not see where she was going in the hurry and tripped over the rock….…..Ouch she shouted falling, but balanced her self from falling completely in the mud…….she winced in pain, as her leg was hurt….….getting up she washed off her hands little bit, as the rain fell……She took her umbrella, which was covered in mud and made faces at it and closed it….She looked down at her leg and found some cratches over her jeans….she winced and slowly walked to her car……and sighed sitting down…….She was all drenched, her legs were covered with mud and she was very very late…..!!….This was the worst day…..she thought sighing…..She some how managed to drive and come home, without another mishap….though her leg was hurting…..She frowned after she reached home, as the other car was not there…..may be Angad was not home…..she sighed….but when she went home, no one was there inside……She went up to Kartik and Divya's room they were not inside as well……frowning she went to her room and quickly took bath…..She looked at her wound and found some bad scratches and it was bleeding a little…..She then remembered that they did not even have any first aid….She sighed and took out one of her old cotton odni and tore it….She carefully tied it around her wound and wore her pants…..She walked down and went to take her lunch…..She frowned thinking about Kartik and Divya……They never went out without telling her…..and Divya did not even have any appointment…..May be they just went to neary by mall with Angad she thought serving her lunch……

 

Back to Angad, Divya and Kartik……Divya was washing dishes after they had there lunch, when she got a cramp in her stomach and also vomited couple of times and then fainted…..Angad tried calling Kripa 2-3 times but he could not get to her……He had throwed away the receiver angrily and they took Divya to hospital….She was admitted in the hospital, just as precaution and tests and scans were done again……Everything turned out to be normal though……Kartik asked Angad to go check on Kripa, as her phone had been out of reach for quite a while and it was raining heavily……

 

Angad came home a little concerned and found Kripa eating her lunch, with her legs up……She was leaning back, holding her shoulders and relaxing a little…….His concern immediately changed to anger and he looked at her angrily, sitting in so much comfort, while they had been worried about her, in addition to Divya…….Even Divya was worried about Kripa, when it should have been the other way round.……

 

A: Time mil gaya ghar ane ka? Itni jaldi kyun ayi….wahi institute mein rehna tha……he said angrily…..Kripa left her food untouched and got up, looking at Angad confused..…..

 

K: Angad mein woh…..

 

A: Mujhe kuch nahi sunana Kripa…..meine pehle hi kaha tha ki Bhabhi tumhari sab se badhi priority honi chahiye…..par tumhe to bas apni padhai hi jyada jaruri hai….aaj dopar se try kar raha hun tumhe…..Bhabhi vahan hospital mein admit hui hai aur tum ho ki…..

 

K: Bhabhi hospital mein? Par subah to thik thi woh…..She asked frowning…..Angad….kya hua…kaisi hai unki tabiyat….? She asked with tears in her eyes….

 

A: Jyada dikhava karne ki koi jarurat nahi Kripa…..Jao tum apni padhai karo…..hum manage kar lenge…Hospital jane ki jarurat bhi nahi hai…..He said looking at her angrily….Tumhare padhai ke liye waqt kum padega….

 

K: Dikhava…..Tum samajhte ho ki aaj tak meine jo bhi kiya woh dikhawa tha……she asked with tears in her eyes….She stared in his eyes, her heart filling with despair…..Angad looked at her angrily and then looked away……..She turned away from him, not waiting for his answers and took her plate and dumped the contents in the dustbin, too stressed out to even talk to him……she rinsed the plate and then slowly walked up to her room to get ready, leaving Angad there alone…….. Then she remembered that she might have to take dinner…..She went down and prepared light dinner for Kartik and Divya and packed it in the box……she then went up and changed….Her foot was hurting a lot, but she ignored it and drove to the hospital…..She did not see Angad after that…..she soon found out the room number and went up…….She was in verge of tears, when she opened the door….She found Divya sitting on the bed drinking some juice…..She sighed in relief and closed her eyes……

 

Angad on the other hand went up and closed the door behind him in the guest room and closed his eyes.……He knew he said wrong words again…..but he had been so angry, they could not even get to her, when they needed her…….It was so frustrating…..She was studying day and night like crazy……Was almost robotic……working working and working…..he wondered how she is surviving at all….at this rate she should have been dropped by now…..he thought frustratingly……But then, concern took over after few minutes, when he remembered seeing her throwing away her lunch, without even touching it and going away without eating…….

 

D: Kripa…..kahan thi tum…..hum kitna pareshan ho gaye the…tumhara phone bhi nahi lag raha tha…..aur upar se ye barish….thik to ho na….

 

K: Mein thik hun bhabhi….par aap….yeh saab…..she asked with tears…..

 

D: Mein bilkul thik hun Kripa…..dekho kuch nahi hua….woh khana khate hi ulti ho gaye aur chakkar aya…..to niche gir gayi…..Yeh log ghabrakar yahan le aye……donon ek number ke darpok hai……aaj mujhe ye pata chal gaya…..sare tests dobara karaya….she said chuckling looking at Kartik….

 

Ka: Aur kya kare….kisne kaha tha tumhe bartan saaf karne…..aise panic attacks dogi na, to aise tests haar baar karvaunga…..he said angrily, Kripa looked at them tensed, when Kartik sighed and went to her, putting a hand on her arm.…..Kripa tension mat lo….saab thik hai….bas thoda dar gaye the…..aur kuch nahi…..Tum thik ho na….hume tumhari chinta ho rahi thi……

 

K: Mein thik hun bhaiya….sorry bhabhi….saab meri vajah se hua…..she said looking away with tears….na hi mein der karti….aur na hi yeh saab……She said slowly going to her and keeping the bad besides the bed……

 

D: Kripa, tumhari vajah se kuch nahi hua…..she said holding her hands….tum to mera din raat itna khayal rakh rahi ho…

 

Ka: Kripa Divya thik keh rahi hai……Tum khama kha khud ko dosh mat do…..saab thik hai….bas woh weakness ki wajah se thoda chakkar aa gaya……Aao baitho yahan……He said giving her a chair……Kripa sat there a little depressed, remembering Angad's words all the while……..

 

    She talked for some time with them and then got up and took out the things which she bought…..aap donon ke liye kapde aur khana layi thi….pata nahi tha ki aap ghar aa rahe ho ya…..to….

 

D: Doctor ne aaj yahin rehne ke liye kaha hai…..kal subah discharge karenge….Ye rahenge yahan….tum jao ghar…..kitni thaki hui lag rahi ho…..

 

Ka: Haan Kripa ghar jake aaram karo….Divya ekdum thik hai…..kuch chahiye ho to phone kar denge….jao aab….

 

Kripa nodded and walked out after couple of hours, hugging Divya……Angad was coming , when she closed the door, behind her…..They looked at each other for couple of seconds….Kripa looked away angrily and walked out, without a word, her eyes filling with tears instantly.……Angad looked at her till she disappeared and sighing went in……

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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
ok...i will have to retype this whole comment...

This was a heart touching update...it 100% evoked emotion...ANGER...at both of the brothers...
SO the story moved ahead 3 months...u know so much has happened n yet it feels like its pretty much the same...kripa doing all the work...sigh...

n this is what makes me mad...Kartik has been living here for 3 mnths...at least he shld learn something called "helping around the house" i mean he is doing nothing...except helping angad little here n there n worrying about divya...its high time he starts to help around some in the household work...poor kripa is doing everything...y are all the responsibilty being given to her...she is here to help divya n kartik so it is easier for them to live here...she's not bk in US to come bk n slave around...or at least that's how i feel...i mean no one is even really that concerned for her..accept divya..bt she can't really help out...bt kartik can/ for ex. he can do dishes..n vacume once a week...n learn how to mow the lawn...ya seeing kripa moving hte lawn n kartik just going bk in the house really pissed me off..i mean that requires soo much strength n it is a man's job...y the heck kartik isnt helping her...when he's doing these chores, kripa can look after divya...n then angad...i just have no words...he is really makin gme mad...he says everytime that he'll protect kripa...n ya di ya di ya..bt when it comes to really support her n be by her side, he is just being annoying n blaming kripa for each n everything...well i'd like him n kartik to do the housework w/ out kripa's help for one day (minus her phd n his office work) n bet both wld be tired like hell...if angad is so concerned for divya's health, y doesnt he help kripa out n support maybe that way she will get some time n he will be able to spend time with her...n kripa had a bad day n then angad just comes n blasts at her...i have a feeling that this mess is about to blow up...n i really hope it does...i hope kripa gets sooo frustrated n blasts at angad...n indirectly mentions how she doesnt get any help from anyone in front of divya n kartik...she should really yell at angad that in stead of criticizing her, has he ever tried helping her out...nooo...n i know when everything will be over, angad will be all guilty n kripa with the heart she has will forgive him...bt i dont want her to forgive him this time...this is like 3rd time he
s making similar mistake...n if she forgives him this time...then he will not learn i want something big to happen so angad can realize what kripa has being going through n will think 10 times b4 even trying to blame her..even if its for the sake of his family...i just want kartik n esp angad to really understand how much kripa is doing for them...she is a newly married person n has her own dreams n desires...bt she is willing to give up these things for sometime for his family's sake...n here she seems like that she has become a slave...

whew,,,this was a long comment...n plz excuse my anger...bt its only towards the characters n all the props goes to u for writing it beautifully so that it connects with audience n evokes these feelings...plz continue soon!! :)


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Hey another awsome part.. i hope the problems get sorted between AK..continue soon

Thanks so much for the pm..

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Aww. This part touched me. Angad is behaving so unrationally . Poor Kripa. Doing everything on get own. Can't wait to see how this all shapes out. Plz plz continue soon :)

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nice update...
continue soon

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part 44
nice part...
honestly to say i hate to point but still i didnt like Angad's attitude a bit at all...even to say Kartik also...
to start with, Kartik hadnt Angad and Kripa accompanied them wouldnt he be doing every single what Kripa is doing now?
he at least could take care of Divya with the massages or making some soups or at least taking to it after she throws up...
why Kripa has to do every single bit thing?
shes comparitively younger and newly married and add to it they have encouraged her to for the research, not that shes backing in any of the responsibilities...
and Angad this time am so mad at him...
las time he didnt the similar mistake but this guy doesnt seem to understand anything from it...
he taking his frustration on Kripa when she is already filled with so much in her plate...
instead of supporting her being with her hes making it tough for her...
my heart goes out for Kripa...
doing so much...
Angad is behaving like a typical man, when it comes to their family they forget that even their wife is also a human, always a fine thin line seems to appear between their family and wife...
he didnt even bother to ask how she managed to reach home and what took her this long and since u have indicated his work load doesnt seem to be that hectic compared to Kripa's but still he hasnt lent his help like before...
getting callous nowadays...
why? just that she is busy and couldnt spend time with him?
oh no Kripa is likely to fall ill and i hope Angad doesnt blame her but take care of her...
only Kartik and Divya are appreciating and understanding Kripa's very single thing and not Angad, who is blaming and fighting with her day by day...
cont soon di...

have reacted so much...

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Originally posted by spvd

part 44
nice part...
honestly to say i hate to point but still i didnt like Angad's attitude a bit at all...even to say Kartik also...
to start with, Kartik hadnt Angad and Kripa accompanied them wouldnt he be doing every single what Kripa is doing now?
he at least could take care of Divya with the massages or making some soups or at least taking to it after she throws up...

why Kripa has to do every single bit thing?
shes comparitively younger and newly married and add to it they have encouraged her to for the research, not that shes backing in any of the responsibilities...
and Angad this time am so mad at him...
las time he didnt the similar mistake but this guy doesnt seem to understand anything from it...
he taking his frustration on Kripa when she is already filled with so much in her plate...
instead of supporting her being with her hes making it tough for her...
my heart goes out for Kripa...
doing so much...
Angad is behaving like a typical man, when it comes to their family they forget that even their wife is also a human, always a fine thin line seems to appear between their family and wife...
he didnt even bother to ask how she managed to reach home and what took her this long and since u have indicated his work load doesnt seem to be that hectic compared to Kripa's but still he hasnt lent his help like before...

getting callous nowadays...
why? just that she is busy and couldnt spend time with him?
oh no Kripa is likely to fall ill and i hope Angad doesnt blame her but take care of her...
only Kartik and Divya are appreciating and understanding Kripa's very single thing and not Angad, who is blaming and fighting with her day by day...
cont soon di...

have reacted so much...


i totally agree with u...esp at the bold part...i mean if angad hadnt suggested to come with kripa or even if kripa had stayed in india with her parents...what would they have done n kartik isnt doing anythin n he should really help kripa n angad it seems that when it comes to his bhabhi, he cants see anyone beyond her,,,,is he isnt worried abt what wld happen to them if something happened to kripa n both of them really made me mad...

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THANKS EVERYONE………..DEEPA AND NINE TWO……….Thanks for the lovely debate and I loved every single word of it……….I am glad my ff is having those effects on you guys……..

Totally agree with you both dear...But you know, still in India, there are people, many from big families like Suryabhan and Dilip's where boys don't work at all at home...Home is completely ladies duty and men are in business or work...The moment they come home, they expect their wives to serve them with everything from tea to water and dinner...They won't even touch their own plates or keep them in the sink...That's the way they were grown up...For eg. Angad he did not know even how to prepare tea by himself...He learned just for fun, as Arjun was leaning...But Gayatri is aware of this tradition...She had seen it in her house years back and Surya was just the same...But staying alone and Gayatri's delivery and all made him change a little...But, he still rarely comes in kitchen...It always falls of ladies as Gayatri and Avantika are well aware about and that was why Gayatri was worried...She couldn't tell her not to do phd. because she knew how much Kripa loved her studies, while she knew it was going to fall on her to take care of everything...Men are most of the time babies, who see only when something serious problems fall on them, like Divya's...That is the reality even today in this modern world...Divya is a girl and understands Kripa, but is not able to help, while Kartik, though he is well aware of what Kripa was doing for them, is very much behaving like what typically men behave in the families like Rathod's...

Kripa is really hurt by Angad's words now...If you remember, Surya's first concern about Kripa's marriage to Angad was that, she was born and bought up here and he was worried about how she would adjust to the traditions, which he had hated himself, like women not having a say in anything, education, responsibilities, etc. He knew that these were the differences and Kripa has to adjust to it...And Gayatri had said that, if she falls in water, she will learn to swim and when Surya asked, what if she doesn't, then Gayatri had replied that then, they were there to support her...They already knew what Kripa has to go through...In order to change some one, one needs time...Rathod's though were quite modernized, their basic ethics and traditions were the same and it was up to Kripa to change them, because women have that power...They can change the world if they want to...They are loving, understating, patient and forgiving, unlike men...They change themself to the situations and they know what they are doing...But Men don't and it hurts sometimes...

Angad has a long way to go...Loving someone and getting the person is one thing...I can say easy...But when the real time comes, it is not men who handle situation with cool mind, but girls and it is always girls who have to initially adjust...Kripa could have shouted and told him to do things...But she knows, no one can force others to do anything...They should do it on their own...She kept her cool and is doing whatever she can and whatever she understands...She is her mom's replica, who is caring and loving...Challenge comes after marriage...In India, girls know and get ready to the fact that they need to take up the responsibility after marriage……….But Angad needs to understand, that his bride is bought up in US, and even though she is silent for now, she wouldn't if time comes……….She knows and understands her traditions and respect for elders etc. But if time comes, she is also a independent self-respecting girl as well……….And further Angad tends to react quite quickly when it came to his family and that is another reality in India………Wife is always taken for granted and is expected to take care of everyone, but there are very few, who think about their wife's health or what she is going through or her opinions and wishes………

Furthermore, it is expected of wife, that they fulfill their wifely duties of taking care of their husbands needs in every way, no matter what……….and this is universal phenomenon……….Not just in India………But in US too……….It's difficult and mostly impossible to make them realize the difficulties of women in those times and that is the main reason, for the marriages to break……….Women need emotional involvements and men need physical involvements, and that is how a bond is formed……….That is the way God made the minds of men and women and both have to understand each other………Girls feel that guys should understand them, sit with them, talk and hold hands, help a hand in chores…….But we see boys sitting on chairs with tv on while we work all the time and we are obviously angry…….So, if they understand our emotional needs, we will understand theirs……….That is how things can look better….….If you see, Angad had never been in any relationship till he was married, and it is natural for him, to want to be with his wife and spend time with her…….Which Kripa isn't understanding……..She is small and doesn't understand this fact………..Even men are helpless and feel that they are last in the priority list of their wives, just as wife think about  their husbands……But the fact is that ,both need to coordinate, talk and understand the situations and handle it in proper way…….But at the same time Angad is not understanding Kripa and her young age…….Today she is his wife and like typical husband he feels that she should take care of everything, which is naturally difficult for her………But he is not understanding, just because she is not someone else's daughter but his own wife……Why? Because they take their wife's for granted and wish that they are super humans, who should be all-rounder at home…….Typical men for you….!!

Let's see how this situation will be handled by this entire youngster group and if they together form a bond and help each other out in times like these……….

 

 

 



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