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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 64)

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Aaahhh it was awesome! Totally luved it hun! You have described everything so perfectly and detailed ... Keep it up! Update soon :)

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awesome
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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
THANKS EVERYONE...SORRY FOR THE DELAY...HERE IS THE NEXT PART...LOVED YOUR COMMENTS...
 
MITU
 

Part- 37

 

Next day early morning Angad's mom took Angad outside and applied Tilak on his head and then applied haldi on his face smiling at him with love……Divya and his sisters too joined her and teased him, making fun….Then Dadi sent the remaining Haldi to Surya's house with Kartik for Kripa…..They all made him take bath in the backyard….Angad's mom did his aarti later and asked him to go and change in his room……They all gathered in Puja room and Angad took blessings from everyone…..

 

D: Beta, abhi iske baad shadi tak, kahin bahar nahi jaoge…..samjhe na…..Sirf aaj sham mehfil mein mil sakte ho Kripa ko….kal to usse sath hi le aoge….she said kissing his forehead……She looked at the Srinathji idol and sighed……She took the sweets she had made today and gave one to Angad…..Aliyah, Anita, Divya….Jao beta….Kripa ke paas jao aur ye sweets bhi le jana….abhi uska haldi ka rasam hoga…..They nodded and took the box and went to Kripa's house….Avantika stayed back as she was not allowed to go…..

 

Back at Kripa's house….Kripa and everyone else had finished breakfast…Kanan was also there early morning as per Gayatri's request…...Everyone except Kripa had taken bath and all the males went down, as per ladies instruction……

 

Kartik had already given them the Haldi bowl….Meera and the kids were also here….And soon Divya, Anita and Aliyah joined them….

 

Kripa's mom made her sit down on a small stool, Pritha too sat with Kripa, as her sister and Gayatri and Meera did her aarati and then started applying haldi….. all the girls came one by one, followed by elders and applied haldi to Kripa and her sister..….They all joked and told different stories and experiences and made fun about Angad's kiss last night…..Kripa blushed and chuckled hearing them….but her heart was beating wildly, thinking about tomorrow…..She would be his bride tomorrow…..

 

After she was done…..Gayatri led her in the bathroom and poured some water as per tradition and then asked her to finish her bath and get ready…….

 

Kripa was ready and out after an hour or so….Gayatri gave her some sweets and then took her down for the puja…..Surya did aarti and then fed Kripa a sweet looking at her hands….He took her hands with tears in his eyes and kissed them……Her hands looked beautiful….…Kripa's eyes filled with tears as well and she hugged him tightly…..Gayatri looked at them and smiled….Kripa hugged her too, wiping her tears and then Gayatri took her back up…..

 

Kanan, Harshini, Mishti, Meera and some village ladies came to take Kripa to Srinathji Temple for taking blessings…..They went and came back within an hour……Once she arrived, Gayatri asked her to sit on the stool and all the ladies came and fed her the feast preapared for her….They sang traditional songs feeding her one by one……Once done, Kripa's mom gifted every one with clothes……

 

The day went by in preparation for evening functions……

 

Kripa and others got ready……in the evening…..Kripa's hand looked beautiful….The mehendi artists were wonderful, they designed around her wound in such a way that it was almost invisible…..Angad's name was also written in the midst….She smiled shyly looking at it…..She slowly wore her earings thinking about him…..

 

Kripa looked around and smiled at Pritha…who came in…..Harshini and Mishti followed her….

 

K: Kanan nahi ayi?

 

H: Abhi phone aya tha….nikal gayi hai….aa jayegi…..you are looking amazing….Mishti tumhari shadi ki bhi shopping yahan kar lo….I swear yahan se achi work ki sariyan kahin nahi milegi….

M: Mein bhi yahi soch rahi hun Harhini…..You are looking wonderful Kripa…..Ye colour bhi bahot suit karta hai….

 

K: Thanks Mishti….Ye to kuch bhi nahi hai…..Tum Divya bhabhi ne banaya hua shadi ka joda dekhogi na…..to ye saab phike pad jayenge….she said smiling…..

 

H: Haan unki ma bhi keh rahi thi….Uski ma bhi kitna ache pieces banati hai….I just love the one she gave me…..Thanks so much Kripa….she said grinning….

 

They soon went down……Many people were invited for todays function unlike yesterday…..The backyard was almost full…..Many people came to her and her dad introduced her and Gayatri….Arjun and the kids were playing around….The lights were all switched on and the Rajashthani folks were all singing and dancing….Soon Dilip and his family joined them too…..The males and females sat on either sides….Angad just had a little glimpse of Kripa….but could not see her properly….He sighed looking at all the people and rolled his eyes…..

 

After an hour or so….The girls pulled Kripa amonst them to dance with the Rajashthani folks…..That was when Angad got his first good look at his bride…..He stopped in his tracks, when he saw her, dancing with a shy smile….circling round with the music…..her body swayed with the music so perfectly dancing in perfect traditional pattern……She looked stunning…..It reminded him the last time he had seen her dancing….in this very place…..only difference was she was a stranger that day….and today she was going to be his bride….This time today, she would be his, forever……She would be called his wife…..He slowly walked in front towards her, to get the better view…..When he stopped a few feet away from her, he really looked at her…..from head to toe…….Dressed in ghagra……with ornaments…..hands filled with mehendi……and her face had a wonderful glow……He so wished he could meet her alone….just for a few minutes…..

 

J: Kyun Angad…..kya soch rahe ho….he asked chuckling….and keeping a hand on his shoulder….

 

A: Yahi….ki kabab mein haddi kaise aa gaya….he said making faces…..

 

J: Accha….yeh baat hai….to thik hai….mein to soch raha tha, kit u meri behen se thodi der akele rehna chahta hai, isiliye chala aya tha teri help karne….any way buddy enjoy the dance….he said grinning…..Angad frowned at him and pulled him back….

 

A: Kya kaha tune…..

 

J: Kuch nahi….meine kaha enjoy your dance…..

 

A: Teri to…..he said hitting him….

 

Josh laughed…..

 

J: Tu upar ja……Mein Mishti ko le ane ke liye kehta hun…..he said winking….Angad grinned at him and thanking him ran up……

 

M: Kripa…..she said stopping Kripa in between…..Mere sath chal na…..

 

K: Kahan Mishti…..

 

M: Kuch kaam hai….ruk Aunty ko batake ati hun…..

 

Mishti was back in few minutes and grinned at her…..She pulled Kripa with her inside the house……

 

D: Kripa beta kahan ja rahi ho…..? Dadi asked coming out of the puja room….She went to her and slowly kissed her forehead and looked at her…..Bahot pyari lag rahi ho…..Thoda araam se jana…..kahan bhag rahi ho waise….

 

K: Ji dadi woh…

 

M: Dadi mein le ja rahi hun iss….thoda duppata thik karna tha aur makeup touch karna tha…..thodi der mein le aungi…..she said with a smile….Kripa frowned a little but kept quite….She smiled at dadi a little….

 

D: Thik hai beta……jao…par sambhal kar….she said going out of the house…..

 

Mishti grinned when she was out and pulled Kripa with her….

 

K: Are Mishti le kahan ja rahi ho….

 

M: Are chal to do min…..Josh bhi hai upar….she said winking……Kripa rolled her eyes and went with her…..They went to terrace and slowly Mishti opened the door….Josh came near the door and smiled at Mishti…..Mishti asked Kripa to go inside…..as soon as she was on the terrace they closed the door…..laughing…..

 

Kripa looked at the closed door puzzled…..and then felt a arm around her shoulder……She stopped in her tracks……She then felt his breathe on her neck…..and her breathe stopped…….

 

K: Angad…..She said looking at him……..he looked at her slowly and smiled……He turned her around……..Yahan kyun bulaya…..she whispered……. A: Wahan ghumar karte hue itni sundar lar rahi thi, ki raha nahi gaya…..he said kissing her cheeks…. Kripa shyly looked down……Angad touched her cheeks and neck and looked at her earings tracing the design….Kripa's breathe caught, she looked up at him a little frightened…… K: Koi aa jayega……she said slowly…… A: Koi nahi ayega……he said in her ears kissing it lightly……Kripa shivered and Angad held her hands, slowly tracing her arms, till it touched her fingers ……he took her hands and looked at it…….Bahot sundar dikh rahi hai tumhari hathon mein…..he said looking at it…..he found his name and smiled at it……Dekho na, aab tumhare hathon mein mera naam hai, to hua na ye mera.…..he looked in her eyes…He bought her hands to his mouth and kissed it lightly, inhaling the sweet smell of mehendi……Kripa closed her eyes shyly……Ankhen khol kar dekho Kripa…..Hum kal ek ho jayenge….humesha humesha ke liye…….I love you…..he whispered…..Uss din tumhe niche mandir mein le jana chahta tha…..jab Arjun ne roka…..bhagwan ke samne  tumhe ye vachan dene ki phir kabhi tumhara dil nahi dukhaunga, itna pyar karunga ki tumhare jeevan mein sirf khushiyan ho…..humesha tumhara sath dunga…...aaj sari duniya ke samne tumhe vachan deta hun…..he said looking at her with smile and kissing her forehead……Kripa smiled at him and hugged him……Angad sighed pulling her tightly against him…….I love you…..he whispered…. K: I love you too……she said kissing his cheeks lightly…. Mishti and Josh knocked at the door…. M: Chal Kripa…..saab niche puchenge……she whispered…..Kripa looked at Angad and he quickly kissed her cheeks and nodded her to go….Kripa smiled and went out…..Josh and Mishti grinned at them, while Mishti and Kripa ran down chuckling….. Angad started going down…. J: Abbe….tu mujhe marwayega….he said chuckling and giving him his kerchief…..lipstick…..he said indicating his cheeks….Angad grinned and wiped his face and gave the kerchief back to him….. A: Waise, mujhse jyada tumhe iski jaroorat hai dost……he said chuckling…..Josh laughed and wiped his face and they raced down……grinning at eachother….The function went on….Many people came to Kripa to congradulate her…..They gifted her for her wedding… 

Gayatri and Surya later gifted the clothes and Jwellery they bought for Dilip and his family as well as Netra, Divya's Parents and Ashok's family……They fed them sweets and hugged eachother with Joy…..Gayatri then applied tilak to Angad and gave him his clothes and other things they had purchased and fed him sweet….He touched Surya and Gayatri's feet taking there blessings …...They also presented silver diyas to other people who came for the function along with sweets…..The dinner was served and Surya requested the guests to have dinner…..Prithvi was busy seeing at the arrangements for dinner…..Surya went to him and thanked him for helping him so much…..A table was decorated with 8 Silver plates, bowls, spoons and Glasses…..for Dilip's family and Kripa, because as per tradition Surya and Gayatri would serve them all as a respect for their daughter's in laws…….Gayatri first asked Kripa to touch their feet and as a tradition, Avantika asked her to take a seat with her to have dinner……Once Surya and Gayatri served them all, Gayatri went to Avantika and gave her jwellery set and few Silver Items, as a gift to Kripa's mother in law..…..All the silver items would be sent to their house tomorrow with Kripa…..Once they started, Surya asked other people to have their dinner…….Prithvi, Harshini and Josh's parents stayed behind….saying they will eat with Gayatri and Surya later…..

 

At last after dinner, Surya asked few servants, to take all the sweets and gift items to Dilip's car…….In 5-6 rounds they took everything to the car…..Kripa came to them and touched their feet…..They blessed her and told her to get ready to come with them tomorrow as their daughter…..Dadi hugged Kripa and Gayatri and then went to Surya…..She thanked him for accepting Kripa and Angad's relationship and told him that they would look at Kripa like their own daughter…..Surya and Gayatri touched her and Avantika and Dilip's feet and waited till they went off…..Soon the people started leaving as well……Surya thanked them all and at last they were done for the day…..Gayatri and Surya had dinner with all the others who waited for them, once every one was gone……

 

Later when they went up, Gayatri presented all of them with clothes and silver diya's….She also gave the dresses she bought for her brother and his family…..Atlast, every one retired to their rooms, tired after the long rituals….

 

Surya's leg were hurting……Gayatri gave him medicine and massaged his swollen knee…….A little concerned…..

 

S: Chinta mat karo Gayatri….kal ek hi din hai….badmein aaram karunga to thik ho jayega……he said smiling at her……

 

At last after few minutes he was fast asleep…..Gayatri too was tired and fell asleep soon as it was very late…..

 

Back at Dilip's house, Avantika lighted an earthern pot with ghee diya, as per the tradition…..

 

Next day after everyone came down after the bath Jaggery and Coconut mixed sweet was given to every one……There was the Janeo ceremony at Angad's house in the morning..…..Guruji came early and did the rituals...Angad came down wearing a saffron dress….. He performed the havan as per guruji's instruction…..guruji then gave him two options. He can either becomes an ascetic or else choose to assume the responsibility of a householder……Everyone laughed at him, when he rolled his eyes….saying ofcourse I want to marry…..Avantika did not have brother, so Prakash, Gayatri's brother was called….He told that he would give his sister's daughter and asked him if would he accept her as his bride.…..Angad grinned and said yes…..Later after the puja was performed….….Guruji had fruits and milk and took leave, promising to come in the evening……

 

Avantika then asked Kartik and Dilip to go to Surya's house with Kripa's wedding dress and jwellery as well as gifts and clothes for them all…..Angad had to fast and was given fruits and milk in the morning…

 

Back to Surya's home, they all had their breakfast…..Kripa was given some fruits and milk ..…The decorators had come and were building the mandap for the wedding…..Josh and Prithvi were taking care of it, as Surya had little leg pain…..

 

Dilip and Kartik came home and gave the gift packs to Surya and Gayatri……Kripa touched there feet and took their blessings, when they handed over her wedding dress and jwellery..…After having cup of tea, they went back……

 

At last it was around 8, in the evening…..Kanan had called her beautician, who took care of Kripa…..Harshini, Kanan and Mishti later helped her with her dress and ornaments……Praising the beautiful work done by Divya……It looked gorgeous on Kripa……The dark pink color suited her very much…...Beautiful jwellery adorned her forehead, neck, waist, arms, hands, fingers and anklets…...Gayatri came in with a smile, looking at Kripa….She was looking beautiful……She went and hugged her and kissed her on her forehead…..she applied a small black kajal tikka near her ear and looked at her with tears…...Surya also came in with some jwellery and a envelope……He gave the gift to her and hugged her with tears in his eyes……Arjun too came and hugged her…. They walked out with her and took her to their temple…..after taking blessings from the God they bought her back to their suit….Meera and Prakash came and gifted Kripa with a Gold bracelet……She thanked them, touching there feet……One by one Josh's parents, Harshini's parents and Prithvi's parents came and gifted her and blessed her for happy life……Sachi, Ashok's wife too came with Kanan and gave her the gift….

 

Prithvi came and told Surya that many of the people have already arrived and were asking for them…..Gayatri slowly covered Kripa's face with her pallu, aab se muh dikhai tak ghunghat nahi hatana, she said looking at her with a smile, Kripa nodded with tears in her eyes….Gayatri kissed her forehead and shook her head, wiping her tears, mein niche jati hun, abb ankh se ek bhi ansu nahi nikalne chahiye, she said smiling at her and pinching her cheeks.……Gayatri and Surya left the suit after few minutes..…. Everyone went down leaving Kripa with Harshini and Kanan…..Pritha too sticked by Kripa…holding her hands…..

 

Mishti took the task of welcoming the guests along with Josh…….

 

Prithvi and Nishant took care of marriage and dinner preparations……

 

Back to Rathod house, the house was beautifully decorated to welcome the new daughter in law home……No expense was spared…….There were flowers,  lights and beautiful silk curtains tied to the huge columns of the beautiful old house……All were ready to start and were waiting for the groom to arrive…..Angad was all ready and down on time…..Divya did his aarati, as per Avantika's suggestion and applied Tilak on his head……..Angad took blessings from all the elders…..…Then she kept the sehra on his head, and made him wear a big pearl kantha( Traditional Indian Pearl Necklace for grooms wears in marriage)….Aliyah and Anita fed him yogurt and sugar…….Dadi and Avantika took Angad to the puja room and asked him to take blessings of the God…..Later, Angad was seated on a horse and the barat proceded to Surya's house with empty doli behind him…….

 

It was a beautiful procession with few Rajashthani people dancing and singing traditional wedding songs….8 ladies walked with huge pots on their heads…..Lights were carried……Beautiful doli was decorated and carried by 8 people, behind the procession who wore traditional dresses…..Nishant came to Angad's side after a few friends called him to join them in the barat. He and some other college friends of Aliyah, Kartik and Angad danced with the traditional darncers and singers….. fire works shooted the sky…….The elders walked along with the horse smiling at the youngsters who were dancing with joy……Dadi and some of her friends came in a car behind them…..

 

It took 25 minutes to reach Surya's house……Surya's house was also lit with lights and decorated with beautiful flowers……Gayatri and Surya went out to welcome them……Once Angad reached he got down with the help of the horse man and went towards Gayatri and Surya…..The entrance of the home was decorated with flowers and straw called as Toran. Angad took the straw which Gayatri gave and hit the Toran with a Straw to ward off the Evil Eye from Kripa…..He then took his sword and touched the Toran again, this symbolizes and assures the parents of the bride, that groom will always protect his bride once she is his.…...(This Ceremony is called the Toranchar)….Surya welcomed him with a garland and Gayatri did his aarati and asked him to come inside…..Surya welcomed Dilip, Kartik, Manik and the others who came with the barat with flower garlands, as well….while Gayatri hugged Avantika, Divya and others…..Dadi and Netra went to the back entrance and came from there, as it was not auspicious for her to come through front door…..Gayatri went and touched their feet and asked her to take seat near the Mandap……

 

Guruji asked them to bring the bride, once Angad arrived on the mandap….Gayatri asked Prakash to go and bring Kripa, as per the tradition…..He went up with a smile and told Kripa that she was called down…..Kripa got up shyly, along with Mishti, Kanan and Harshini….Pritha still held her hand….Her heart was beating wildly…..The moment she had waited had come…..soon she would be Angad's bride…..It was so overwhelming……She would be his today, but she would be leaving her parents house….She stopped in tracks, her eyes filling with tears……Harshini hugged her and wiped her tears slowly and Prakash went near her and took her down…….Her hands were wet with sweat and she was nerveous as well as excited at the same time…..She bit her lips, when she climbed the steps to reach the mandap…..She could feel him staring at her….Her mother's hand on her back, assured her a little…..

 

Angad was also getting restless to see her…..He was grinning ear to ear, since the time Guruji had asked to bring Kripa down……Soon, Kripa arrived……….All the eyes were on her…..She looked beautiful in the bridal dress, Divya had stiched……..Everyone praised Divya for the beautiful bridal dress she had made…..Divya shyly thanked them looking at Kripa…..They could not see Kripa's face fully, but knew she looked beautiful…..

 

Once they reached the Mandap, Gayatri came near her and guided her in front of Angad…..Guruji gave a garland in both their hands…..Angad kept looking at Kripa, she looked absolutely gorgeous……...he could only see part of her face, due to ghunghat, but was enough to let him know that she was nervous.…..He wanted to take her hands in his and assure her and tell her he loved her that very moment…...Guruji asked Kripa to put the Garland around Angad first……Kripa slowly looked up from her Gunghat and put the Garland around his neck….That was the first time Angad got a good look at her face and his breathe caught…….Her eyes met his, and she stilled for a second……When he slowly smiled at her, she smiled shyly and stood back……fireworks lit the sky at that very moment…….Later, it was Angad's turn, he smiled at her bent head and slowly went to her and put the garland around her neck……Love you…..he whishpered with a grin and stood back……..All the people present clapped and cheered them…….The musicians and the traditional singers and dancers started playing marriage songs…..while the people started coming and congradulated them…….After around 5-10 minutes, the priest asked the sister of the bride to come and tie the knot…..Gayatri directed Pritha and asked Harshini to help her to tie the knot of Kripa's pallu to Angad's odhni……

 

Gayatri and Surya came in front and took Kripa's hand and kept it in Angad's……Kripa's hand shook and her eyes filled with tears…..Surya and Gayatri, could also feel her hand shivering….Surya patted her hands with tears and removed his hands…..Angad wrapped his hands around Kripa's and squeezed it trying to assure her….A tear fell from her eye……The priest kept a coconut in Kripa's hand and asked Surya and Gayatri to pour the water from mangal kalash in Angad and Kripa's hand…...

 

Then Angad and Kripa started taking pheras, around the sacred fire……After 4 pheras, Kripa was asked to come forward and they started finishing the pheras with their hands still connected, but when they were about to finish last round, Angad stopped her slowly and stood by her side as they completed it together…..Kripa stopped in her tracks, when she found Angad stand by her side for the last phera…….Even the guruji looked at him confused……..When Angad just smiled and told him that if death comes, he would like to be with Kripa at that time, and did not want to let her go alone, leaving him behind…….Gayatri and Surya looked at Angad with tears in their eyes……Even Kripa's eyes were filled with tears……Her hands tightened around him as he spoke the words and he looked at their joined hands with a smile…….Guruji too did not say any thing to him and just smiled and continued the ceremony…….All the guests too were in awe about what he told, never had any thing did that before or told those words before..…..

 

Arjun was called after that and was asked to put the puffed rice in Kripa's hand 3 times……together Kripa and Angad offered the rice puffs to the fire….Arjun grinned at Angad and Kripa, while he did that…..Delighted to participate in the ceremony in some way……Guruji asked Kripa to then sit on the left side of Angad and asked him to fill her the sindoor in her mang……Angad took the sindoor in his fingers and slowly lifted Kripa's veil a little so he could apply the sindoor…….He could not take his eyes of her….She looked beautiful, her eyes looking down shyly….he could still see few water drops on her cheeks and wiped it slowly before applying the sindoor………Kripa looked up startled, but he smiled at her with a nod……..She looked at him with smile and thanked him for his understanding through her eyes…….He then tied the mangalsutra around her neck……


Lastly, Angad and Kripa got up for the saptapadi, which signify their togetherness and oneness from now on. Dilip then came and kept a big bag with money and jwellery, signifying her future responsibilies……Later, Angad and Kripa got up to take blessings of Guruji and all the elders…….People came to bless and gift them for their marriage……Angad was dying to be alone with Kripa…..but knew that he had to wait till the next evening…….Nishant, Kanan, Prithvi, Harshini, Josh and Mishti all came to greet them and hugged both of them….congradulating the newly wedded couple…..

 

A: Josh bhaiya……mein Jiju ke kaan khinchu aab…..he asked grinning…..

 

J: Haan bilkul…..aur Angad neki deni padegi……He said grinning…..Arjun tab tak kaan nahi chodna, jab tak jiju neki nahi denge…..samjhe…..

 

Arjun: Samajh gaya Josh bhaiya….he said and went to Angad and pulled his ears…….Aap meri jiji ka dhyan rakhenge na…..he asked seriously….

 

A: Haan haan saale sahab….bilkul rakhunga…..

 

J: Dekh lo Angad, nahi to hum saab aa jayenge dubara kaan pakadne….he said pulling the other ear……Others including Kripa started chuckling……

 

A: Haan baba….kaan chodo…..dard ho raha hai…..he said making faces….vada karta hun….Kripa ko humesha khush rakhunga……aab to chodo….

 

Arujun: Humari nekki…..he said grinning…..Angad laughed and pulled a bundle of notes and handed it to Arjun…..Arjun grinned and thanked him….he hugged Kripa and Angad and then ran off to his dad…..to tell him all about it……Parth was too shy to go on the stage, so stayed with prakash and his sister…….

 

Josh laughed as he saw Arjun running….Angad grinned at him and then held Kripa's hand in his……Kripa tried to wriggle of her hand, as there were hundreds of people present around them…..Angad caught it more tightly and went and whispered to her…..

 

A: abhi tum officially meri ho gayi ho……so, hath chudane ki koshish bhi mat karna…..Kripa blushed and smiled in her ghunghat……

 

J: Ek dum sahi kaha tumne Angad…..Josh said with a grin, who was still standing near them……After some time, Gayatri asked them to come and have dinner……They were served in the silver plates and asked to feed each other…..Angad happily took a sweet and fed Kripa…..

 

A: Kal sweet sath share karenge…..I promise….he whishpered grinning as he fed her……Kripa blushed as she looked at him……She fed his sweet as well and he lightly bit her finger, grinning…..Kripa looked at him with a frown, but then smiled…….

 

Once they were done, Photographers asked if they could take the pictures of the bride and the groom……Gayatri was unsure as traditionally, Kripa was not allowed to take out her ghoonghat till her muh dikhai rasam……But Dadi came and told that it was all old traditions and how could they miss the opportunity to capture the beautiful bride in the photos for keeping this memory alive for ever……But before that Avantika took Angad and Kripa in the temple and asked Angad to remove the ghunghat from Kripa's head and gift her the jwellery as per tradition…..Kripa's heart was pounding as she felt Angad's hand removing her ghunghat……She looked down shyly…..Angad smiled at her and grinned…..He could not stop him self and stared at her…….She was looking absolutely georgeous……

 

Avantika chuckled at him and shook him…….She indicated him to give her the gift and he grinned at gave it to Kripa….Kripa blushed and took the gift……but still could not look at him…..too shy to do so in front of her mother in law…….Avantika went to her and kissed her and Angad's forehead….and hugged them both…..She too gave Kripa some cash, she had with her…..

 

A: Waise to ye rasam apne ghar mein hota hai….tab tumhe gift dungi…..abhi to bas shagun ke liye diya hai…..she said hugging her once more……She took the kajal from her purse and applied a little behind Kripa's ears……Aab kisi ki bhi najar nahi lagegi…..she said smiling at her…..

 

A: Chalo, aab..….she said going out first to give them a minute together……At that moment Kripa looked up to see Angad staring at her……She held her breathe, as he looked at her…..

 

K: Bahar chale….Ma intazar kar rahi hai……she whishpered…..Angad smiled at her and slowly went near her and kissed her cheeks……she blushed and smiled at him…….

 

A: Meri dulhan duniya ki sabsi pyari dulhan hai…..he whishpered in her ear and led her out…..Kripa blushed and looked down as they walked out….Avantika was waiting for them and went to Kripa and took them out with a smile, seeing the blush on her face….

 

After an hour long photo session…and meeting all the people while many guests game to greet and leave…Gayatri and Avantika, sent Kripa to take some rest….It was around 3 and she was absolutely tired…..Divya had long gone up, as per Avantika's instruction to get a few hours of sleep…..She was sleeping in Arjun's room…..Kripa went up with the girls and sat on the sofa…..relaxed after a long time…..

 

Kanan: You are looking abosolutely gorgeous Kripa……

 

H: Haan aur tumne thik kaha tha……Divya bhabhi ne to wakahi kamal ka work kiya hai iss par….Itni khubsurat ghagra to pehle kabhi nahi dekhi….aur tum par to aur bhi sundar lag rahi hai….she said going to her and hugging her…….

 

Kripa smiled at them shyly….remembering Angad's words……She blushed a little……

 

K: Kanan……jara ma ko bulakar laoogi please……

 

Kanan: Abhi ayi…..she said going out…..

 

After a few minutes Gayatri came in…..She looked at Kripa with sindoor in her head………She thought about Kripa, with sindoor 17 years ago…..She went to her and kissed her forehead and hugged her closing her eyes……That day was the day, their life changed for ever…….and again today was the day, which would change their life once again….Kripa would go away from her…..even though she lived next door, now she was some one else's bride……some one's daughter in law……She had her own responsibilities….She would not be her little girl any more……She blinked back the tears and looked at her……

 

G: Kya baat hai beta…..

 

K: Woh ma, ye kapde change kar ke baithun thodi der……bahot bhari ho raha hai….

 

G: Haan beta….Ja change karle aur thodi der aaram kar…..abhi do ghante hai bidai ko……Bidai ka joda bhi Avantika bhabhi le ayegi abhi…..thodi der mein wahi pehenana hai…..she said touching her cheeks……Khana khaya na tune barabar…..she asked with tears…..

 

Kripa nodded and then hugged her bursting in tears…….Gayatri also could not take it any more……She hugged her tightly….Harshini and Kanan also had tears in their eyes……Surya came in and looked at them…..He could not bear the thought of being away from his daughter….He looked away with tears….Kripa sensed his presence and looked at him……She ran to him and hugged him tearfully…….They heard Dadi and Avantika come in the room……When they saw Surya and Kripa crying, Dadi went to Surya and touched his arms lightly…..Surya looked at her and slowly wiped his tears….He kept a hand on Kripa's shoulder, trying to console her…..Gayatri was also crying sitting on the sofa, looking down…..Avantika went to her and kept the dress she had bought for Kripa aside and hugged Gayatri……

 

D: Surya, Kripa kahin dur thodi na ja rahi hai…..humesha paas hi to rahegi……Aur woh tera bhi to ghar hai na……Tu jab ussase milna chahta hai, aa sakta hai…..Kripa ko bula sakta hai….woh do min mein bhagi bhagi aa jayegi……She said wiping his tears…..Mein janti hun, ke beti ko bida karna kitna kathin hota hai…..shayad mein iska dukh samajh bhi nahi paungi, kyun ki meri koi beti nahi…..par mein ashwasan deti hun, ki Kripa ko hum apni beti banakar rakhenge…..usko kisi cheez ki kami nahi hone denge…..Aur ek baat yaad rakhna, woh tumhari beti hai, aur tumhara haak uspar humesha rahega…….humne use apna mana hai, apne ghar ka hissa banaya hai…….Naye rishton se jaroor bandhi hai woh, par purane rishton ki ganth, ma baap ki jagah ladki ke jeevan mein koi nahi le sakta…..she said touching Kripa's cheeks…...Surya nodded at her and touched her feet….Dadi wiped his eyes….He then looked at Kripa with watery smile and hugging her once left the house……Dadi bought Kripa near and hugged her when she kept looking at closed door with tears…….Ja thoda aaram kar le…..thak gayi hogi tu……..She said sending her to her room……Harshini and Kanan went to Kripa's room……Harshini hugged her with tears as well….She would miss her best friend….Already 2 weeks without her, had got on her nerves……Kripa went and hugged Kanan as well with a little smile…..

 

Avantika gave Gayatri Kripa's bidai dress…….and wiped her tears……

 

N: Gayatri……Tumhare sath sath aaj woh meri bhi beti hui……bas mujhe bhi ma kehne ka hak mangti hun...woh humesha tumhare sath hi rahegi……she said with a smile…..Jab jee chahe ghar aa jana...wada karti hun, wahin aakar rahogi na, to bhi tana nahi marungi….Aur mujhe yakin hai, Angad to adhe time yahin dikhega….she said chuckling…..Gayatri chuckled through tears…..ye bidai ka joda……she said giving it to her……Gayatri slowly touched the dress……and smiled though her tears and nodded……Dadi went to her and kissed her forehead……and hugged her too…..

 

D: Hum niche jate hain….tum bhi aa jana…..mehman saab nikal rahe hain…..tumhare bare mein puch rahe the…..Gayatri nodded at them as they got up and went out….She sighed and went to her room…..she freshened up a little and then went to Kripa's room….Kripa was in the bathroom, so she gave the dress to Kanan and told Harshini to get her ready by 5 am for the bidai……They nodded at her and she went down……

 

Kripa slept for an hour of so as she was tired….. Harshini and Kanan packed her bag with 4-5 clothes as well as night clothes and all the jwellery and cosmetics for next 3-4 days as per Gayatri's request while Kripa was asleep…..Later they woke her up and helped her dress in the ghaghra, Avantika had bought for her……They did light makeup and then helped her with the heavy jwellery she had taken out for some time…….Once done, Kanan pulled down her ghoonghat……Avantika came in with a smile, when she found Kripa ready……

 

A: Chal beta…..niche saab raah dekh rahe hain…..she said going to her…..Kripa nodded and got up with heavy heart...She walked with her down and went to the temple where everyone was waiting for her….Kanan and Harshini came down with her bag and gave it to Prithvi, who told he would take care of it and send it in the car after they go…..Avantika made Kripa stand with Angad…….and Meera bought a thali filled with Kumkum……She asked Kripa to put her hands in it and leave the marks of her fingers on the temple wall……Kripa did as she said……Her hands shivered a little and her eyes filled with tears……..Angad and Kripa then bowed down and took blessings of God and the elders…..Surya hugged Kripa with tears…….Kripa hugged her dad tightly and started crying…….Arjun was in tears too….He went to her and hugged her from back….Kripa turned around and hugged him…….Gayatri, hardened her heart and went to Kripa……

 

G: Chal beta….bidai ka waqt bita ja raha hai….aab jyada der nahi honi chahiye…..she said smiling at her sadly….Kripa nodded and hugged her and then slowly walked out…Kanan, Mishti and Harshini came and hugged her too….Damini blessed her with tears, hugging her and kissing her forehead……Kripa stood at the entrance, where the huge doors were opened fully for her bidai…….. Meera bought rice puffs in a big plate and told her what to do……Kripa nodded and slowly took them in her hands……She throwed the rice puffs, with shivering hand behind her, where Gayatri stood with her sari pallu to hold them…….Gayatri kept remembering the moments they spent together in this house……..how she would run in this house all day through…..Rajashthani ladies were singing traditional bidai songs standing a little away.…..Gayatri had tears in her eyes, as she saw her walking out with Angad…….The doli was waiting outside  at the entrance for her, Divya was helping her sit in…..But Kripa stopped and looked back at her parents and brother and ran to her dad and hugged him tightly…..Surya closed his eyes and let her cry in his arms…..He did not know how he was going to survive without her…..His heart was so heavy……Gayatri closed her eyes as tears kept rolling her cheeks and went to her and pulled her in her arms and hugged her…...When she felt Surya's hands on her she slowly stood back wiping her tears and looking at him, he looked at her and she held Kripa's hand and patted it…..Kripa looked around and saw Arjun standing there looking down as tears rolled down his eyes….She went to him and he looked up…..She kissed his forehead and hugged him tightly…….

 

K: Mama papa ka khayal rakhna….. she said in his ears slowly and looked at him…..Arjun nodded and hugged her again tightly not wanting to let go……Gayatri pulled her from him, while Surya held Arjun's arms patting his arms……Gayatri slowly took her to the doli….

 

No one said a word, everyone had tears in their eyes, looking at her including Angad…..He knew, how hard this must be for her……he could feel her pain……he could see Surya and Gayatri's pain, knew how close they were all together…...Gayatri made her sit inside the doli……She looked at her and kissed her hands, which held her hands tightly in hers……she patted her cold nervous hands….wiping her tears…..Kripa held her hands more tightly not letting it go…..Gayatri shook her head at her and slowly removed her hands and touched her cheeks……standing behind abrubtly…..Kripa looked up at her with tears Gayatri looked at her for a second and then closed her eyes for a second and opened her eyes making herself stronger and slowly took couple of steps back from her..….Kripa looked at her dad and her brother and smiled through her tears……..

 

Angad touched Gayatri and Surya's feet…

 

A: Ma, dekhiye kitna pani beh gaya, he said wiping her tears…..aap ne kuwa bhi nahi khudwaya……aab bas kijiye…..nahi to rajashtha sham tak pani mein dubjayega…..he said chuckling and hugging her….

 

G: Badmash….she said wiping her tears……and chuckling…..

 

Angad smiled at her and then went to hug Surya……

 

A: Papa, I promise mein Kripa ka pura khayal rakhunga…….Surya nodded smiling at him…..This was the first time he had addressed them as ma and papa…..

 

S: Mein janta hun beta…..humesha khush raho…..he said hugging him once again…….

 

Angad then went to Arjun and hugged him…… He wiped his tears and smiled slowly….

 

A: Saale sahab thodi der aaram karne ke baad ghar aa jana, games khelenge sath….he said grinning at him…..Arjun chuckled wiping his tears and nodded and Angad hugged him…..

 

Avantika and Dilip went to Gayatri and Surya and hugged them….Divya and Kartik touched their feet and thanked them….Avantika and Divya sat in the car behind them….…Dadi too went to them and consoled them once again and then joined Avantika and Divya in the car…..After wards Kartik took a coconut and broke it in front of the doli and 8 people lifted the doli……Surya, started going towards the doli, when his legs felt too heavy…..As per the tradition, he and Arjun should accompany the doli till the gate, but he could not move…..So, he whishpered in Prakash's ears to go instead of him with Arjun…….Prakash nodded and patted Arjun's arms and they slowly went forward………Kripa looked at her parents and brother with tears as they started……Her eyes met Surya's and her heart felt like it was breaking in pieces…….Prakash asked Arjun to just stay besides  Kripa and touch the doli, while he went forward and took a side from one of the men.…The barat slowly started going and Arjun looked at Kripa with tears and she touched his hands with hers looking at him……At the gate, when Prakash gave back the side to the person in charge, he held on to Arjun's arms and asked her to let go off Kripa's hands……But Arjun kept looking at her and held on to her more tightly……Prakash slowly forced him to leave hugging him from behind…..Kripa kept looking at him as they left…..Kartik and Dilip went to him and hugged him and asked him to go inside and rest…..Slowly prakash took a very reluctant Arjun back to the door……..As the doli left the front yard…Angad sat on the horse, which was in front of the doli..…Fire crackers once again lit the early morning sky……Other people walked along with doli, even Kanan went with the doli on Gayatri's request.…...After 20 minutes of beautiful traditional songs and dances following the doli, every one reached Rathod house….Avantika and Divya went in to bring aarati thali for welcoming Kripa……Kanan and Netra helped Kripa out of the Doli…..Angad was waiting for her, next to the doli….Once she stood, he went near her and held her hand……They slowly walked towards the steps and stopped ……Aliyah and Anita stood there and grinned at him…..

 

A: Pehle humari neki deni hogi……badmein andar ja sakte ho Angad bhaiya……Angad smiled at them….

 

A: Sau ki note hain mere paas…..chalegi…..he asked grinning at them…..

 

Aliyah: Kanjus……she said grinning….Pure pachas hazar dene padenge……pachis mere, pachis Anita ke…..she grinned…..

 

A: No way……

 

Anita: To yahin khade raho…..hum nahi ane denge……she said grinning…..

 

K: De de Angad…..bahot lalachi ho gayi hai ye donon……mujhese bhi pachas hazar vasool kiya tha inlogon ne…..andar nahi ane diya tab tak……bechari Kripa thaki hui hogi……he said giving him the cash……Angad made faces at them but then grinned at them and handed over cash to them both…..Both thanked him grinning and hugged Kripa welcoming her….Aab grih pravesh ke liye chaliye…..she said holding Kripa's hand and taking her near the front door…..

 

Avantika kept the kalash near the front door and she and Divya together did their aarati…..Avantika asked Kripa to drop the kalash with her right leg and come in……Kripa did as she was told and stepped in with Angad…..She then kept her feet in the kumkum water and walked into the house…….Aliyah and Anita along with Kanan and others throwed rose petals at them both welcoming Kripa in the house…….Angad grinned at Kripa, who was smiling at them……He slowly went near her and held her hand….Kripa looked at him a little strartled……

 

N: Avantika, kitne pyare nishan hai paaon ke…..bahot khushali layegi……Netra said with a smile….looking at the perfect leg mark…..Dadi and Avantika smiled and nodded……

 

Kripa blushed a little…..and looked down….Her eyes still shining with tears…..

 

Dadi asked Avantika to take them to the temple and take blessings of Shrinathji…..Angad and Kripa took blessings and came out of the puja room, Avantika asked Divya to take Kripa to her room and asked them both to take some rest……..Kripa slowly went with Divya……Angad kept looking at her longingly……He wanted to go to her, pull her in his arms and take her to his room……!! But he had no such luck for now….. All the guests also took leave promising to come for the Satyanarayan puja and muh dikhai rasam in the evening……..Kanan went up and told Kripa that she was leaving and would come in the evening function…..Kripa hugged her and thanked her with tears as she left….Divya went to Kripa and wiped her tears with a smile….She then helped Kripa to take out heavy jwellery……Once done, they both fell asleep after few minutes…..

 

K: Kakisa mein bhi chalti hun……Nishant wait kar rahe honge….Kanan went to Avantika…

 

A: Beta akele mat ja, abhi bahar andhera hai….she said concerned….

 

Kartik: Kanan bhabhi, mein chod ata hun aapko….ma mein abhi aya…

 

A: Thik hai beta…..sham ko milte hain Kanan…she said smiling at her…..Kartik then dropped her near the front door and took leave…..Kanan thanked Kartik, and walked inside………

 

Kartik was back in 5 minutes and went to guest room as Kripa was in his room with Divya……Everyone was tired after a long day and night…..so everyone went to the room to take some rest and get ready for the evening function..…...Avantika went to Divya's room and found them both fast asleep…..she smiled with satisfaction and closed the door behind them……She went to her room, where Dilip was already fast asleep…..

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lovely post... very detailed description :-)

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Hey awsome part.. was so sad.. but finally they are married..

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aww such a beautiful part...n all the rasams were very detailed...i really felt like i was physically there at their wedding n back of my head i kept thinking..gosh they wld be dead tired...wonderful part n beautiful wedding...plz continue soon! :)

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