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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 61)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:54am | IP Logged
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Thanks for all the comments...!! Sorry for the late post, I was busy with the guests...So, here is the next double update with two parts...
 
 

PART -33

 

Next day early morning, Gayatri told Kripa and Arjun to quickly take bath and get ready as their guests would arrive soon…….

 

After few minutes the door opened and Angad came in with big bags……Kripa frowned at him and the bags and looked behind him and her eyes narrowed and she ran out…..

 

K: Prithvi Harhsini…..tum log…..yahan….she said going to them laughing hugging him….

 

H: Teri 6 din mein shadi hai, aur hum nahi ayenge…..she said grinning…..hugging her again….Its so nice to see you…..I was missing you so much…..she said looking at her….Are ye chot kaise lagi….she said looking at her wrist….

 

K: Kuch nahi chudiyan lag gayi….She said smiling and hugging Prithvi….

 

P: Bahot khush lag rahi ho…..India ka pani suit karta hai tumpe…..

 

A: Hi Prithvi bhaiya….Arjun came to Prithvi grinning and hugged him….Hi Harshini jiji bolun ya bhabhi? He asked confused….

 

Kripa laughed……

 

K: chal bhabhi bol…

 

H: Hey no way….jiji….Prithvi ko jiju bol de….

 

P: Are….aise kaise….woh to jis din paida hua tha tab se bhaiya kehta aya hai….So, no way….Harshini made faces at him…..

 

A: Sorry Harshini bhabhi…..But Prithvi bhaiya has a valid point….Harshini looked at him frowning….

 

Kripa and Angad laughed……

 

P: Isse US mein to ye sawal nahi aya…..mujhe as usual bhaiya keh raha tha aur Harshini ko jiji….achanak…..

Kripa laughed….

 

A: Woh mujhe yaad nahi rehta tha ki aap donon ki shadi ho gayi…..aab sath dekha to puch liya….

 

Angad: Wahan adhe time to doston ke ghar mein jakar baithta tha…..to yaad kaise rahega….he said chuckling….Arjun grinned……

 

P: Aunty Uncle kahan hai?

 

K: Niche puja room mein hain….

 

H: Tumhara ghar to bahot hi sundar hai Kripa…..This is so wonderful….

 

Kripa chuckled….

 

K: Andar to chal…..Tum logon ne bataya nahi….tum log aaj aa rahe ho…

 

P: Angad ka idea tha….tumhe surprise dene ka….Aunty Uncle to jante the…..he said grinning….

 

Kripa looked at Angad and smiled….

 

K: Mishti nahi ayi….?

 

H: Ayi thi….Josh ko Mumbai mein dekhte hi……age nikli hi nahi….she said chuckling….

 

P: Woh saab aur mama papa ayenge 4 din baad…..Mumbai mein ruke hain….Harshini ke parents direct

ayenge….Hum donon ne socha ki ladki walon ki taraf se bhi koi hone chahiye na….to uncle aunty ka haat batane chale aye…..he said chuckling….

 

A: Prithvi….tum log aram karo….mujhe jana hoga…..Kripa frowned at him….

 

K: Nashta to karlo….

 

A: Nahi Kripa, aaj bahot jaroori meeting hai, aur papa bhi nahi ja sakte….Kartik ko aaj company mein kaam hai……Sham ko yahin aunga, Khane…..bye Prithvi, sorry for rushing, par sham ko milte hai jaroor….bye Harshini….They said bye and he ran out…..

 

Arjun: Jiju, ek min…..mujhe bhi ana hai……Meri kal game ki cd wahin reh gayi hai…..he said running behind him…..

 

Prtithvi and Harshini grinned at him…..

 

H: Tumne to kaha ki Angad ka ghar baju mein hi hain na…..

 

K: Haan pados wala….she said chuckling….

 

H: Phir ye Arjun khud badmein bhi ja sakta tha na….

 

K: Are use to wahan jane ka sirf bahana chahiye……subah hote hi bhagta hai…..do char ladoo khaye bina, dadi ke chain nahi milta….

 

P: Laddo khane ka maan to mera bhi ho raha hai…..he said chuckling….

 

Kripa chuckled….

 

K: Sorry, philhal no luck for it…..Tum dono jake naha lo…..mein breakfast karti hun….

 

Kripa showed them the spare room and Prithvi took some bags inside…..Harshini was delighted to see the room……

 

Gayatri and Surya came up after some time…..

 

G: So kaise laga surprise….she asked looking at couple of bags still lying in the living room.….

Kripa laughed and hugged her…….

 

G: Waise, Kanan bhi ayi hain…..niche hain….Ashok bhaisahab ke sath….she said smiling….

 

K: Sach…..Aaj to khabar mein lungi uski…..Engagement ke din se gayab ho gayi…..

 

Kanan: Are baba shikayat aunty se kyun kar rahi ho….mujh se karo….

 

K: Tum se kar rahi hun….she said chuckling….Kanan laughed and hugged her…..

 

Kanan: Actually papa ki tabiyat thik nahi thi….sugar badh gayi thi….engament ke din, chupke se do ladoo kha liye the…..usika natija hai….she said angrily….

 

Ashok laughed from behind….

A: Are beta…..4 mahinon mein paheli baar khaya hai….

 

Kanan: Aapko pata hai, ki apko pura mana kiya hai….she said warning him….

 

A: Sorry…..he said holding his ears….Promise shadi tak no sweet….Kripa beti ki shadi ka sweet to….

 

Kanan: Bilkul nahi…..nahi to raat ko do glass karela ka juice pilaungi…..she said looking at him….Ashok laughed and looked at Surya….

 

A: Bhai ye ajeeb musibat ho gayi…..do jasus kum the, jo tesri aa gayi…..Surya laughed……

 

S: Ashok nashta karke jana…..

 

A: Nahi bhai…..mera diet bahot strict hai….aur dietian ke samne rules todun to….he said chuckling….mein to Kanan ko drop karne aya tha….Nishant hospital mein busy tha….to socha mein hi drop kardun….tumse bhi nahi mila…..puchna tha ki saab thik chal raha hai ki nahi….Acha beta Kanan, sham ko Nishant pick kar lega….

 

Kanan: Papa….dhyan se jana…..

 

A: chinta mat kar…..enjoy yourself…..Bye Kripa beta….ghar ana time milne par….

 

K: Ji kakasa….she said smiling…..

 

Kanan: Kripa shopping ho gayi?

 

K: Haan almost…..

 

G: Kahan almost beta…..gin gin ke kapde liye hain issne….she said shaking her head….pagal ladki…..Tu hi samjha isse Kanan….Khud ki shadi mein bhi itne kum kapde….Kanan laughed….

 

K: Ma….mein kya karungi itne bhari sadiyan lekar…..she said looking at her….

 

Kanan: Kripa India me iske bahot use honge…..haan tu US mein settle hui hoti to alag baat thi…..yahan tyohar, mandir ke programs, shadiyan….pure saal chalu rehte hain…..Aaap chinta mat kariye kakisa, mein aaj isse le jati hun….Kripa meine jahan tere liye woh lehenga liya tha na, wahan bahot ache kapde milte hain…..Wahan chalte hain aaj…..Kripa sighed and nodded and Gayatri thanked Kanan….

 

K: Ma mein nashta banati hun…..she said going behind her….

 

G: Na beta…..aab se tu kitchen mein pair nahi rakhegi…..6 din mein shadi hai…..aab mein sambhal lungi…..

 

K: Mom….she said rolling her eyes….please….hato….aap baitho….

 

Kanan: Haan kakisa hum donon milkar bana lenge…..

 

Gayatri at last left them to it as she knew they won't be leaving…..

 

G: Mein jara niche jakar ati hun……Woh mali aya hai…..uski biwi ko yahan kaam par rakha hai, ghar mein.…..jhadu pocha aur bartan ke liye…..Baat karke ati hun…...Kripa nodded, this was a new concept for her…..In US they always did the cleaning themselves…..but here…..she just shrugged and Gayatri chuckled at her expression and was off…..

 

Harshini came out grinning at Kripa….

 

K: Kanan, ye meri saab se achi dost Harshini hai…..mere sath college mein thi….Harshini Kanan…..

 

Kanan: Hi Harshini…..Kripa bahot yaad karti thi tumhari tour mein……she said chuckling….

 

H: Hi…..she chuckled….waise tumhare bare mein bhi kafi suna hai meine inse…..shadi ke photos aur videos bhi dekhe……

 

K: Harshini, le baith khane….bhook lagi hogi na….

 

Harshini took the plate and started eating, without hesitation……

 

H: Kripa mujhe khane ke baad ghar dikha na….Kripa nodded…..

 

Kanan: Bahot sundar hai na ghar……170 saal purana ghar hai………

 

H: Baapre…..she looked around….lagta hi nahi….

 

K: Nahi ye unit baad mein aad kiya hai….Baki ka ghar purana hai…..

 

H: Tabhi mein sochun, ye saab itna naya aur modern kyun lag raha hai…..I hope yahan laundry ke liye washing machines hai…..she said looking at Kripa worriedly….

 

Kripa chuckled…..She knew harshini hated washing clothes by hand, as she had to do it in her uncles place when she came to visit them in India….

 

K: Don't worry, mom dad ke room mein, attached laundry room bhi hai…..Washer dryer dono hai….aur niche bhi hai….she said chuckling….

 

H: Thank God for small favours…..she said grinning…..

 

K: Bas dish washer ki kami hai….she said sighing….

 

Kanan: Woh kisliye chahiye…..aunty ne abhi to kaha, jadu pocha aur bartan ke liye ek aurat ko rakha hai…..she said chuckling….India mein man power bahot hai…..Electronics ki jaroorat nahi….aur apne sath inlogon ko bhi kaam mil jata hai….isi bahanane…..2 in one fayda hai…..kyun….she said grinning….

 

H: Right….Kanan…..I swear……Kitna acha facility hain na yahan…..saman ghar ata hai, dudh wala ata hai…..itne ache restaurants hai…..kam karne log mil jate hain….aur aisa ghar ho to, janat hi hai….she said grinning at Kripa who laughed….

 

K: Ye Prithvi ko gaye kitna time ho gaya hai….Abhi tak nahi aya?

 

Kanan: Prithvi?

 

H: My other half…..she said chuckling to Kanan…..Woh toh mere se bhi jyada time lagata hai nahane mein…...tumlog baith jao khane……lunch time tak pahunch jayega…..

 

Kripa rolled her eyes….

 

A: Jiji…..Arjun came running…..he showed the box…..ye lijiye….dadi ne bheje hain….

 

Kripa grinned and took the box…..she took some sweets and gave it Harshini and Kanan….

 

Arjun picked one and kept in the mouth….

 

K: Chal Arjun, nashta kar le….

 

A: Nahi mein jiju ke sath kar ke aya hun…..

 

H: Yahan to time nahi hai bolke bhag gaye jiju……phir

 

A: Wahan bhi bhag rahe the…..dadi ne kaan khinche…..he said chuckling…..Prithvi bhaiya kahan hai…..mujhe unke sath game khelna hai….

 

P: You are on Arjun…..bas thoda nashta karne de….bhook se pet mein chuhe daud rahe hain…..

 

A: Ok Prithvi bhaiya…..mere room mein aa jana….

 

A: Kanan bhabhi…..Nishant bhaiya ke papa ne ate waqt dadi ke do ladoo lane ke liye kaha…..He said walking to his room….

 

Kanan rolled her eyes and Kripa chuckled…..

P: Lagta hai mera luck bahot acha hai…..dekha ladoo khane ka maan hua….ladoo chal kar aa gaye mere paas…..he said grinning at Kripa….

 

H: Ai Arjun, ruk……yahan aa…..she called him, Arjun stopped and came back to her….Harshini then held his arms…..Chal aab mujhe woh secret bata, jo tu aur tere Prithvi bhaiya ne mujhe aaj tak nahi bataya…..

 

A: Kaunsi secret….he asked frowning….

 

H: Woh mere aur Prithvi ke engagement ke din jo tu keh raha tha…..dekh mujhe pata hai, kuch to hai…...nahi bataya na, to aaj pitai karungi….

 

Arjun grinned…..and looked at Prithvi and raised his eye brow…..he shook his head and Arjun shrugged….

 

A: Sorry….he said looking at Harshini…..

 

H: Arjun…..Pritvhi ki aur mat dekho……batao…..

 

K: Batade Arjun, waise bhi aab kya farak padta hai…..Kripa said chuckling…..Harshini frowned and looked at her…..

 

H: Tujhe pata tha?

 

K: Hmmm….Bola na Arjun ke muh mein kuch nahi rehta…..she said chuckling…..

 

Arjun shrugged and told her…..Woh pichle saal aap woh Prithvi bhaiya ko propose karne ka soch rahi thi na, valentines day par….uss time prithvi bhaiya na jaan bujh kar sheher se bahar chale gaye the…..he said grinning…..Harshini looked at him open mouthed….and here she had been sad about it all the time…..she looked at Prithvi with wide eyes……and he just held his ears with his hands bitting his toungue, looking at Kripa and Arjun angrily…..Kripa grinned at him and patted his back and chuckled…..

 

Harshini started laughing, looking at Prithvi's expression…..Prithvi looked at her surprised…..

 

H: Tumhe kya laga ki mein ghussa ho jaungi…….she said chuckling….pata tha mujhe, ki tum mujh se dur bhag rahe ho….par ye bhi pata tha, ki ek na ek din mein tumhe apne jaal mein phasa hi dungi…..she said winking……Prithvi looked at her for a few minutes and shook his head and Kripa started laughing…….

 

K: Jis din tum gaye na prithvi, ye ayi thi mere paas, tumhe galiyan dene……ek ghanta galiyan di aur tumhe darpok bhi kaha…..aur kaha ki jitna chahe bhag le ye Prithvi, par ek na ek din mere paas hi ayega……she said hugging Harshini…..Arjun grinned and turned around and left the room…..Prithvi made faces at Harshini, but she chuckled and hugged him……Harshini saw Kanan standing there with a smile and introduced her to her husband…..

 

H: Kanan my Hubby dear Prithvi, aur prithvi Kanan…..

 

P: hi….

 

Kanan: Love marriage?

 

H: You can say so…..bahot papad belne pade inhe patane mein…..she said chuckling….looking up at Prithvi…..

 

Kanan: Don't worry…you are not alone…..mera bhi kuch aise hi halat thi…..I had to get my leg broken, tab jake mein dikhi Nishant ko…..Kripa chuckled…..

 

H: This men….sachmein….Prithvi hit her shoulder, taking a sweet from the box…..Harshini chuckled…..Vaise Kripa bahot lucky hai….jis din se dekha, usdin se piche pad gaye Angad jiju..….Yahan tak ki dusare hi din US bhi pahunch gaye…..she said chuckling….Kripa blushed and grinned….

 

Kanan: You are right Harshini….lucky girly…..shopping ke liye ana hai? Gayatri kakisa bol rahi thi, ki ye ladki shopping mein kanjusi kar rahi hai…..So, unhone mujhe appoint kiya hai….

 

H: You bet….mujhe bhi shopping karni hai….Tum mat anna prithvi…..ghar mein Arjun ke sath games khelna…..par credit card dena bhulna nahi….she said smiling at him…..

 

P: Mujhe shauk bhi nahi tumhare sath shopping karne mein….Credit card ka limit dekhna…..abhi Mishti ki shadi ki shopping bhi baki hai…..he said glaring at her….Harshini made a face at him and he glared at her….

Kripa chuckled….

 

K: Prithvi abhi abhi to shadi hui hai, abhi se dhamki? She said looking at him smiling….

 

P: Pucho mat yaar…..tumhari dost to mujhe kangal karke chodegi…..Jab dekho shopping….mera room ka naksha hi badal diya ek hafte mein….Jis din se tum gayi ho….bor ho rahi hun,  keh kar shopping malls ghum rahi hai….aur bas….aath das shopping bags lekar hazir….

 

Harshini grinned at him…..

 

H: Tumhare room ki halat dekhi thi….saans lena mushkil tha……any ways, aab room ke liye nahi, thode kapde lene hai mujhe….

 

P: Aur kapde…..tumhara to dimak kharab ho gaya hai….kya karogi itne kapdon ka…..he asked frowning….

 

H: Haay….tum hi to tareef karte rahte ho…..aur kehte ho yeh saree achi lagti hai mujhpe…..yeh dreee sexy hai dikhti hai…..Tumhare liye to lekar aakar pehenti hun…..she said grinning…..Prithvi turned red…

 

P: Tum badi besharam hoti ja rahi ho…..Pata nahi kisssase pala pada…..

 

H: Thik hai……mere sath nahi rehna hai na…..to tumhari manokamana puri hui…...aaj se 7 din tak, yani Kripa ke shadi tak, tum room mein akele raho….mein Kripa ke kamre mein shift hoti hun….I hope you will be very happy alone….she said smiling….Prithvi glared at her and she chuckled…..Kripa you don't mind…..right….

 

K: No problem Harshu…..Bachelor party….By the way Kanan don't mind these two…..yeh to aise hi chalu rehta hai…..Kanan chuckled and Harshini grinned at them….

 

P: Kripa…..tumse bahot naraj hun vaise…..yaar yahan aakar ek baar bhi baat nahi kiya tumne phone par….

Kripa smiled…..

 

K: Prithvi….yahan ate hi saab itni jaldi tair ho gaya ki mera to dimak ghum raha hai……Roj shopping…..shadi ki ye tayari….woh taiyari….

 

Prithvi smiled….

 

Kanan: I swear….mein bhi pareshan ho gayi thi, jab trip se ghar ayi, she said chuckling……

 

H: Mujhe to shopping karne mein bada majja ata hai……she said chuckling at prithvi as he scowled….

P: Aunty uncle aye nahi?

 

K: Aye the….par phir niche gaye hain…..pata nahi itni der kahan laga di……

 

They all finished their breakfast and cleaned the table quickly…..After a few minutes Surya and Gayatri came in….Prithvi and Harshini went and touched her feet…..

 

S: Khush raho beta…..safar kaisa raha……

 

P: Acha tha uncle…..aap ka paun kaisa hai…..?

 

S: Aab thik hai….nashta kiya?

 

H: Haan uncle……abb hum tino shopping ja rahe hain….I mean Kripa, Kanan aur mein…..

 

S: Beta thoda aram to kar lo…..abhi abhi to safar se ayi ho….

 

H: Nahi uncle mein bilkul thik hun…..She said grinning….

 

Gayatri chuckled, knowing Harshini very well…..

 

G: Jao….jake aao…..

 

Kanan took them to 3-4 wonderful shops, which were small but had very good options…..made Kripa shop, till she just closed her eyes and said she was not going to see any more…..Harshini too bought 2-3 dresses….They had lunch in one of typical rajasthani hotels and then went to shop again, on Harshini and Kanan's insistence…..Kripa was just scowling by the time they reached home at 5……

 

They reached the house with atleast 20-25 bags….and were not able to lift….Kripa rolled her eyes at them….and then went in and requested manager, to send in the bags….Kanan and Harshini grinned at her and went up…..Gayatri opened the door and was surprised to see no shopping bags….

 

G: Pura din bahar the…..aur kuch nahi kharida…..Kripa scowled and rolled her eyes…..running to her room…..She was dead tired…..Isse kya hua….

 

Harshini and Kanan grinned…..

 

P: Aunty…..mujhe lagta hai dukan yahin aa raha hai….woh dekhiye…..he showed couple of persons coming to them with bags….Gayatri chuckled and let them in…..She thanked the people and closed the door….Please harshini…..kaho ye saab tumhare nahi hain…he said looking at the bags with a frown…..Everyone chuckled at him….

 

Kanan: Don't worry Prithvi…Harshini ne to bas do hi liye hai…..Kripa ke hain ye……Baap re kakisa….Kitna jatan karna pada usse kapde lene ke liye….yeh hum hi jante hain….Gayatri chuckled……

 

G: Janti hun….isiliye to kaha tumhe……Kripa came out while Gayatri was seeing what they bought……

Kripa sat there with eyes closed…..

 

K: Mom…..isske baad please 3-4 saal tak kuch lene ke liye mat kehna…..nahi to ye sara, kisi ashram me dekar aungi pehle…..she said putting her head back…..Acha karte ho prithvi iske sath nahi jate…..ye to pura pagal kardeti hai….aur uspar yeh aur ek….Uncle sach kehte hain….tum to pareshan kar deti ho…..Mom no more shoping….I am done for life….she said glaring at her….

 

G: Pagal ladki….

 

Kanan: Acha kiya, Avantika kaki ne jo mujhe bhej diya yahan aaj, Kripa ke shopping ke liye…..she said winking at Kripa….

 

K: Ma ne bheja? She asked frowning….

 

G: Gayatri chuckled…..haan humari to tum sun nahi rahi thi…..beta shadi mein yahan aisa hi rivaaj hai…..gehne aur kapde khub lete hain….aur tum 7-8 lekar bas keh rahi thi……aab itne logon mein acha nahi lagta, itne bade ghar ki beti kuch na le…..she said winking at her and patting her cheeks…..Kripa made a face and closed her eyes….

 

H: Haan puri pagal hai….aunty….

 

Kanan: Kripa…..humhari shadi hai…..meine 40 dresses liye the…..

 

K: Jhoot mat bol….uncle bol rahe the, ki tu Nishant bhaiya ki tarah hi hai…..shopping ke liye jane ko kehte hai, to mana kardeti ho…..

 

Kanan: Woh to tumhare jaise, shadi ki shopping karke bor ho gayi thi…..isiliye…..shadi mein to khub shopping ki….she said chuckling…..

 

K: God….itne work ke kapde, pehenne ke liye bhi time nahi milega…..she said rolling her eyes……

 

P: You are right…..itne kapdon ka akhir karenge kya….he said rolling….

 

Gayatri chuckled at them…..

 

G:  Kanan, bahot ache hain kapde…..thank you so much beta…Ye donon ko le jane ke liye…..Ek kaam kar, Nishant ko yahin khane par bula le……yahan khana khake jana….

 

Kanan: Ji aunty…..she said calling Nishant on his mobile…

 

K: Ma papa kahan hai….aur Arjun….

 

G: Beta Angad aya tha….papa ko physio therapist ke pass le gaya…..hum to bhool hi gaye the….par usne appointment lekar rakha tha…..abhi thodi der pehle hi gaye….Arjun ko Avantika bhabhi le gayi hain….Thodi der mein aa jayenge…..Chalo Kanan, Kripa ke room mein fresh hokar aao…..tu bhi ja harshini…..mein chai laga deti hun…..she said going to kitchen…..

 

P: Kripa, tumhare books unhone bhej diye do din pehle…….4-5 din ke andar mil jayenge….

 

K: Thanks Prithvi……..she said still her eyes closed….

 

Prithvi chuckled and she opened her eyes….

 

K: Kya hua….

 

P: Kuch nahi…..Harshini ke sath jakar jo shopping ka experience tumhe mila na, uska assar dekh raha hun…..my God…..yahan to puri dukan dikh rahi hai….

 

K: Sale par lagana hai, US mein….I am all for it…..she said grinning….

 

P: Na baba…..Ghar mein pehle hi jagah nahi hai…..Yahan tumhe koi problem nahi hai…..do do ghar hai aju baju….woh bhi itne bade…..he said chuckling….

 

K: Tumhe chooti mil gayi itni jaldi office se….?

 

P: Na…..unpaid leave liya hai ek mahine ka…..he said chuckling….Kripa smiled…..

 

K: Josh ke ghar gaye the?

 

P: Nahi…..hum direct aa gaye…..Phir se saman utaro dalo….abhi tumhari shadi ke baad mein aur Harshini, Rajashthan aur Agra dekhenge ek haft eke liye, phir Mumbai jayenge…..badmein Harshini ke chacha se milkar wapas jayenge…..

 

K: Vow...Good…..Mere Mark Sheets aur Certificates le aye ho na…..?

 

P: Haan baba le aya hun…..baad mein nikalunga…..Harshini ne tumhare liye kuch cosmetics aur pata nahi…..kuch aur bhi liya hai….Kripa frowned at him…..Prithvi raised his hand….I am not in it….

 

K: Yeh ladki bhi na…..she said shaking her head…..

 

Harshini and Kanan soon joined them and they all had tea…..by the time they kept their cups in the kitchen, Angad and Surya were back…..

 

A: Vow…..ye saab kya hai….he said chuckling….

 

Kanan: Tumhare hone wali dulhan ki shadi ki taiyari…..

 

Angad and Surya chuckled…..

 

S: Dilip bata raha tha, ki Avantika bhabhi shikayat kar rahi thi, ki Kripa ne shopping ki hi nahi….Kripa rolled her eyes and sighed…..Angad grinned at her, and she shook her head…..

 

G: Kripa, saans ki shikayat shadi se pehle hi ane lagi hai……aisa nahi chalega…..Mein ummed karti hun, ki aise shikayat ka mauka nahi dogi phir hume….she said pulling her cheeks tightly….frowning at her…

 

K: Ma….she said putting a hand on her cheeks….Her cheeks were red…..and she rubbed it looking at her angrily…..Shadi ke baad achar dalna sare dresses lekar…..aise kapde dal kar roj thodi na pura din baith paungi…..It is a complete waste…..

 

S: Beta, yahan ke thode rivaaj hai, jo manane padte hain……He said hugging her and understanding her point….Kripa made a face….

 

K: Khair….shopping to ho gayi na aab….aap bataiye….doctor ne kya kaha?

 

S: Sab thik hai…..koi problem nahi……

 

A: Jhoot kyun bol rahe ho kakasa? Angad asked frowning at him…..Kakisa, doctor ne kaha, ki abhi inke joints pehle jaise majboot nahi hue…..Unhe arram karna jaroori hai…..pairon par jyada der khade hone se, sujan aa gayi hai….aur akad gaya hai….roj exercise aur regular physio thearapy chalu rakhna padega….aur driving to bilkul nahi thode dinon ke liye…..he said looking at Gayatri….Gayatri frowned and looked at him…and Kripa also looked at him concerned…..Surya laughed at them, kissing Kripa's head…..

 

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Part – 34

 

In this last 8-10 days, they have been so busy, that they had carelessly forgotten about his recent operation…..Mein roj aunga aur le jaunga apko….

 

S: Beta tumhari shadi hai….tum kahin nahi jaooge…..mein dhyan rakhunga…..mein driver hire kar lunga….thik hai…

 

P: Angad, mujhe kal sath le jao….abhi 8-10 din to hun na yahan….tab tak le jaunga…..phir tum le jana…..

 

A: Ok Prithvi…..Kakisa, ye raha, kakasa ke doctor ke priscription……

 

G: Thanks beta…..tum nahi le jate na, to yeh to baithe hi rehta…..she said looking angrily at Surya……

Surya went to Gayatri and grinned…..He kept a hand on her shoulder….

 

S: Maaf kar do bhagyawan….thoda busy ho gaya tha….abb dhyan rakhunga….Gayatri just shook her head and went to the kitchen….Surya sighed looking at her….Angad, aaj tumhe maar padegi….kakisa ko saab batani ki jaroorat kyat hi….

 

Kanan: Kakasa….Angad ne bilkul thik kiya……laparwahi kabhi kabhi bahot problem mein dalta hai….she said looking at him……

 

H: Bilkul sahi kaha Kanan…..badmein agar jyada dard shuru ho gaya to….Uncle apko dhyan dena chahiye….

 

P: Haan, abhi kaam ki tension chodiye…hum sab dekhlenge…..aap sirf order kariye…..sehed ka pehla shyan dijiye….

 

K: Waise, hum bhi ladki walon ki taraf se hai….mein aur Nishant….papa mama, barat ke sath aa rahe hain….she said laughing…..

 

S: Haan…..aab saab aa gaye ho, to tum log sambhal lo….Angad, tum kis taraf se ho…..he asked chuckling…..

 

H: Jiju……yahin rehna…..sirf shadi ke din, ghar jana…..she said winking at Kripa, who glared at her frowning….

 

A: Thik hai Harshini…..mein to ghar jamai banane ke liye bhi taiyar tha….waise….he said grinning at Surya…..

 

Everyone chuckled as Kripa shook her head at him smiling and went to kitchen to help her mom……

 

All of them helped Gayatri prepare the dinner by doing some or other thing and within an hour, dinner was served…..

 

S: Beta, Nishant nahi aya abb tak?

 

Kanan: Pata nahi Kakasa, koi patients honge hospital mein…..Thodi der mein aa jayenge…..

 

Arjun came in with 5-6 bags grinning at everyone, who were looking at him…..

 

A: Baki Avantika Kaki la rahi hai….

 

G: Hai kya isme….

 

A: Woh kapde hain…..4 mere liye….baki jiji aur aapke liye….Kripa closed her eyes and kept her head on Gayatri's shoulder….

 

K: Not again mom…...

 

Avantika came in with 8-10 bags and smiled at everyone…..

 

A: Gayatri….yahan pura shadi ka mahol lag raha hain….she said grinning and looking at the shopping bags and so many people….

 

G: Bhabhi ek kaam kijiye….ghar mein khana bana hai, woh yahin le aiye…..sath khate hai…..Nishant bhi aa raha hai…..

 

A: Thik hai…..Ramu ko yahan bhejne ke liye kehti hun….

 

G: Ja Arjun, tu hi bula la……Arjun ran out of the door…..

 

K: Ma…..aur kya le ayi aap…..kanan ko bhi bheja, shopping ke liye….wahan kumse kum 16-17 dresses liye meine…..Avantika laughed….

 

A: Meine bhi liye…..Divya ki choice hai waisee……she said keeping the bags down….

 

K: Ma, ye mere dost Harshini aur Prithvi….

 

H: Namaste aunty…..acha kiya aap ne bhi thodi shopping kar li….Kripa to bahot nakhre dikhati hai….she said frowning at her….

 

Kripa rolled her eyes….

 

Kanan: Divya bhabhi kya kar rahi hai kakisa?

 

A: Bus, subah ma ke yahan hokar ayi thi to dopahar ko arram karne ke liye kaha mein…..

 

Kanan: Uski tabiyat thik hai na….

 

A: Haan beta bilkul thik hai….

 

Surya, prithvi and Angad were out side talking…..while Gayatri arranged the prepared dishes on the counter….

 

N: Gayatri…..hum log buffe karenge…..parosne ka jhanjhat hi nahi…..

 

G: Thik hai bhabhi…. Kripa….Tum jakar jara, sara saman andar rakh do….room mein please….Kripa, Kanan and Harshini went and quickly cleared the table…..

Soon every one came….Ramu along with two more servants bought and kept the dishes he prepared and soon everyone started eating…..Dadi looked through Kripa's dresses and was delighted and satisfied……Divya and Kartik too joined them and all had  a good time….

 

Next day, early morning they all got ready by 5.30 and were in the temple soon…..They did the puja there with all family member…..Many people in the temple, recognized Surya and were delighted to get to know that he has returned for good……Surya was surprised, that people still rememembered him and were happy to see him back….

 

Avantika and Gayatri along with Angad, went to complete few errands, while Dilip and Kartik went to office….Surya with others returned home...Dadi walked home alone, telling Divya to enjoy some time with Harshini and Kripa…..

 

They went up, while Surya, talked to the decorators, who came to start the work…..Prithvi and Arjun stayed with him….

 

Divya, Harshini and Kripa went up and had some snacks…..

 

D: Kripa, ma tumhe yaad kar rahi thi…..mere sath ghar chalogi? She asked a little hesitantly….

 

K: Haan bhabhi…..bilkul chalungi….Harshu, meine Divya ke ma ko tumhare liye wall hanging banane ke liye kaha hai……tum unki haath ki bunai dekhogi na to chaunk jaogi….

 

H: Phir to mein bhi chalungi bhabhi……

 

Divya looked at Kripa, hesitating a little….Kripa looked at her and understood why she was hesitating….

 

K: Are bhabhi…..Harshini ke chacha bhi gaon mein rehte hain……Do chote chote kamre ke makan mein….post mein kaam karte hain……Harshini, ek ek mahina unke sath jakar rehti hain……Use koi problem nahi hogi……She said smiling…..Divya smiled…

 

D: Thik hai Kripa…..mein sham ko ati hun….phir chalte hain……Mein chalti hun aab…..Thoda kaam baki hai ghar mein….

 

In the afternoon Kripa, Harshini, Prithvi, Surya, Arjun and Gayatri had their lunch together, talking about the marriage…..

 

When Surya and Gayatri went to their room to rest, Gayatri hesitated to talk to him….but then went to him and sat down….

 

G: Ji, mein soch rahi thi ki taya tayi ko bhi nyota de aun…..she said looking at him…..Surya smiled at her….

 

S: Thik hai Gayatri, tumhe dena ho to sham ko chalte hain, sath mein….itna kyun jhijhak rahi ho…..Jo bhi ho unhone tumhe 10-12 saal pala hai…..Agar tumhe bulana hai to jarur bulayenge…Akhir itne saalon baad kaise gile aur kaise shikwe...He said holding her hand.…..Gayatri smiled and sighed….

 

In the evening Divya came to pick Kripa and Harshini……They reached her parent's house in 10 minutes…..Their house was very small, with small hall, kitchen and a bedroom…..There was a small fence around the house….But everything was very neat and clean….The art work made the house look beautiful though…..Harshini was delighted to see the house…..

 

H: Bhabhi ye to bahot acha hai….aur kitna sundar painting kiya hai in diwaron par….she said grinning….Her mom came out with a smile when she saw them coming….

 

Divya's mom: Aao beta….she said Kripa….with a smile….andar aao….

 

K: Kakisa, aap ne ghar bahot acha sajaya hai…..she said looking around the house……two wodden small tradiotional sofas were in the corner….there was a small wase and a big wall hanging….which looked wonderful…..

 

Divya's mom smiled….Yeh to Damadji ne karvaya…..shadi ke waqt….paint karvaya aur thoda furniture bhi le aye…..nahi to itna saab….

 

K: Kakisa…..woh to aapke bte hain…..to woh to karenge hi na…..Aab dekhiye na, Angad bhi to char mahine se papa ki madad kar raha hai…..she said grinning….Divya's mother laughed and touched her head…..Kakisa yeh meri dost Harshini hai….kal hi ayi hai, US se…..

 

Divya's Mom: Aao beta…..Baitho….she said asking them to sit…..Kripa beta, woh tumne banane ke liye kaha tha, woh bana diya….to socha tumhe de dun….aur tum ek baar bhi ghar nahi ayi to bula liya…..

 

K: Bahot acha kiya kakisa…..nahi to itna sundar ghar kaise dekhne ko milta…

 

H: Haan aunty…..sach bahot acha hai….aur yeh paintings aur ye wall hanging….ye furniture…saab bahot acha lag raha hai…..aur ye chota sa, gudiyan ka makkan lag raha hai….mere bas mein hota na to yahin reh jaun…..khilonon ke sath khelte….she said grinning….Kripa laughed at her….

 

K: Kakisa, isike liye kaha tha meine…..apko banane ke liye wall hanging……Isse bhi aise kaam bahot ache lagte hain….Ye gujrat ki hai….jab bhi India se ati…..kuch na kuch le ati thi….

 

Divya's mom smiled…..Mein chai banaun…..she asked not knowing what they will eat….

 

K: Kakisa, Angad aap ke roti sabji ki badi tareef karta hai…..ho to wahi khiladijiye na….chai to achi nahi lagti jyada…..

 

Divya's mom chuckled….Abhi bana deti hun…..Divya sabji kaat ke de na….

 

H: aunty laiye…..mein kat ke deti hun…..

 

Divya's mom: Are nahi beta, tum to mehman ho….tum kaise….

 

H: Are, to kya hua, laiye…she said going behind her…..Divya took Kripa to bedroom and took out couple of things from her mom's cubboard….

 

D: Kripa….ye Harshini ke liye…..aur ye laal chudiyan, ma ko mandir ke Prasad mein mile, to tere liye rakh diye…..Kripa took the bangles smiling…..

 

Kripa looked around the room…..Small twin bed and a cubboard occupied the room….The room had many hand painted items as well and Kripa went to see them….

 

K: Bhabhi…..itna chota ghar hai, par itni shanti aur sukun hai….bahot acha lag raha hain yahan…..Aab samjhi Kartik bhaiya aur Angad kyun yahan ate hain bar bar……mein bhi aungi agli baar se…..

 

Divya smiled at her through tears…..Last time she had bought Anita, she had made some comments about the house, and her mom and dad were a little upset….She was grateful to Kripa, that she not only respected her mom, but also made her feel comfortable…..

 

K: Kya hua bhabhi….she said looking at her….

 

D: Kuch nahi Kripa…..Thanks….

 

K: Kis liye….

 

D: Bas….tum itne bade ghar ki ho…..phir bhi….

 

K: Bhabhi…..she said going to her…..Bade ghar ho ya chota, kya farak padta hain……ma to hume bathroom aur kitchen bhi dhulvati…..khana bhi pakvati…..ghar ki cleaning bhi karvati….mujhe hi nahi Arjun ko bhi……Aab chota ghar ho ya bada, kya farak padta hain, khana bhi banana padta hai, aur same kitchen cleaning….she said chuckling….ulta, mujhe to lagta hai, chota ghar hi acha hai….jyada kaam hi nahi hota…..she said grinning….aur waise bhi in chizon se thodi na ghar banta hai…..ghar to logon se banta hai….so ye tumhara hai…..mujhe to bahot acha laga…..

 

H: Mujhe bhi…..Kripa….ye chanz pi ke dekh……this is just superb….she said sipping it…..with a sigh….Kripa took the glass and drank some…..Acha hai na….

 

K: Hmmm…..masala dala hai na…..she said grinning….then she looked at Divya who was standing there…..Sorry….aap nahi lengi….she asked looking at her….

 

Divya chuckled and so did her mother, handing her a glass…..

 

Do minute me khana dungi…..bahar sofa par baitho….

 

K: Na kakisa, kitchen mein niche baithenge…..bada majja ayega….she said going with her…..

 

They all sat down crossing there legs…..laughing and talking about Indian villages and art etc…..Then Divya's mom served them food and they were surprised that it tasted so good…..They ate till they were so full that Kripa groaned….

 

K: Kakisa…..itna acha khana to pehli baar khaya hai…..Aise khaungi na…..I am sure, char din mein moti ho jaungi….Ma ne jitney kapde lekar diye na sare tight ho jayenge….she said chuckling…..

 

H: I am so jelous of you Kripa…..Tu to abhi yahan humesha aa sakti hain…..mujhe US mein phir se bread par jeena hoga….she said making faces……Kripa grinned at her…..

 

K: Haan us baat mein to mein bahot lucky hoon….They heard a car stopping by and then after some time Kartik and Divya's dad came in…..

 

Kartik: Are wah…..ma, mujhe bhi khana hai….bahot bhook lagi hai…..he said washing his hands…..Divya got up and served his and her dad's plate, while Kripa talked to her dad for some time, before he went to freshen up……

 

Later they all finished their dinner and went home toghether….Harshini told Divya's mom that next time she was going to bring her husband and they were coming for dinner….Divya's mom laughed and told her to come when ever they want…..Harshini thanked her for the wonderful wall hanging and touched their feet before leaving…..

By the time they dropped Kripa and Harshini at the house, it was late……

 

Back to Surya and Gayatri, as promised, Surya took Gayatri to her taya's house……They were shocked to see that it was all fallen apart……and no one lived there any more……Surya asked the passer by about them…..He told that the owner of this house took a house couple of lanes down and directed them to it…..

 

Surya thanked him and they went there…..A lady opened the door, her face half covered with her pallu….

 

L: Ji…..kisase milna hai aapko….

 

G: Ji mein Gayatri…..

 

L: Gayatri Jiji…..Aap inke aur muskan ki badi jiji ho na…..

 

G: Tum Prakash ki patni ho? Gayatri asked smiling at her…..

 

L: Ji….Mera naam meera hai…..aiye andar…..she said smiling at them…..

 

Gayatri and Surya walked inside….It was a very small house and very much old….The walls were all worn out and the the glass of the window broken…..When Gayatri was married at the age of 18, her Uncle's children Prakash and Mushkan were 11 and 7……She had not met them after that….Now after 23 years, everything had changed….Prakash was now 34…..Meera came and touched their feet……and then asked them to sit…..

 

M: Ye jara bahar gaye hain…..abhi aa jayenge…..

 

G: Woh taya tayi…..she said looking around….

 

M: Ji…..woh to chal base….she said looking at her……

 

Gayatri and Surya looked at eachother surprised and then Gayatri's eyes filled with tears……

 

S: Aur Muskan….woh kahan hai…..shadi ho gayi….

 

M: Ji nahi…..usse dahej ke lalach mein uske sasural walon ne jala diya….she said looking down…..

Gayatri and Surya got up shocked……

 

G: Ye kab hua Meera…..she asked with tears…..

 

M: Ji….saat saal hone ko hai…..unhi ke gum mein sasu ma aur babuji gujar gaye…..Aapko bahot yaad kar rahe the……Jate waqt milna chahte the….inse keh rahe the ki maffi mangni hai aapse…..she said sadly…..Ye gaye the apke ghar….woh police wale ne kaha, ki aap log wahan se chale gaye…..sasu ma bahot rorahi thi…..aap se baar baar maffi bhi mang rahi thi……Phir chal basi…..5-6 mahinon mein babuji ka bhi dehant ho gaya…..

Gayatri was speechless, Surya kept a hand on her shoulder and comforted her……A boy around Arjun's age came in running….as soon as he saw them, he stopped…..

 

M: Jiji, ye Parth hai, mera bada beta……aur ek beti hai….choti Pritha…..8 saal ki hai…..she said slowly…..aap ke school mein hi jate hain……Babuji ne kaha, ki aap ke bhai chalate the…..She said smiling…..Parth….pair chu inke….tere fufi aur fufaji hain….Parth went and touched his feet……

 

S: Jeete raho bte….kausi kaksha mein ho…..

 

P: Jee 7th mein hun….. Abhi 8th mein jaunga ek mahine baad…..

 

S: Aur tumhari behen

 

P: Woh 3rd mein hain…

 

M: Parth…jara babuji ko dhoond aa…..kehna Gayatri jiji ayi hain…..Parth ran away…..

Gayatri was still shocked, but smiled a little at Meera….

 

M: Aap chai lenge…?

 

S: Nahi, chai nahi…..bas abhi ghar se lekar hi aye hain….hum to aap saab ko humari beti ke shadi ka nyota dene aye hain….

 

M: Kripa hai na uska naam…?

 

S: Haan….

 

M: Babuji bata te the…..woh kehte the, ki aapne uske janam par nyota bheja tha….par woh gaye nahi…..bahot apsos karte the…..

 

G: Prakash kya karta hai….?

 

M: Ji, woh dukan mein hisab kitab karte hain…..

 

Suddenly door opened and Gayatri's brother walked in with a little girl in his hand……

 

P: Jiji…..he said with a smile…..Gayatri smiled at him….

 

Prakash kept the little girl down and went and touched her feet, then he touched Surya's feet…..

 

P: Kaisi hai aap jiji……?

 

G: Mein thik hun…..Abhi Meera Taya Tayi aur Muskan ke bare mein bata rahi thi…..Prakash looked down sadly….

 

P: Bahot bura hua uske sath….itna sataya usko, ki bechari……

 

Surya kept a hand on his shoulder…..

 

P: Par meine unke pure gharwalon par case kiya…..14 saal ki sajja hui sabko….he said angrily…..

 

Gayatri nodded with tears….

 

G: Woh ghar….

 

P: Girvi rakha hai jiji…..case ke chakar mein, vakilon ka kharcha…..he said shaking his head….khair woh sab jane do…..Aap itne saal baad…..mein apko milne aya tha apke haweli….par aap nahi thi shayad….ma yaad kar rahi thi….

 

S: Hum US shift ho gaye the….abhi laute hain….Kripa ki shadi ke liye…..Surya said with a smile….

 

P: Kripa itni badi ho gayi….he said with a smile….Ma babuji bahot yaad karte the….Woh aap se maffi mangna chahte the…he said looking at Gayatri…..Keh rahe the, ki unhone bhi apko bahot takleef pahunchai…..isiliye bhagwan ne unhe sajja di….Gayatri's eyes filled with tears…..Aap log yahan aye, shayad aab unki atma ko shanti milegi…..Woh yahi kehte the….ki jab tak Gayatri hume maaf nahi kar deti, humari atma ko shanti nahi milegi……

 

P: Aap baithiye na jijaji…..

 

Pritha: Papa, ye kaun hai…..

 

Surya smiled at the little girl…..

 

S: hum apke fufaji hain…..Girl shyly stood behind her father and looked at him….Prakash, Kripa ki shadi mein saab jaroor ana……haweli mein hi hai…..aur pehle din subah mehendi aur sham ko mehfil rakhi hai ghar mein…..uske liye bhi ana saab….

 

P: Jarror ayenge jijaji…..Meera chai nashta, kuch diya ki nahi….

 

M: Ji woh….

 

G: Prakash aaj nahi….phir aungi….abhi ghar mein bahot tayari baki hai…..Abhi ek hafte pehle hi aye hain hum…..aur bahot jald baji mein saab tair ho gaya…..

 

P: Ladka kaun hai…..?

 

G: Woh Dilip Bhaisa ka beta…Angad…

 

P: Angad Rathod? He asked surprised…..

 

G: Haan….

 

P: Unke company ke log, bahot tareef karte hain unki……he said with a smile….

 

S: Tumhara ghar kis ke paas girvi hai Prakash….

 

P: Ji jis dukan mein kaam karta tha, unhone hi girvi rakhkar paise diye the…..bas 2-3 saal mein chut jayega…..

Surya nodded…..

 

G: Meera, tumhare bache bahot pyare hain….humara ek beta hai, Parth ke barabar ka hi hai……She then took some money from the purse and handed it to both Parth and Pritha….

 

P: Jiji….iski kya jaroorat hai….

 

G: Prakash, ye to inka haak hai…..mithai lena….thik hai….she said putting a hand on their heads….

 

S: Parth tumhare school mein Kripa ayi thi do baar……mile ho kya?

 

Pritha: Mein mili thi….she said slowly…..Teacher leke ayi thi….Kripa jiji ko…..class mein….

 

Prakash looked at her surprised….

 

P: Kab…..?

 

Pritha: woh yaad nahi….unhone kahaniyan sunayi hum saab ko….bahot sari…..she said to her father with a smile….

 

S: Acha….to ghar aao….aur kahaniyan sunayegi…..he said smiling….Acha prakash aab chalte hain….he said getting up…..

P: Jiji….bahot acha laga aap se milke….he said with tears….Ek min….He went to his room and bought back a letter with her….Ye chitti bappu ne kaha, agar kabhi aapse mulakat ho to de dun…..he said giving it to her…..Gayatri slowly took the letter and nodded….

 

Meera went and touched there feet….

 

P: Jiji….kuch madad chahiye ho to Meera aa sakti hain……bache pura din school mein hote hain….

 

G: Ye to achi baat hai Prakash….aisa karo kal subah chod do meera ko ghar…..sath rehkar, thoda ek dusare ko jaan bhi lenge….Meera smiled at her….her pallu still on her face….

 

P: Ji jiji….kyun Meera, thik hai na….Meera nodded shyly…..

 

Gayatri and Surya walked down to where there car was waiting….Gayatri was very quite on the way back….Even though they had not treated her like their own and left her alone, they had kept roof over her head and fed her for 12 years……They did not love her, but still they were the only family she had…..She felt bad for what happened to Muskan as well….how can people be so cruel she thought angrily…..Surya was also deep in thoughts….he was also shocked to know, how much everything had changed……He looked at Gayatri and went near her and squeezed her arm…..

 

She looked up with tears…..

G: Kabhi socha hi nahi, ki shadi ke baad unse milana bhi nahi hoga…..Aur muskan, use to 7 saal ki thi tab dekha tha….uske sath itna saab….kaise log itna gir sakte hain….she said wiping her tears….

Surya took her in his arms and let her cry…..Gayatri looked at the letter in her hand and opened it...

 

Gayatri,

 Yeh chitti milegi tab tak to bahot der ho jayegi...par Phir bhi tumse maffi mange bina jaun to pata hai Marne ke baad bhi mere atma ko shanti nahi mileagi...tumhari tayiji bhi maffi mangne ke liye tarsarti rahi...par shayad kuch galtiyan maffi ke layak nahi hote...issiliye, tumse jeevan me dubara  milna humme naseeb nahi hua...

 

Tumhare ma bapu ne hum par bharosa kar ke tumhe humare pass choda tha...par humne tumhe paraya hi rakha...kabhi pyar se do shabd bhi nahi kaha...shayad issivajah se tumhare swargwasi mata pita ka shrap lag gaya...iss ghar ko...Muskan ke sath jo kuch hua humare hi ku karmon ki sajja thi...beti ko kho kar ye ehsass hua ki hum ne bhi to kisi ke beti par attyachar kiya...shayad yeh saab bhagwan ne hume sabak sikhane ke liye hi kiya...Prakash ne Muskaan ke apradhiyon ko to sajja dilwa diya, par tumhare gunegaron ko nahi..

 

Muskan ka case ladte ladte bete ke sar par chat bhi na raha...chotte chotte bachon ko le kar dar dar ke thokare khane pad rahe hain...Saab naseebon ka khel hai...

 

Humne tumhe kabhi kuch nahi lekar diya...saab kuch tha humare pass phir bhi choti choti chizon ke liye tarsaya tumhe...issiki sajja mili hai aaj ki tumhare pass saab kuch hai aur Prakash ke bache bhook se behal hai...Gayatri ho sake to humme maaf kar dena...nahi to humare ku karmon ki karan Prakash ke bachon bhi chain se nahi ji sakenge ...pata hai...humari galti maffi layak to nahi...par phir bhi vinnanti karta hun tumse...ehsaan samajh kar hi sahi, par hume maaf kar do...

 

Kripa ko jeevan mein dher sari khushiyan mile...aur tumhare jeevan ke sare sapne pure ho yahi bhagwan se akhri prarthana karta hun...

 

Tumhare tayaji

 

Surya hugged Gayatri, seeing how devasted she looked... Surya let Gayatri cry in his arms...life was that way...what goes around comes around...every person comes to realize his mistakes one day...only thing is sometimes it might just be too late...only very few were lucky enough to get another chance...

 

After a long time, Gayatri wiped her tears, it felt so odd that there were times, when she used to crave for their love...and when she left for good, they died craving to meet her...

 

Gayatri remembered the time when she had requested her taya for going to college...he had denied her and said he did not have money to waste on her...and she should be thankful enough to study till 12th and have a roof over her head...she had gone to the temple sadly...she was 17 at that time...that was the first time Nandini had met her...she had liked her and later sent the proposal for marriage for her to her taya tayi...they had denied saying they could not afford big wedding or a penny in dowry...:but Nandini had come and said that they did not want any thing but Gayatri's hand in marriage...her taya tayi were shocked that Gayatri had got so good proposition...they were not happy...but couldn't deny them...as they were very well known family...

 

A day before marriage Gayatri had known why they were reluctant to marry her off...her dad had kept a piece of land in her name and she would get it after 18 and they would loose it if she was married...as it would be in joint names of her husband and her after marriage...

Her tayi's exact words were, " ek to beti humare gale bandh diya apke bhai ne, ek paisa humme diya nahi aur uppar se ek jameen ka tukda tha unke pass woh bhi uss ladki ke naam kar diya...ye rishta na apnate to agle saal woh jameen to hum apne naam kara lete...aab to woh bhi gaya haat se"

 

She had looked at them sadly, and walked away...she wanted to give them the land and settle the scores...for taking care of her all these years...but she couldn't say anything after marriage afraid to disappoint her rich in-laws and husband...they might not like the idea...she was new and had come from poor family...she couldn't speak up...but now time had changed...she looked at surya...ji

 

S: Gayatri...they spoke at the same time...kaho

 

G: kuch nahi...aap kya keh rahe the

 

S: woh mein soch raha tha ki tumhare pitaji ne tumhare naam jo jameen rakha hai, kyun na woh Prakash ko de de...Hume to usse dekha bhi nahi...apne pass itna saab hai...aur lekar kya Karenge...ho sakta hai ussase uski problem solve ho jaye...uske bachon ka jeevan sudhar jaye...

 

Gayatri looked up with smile

 

G: mein bhi abhi yahi kehne wali thi...apne mere dil ki baat keh di...

 

S: thik hai aaj ke aaj yeh kaam kar dunga...he said smiling at her and hugging her...

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Awesome , Superb , Amazing , Mind Blowing Updates Di...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapGreat bounding between all of them love it ..aaj kal aisa pariwaar kahi milega doubt hai ...




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hi vamita...loved both the updates...good to see girls bonding :-)
great writing...and special thanks for double update..had double celeration!! continue soon
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lovely n very long update...hahah kripa n shopping...i like it...even though she is fictitious character, i felt happy that there is at least a girl who shares my thoughts on shopping...i dont really like to shop either...n very nice scene at Divya's parents place...n OMG...Gayatri's cousin was burnt...this is very sad..bt unfortunate truth in India...thanks 4 d pm n wonderfull updates..plz cont soon.. :)

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hey di finally u continued after such a long time
 
both parts were simply great and awesome
 
less AK scenes but happy to see everybody is coming for the marriage
 
pleaseee continue soon
 
love ya
 
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nice part

do continue soon

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