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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 53)

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_mittal

hey di really great and awesome part
 
fianlly u continued after so many days
 
the last part was kind of sad i really got tears while reading the part
 
i hope angad realize what he did was wrong
 
i hope divya get better soon
 
pleaszeee continue soon
 
1 more part pleaseee
 
love ya
 
mittal
 
Thanks Mittal...
 
Yeah, Angad will realise his mistakes for sure...He only loves Kripa's beauty for now...He doesn't know her as well as he thinks and one day he will regret it...!! Let's see how Divya takes it all and if she helps him to see the truth...!! Ha ha...I already gave you 2 dear...Need to wait till tomorrow...!! I will surely do it tomorrow...
 
Love ya
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 28
lovely...
they are so much in love that they forget the surroundings when they are lost in each others' eyes...
 
Thanks Deepa...Yeah, they love eachother, but trust is important with love...!!

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 29
didnt expect this twist...
poor Divya...
but i dont believe this, Angad said so much to Kripa...
poor Kripa, shes emotional and also physical hurt by Angad very badly...
didnt expect this from Angad...
itna kuch kehne ki kya zaroorat thi?
his anger blinds everything...
now cont soon dear...
thanks for the double update...
 
Thanks spvd...
 
Yeah, I know...But some times life is just unpredictable...I got this real life experiece in last 2-3 years...It is just full of unexpected surprises, which we never think about...!! So, jo hai sama ji bhar jiyo, kyun ki kal ho na ho...
 
Angad is currently under shock...He had seen his uncle suffering from this illness, and he couldn't believe that Divya has it...He loves his family a lot...And further, he thinks, that being so educated, Kripa still kept this a secret and was going out for her marriage shopping...He thinks she is being selfish and couldn't stand thinking about her this way, as he loves her a lot and thinks world about her...It is true that we expect a lot from the person we love...And when the couples are tied in matrimony, then the expectations double...More so on girls...Let's see if he realizes his mistakes and if he repents his action and tries to keep it in mind for the future...!!!

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by monikaseth

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Thanks Monu...Looking forward for your comments...!!
Love
Mitu
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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by monikaseth

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awesome parts di love the song collection .ClapClapClapClapClap aww what a twist poor Divya and kripa but kripa should tell angad she know how he will think CryCryCryCryCryi hope there is nothing wrong with their marriage Dead angad listen kripa please ...Thank you di for thease 2 parts love it i hope all is going fine soon with Ak shadi mein koi dikkat na aaye CryCryCryCry
 
Thanks Monu
 
Angad, is just stressed out, to think logically...currently...Kripa, wanted to tell him, but remember, he was in no position to listen for the time being...But she was angry as well, due to his sudden attack...Let's see how these two get together...
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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged

PART - 30

 

K: Bhabhi..…..mein abhi Nishant Bhaiya se mili thi…..Apko cancer nahi hai….she said laughing and crying at the same time……

 

Divya's hand shook a little….

 

D: Tum sach keh rahi ho Kripa……she asked with tears….but she wiped them looking down….

 

K: Haan bhabhi sach…..par Nishant ne kaha hai savdhani baratni hogi…aur ek medicine ka priscription bhi bheja hai….mein aapko dawai la ke dungi…..

 

D: Thanks Kripa….agar tum na kehti, to mein…

 

K: Nahi bhabhi…..aap to meri badi behen jaisi ho…..thanks keh kar iss rishte ko paraya mat banana……bas aap se ek baat kehni thi……Please meri request maan lijiye….Bhaiya ko saab sach sach bata dijiye….woh sath honge to aap ki treatment aaram se ho jayegi….please….she said with tears….

 

D: Thik hai Kripa…..Mein aaj baat karungi unse…..raat  ko…I promise….

 

K: Thanks bhabhi….

 

D: Aaab thanks bolkar kaun paraya kar raha hai……Kripa chuckled through her tears…..Tum ne mere saar ka bojh halka kar diya Kripa…..tum na hoti to shayad itna bada kadam mujh se nahi badhaya jata……aab to mein tumhari shadi mein khup nachungi…

 

K: Bhabhi ek aur baat……woh aaj Angad ne mere voice message pe nurse ka message sun liya tha….to usse mujhe batana pada……bahot pareshan tha…..aap ate hi please use bata dena

 

Divya shocked a little could not speak for a second….

 

D: issiliye woh gusse mein the…?

 

K: Haan…bas upset tha….

 

D: Kripa sach bata…..unhone gusse mein kuch bol nahi diya na tumhe….

 

K: Nahi bhabhi….aisi koi baat nahi…..woh bas upset tha ki meine sachai chupayi……ek do din mein saab thik ho jayega.…..aap sirf apni aur apne bache ki chinta kijiye…….bas use ye message de dena…….

 

D: Thik hain….mein inse keh dungi aur ye baat kar lenge…..tu aab shadi ki tayari kar……she said chuckling….Kripa smiled sadly and kept the phone…….Divya closed her eyes and a tear fell from her eye……She slowly kept the phone down…..

 

What marriage, Kripa thought….the person who she fell in love with, looked at her with so much hatred….not even trying to understand her……In just one moment he had throwed away all the moments of love they had shared together…….He did not even trust her enough to handle things on her own…..had accused her by saying she did not know the meaning of families……she laughed bitterly…...crying the next moment…..She fell asleep after taking couple of pain killers, her mother gave her, when she found Kripa crying…..Gayatri, Surya and Arjun emptied other boxes and arranged everything in place, the following evening, as they did not have much time.…..The cleaner came and took all the empty boxes and packing materials with him…..At night they all ate their dinner in silence…..and then  went to their rooms….Kripa told her mom, that she slipped when her odhni came under her foot and her hand hit the table……Gayatri asked her to be careful and then bid her goodnight…..

 

Back to Rathod house, Angad came back around 4 in the evening……He looked for Divya and found her on the terrace smiling at the birds, which came to eat the grains she had throwed…..His hands shook at the thought that she might be suffering from…..

 

A: Bhabhi…..

 

D: Are devarji aap….aaj yahan kaise aa gaye…..Aaj to Kripa bhi nahi yahan….she said smiling….Angad looked away a little angrily hearing her name……Kya baat hai devarji…..aap pareshan lag rahe hain….saab thik to hain na……

 

A: Aapne apni baat kyun chipai bhabhi…..itni badi baat aur hum me se kisiko nahi malum….

 

Divya smiled knowing what he was talking about….

 

D: Devarji, abhi Kripa ka phone aya tha, thodi der pehle….mere reports normal aye hai…..tension ki koi problem nahi hai……Woh tumhare liye bhi pareshan thi, aur mujhe kaha ki tumhe bata de…...she said with a smile….

 

A: Aap sach keh rahi hain bhabhi……he asked looking at her with a smile……

 

D: Haan devarji bilkul sach …..Kripa ne mere liye jo kiya, mein to puri zindagi uski ehsaan mand rahungi…..Usne yeh 3 dinon mein, meri behen bankar mera sath diya…..Woh na hoti to mein to ghut ghut kar andar hi andar marti……par uske karan hi meine ye kadam uthaya…….Aur please aap us par gussa mat hoiye devarji…..woh meine use apni aur apne bache ki kasam de di….to woh kisi ko kuch bol hi nahi payi…..sardi ke bahane, sab se ansu chupati, andar hi andar woh bhi meri tarah hi ghut rahi thi…..Kisi dusare ke dukh mein itna sath dene wale, paraye logon ko itna apnapan dene wale bahot kum hote hain, devarji, she said through her tears…...Angad looked at her stunned…..as she blinked her tears and looked down…..par mein janti thi…….mein swarthy ho gayi thi….apne bache ke bhavishya ke liye….jab doctor ne mujhe kaha ki unhe shak tha ki mujhe cancer ho sakta hai, to pehla dhyan apne bache ki aur gaya….mein use sirf mere bache ko ma ka pyar dene ke liye kehne gayi thi….par pata nahi, kaise meine mera raaj use baata diya…….use usi dard mein dhakela, jisse aap saab bhugat chuke hain……apnonko dard na dun, isiliye uska dil dukhaya……yeh pata nahi tha, ki ussne rishta bandhne se pehle hi hum saab ko apna bana liya, ye ehsaas hi nahi hua ki woh itna dil parlegi, usko itni takleef pahunchegi…...

 

mausaji ke cancer ki maut se ye aur ghar ke sabhi log kitna bhugte hain mein janti hun……isiliye kisiko kuch nahi bataya…….wahi udasi aur takleef meine uski ankhon mein dekha in 3 dinon mein….Usse kaal dant kar, aaj shopping ke liye taiyar karvaya meine…..shadi 10 din par hai, aur bechari ko tayari karne ka mauka bhi na mila aur us par ankhon mein gum cha gaya, woh bhi meri wajah se…...Kripa ne bhi bahot samjhaya, ki saab ko sari baat bata do…par meine jab kasam de di, to usne kaha, ki agar mein check up nahi karvaungi to woh ye rishta thukaradegi….she said closing her eyes in pain……Angad looked at her with tears…….Paar aaj wada kiya hai use meine, ki mein inhe sachai bataungi, aur mera age ka jo treatment hoga, woh hum sath karenge…..She said smiling through her tears….Aliyah came to call her as Avantika was calling her….Divya quickly wiped her tears and went behind her smiling…..

 

And Angad shocked, sat down with his hands on his head…….tears flowing from his eyes…. "Tum hoti hi kaun ho, jo itna bada faisla khud kar liya……Na uss ghar se abhi rishta juda hai tumhara"……his own voice echoed and he hit his hand on the floor, remembering the pain, he had seen on Kripa's face…..the way he had throwed her hand away from his arms…..he remembered her angry words…….." Ek baat tum achi tarah se jaan lo Angad…..Meine mere dost ke liye jhoot kaha tha…..par sirf uske pyar ke liye…..aur meine aaj jhoot kaha, woh bhi sirf bhabhi ke khatir, unke pyar ke khatir……..Mein choti hun par bewakuf nahi, janti hun mein kya kar rahi thi…..agar mujh par vishwas nahi to jakar puch lo Dr. Nishant se.……she had said so bitterly….and he knew he deserved….she had looked at him with anger and tears……aur ek baat dhyan se suno……subko batane se pahele ek baar bhabhi se jaroor puch lena…Mein rishton ka matalab shayad nahi janti par tum jante ho na…..to apni bhabhi ke dil ka haal bhi puch lena…..puchna woh kya chahti hain.….." He closed his eyes in pain…" Parivar kya hota hai, rishtein kise kehte hain….ye to shayad tum janti hi nahi"….he had said this to her…..tears ran down his eyes…..she had very well fulfilled the duty towards her family, even before she got married to him, it was he who failed her…..How could he have been so foolish…….

 

He ran down and was off in his car……he sat in the same place, they had first sat together, sharing their hopes and dreams….tears flowed from his eyes…..once again he had hurt her…..his words…"Agli baar tumse baat kiye bina, koi natije pe nahi pahunchunga……aur kabhi sath nahi chodunga…...Agar dubara wahi galti karun, to galti nahi woh to gunah hoga……aur gunah ki to sajja di jati hai, mafi nahi, jaise aaj tumne mujhe di hai" And once again he had done the same thing…..he had not even given her chance to explain…..he had just gone to her and ………he closed his eyes…..her words rang back "Agli baar agar sath chodoge na, to kabhi baat nahi karungi"……may be that would be his penance….he thought with tears……He got call from home in the evening and he lied saying he was with friends and would be late…..But he was proud of what she did……He was thankful and happy for what she did for Divya…….!!

 

He then called Nishant and asked him all the details, hoping everything was fine….Nishant told him everything…..right from the start…..Angad thanked him and switched off the phone…..Nishant had told him, that if they got positive result, Kripa had decided to tell the truth to everyone…..no matter what Divya said….That means….she was just waiting for results….she would have told them eventually……..He closed his eyes repenting his words…..repenting hurting her…..But at the same time, he felt much better to know that she would have told him if there was a problem, no matter what……..He was proud of her and a heavy burden lifted from his chest……He wanted to go to her and apologise……Even if he had to sit on his knee and ask for forgiveness for the way he reacted, for the words he said……...All doubts which he had been having were gone……He was happy that Kripa had helped Divya and convinced her to do the test………He started back home, the soft song playing in the background in the car radio…..Same time, Kripa too restlessly switched on the radio and the stopped at the same station……….Her eyes filled with tears as she heard the song……It felt exactly as she felt that day……as if she had lost Angad for ever……His words, his anger towards her……..making her heart bleed……..

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vWBbBLrzbmc

 

 

Kyun Pholon ke, Khile khile Rang ud gaye-3
Kyun in dino, Khud se Rehti hoon mein khafa khafa, Khafa Khafa

Kyun Pholon ke, Ude Ude Rang ud Khile-2
Kyun in dino, Hosh mein hai mere, Nasha Nasha, Nasha Nasha
Kyun Pholon ke, Khile khile Rang ud gaye

Teri meri takraro se, Bana Dil Ka yeh Rista hai
Aaina to mein Dekhu to, Tera chehra hi dhikhta hai
Jab se mujhse Tu Mili

Jane kaise mulakaton mein, Yunhi aisi waise baaton mein
Kare chote mote vaadein the, Isi Chote se bahane se
Pakke tujhe kho diya

Meri hi hai khata, Meri hi hai saja, Phir bhi dil kahe, Yeh Kyun Hua

Kyun in dino, Khud se Rehti hoon mein khafa khafa, Khafa Khafa
Kyun Pholon ke, Ude UDe Rang ud Khile-2
Kyun in dino, Hosh mein hai mere, Nasha Nasha, Nasha Nasha

Aaj se jo mere kal honge, Teri aankhon mein woh Dekhte hai
Teri baaton ke jo aksar hai, Meri Daastan ho likhte hain
Aisa mujhe Kyun hua

Dhuan dhuan si kahani hai, To bhi aakhon mein bhi paani hai
Galon se yeh jo guzarti hai, Tere gam ki nishani hai
Mit si gai har dua

Meri hi hai khata, Meri hi hai saja, Phir bhi dil kahe, Yeh Kyun Hua

Kyun in dino, Khud se Rehti hoon mein khafa khafa, Khafa Khafa
Kyun Pholon ke, Khile khile Rang ud gaye-2

 

At last after 1 he reached home….He quietly went to his room and lay down on the bed, tired……Thinking about how he ruined their perfect relationship with his words….his dadi's words came to his mind…..: beta, rishte dhagon ki tarah hote hain…..ek baar tut gaya to ganth ke bina nahi judta…..woh ganth humesha un donon dhagon ko kamjor bana deta hai….usme moti bhi dalni ho to badi mushkil hoti hain….."

 

Will his foolishness lead to this ultimately? He thought with guilt and sadness…….Before this also his foolishness had hurt her…..but this was some thing, which he knew was not so easy to forget…..he knew it…..because his words must have hurt her…..very badly……

 

Next morning he got up early and came down…He sat silently having his breakfast with everyone else, when Arjun came in running….

 

A: dadi….laddoo do na….he said grinning….

 

D: ja jake le le…..she said chuckling….

 

A: kal kahan tha pura din, Arjun dikhayi nahi diye…..

 

Arjun: Woh jiji ko bahot chot lag gayi thi to ghar mein hi tha……he said going to take the box….

 

D: Kya? Dilip asked frowning…..Everyone looked at him….

 

A: Yahan aa….Arjun came to her……aab bata Kripa ko chot kaise lagi…..

 

Arjun: Woh pata nahi jiji chat par thi….aur keh rahi thi ki odhni se phisal gayi aur table lag gaya….woh uski chudiyan toot gayi thi aur haath mein lag gayi…..bahot khun nikal raha tha, so papa mama doctor ke paas le gaye…..bahot stiches pade…..bahot ro rahi thi jiji……he said sadly…..mama aur papa bhi udas the……so mein aya nahi….. Every one was shocked to hear this…..and surya had not even told them about it….

 

Divya: Kab hua ye Arjun….subah ya sham ko?

 

A: Woh jiju ke sath hi to upar gayi thi……phir meine jiju bhi chale gaye…..phir thodi der baad jiji rote hue niche ayi…..Angad stilled remembering how he had harshly removed her hand from his arm and she had circled and he heard the sound of her bangles, but he had not cared at the time, it was his fault. ….his heart sank…..he could not believe he had hurt her, that to so badly……Everyone looked at Angad's pale face…..

 

D: Iska matlab ane ke baad phone kiya tha mujhe….kuch bataya bhi nahi…..kamal ki ladki hai…..she said angrily….Kartik kept a hand on her arm and calmed her down…..

 

A: Aab kaisi hai jiji…..she asked with concern…..

 

A: Abhi to bilkul thik hai…..mama ko subah help bhi kar rahi thi….meine pucha to keh rahi thi ki abhi dard nahi hai…..

 

Avantika and Dilip looked at eachother….

 

Dadi: Acha thik hai…ja tu ladoo kha…..

 

A: Jiju….mein movie dekhun….apke room mein…..

 

Angad nodded…..slowly….numb….

 

Dadi: Are Angad beta……Arjun ne kaha na woh thik hai……nashta kar le phir jate hain….milne….everyone nodded and quickly finished their breakfast……Divya left the room, so Kartik could tell Dilip and Avantika about her health…..

 

K: Ma, papa….aap se baat karni thi….

 

A: Bolo beta…..

 

Slowly Kartik told them about Divya….and how Kripa had helped her and made her do the biopsy and the negative results…..and future treatment for Divya…..Everyone was shocked to hear this….

 

A: Divya na kisiko bataya kyun nahi aab tak…..do hafte ho gaye aur…..she said with concern….

 

K: Ma…..please aap shant ho jaiye…..ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai….meine Nishant se abhi baat ki hai….woh to shukr hai Kripa ka, ki ussne apni zid se kum se kum Divya ko huspatal le gayi…..Nahi to shayad Divya kabhi nahi jati….woh dar gayi thi….apne liye, apne bache ke liye…..Issiliye ye kadam nahi utha pa rahi thi….Use daar tha, ki agar cancer detect hua to use obortion karvana padega…..Aur saab ko bache ke bare mein itna khush dekhakar, shayad….he said sadly….Aur agar aur der ho jati to shayad….he could not say it…..

 

A: Beta, bacha to tab thik hoga na jab ma hogi…..woh usne aise kaise soch liye…..Itna dukh khud hi…..Tabhi us din Kripa ko dekh kar mujhe shak hua…..bechari ek to itni choti hai….aur itna bada jhoot chipana……Usse bhi kitni takleef hui hogi…...jab woh batana chahti thi to Divya ne rok liya……Uske baad …..she sighed….

 

Angad choked a little on his food and drank some water to calm himself……His eyes filled with tears…..he left the table and left……Everyone looked at him worriedly….but came back to topic….

 

K: haan ma…..Divya ko bhi bura lag raha hai, ki usne Kripa ko aise bich me ghasita….Par aab sab thik hain….

 

A: Khair….Divya ka treatment age kya hai…Nishant ne kya kahe….

 

Kartik explained to her and his father and they agreed and told him to take her today to Nishant and start the treatment immediately…..

 

Dilip was silent the whole time….while Dadi went in her temple to thank the God for sending Kripa on time…..

Avantika went to Divya immediately and scolded her…..hugging her with tears….

 

A: Ma kehti hai…..aur Ma se itni badi baat chipa kar rakha…..Itna dukh apne maan mein apne hansi mein dabake rakha…..beta rishte issi waqt to ek dusare ke kaam ate hain…..Tum ne hume dukh na dene ke liye hum se sachai chipayi…..par dard bantane se kum hota hai…..socho agar hummese kisiko kuch problem ho jaye, to kya tum nahi chahogi ki tum unka dard lo……parivar isse hi kehte hain beta….rishte asan nahi hote….sukh dukh ke motiyon se bandha hai ye jeevan…. had been so tensed all these days…. Divya asked for forgiveness hugging her and crying her heart out…..She was so worried that it was difficult to hold her tears back…..Avantika wiped her tears and kissed her forehead…..Aaj mujhe tumse ek vada chahiye…….Phir kabhi apni ma se kuch nahi chipaogi…..she said looking at her….Divya nodded with tears and Avantika wiped it with a smile…..Chal Kartik tujhe Nishant ke paas le ja raha hai…..Taiyar ho ja….

 

D: Ma pehle Kripa ko dekh lun phir….

 

A: Acha thik hai….tum taiyar ho jao….phir wahan se jana huspatal…..Divya nodded….Abhi tumhare devar ko dhundna hoga…..naraj tha thoda……she said chuckling….shayad wahin bhaga ho….tum aajao niche….hum intajar kar rahe hain….she said patting her….Divya nodded and smiled at her….

 

Aliyah and Arjun, were busy playing games…..Angad was no were to be found….and they all thought that he had already left for Kripa's house….

 

Dadi, Dilip, Avantika, Kartik and Divya went to Surya's house...

 

Surya was surprised to see them all

 

S: Are Kakisa….Dilip, bhabhi…..aap saab…he said with a smile…..

 

D: Teri pitai karne aye hain…..Kripa ko kal chot ayi aur bataya bhi nahi….

 

G: Kripa thik hai bhaiya….bas use thodi kanch ki chudiyan lag gayi…..aadat nahi hain na…..aur yahan wahan bhagti rehti hain to…..

 

Dadi: Kripa kahan hai waise?

 

G: Woh kakisa use dard ho raha tha, to meine dawai dekar sone ke liye kaha….Divya beta tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari….she asked smiling….

 

D: Ji kakisa, bilkul thik hai….

 

Kartik: Sach puchiye to kakisa, Kripa ki wajah se hi thik hai aaj…..aap log na ate to……he said looking at Divya with tears and she sighed and put a hand on his…..comforting her….he was surprised a little as she was always so shy to even hold hands in front of everyone…..he smiled and sighed….

 

G: Bhabhi….kya baat hai…..Kakisa kuch problem hai kya…..Dilip sighed and told them about Divya's health…..How Kripa helped her…..

 

A: Sach bolun Gayatri, Kripa to humare liye khushiyan sath lekar ayi……she said smiling….Gayatri smiled and looked down….now she knew, why Kripa had been so upset all these days….she was proud of her daughter…..she had handled the situation so nicely……She went to Divya and hugged her….

 

G: Apna khayal rakha karo….tum par pure ghar ki zimedari hai…..tumhare bachon ki zimedari hai…..isiliye haar ladki ka pehla kartavya hai, ki khud ki sehat ka dhyan de…..nahi to parivar ko kaise sambhal sakegi bhala…..she said smiling and looking at Devyani….who smiled at her…..Pata hai Divya, ye baat mujhe kisne samjhayi, kakisa ne…..Jab mein ma bannane wali thi…..she went to Devyani and hugged her blinking her tears……and remembering those days….

 

D: pagli…..chal chay bana jaldi…..adrak aur masala dal ke…..she said pinching her cheeks…..

 

G: Ji kakisa…..

 

D: Kakisa, devarji yahan nahi aye?Gayatri frowned…

 

G: Nahi to beta….Angad ko to kal se nahi dekha…..woh phone lene aya uske baad aya hi nahi….

 

A: Kamal ka ladka hai, ghar par bhi nahi…..khair kisi kaam se gaya hoga…..she said shaking her head….

 

Divya looked down a little concerned….. she and Kartik took leave saying they had to meet Nishant in the hospital…..

 

The elders sat there talking about their kids……how they are all matured and are taking their responsibilities……etc….They then talked about the marriage and the shopping, which they decided to go …..They decided that next two days, ladies would do the shopping, while Surya and Dilip would go and give the invitations…..Dadi said she would take care of all the puja samagri and see everything is properly delivered….Kripa was still sleeping, so they bid bye and went home after couple of hours….

 

Kripa woke up around 2….Gayatri feeded her lunch and then told about Dilip and his families visit….she also told her that Divya had told everyone the truth….

 

G: I am so proud of you beta…..ki tumne Divya ko doctor se milne ke liye mana liya…..Kripa smiled sadly….

 

K: Ma, agar mein unka kasam todkar ye saab aap logon ko bata deti, to kya sach much kuch bura hota…..she asked a little confused….It is said to never break a promise…..but she was not sure…..

 

G: Pagli…..ek baat dhyan mein rakh, agar koi jhoot se kisi ka acha hota hai, to woh jhoot sau sach se bhi bada hota hai….aur waqt aur halat ke anusar hume apni kasam kabhi kabhi todni padti hai…..aaj Divya ka report negative aya so acha tha….par agar positive ata to….to tum akele kya karti beta…..do jeevan danv par rehte…..tabh kasam todne se kuch bura hain hota….she said hugging her, knowing in which situation she had been these past few days….Kripa nodded sighing….

 

K: Ma papa aur Arjun kahan hai….

 

G: Papa, invitation dene gaye hain Dilip bhaiya ke saat…Aur Arjun tere sasural jakar baitha hain….she said chuckling….Kripa smiled a little and looked down thinking about their marriage…..Just 4-5 days ago she was so happy thinking about the marriage…..but today, she was starting to doubt her decisions…Beta, sham ko kakisa se milke ate hain…..woh tujse milna chahti thi…..

 

K: Ji ma….she said with half mind….putting her plate in the sink…..

 

Angad on the other side, spent the whole day in the office…..thinking about what he was going to do now….how was he going to face Kripa…..His words kept haunting him…...and her tears made him angry at him self…..He knew his words might have wounded her heart……She might have felt betrayed…..

 

Around 6 he reached home with heavy heart…..Every step more heavier than the first……And when he was in the front door, he saw Kripa sitting there with dadi talking to her…..His gaze moved down to her wrist and he looked away, with tears…..He slowly walked inside…..

 

D: Are Angad aa gaya beta tu…..Angad went and touched Gayatri's feet….

 

G: Jite raho beta…..office gaye the kya? Angad nodded….his gaze fell on Kripa, but she looked away…..

 

A: Kakisa, mein thak gaya hun, jara fresh hoke ata hun…..he said walking up….Kripa looked at him through tears……..and blinked them…..Divya who was near the kitchen door, coming with fruit bowls, frowned at Kripa and Angad…..She knew some thing was wrong….and knew it was some what her fault…..she felt guilty for creating rifts between them…..she walked out slowly and kept the tray on the table…..

 

Avantika came in and looked up….

 

A: Ma Angad aagaya kya? Mujhe laga ki meine uski awaj suni….

 

D: Haan….abhi aya hai….fresh hoke ayega….

 

Divya: ma …..mein aur Kripa shopping jaye…..cosmetics aur thode jaroorat ke saman kharid lenge….

 

A: Thik hai beta jao….par sambhalkar….

 

Divya: Kripa chalein…..She asked grinning….Kripa nodded…..Ek min….mein abhi ayi….she went up and told Angad to come with them…..joking about being kuli….she wanted them to patch up….after all they would be getting married in 8-9 days……And she was the reason they were upset…..so she needed to solve this…..

Kripa flinched when she saw Divya and Angad coming down…..She did not want to face him yet….his words still echoed in her mind…..but she kept quite for Divya's sake…..Angad started the car and Divya sat back…..When Kripa was about to sit with her…..Divya stopped….

 

D: Tum jao….deevarji ke sath baitho samne……nahi to bichare sachmuch driver lagenge…..she said chuckling…..Kripa nodded with heavy heart and went to sit in front…..She avoided any eye contact and they soon reached the market…..Divya enthusiastically chose many cosmetics as well as some hair decorating items…..She could feel the heavy tension among them….but tried to pull them both in the conversation and some times left them alone, pretending to see some thing else….But when she came back, she found Kripa standing far looking at some thing, blankly….Divya sighed…..This was not working…..She looked down a little dejected……They were not even talking to eachother….hardly said a word or two…..and Kripa was not even interested in shopping……She knew, something big had happened in between them….otherwise, they would not have been this way…..She needed to get to the bottom…..Kripa had helped her, and in the process, she could say that it hurt her…..The sadness in their eyes was clearly visible…..

 

D: Chalo….raat ho rahi hai….aab ghar chalein….Kripa tum humare sath hi khana kha lena…..Baad mein Devarji chod ayenge…..

 

K: Nahi bhabhi…..ma raah dekh rahi hogi….mujhe ghar drop kar dijiye….

 

D: Kakisa ko phone kar denge…..

 

K: Nahi bhabhi….please….she said with a slow smile….Divya sighed and nodded…..

 

As soon as they reached near the front gate, Kripa got out of the car and ran in…..without looking back….Divya frowned at her……She did not take her shopping bags ……Angad sadly looked at the door, where Kripa had just disappeared…..slowly he started the car and drove home…..But when they went home they saw that Gayatri and Surya were here having dinner…..

 

Gayatri called Kripa immediately……

 

K: nahi ma….mein thak gayi hun….mujhe dard bhi ho raha hai haath….aap khana kha lijiye…..mujhe bhook nahi hai….she said wiping her tears….Meine abhi dawai li hai…..so jaungi, to thik lagega kal tak….

 

Atlast Gayatri agreed and asked her to sleep…..She told Avantika and Devyani about this and they all had dinner together……Angad could hardly eat…….he left the table after few spoons saying he was tired as well and went up…..Divya frowned at him…..

 

After dinner, Divya said bye to Gayatri and Surya…..and then went to find Angad……she had to talk to him….She found him on the terrace sitting on the swing….

 

D: Devarji…..she said slowly…..Angad opened his eyes and looked at her….

 

A: Bhabhi……he tried to smile….kuch chahiye tha…..

 

D: Haan….she said slowly……she went to him…..and took his hand and kept it on her head…..Mujhe sach sach bataiye…..Aap aur Kripa mein jhagda hua hai na……Angad nodded looking at her a little sadly…..Meri wajah se hi hua na ye…..she asked sadly…..Angad got up, as soon as he knew that Divya was feeling guilty…..but she was not the one who had hurt Kripa it was him……

 

A: Nahi bhabhi aapki wajah se nahi…..

 

D: Jhoot mat boliye devarji….mein janti hun…..ye jo kuch hua meri wajah se hua…..kitni khush thi woh, ye saab janane se pehle…..agar mein use na batati to shayad……ye saab meri wajah se hua hai…..Angad could not let her carry one more burden around….he went to her and wiped her tears…..

 

A: Apki kasam bhabhi….aap ki wajah se nahi, mere karan naraj hai woh…..mein hun usski dukh ki wajah…..meine usse dukh pahunchaya….

 

D: Nahi Deevarji, aap to usse itna chahte hain….phir woh bhala aap se naraj kyun rahegi….please sach bataiye na…..

 

Angad closed his eyes and slowly told her what all happened yesterday, after he had dropped Divya….He told her how he had accused her of not knowing what families were and how he had told her that she was not the member of the family…..and how he had yelled at her and how he had pushed her away…..He told her that she was hurt because of him…..and not because of falling…..Divya stood there stunned…..Her eyes filled with tears….

 

D: Deevarji…..aap ne…..she could not say a word……She could understand and know what Kripa must be going through…..how she must be feeling…….she looked at Angad shocked…..

 

And then she saw Avantika slapping him tightly on his face…..Shocked Divya looked at Avantika…..she started hitting him again when she stopped her….

 

D: Ma…..ruk jaiye ma…..Ye aap kya kar rahi hain….she said holding her hands….

 

A: Chod mujhe Divya…..Jitna naaj mujhe ispaar tha, aaj utni hi ghin aa rahi hai……She said looking at him angrily…..Teri akal kahan gayi thi Angad…..khud ko bade hoshiyar samajhte ho na,…….rishton ka matalab jante ho na…..to wahan kyun gaye….tumhare bhabhi ne bhi to sach chupaya na……woh toh tumhari apni hai…..she said hitting his chest…..usse kyun nahi aakar pucha……Usse samjhane ka ek mauka nahi diya tumne…..kahan ki rishtedari nibhayi tune……Aaj tak tumhare papa ne….tumhare dadaji ne, kabhi hume ye ehsaas nahi dilaya ki hum paraye ghar ke hain…..humesha is ghar ko humara kaha…..sare rishte humare hue…..par aaj tune, rishta jod ne se pahele hi use paraya bana diya……Rishton ki samajh use hai…..magar tumhe nahi hai…Nahi to aisi baat ussase keh kar ek paal mein paraya nahi bana dete……Itne door, sare doston ko chod kar, apni duniya chod kar sirf tumhare liye ayi hain yahan woh……Aur sirf tumhe nahi, iss ghar ke dukhon ko bhi ate hi apnaya……Aur tumne….tumne kya kiya…..Apna badhpan dikhaya…..Haan ussne sachai chipayi….par janane ki koshish ki, ki woh kyun nahi ye bata saki……nahi…..aur uppar se ye chot…itna gussa…..itni haivangi……she said hitting him once again….with tears in her eyes……

 

Kartik and Dilip also came up, hearing all the noise…..

 

D: Kya hua Avantika….Angad ko kyun dant rahi ho…..

 

A: Aap hi puchiye…..she said looking at Angad angrily….Aab boliti kyun bandh ho gayi…..bata inhe bhi…..aab tumhari sachai kahan gayi…..aab bolo sachai….sache hone ka dawa karte the na…..

 

Angad's eyes filled with tears and slowly he told Dilip about all what happened….Dilip and Kartik were shocked as well…..

 

D: Aaj tumne apne khandan ki ijjat mitti mein mila di Angad…..Bhale hi Kripa ne kisi ko kuch na kaha ho, par sach to sach hi hai na……he said looking at him sadly…..kitne arman the tumhe lekar….kitne sapne dekhe…..Are nibhana hi nahi ata, to lekar kyun aye usse…..he said looking at him…..Kum se kum jahan rehti khush to rehti…..Aur Surya ko pata chala, to kya betegi uss par….Aaj meri najre jhuka di tumne…..Humare khandan mein aise pehle kabhi nahi hua……Yahan hume auraton ki ijjat karana sikhaya tha…..aur tumne….he said shaking his head….

 

A: I am sorry dad…..mujhe se galati ho gayi…...he said with tears looking away….

 

D: Maafi mujhse ?…..agar maffi mangni ho to ja….Surya ko sach bata…..agar woh tumhe maaf kare to thik…warna apni beti ke liye ek baar ye desh chod kar ja chukka hai, mujhe yakin hai ki dubara chodne mein bhi nahi hichkichayega….koi baap apni beti ka haat uss insan ke haath nahi deta, jo apni patni ki ijjat na karta ho……are ussase acha to beti puri jindagi ghar kunwari baithi rahe…..he said leaving him and going down angrily…..Avantika too left him and so did Kartik and Divya….Divya tried to talk to him, but Kartik stopped her and pulled her with him…..

 

Angad was left all alone…..His eyes filled with tears……Yeah…..his dad was right…..he had to first ask forgiveness from her dad…..he had broken his promise to him……he had said that he would take care of Kripa for ever….but he had failed him and Gayatri, even before marrying her..….They had loved her as their son, had trusted him with their daughter…..and he had betrayed them…..he sat there on the terrace the whole night……Repenting his actions….his anger….

 

Divya found him still sitting there with his hands on his head the next morning…..She felt bad for him…..whatever the reason, it was due to her that this all had happened…..She went near him and shook him a little……Angad got up with a jerk….his eyes were red, due to lack of sleep….he looked at her and then looked away….

 

D: Deevarji….meri ek baat manenge……Angad sighed and nodded…..Jaiye fresh hokar kakasa ke paas jaiye…..unhe sachai bataiye aur maffi mangiye…..mujhe pura yakin hai woh aapko maaf kar denge……Aap dil se apni galti mante hain….apko apne kiye par pachtava hai….issase achi baat to koi hai hi nahi….Angad swallowed hard, looked at her and nodded…..He got up and slowly walked down…..He went to his room and freshened up……He then went down and walked towards Surya's house…..He could not ring the bell straight away…..so he went up to the terrace instead……he sat down on the chair, where Kripa had sat, closing his eyes……Trying to calm his beating heart…….Then his gaze fell on the few drops of dried which were still on the floor, and the broken bangles…….He stood stunned looking at it…..His hands shivered a little…..He shook his head, horrified to know that he could have done this…….How could he ask for forgiveness…..but knew he had too…..even if Surya and Kripa might decide never to forgive him……….He slowly backed out still looking at it….he slowly went down by steps and rang the bell…..Surya opened the door and grinned at him….

 

S: Are Angad beta….aaoo…andar aaoo……he said walking inside, leaving the door open…...tumhare favourite paratha ban rahe hain…..chalo nashta karte hain….he said walking inside…..

 

A: Hi jiju….Arjun said grinning at him….eating his breakfast……Angad smiled a little at his direction…..but his

Angad stood uncomfortably…..his heart heavy…..Surya frowned and looked at Angad as he was very quite…….

 

S: Kya baat hai Angad…..pareshan lag rahe ho…..Angad looked down….Gayatri too came to greet him but stood silently when she saw him….Kripa was in the kitchen as well as she closed her eyes with pain…..His words still hurt….but she had not shown her pain to her parents……She continued her cooking….

 

A: Kakasa….kakisa aap se ek baat karni thi…..

 

S: Bolo bte….kya hua…..he asked concerned…..

 

Slowly Angad told them about his confrontation with Kripa and how he had hurt her by his words as well as actions…..He looked at Kripa, who stood frozen in her spot…….she never would have thought that he would confess his mistakes in front of her parents……Her eyes filled with tears……Gayatri and Surya also stood there for a long time looking at him and then they looked at eachother with tears…..They looked at Kripa who ran away from there wiping her tears and closed her bedroom door…..Arjun also looked at him angrily and ran away to his room and banged the door…….Angad flinched at the loud bang……he slowly walked to Surya and Gayatri and sat at their feet and touched their legs, with tears in his eyes…..

 

A: Meri galti maffi ke layak to nahi Kakasa….meine sirf Kripa ko hi nahi…..aap sab ko bhi dukh pahonchaya……aapko diya hua wada toda…….par ho sake to please mujhe maaf kijiye……He said as tears flowed from his eyes……Surya held his shoulder and slowly made him get up…..

 

S: Utho Angad…..meine tumhe maaf kiya….tumhare kakisa ko bhi koi shikayat nahi hai tumse beta…..apne dil se ye bojh utar do…..Tum uss waqt gusse mein the…..baat ko samajhne se pahle hi baras gaye…..aur gusse mein insan ki mati kho jati hai….usse hosh nahi hota ki woh kya keh raha hai…..Kabhi kabhi na chahte hue bhi log bahot kuch keh dete hain…Mein janta hun, ki apne desh mein bhabhi ma saman hoti hai, jab tumne ye jana ki Kripa ne sachai chipayi, to tumhe gussa aya….kyun, kyun ki tumhe laga ussne tumhara vishwas toda…..kabhi kabhi apne pyar se hume bahot expectations hote hain….itne ki kabhi kabhi hum ye bhool jate hain ki dusron ki bhi majboori ho sakti hai…..jo kiya uske piche karan ho sakta hia.…..tumse jhoot bola…..woh apne jagah par thik thi….aur tum apne, kyun ki tum ussase expect kar rahe the, ki woh tumse kuch na chipaye…..tum bhi sahi ho….vishwas ek aisi cheez hai, jo jeetni padti hai…..Bas ek baad yaad rakho beta…..pati patni ke rishte bahot najuk hote hai….Isse sirf pyar se jitte ja sakte hain…..nafrat ya gusse se nahi….Jo hua woh bhul jao…..jao Kripa ko breakfast ke liye le aao….he said patting his back….Gayatri smiled and wiped his faces hugging him…..

 

G: Hume tumse koi shikayat nahi….aur vishwas bhi hai, ki tum Kripa ka pura khayal rakhoge……usse chot ayi, woh tumhne jaan bujh kar to nahi ki na…..kabhi kabhi ho jata hai….sabse acha to ye hua na, ki Divya ko sachai ka pata lag gaya…...uss ke sar par se itna bada bojh haat gaya…...Jao…..kal dopahar se kuch nahi khaya Kripa ne…..usse bahar le aao…….

 

Angad nodded at them and walked towards Kripa's door…..

 

Surya kept a hand on Gayatri's shoulder and squeezed it….she nodded at him with a smile and went to the kitchen…..

 

He slowly opened the door and looked in…..Kripa was sleeping with her face burrowed in her pillow……

 

A: Kripa…..Mujhe maaf nahi karogi…...Kripa shook her face…..Please….SORRY….mein apni bhool manta hun… jab Divya bhabhi ko cancer ho sakta hai, iska ehsaas hua to aisa laga, mano ek toofan aaya ho….Kuch dikhai hi nahi diya….dhundle man se sara ghussa tumpar utara…..samjhane ka mauka tak nahi diya…bas sirf ye yaad raha ki tumne jhoot kaha...he said looking at her with tearful eyes……Suddenly Kripa got up and went to him and hugged him tightly…….he stood there stunned for a minute or so and then slowly circled his arms around her….closing his eyes as tears soaked her neck and shoulders…..They stood there in eachothers arms for a long time…….Kripa looked up at him…..he was about to say something when she kept a finger on his lips and shook her head….Her eyes filled with tears…..

 

K: Mein janti hun…..tum tensed the…..meine sachai chipayi…..meri galati thi…..aur tumne mujhe pucha nahi iska karan….yeh tumhari galti…..ho gaya na hissab barabar…..she said smiling through her tears….Angad nodded and then shook his head…..He took her hands and showed her the wound………

 

A: Hisaab barabar kabhi nahi hoga…….he said through tears in his eyes……Kripa smiled…..

 

K: Ye to meri chudiyon ne di hai……..tumne nahi….

 

A: Jhooti…..he whishpered kissing her hands…..mere sath aao…..

 

K: kahan?

 

A: Niche Mandir…….sawal mat puchana…..

 

Kripa nodded and slowly walked with him……..

 

They walked to the door and Kripa told her mom that they would be back in few minutes…..when Arjun's door opened…..he walked looking at Angad angrily….

 

A: Jiji….aap inke sath kahin nahi jaogi….he said pulling her back in….

 

K: Arjun….she looked at him surprised….Kya hua…..

 

A: Aap nahi jayengi….bas…..aap inse shadi bhi nahi karengi…..he said looking at Angad angrily and pulling her in….Kripa and Angad looked at him shocked….

 

S: Arjun, ye kya bachpana hai beta…..Angad ne maafi mangi na…..saab thik ho gaya hai….jane do unhe…..

 

A: Nahi…..he shouted at his parents….jiji kahin nahi jayegi….

 

G: Arjun…..

 

A: nahi mama…..mujhe saab pata hai…..mere ek class ka dost hai, jiske papa abussive the…..Angad's hand shiverd a little, hearing the word abussive…..and Kripa looked at him with concern…..woh roj mere dost ki ma ko marte the aur mere dost ko bhi……teacher ne police bulaya tha school mein ek din……Angad ne bhi hurt kiya jiji ko……mein jiji ko unke sath kabhi nahi jane dunga…..he said making Kripa come inside……..Every one looked at him stunned especially Avantika and Dilip, who walked in just a couple of minutes back……No one could say a word…..How could they make him understand that he did not do it on purpose…..

 

G: Arjun Angad tumse bada hai…..naam se nahi bulate…..she said sternly…..

 

A: honge bade…..par woh mere jiju nahi hai…Abhi jiji ki shadi nahi hui insi….Jiji inse shadi nahi karegi….I wont let him…..Agar jiji inse shadi karegi to ye jiji ko marenge, dekha nahi jiji kitna ro rahi thi jab inhone yeh chot pahunchayi..……keh dijiye inse ki ye yahan se chale jay…..Get out Angad….Get out….he yelled loudly and pushed his back with force, Angad stumbled a little back, and so did Kripa, who was holding on to Angad's hand, but Angad held her and supported her, stopping her from falling……..Arjun, kept looking at him angrily, when suddenly Gayatri went to him and slapped him hard on his face…..

 

A: Gayatri……she said …..quickly going to Arjun and hugging him……Arjun started crying looking at Angad angrily……Angad slowly removed his hands from Kripa's…..Kripa tried to hold him back, but he shook his head sadly with tears and slowly walked out of the house……Dilip looked at him angrily as well……

 

A: Chup ho ja beta…..she said wiping his tears….Gayatri, isse kyun maar rahi ho…..galti to Angad ki hai……issi kis baat ki sajja de rahi ho……she said hugging him….…Ye to ek bhai hone ka farz pura kar raha hain…she said carrsing his cheeks, where there were red marks……..shayad Angad Kripa ke layak hi nahi…….Kripa and Gayatri looked down with tears in her eyes…..Surya went to Gayatri and hugged her closing his eyes….Then he indicated her to go to Arjun…..

 

Gayatri went near Arjun and hugged …..never in her life had she ever raised her hand on her kids…..but today…..After a long time she wiped his tears…..

 

G: Jiji kahin nahi ja rahi, beta….jao apne kamre mein jao…..thik hai…..Arjun nodded slowly and looked at Kripa….Kripa gave him an encouraging smile and went and hugged him…..She then took him to his room…..Closing the door behind them……

 

Gayatri wiped her tears and Avantika went to her…..

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
oh my god... you changed the complete atmosphere..
btw I loved Arjun... he reacted pretty well... three cheers for his reaction !!
Kripa forgave Angad pretty soon... so it was well covered by Arjun Smile



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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
awesome part glad to see angad admit his mistake but its wrong every one punishing him i am feeling bad for angad di I know he did wrong but he admit arjun he react with out knowing all truth angad dint hurt Kripa perporsly kripa and her mom dad forgive him nice I hope marriege won't stop I don't like avantika word angad kripa ke layak nahi just one mistake and they go this much far this hurt me also I   Am crying with angad . Update soon di hope next part not sad one

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