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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 51)

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
hey di awesome and great part
 
can't wait till they get married and all that fun they will have
 
kripa and angad r so happy
 
love the way angad tease kripa
 
pleaseee continue soon
 
love ya
 
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
aww.. as u usual this was a fab part..u dont stop surprising me with ur writing...u have awesome talent..wish i had it too... anywaz..bk to the update...

loved it...nice to know they r getting married soon...wld that b b2 josh n mishti's?...parents are concerned...haha bt i feel angad wldnt let anything wrong happen...bt honestly i wld be very embarrassed if someone caught me doing something n then d parents found out...lol..n it was nice to see kripa's parent's being satisfied..n  not worrying like they did earlier..u no when surya said, "im not sure how will i send kripa back to the place where i wanted to save her from" or something like that..n now they r satisfied...oh n the best part was how u r portraying each emotion that a women goes through when she gets married...thanks for writing this wonderful part n sending the pm!!..plz continue soon! :)

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
wow
loved it =)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
thanks for pms di
great parts

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Thanks Friends...
 
@ SPVD - Yeah, for a happy life and support in ups and downs of the life, a person always needs his family by him and if the family is good, even a bad person, can take a turn and be good...So, family values and love is always necessary for the relationship to work...
 
@Monu - Oh Yeah monu, it is always said that everything happens for good and we realise this only when time flies by...So, in case of Angad, it is good for him, that someone saw them, it means they will be tied up soon...!!
 
@Jria- Thanks Ria...I am glad you like it...
 
@Mittal - Oh, mittal I know, you will always love the sweets..!!
 
@nine2 - Yes dear, with such a big joint family, it is embarrassing to find that some one had seen you with your lover in such  a compromising position...Surya has accepted the fact that Kripa's future is Angad...He can't deny the love of his daughters life, any more than the fact that once again may it be due to so called luck, the two met and fell in love, with eachother, with whom, they had been tied by their elders years back...And Gayatri's support and Angad's good nature helped his decision as well...!! I am glad you think that I potrayed the feelings better...I tried but was not sure, if i had done justcie to the emotional scenes, which are a lot in this ff...!!
 
Thanks everyone else who read as well as who commented...I am glad I could write up to your expectations...
 
Thanks to all the silent readers as well, who loved the ff...
 
Lots of Love
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged

Part – 26

 

Soon the vendors came to show saris and jwellery and after an hour or so they selected couple of sets for Kripa and one for Divya as well……Avantika even took one for Aliyah….…They all selected saris and ghagras after Kripa had selected some for herself…..They then asked to show some rings, when Angad stopped them….saying he already has one for Kripa…..Kripa blushed and looked down….while everyone laughed at him asking it to show it to them…..

 

Angad bought the ring, he had got for her with the set and showed it to every one….Everyone were impressed by his choice…..

 

Later Angad and Kripa went with Surya and Dilip to select the cards……After they were done…..they went to sweet shop to select some sweets for tomorrow and then went to order some flowers and other stuff required…They went to a showroom and looked through some clothes for themselves…..later after everything was done.…..They were back by 4….They had some tea and rested a little….In the evening Ashok came to meet them…..Kripa went to him and touched his feet….

 

Ashok: Kaisi ho beta….he asked with a smile…

 

K: Ji thik hun uncle……Auntiji kaisi hai? Aur aapki tabiyat?

 

Ashok: Hum bilkul thik hai…..kal tumhare school gaya tha…..he said looking at Surya…..Kripa ke ane ki baat ki, to sare bache puchne lage the….ki Kripa didi, unse milane ayegi ya nahi….he said chuckling at Kripa….Kripa smiled at him…..Waise acha hua bhai Surya ki tum aa gaye…..Gaye ek saal se itne lecture sune bte ke aur aab bahu bhi aa gayi….dono milkar humesha gussa dikhate hain, kehte hai aaram kiya karo…...he said laughing…

 

D: Barabar to kehte hai Ashok….Tabiyat ka bhi khayal kiya karo…..Itna kamaya tumne, phir bhi tumhara beta, zameen par baithkar khana pasand karta hai…..he said chuckling….Surya looked surprised at them….

 

Ashok: Are kya kahun tumhe Surya, jab company form kiya tha to socha beta bada hoke use chalayega, badhayega…..par mera beta to samaj sewa mein hi laga rehta hai…..uske uppar, kehta hai, ki pure din ki thakan ke baad jo majja niche baithkar khane mein atta hai, woh kahin nahi ata….kehta hai japani log bhi niche baithkar khate hain…..pachan shakti badhti hai…..he said laughing…..Aab woh niche baithne laga to mein aur meri patni bhi usike sath baithte….Table to sirf mehmanon ke liye rakha hua hai….Aur bade ghar bhi shift hone nahi deta….kehta hai….itna bada ghar lekar karenge kya…..ek dusare ka muh bhi nahi dekh sakenge…..he said shaking his head…..Bhagwan ki daya se itna kamaya hai, ki 10 pidhi bhi baithkar khaye na to kum nahi padega….par bte ko koi dilchaspi hi nahi hai…..Bahu ayi hai, woh bhi Nishant jaisi….

 

Dilip and Surya chuckled….

 

S: Aaj mila tha Nishant se subah….Bahot acha laga ussase milke…..Kripa aaksar kanan ki aur uski shadi ki baat karti rehti hai…..

 

Ashok: Hume to yakeen nahi hua, jab Kripa se mile……Tumhara to aata pata tha hi nahi…..Surya chuckled…..

 

D: Ashok, Angad aur Kripa ki shadi 2 weeks baad tair hui hai….Tum se decorators aur caterers ke number chahiye the….

 

Ashok: Haan aaj Kanan aur Nishant ne bataya, tum donon ko bahot bahot badhai ho…..Surya ke ghar mein register mein saab ke no. hain.…..aur mein personally baat karke, kal subah bhej dunga yahan un donon  ko……Aur mera ek dost hai, jo bahut acha photographer hai……Usse kal hi sath le aunga…..sham ko engagement ke function par…...Aur Surya tumhare ane ki khabar sunkar meine do rooms tumhare liye rakhe hain……Baki saab booked hain….shadi ka kuch pata nahi tha, to….

 

S: Koi baat nahi Ashok…..

 

 Ashok: Haan magar tumhe yaad hai na ki uppar ke kamre humne extend karne ka propose kiya tha…..wahan meine ek suite banaya hai….usme 2 bedroom hall aur kitchen aur dinning bhi hai….Bahot bada nahi hai…..par kafi comfortable hai...

 

S: To bas aur kya chahiye…..utna to bahot ho gaya……Waise Ashok mujhe puchana tha ki kya tum ye ghar, shadi ke functions ke liye bhi rent karte ho? He asked a little confused….Ashok laughed and shook his head….

 

Ashok: Nahi Surya, Nishant aur Kanan ki shadi pehli shadi thi wahan…….Shadi ke liye agar ghar deta to itna maintain karna mushkil tha……Aur guests ko bhi takleef hoti…..wahan jo bhi guests ate hain woh alag alag deshon se ate hain…..isiliye unka khas khayal rakhna padta hai…..4 security ke log bhi isiliye lagaye hain…..Actually Kanan ke parents jyada afford nahi kar sakte the….aur humare bahot rishtedar aur friends the……to meine unhe kaha ki shadi yahin apne hotel mein karte hain, ussase unhe venue ka kharcha nahi hoga…..aur Kanan ko bhi tumhara ghar bahot acha lagta tha…..Isiliye wahan unki shadi hui…..Surya nodded with a smile, sighing a little….

 

Gayatri and Kripa came down to go with them….After introducing Gayatri to Ashok they went to Surya' s house together…..Arjun, Angad and Kartik were busy playing games and Arjun said he would see the house later…..Gayatri had at last left him there and went down with Kripa….

 

Surya and Gayatri were amazed to see the place…..the huge old gates were replaced…..Walls around were repaired and colored…..the new big fountain in front of the place attaracted quite an attention….while small garden around with lots of plants made the place look wonderful…..The full house was also colored and well maintained…..

 

Ashok: Yahan maintenance ke liye 14 log hai….ek mali, ek ghar ke maintainance ke liye, 2 cooks aur 2 cleaners 1 manager, ek door man, ek driver aur ek tourist guide….aur 4 security guards, jo do-do ke shift mein kaam karte hain….he explained…aur 2 aisi tourist busses bhi isi hotel ke naam rakhi hai…airport pickup aur local tours ke liye…..as soon as they drove in front of the door, the door man with traditional Rajashthani dress opened the door of the car…….and bent and smiled at them…..Ashok introduced him to Surya and his family and told them about their take over…..Gayatri looked around with tears in her eyes….she bent down and touched the floor and kept the hand on her forehead…they went inside, and were stunned to see the transformation….

 

Huge chandeliers, wonderful warm colors…..velvet carpet at the door and red and golden drapes of the windows greeted their eyes…..The living area was equally royal….with huge traditional sofas and tables….side lamps and big beautiful carpet…..There were huge pots at every corner with beautiful plants and dry flowers decorated along with paintings of Rajasthan on every wall…..They were stunned to see the transformation….Gayatri went and touched the railings and looked up in amazement….The steps were covered with velvet thin red carpet in the middle and it looked wonderful…

 

They walked to the huge dining area and the room was same as before and even the furniture was restored…..Gayatri went to the kitchen and was surprised…..It was a huge kitchen, she knew it, but it was totally modernized…..When they used to stay, they had a freeze and couple of gas tops….Ashok introduced them to the cook and then they saw the room, which was empty for years……It was converted into sitting area with few games and TV…for the guests….They then took out their shoes and went to the temple……Gayatri had tears in her eyes looking at the Srinathji Idol….She sat before the idol and closed her eyes…..Surya came to her and put a hand on her shoulder comforting her….Gayatri looked at him with tears and kept her head on his chest…….They could not speak a word….Ashok and Dilip silently left the room to give them some privacy…..Kripa stood there behind her parents with tears in her eyes…..Surya looked around after a while and saw Kripa standing behind….He went to her with a smile and hugged her as well…..They walked out and went to couple of more rooms besides the main hall, one with 4-5 computers and the other with a full gym…..

 

They walked in the back yard, and were surprised to see beautiful garden….….The garden was well maintained with stone paths and sculptures….Some old tree still there...after spending some time there, they went in and walked up.……Most of the rooms were occupied….so they could not see the rooms….They met the manager who welcomed them with a smile and told them about the place…..Ashok took the keys of the suite upstairs and thanked the manager and they went up……They talked about few issues they need to take care of and went to couple of rooms which were vacated in the morning….Ashok then took them to the end of the hall and opened the door……He showed 3 doors joined from 3 sides and suggested to have a door a little further down, so they could get 2 bedrooms and the suite for themself…..Surya nodded and liked the suggestion…Ashok volunteered to have it done in couple of days and Surya readily agreed….It would give them privacy during the wedding…..

They saw both the rooms which were well furnished with a bed, cupboard desk and small chair and table near the window…..There were 3-4 beautiful frames as well as some dried flowers decorated in big pots besides the dresser…..The bathrooms were repaired, painted and new fixtures were fixed..…Then they entered the suite, which was extended in the balcony area…. and was amazed to see it was beautiful…..Surya had thought it was small, but it had a huge living area as well as very well equipped and ready to use kitchen and dining with 6 chairs and a small patio, with 4 chairs and a small table..…..There was a common bathroom and two bedrooms side by side, one of which had its own bath.….It was well furnished and Ashok explained that they had rented this suite to families or people who came for more than 3 months' time….Surya was impressed and liked the suite…..He turned to Ashok and thanked him for taking care of everything so well……Surya was even more surprised to see that Ashok also had elevators fixed for some disabled people….

 

They went on the terrace by escalators and looked surprised to see tile floorings and few seating chairs with umbrellas….There were few sculptures and some flower pots in the corner…..After meeting all the people who were present at the house, they went back home, thanking Ashok. He promised to put the door in within couple of days and left after some time….

 

Surya was quite tired by the time they came home….His leg was hurting very badly….though he did not say so….Gayatri went to help Avantika in the kitchen, while Dadi was preparing for evening Aarati in the puja room……Kripa went in the puja room to talk to her…..

 

Angad came down where Dilip and Surya were sitting on the sofa…..he looked at Surya's strained face and knew he was in lots of pain….

 

A: Kakasa…..aap jakar upar aram kariye…..Mein aapko dawai de deta hun…..Dilip looked at Surya immediately….

 

D: Kya baat hai Surya, tabiyat thik nahi hai? he asked a little concerned….

 

S: Nahi Dilip…..bas abhi bhi jyada der chalun to pair dard hone lagta hai….mein thik hun…..Pata nahi yeh Angad ko humesha kaise pata chalta hai, ki mujhe dard ho raha hai…..he said chuckling…..

 

A: Kakasa chaliye upar….mein aata hun aapke sath…..he said making him get up….

 

D: Haan Surya aaj jara jyada hi ghumna ho gaya……mere bhi dhyan mein hi nahi aya…..ja jakar upar aaram kar…..

Surya made it to his room, with Angad's help…though every step was making him sweat badly…..Angad frowned when he saw Surya totally exhausted and close his eyes till the time they reached his room……He quickly took some pain killers from the side table, where he had kept it yesterday after coming and gave it to him…..Surya gratefully took it and put his head back and closed his eyes……

 

Angad left the room and went down to the kitchen….he told Gayatri about Surya's health and took some oil and heated it a little….

 

A: Gayatri, tum jao uppar aur dekho Surya ko…..Mein khana upar bhej dungi Ramu ke haath…..Gayatri nodded and ran up tensed…..Angad came up beside her with the oil and went to Surya and started pulling his pants up….so he could massage him….Surya opened his eyes and looked at Angad….

 

S: Are beta iski koi jarurat nahi….maine pain killers le liye hai na thik ho jayega thodi der baad…..shayad woh do-teen din se walking par nahi gaya aur exercise bhi nahi kiya to dard jyada ho gaya….tu rehne de…..

 

A: Kakasa….massage se aapko aram milta hai na…..to thodi der kardunga to acha lagega….dard jyada ho gaya to kal aap sagai mein nachenge kaise….he said chuckling and started massaging his leg slowly…..Surya looked at Gayatri who was standing near the bed looking at him….

 

S: Are bhagyawan itna tension mat lo….aao yahan baitho do minute pass mere…..

Gayatri went and sat next to him….

 

G: Bataya kyun nahi wahan ki dard ho raha tha….itna upar niche karne ki jaroorat kya thi aapko….she said angrily…..

 

S: Tu bhi na Gayatri…itna tension logi na to mathe pe budhape ki lakir aa jayegi…..Gayatri frowned at him…..acha thik hai baba maaf karo aab to….he said chuckling putting a hand on her shoulder…..

 

G: Nahi karungi…..apna sehed ka khayal nahi rakhenge na, to bilkul nahi karungi…..

 

A: Kakisa ne bilkul thik kaha kakasa….yaad hai na doctor ne jyada excercion mana kiya hai…..

 

S: Lo abhi ye bhi chalu ho gaya……he said shaking his head…..par Gayatri ek baat kahun, aaj bhi gusse me tum bahot achi lagti ho….he said kissing her on her cheeks grinning …..Gayatri looked up and blushed…..

 

G: Aaap bhi na damad ke samne….she said chukling….getting up a little embarrased……

 

Angad chuckled and so did Surya as Gayatri ran away from there ……

 

Angad massaged Surya for half hour or so and then slowly walked out of the room closing the door behind him…..Surya was fast asleep as the medicines were taking its effect……He went down washing his hands….

 

A: Angad beta, Ja ye plate kakasa ko de aa….Ramu kaam mein laga hai….

 

A: Nahi ma….Kakasa so rahe hain….uthne ke baad kakisa de degi….par mujhe nahi lagta woh kal tak uthenge….Unhe maine do tablets diye hain…..bahot dard ho raha tha….Avantika frowned….and looked at him with concern…..

 

A: Abhi thik nahi hai unka pair? Mujhe laga abhi thik ho gaya hoga….

 

A: Waise to thik hai ma….par unhe exercise aur chalna compulsory hai….aur jyada upar niche karne se problem hoti hai…..Unke liye Nishant se physio therapist ke bare mein aaj puchana bhul gaya….khair kal puch lunga…..

 

A: Hmmm….thik hai….tu baki sabko khane par bula la jara….Gayatri aur Kripa dadi ke sath mandir mein hain….aur Divya aur Kartik uppar kamre mein hain, Arjun ke sath kuch khel rahe hain.….thik hai….she said putting everything on the table…..

 

Angad ran up to call Divya, Kartik and Arjun…..They were all sitting on the bed playing UNO……He chuckled…..

 

A: Arjun….pura din ek ke baad ek game khelta hai….bor nahi hota…..aaj ghar dekhne bhi nahi gaya…..

Kartik and Divya chuckled…..

 

Ar: Are Jiju…..aao na yahan….Kartik bhaiya jeet rahe hain…..mujhe harna nahi hai…..he said making faces….

 

A: Ek kaam karte hain….la yahan tere cards…..he took all the cards and then grinned…..draw kar dete hain…..issase tere harne ka sawal hi nahi hota…..he said chuckling…..Kartik laughed and hit Angad by pillow….and Arjun joined in the pillow fight…..Divya laughed at them and got up from the bed……Chalo abb khana laga diya hai mom ne……mein bulane aya tha….he said ruffling Arjun's hairs……he ducked down and ran outside……

 

D: Arjun, dhere…..steps par bhago mat….Divya called out…..going after him….

 

Angad ran to her before she went down….

 

A: Are bhabhi ruko…..Divya looked at him with a smile

 

D: Ji kahiye devarji…..Angad chuckled and went to her and kissed her cheeks…..Divya blushed and looked at him surprised…..

 

A: Mujhe chacha banane ke khushi mein…..he said grinning….Kartik came and tried to hit him on his head……but Angad ducked down like Arjun and ran down winking at Divya…..Divya was blushing all the way till they went down…..Kartik shook his head frowning at his brother…..

 

Kartik was glaring at him angrily all through the dinner, but Angad kept grinning at him….Kripa saw there interaction and smiled….She understood  that Angad must have done some mischief, due to which Kartik was angry….. But he looked so cute with his mischivious face…..Like Arjun….

 

A: Are Kartik….ye Angad ko itne gusse se kyun dekh rahe ho….she asked frowning….when she saw he was not eating….

 

A: Haan bhaiya…..kyun dekh rahe ho…..meine kya kiya? He asked innocently…..Divya blushed even more….and Angad chuckled….

 

D: Are Angad ki koi shararat hogi…..nahi to itna nahi hasta……Dilip said laughing….

 

Ar: Mujhe pata hai Kyun gussa hai Kartik bhaiya Angad se……Divya closed her eyes….hoping he would not blurt it in front of all the elders….

 

D: Kis wajah se naraj hai…..?

 

Ar: Woh Jiju ne ake humara game draw kar diya na, to kartik bhaiya jeet nahi paye…..he said grinning looking at Angad with twinkle in his eyes….Divya sighed in relief…..aur Jiju ne Divya bhabhi ko ate waqt gal par kiss kiya……isiliye……he said chuckling….…..Every one shocked looked at them……and Angad chuckled…..Kripa chuckled next and everyone started laughing……Divya was red and could not look up all through the dinner….While Kartik rolled his eyes….

 

G: Badmash…..chal khana kha…..Gayatri scolded him chuckling…..

 

Angad and Arjun gave hi'5s to each other laughing……Avantika pinched Arjun's cheek lovingly, laughing at him and …. then held Angad's ears…..

 

A: Angad kyun bhabhi ko satata rehta hai…..

 

A: Are ma….mein to mujhe chacha banane ke khushi ki badhai de raha tha…..he said pulling her hands….laughing….

 

Ar: Aap kiske chacha ho jiju? He asked puzzled…..Devyani chuckled….

 

Avantika smiled and sat on the table for the dinner...

 

A: Divya bhabhi ke baby ka chacha banega saat mahinon ke baad.……Avantika said smiling….

 

Ar: Are wah….phir to mein bhi chacha ban jaunga na….he said grinning….Kartik and the others chuckled

 

A: Tu mama kehlayega…..Arjun grinned….

 

Ar: Koi baat nahi mama hi sahi…..phir mein bhi bhabhi ko kiss dunga…he said getting up and going to Divya and kissing her on her cheek with a grin….Divya smiled at him and looked down blushing, while others chuckled…..

 

Angad looked at Kripa who was smiling and eating her dinner...since morning they could not spend a minute with each other...as if she knew he was looking she looked up... Angad indicated her to come up... Kripa shook her head and looked down finishing her dinner…...she looked at him after some time again…...he made puppy faces , but she shook her head again smiling...he glared at her angrily and did not look up after that...Kripa smiled and kept eating...

 

When at last everything was done, dadi told Angad and Kripa to go to srinathji temple tomorrow morning as everyone else would be busy...Angad and Kripa nodded and went to their rooms ...it was around 11...but there was no sign of Kripa...a little disappointed and a little angry , he started going down when he saw her coming...he grinned and looked at her...she looked so beautiful...Kripa spotted him on the top and walked up looking at him...once on the top, he raised his arms and she gave her hand in his...he walked to other side of the terrace, where it was dark and no one could see them...as soon as they reached Angad pulled her near him and hugged her tightly...yesterday's togetherness had made him more restless...he sighed when he inhaled her sweet baby shampoo smell...

 

Kripa rested her head and smiled in content...his eagerness made her smile a little...she kissed his chest lightly making him inhale longer...she could feel his every beat...

 

A: Kripa...don't be a tease...he said burrowing his face in her hairs...

 

K: meine kya kiya? She asked innocently

 

A: oh so you don't know? He asked smiling in her hairs

 

Kripa shook her head...he could feel her smiling as well

 

A: jhooti... Liar he said in her ears biting it slowly...Kripa shivered...kya hua...he asked chuckling

 

K: thand lag rahi thi...she said smiling

 

A: abhi garam karta Hun tumhe...he said chuckling...letting her go for a second...and taking her hands and putting it on his chest and gathering her close... Angad slowly bought her lips near and kissed her lightly...chalo niche baithte hain...he said pulling her down...

 

Kripa silently sat there without a word...deep in thoughts...putting her head on his shoulder….

 

A: Kripa mein tumhse ek baat Kehna chahta tha...

 

K: kaho...

 

A: Mujhe pata hai, ki tum mujh se bahot pyar karti ho….aur mein ye bhi janta hun ki tumhare mama papa se tum shayad mujh se jyada chahti ho…..She started saying something but he kept a hand on her lips….she looked up at him….. bachon ke liye parents hi saab kuch hote hain…unki jagah koi kabhi nahi le sakta…..par jab hum kisise pyar karte hain to unke liye ek khas jagah banate hain dil mein…..jo hum bhi nahi jante ki humare pas woh jagah thi…Pyar to badmein atta hai….par apne ma papa humare sath humare jeevan ke pehle din se hissa ho jate hain…..Mein tumse sirf ye kehna chahta hun, ki jis tarah tum mere mom dad ko apna samajh kar is ghar ko apnaogi….usi tarah tumhare mama papa bhi mere hue….Aur mein vada karta hun, ki unka aadar saman aur seva mein ussi lagan se karunga, jaise mein apne mama papa ka karta hun…..Unki khushi aur gum, hum se utni hi judi hai jitni humari….Mujhe malum hai, apna ghar chod kar ane mein takleef hogi tumhe, par woh humesha humare jeevan ka hissa bankar sath hi rahenge…..he said holding her face and looking in her eyes….slowly...Kripa nodded and closed her eyes and rested her head on his chest…..not saying a word…..

 

Angad hugged her to him and closed his eyes….Time flew by and they fell asleep together…..It was early morning, when Kripa's eyes opened….Her head was on Angad's lap and Angad was sleeping leaning his head on the side wall…..horrified she slowly moved Angad's hand which was on her shoulder and got up and looked around…..and then at Angad, who was still fast asleep….

 

K: Angad….utho….Angad….she shook him a little hard…..Angad got up with a jerk…..

 

A: Kya hua Kripa….he said looking around confused and then he realized…..Oh God….neend kab lag gayi pata hi nahi chala…..he said rubbing his eyes…..Then he looked at her panicked face…and chuckled….she looked at him frowning….Relax Kripa….he said kissing her cheek….aaj humari sagai hai….he said chuckling….Kripa rolled her eyes….

 

K: Kisiko pata chal gaya to…..she asked frowning….

 

A: Nahi chalega….aisa karo tum jao niche…..mein thodi der ke baad ata hun…..Kripa nodded unsurely….He sighed….agar sath jayenge to shak ho jayega….tum pehle jao….taiyar ho jao….Mandir jana hai na…..Kripa started going, when he stopped her ……He pulled her to him and kissed her fully on her lips…..Puri raat saath gujari,ek kiss to milni chahiye na….he said grinning…..Kripa blushed all red and ran from there…..Thankfully there was no one in the hall way and she reached her room…..She quickly took her clothes and went to take bath….How foolish of her….God if someone would have seen them…..she groaned while showering…..She did not even know when she had fallen asleep….she got out and was ready within hour…..She wore one of the saris they had bought yesterday….she slowly opened the door and went down……

 

She went to the puja room to pray….where dadi was already seated…..

 

D: Aaaja beta….tera hi intajar kar rahi thi…..chal ek acha sa bhajan suna de……kitne din ho gaye teri awaj nahi suni…..Kripa smiled and nodded…..She slowly started singing……

 

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Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

 

Matki se Makhan Phir Se Chura, Gopiyon Ka Virha Tu Aake Mita

Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

Mein Katputhli Lo Tere Saath, Kuch Bhi Nahin Hai Ab Mere Haath

Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

 

Jai Jai Ram, Jai Jai Ram, Jai Jai Ram, Seeta Ram, Jai Jai Ram Jai Jai Ram

 

Hey Nandlala Hey Krishna Swamy, Tum To Ho Gyani Dhani Antharyami

Mahima Tumhari Jo Bhi Samaj Na Paaye, Khakh Mein Mil Jaaye Woh Khalkaami

Aisa Vigyan Job Hi Tujh Ko Na Mane, Teri Shraddadon Ki Shakti Na Jaane

Jo Paat Padaya Taat Manegi Daatha Anjan Ko Woh Aaj Bhi Sachi Raah Dikhaye Mere Jeevan Ko; Meri Aathma Ko Pawanasadhar, Jal Beethyaake Mohe Garath Dikha Ke

 

Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

 

Nayya Majdhar Mein Bhi Tune Bachaaya, Geeta Ka Gyan De Ke Jag Ko Jagaaya

Chu Liya Zameen Se Hi, Aasman Ka Taara, Narsingh Ka Roop Dhar Ke Hiranya Ko Maara

Raavn Ke Sar Ko Kaata Ram Roop Le Ke, Radhe Ka Mann Churaaya Prem Rang De Ke

Mere Naynon Mein Phool Khile Sab Teri Khushboo Ke ;

Mein Jeevansaathi Chun Loon Tere Pairon Ko Chu Ke

Kis Ke Maathe Sajaaun More Pankh Tera, Kayi Sadiyon Janmon Se Tu Hai Mera

 

Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

 

Mukundha Mukundha Krishna, Mukundha Mukundha

Mujhe Daan Mein De Vrindha Virindha Virindha

 

By the time she was finished all the members of the family were in the puja room…..Kripa surprised got up and looked at them all….

 

A: Gayatri, tum ne bataya nahi ki yeh itna sundar gati hai…..she said smiling….

 

D: Mujhe pata tha…..pichli baar bhi isne mere srinathji ke liye gaya tha….she said chuckling….

 

G: Bhabhi isne 7-8 saal wahan classical music sikha hai…..awaj achi thi, to ek saheli ne use join karne ke liye kaha tha….

 

A: Avantika kissed Kripa's forehead…..bahot pyari awaj hai….aur itne dil se gaya isne ki aisa laga mano abhi bhagwan ayenge…..she said chuckling…..

 

D: Kripa beta, ye Prasad sab ko de to jara…..she said giving her a bowl….

 

K: Ji dadi….she said taking it….She gave prashad to every one, while everyone praised her….Finally she gave prashad to Angad, who was looking at her adoringly…..Kripa blushed thinking about last night and turned around quickly keeping the bowl in front of the idol….

 

D: Jao….aabhi jao aur nashta kar lo….phir mandir ho anna….Kripa and Angad looked at eachother….

 

K: Dadi mandir se ane ke baad kha lenge….she said remembering the last time, Angad had not eaten till they came out of the temple….

 

D: Bilkul nahi….she called Avantika...Avantika came in the room…

 

A: Ji Ma?

 

D: Dekho inhe kuch khaye bina mandir nahi bhejna….bhooke paith bhagwan ki aur dhyan kaise lagega…..she said scolding them…..Surya, aa beta baith…..she said looking at him who stood there silently…..

 

Angad and Kripa took their leave and went with Avantika, while Surya smiled at both of them and sat down besides Devyani…..

 

S: Kakisa, aap mujhse naraj to nahi ho na? He asked after some time….

 

Devyani looked at him surprised….

 

D: Naraaj kyun houngi beta…..she asked keeping a hand on his head….

 

S: Woh itne saal tak meine aap se baat bhi nahi ki…..he said sighing….

 

Devyani smiled sadly…..

 

She looked at the Srinathji Idol….

 

D: Nahi beta….mein naraj nahi thi….par dil jarur dukha mera….Jab tu paida hua, tab mein ne hi tumhe saab se paheli god mein liya tha……Yaad hain mujhe tumhari ma ro ro kar mujhe keh rahi thi ki aab aap hi mere donon bachon ka dhyan dena…..she said remembering those moments with tears…..Krishna  aur Nandini donon uswaqt tumhare ma ke gujar jane se bikhar gaye the…….Pehle 14 din tu mere sath hi tha…..inhi hathon se tumhe loriyan gakar sulaya hai.….inhi hathon se meine tumhe khana bhi khilaya hai, tumhari shararatein dekhi…..bada hota dekha, phir shadi hui….teri beti ko pehli bar god mein liya to aisa laga mano mein phir se dadi ho gayi…..Mere liye jaise Dilip tha waise hi tum the….she said looking at him…..Mein tumhe apne dil se beta manti thi…..Tum jab bhi ladoo mangte, to dil mein ajeeb si khushi hoti….. Gayatri ko bhi apni beti mana hai meine……Jab pata chala ki who apne ma ke liye kitna tarasti thi, to ji chaha ki uske itni saalon ki kami pura karungi….par jab tu chala gaya, aur phir piche mud kar dekha bhi nahi, to aisa laga ki meine ek beta kho diya hai, Gayatri ko mein woh pyar nahi de payi, jiske liye woh bechari tadapti, uski ankhon mein meine woh sunapan dekha tha.…..Mein ghanto sochti aur kabhi kabhi inhe bhi kosti, ki kyun inhone jate samay aisa kiya jisase in do parivaron mein itni duri aa gayi….par vishwas bhi tha….ki inki baat sach hogi ek din…..Issi vishwas ke sath jee rahi thi….apne din kaat rahi thi……Surya had tears in his eyes and he looked down a little ashamed of himself…...He had hurt Devyani, he had kept Gayatri away from the one person, who had showered her with motherly love…..He never had felt that emptiness as his brother and sister in law had always showered him with that love including Devyani….But Gayatri's paternal uncle and aunt were always concerned about their own kids….they had not even come to Kripa's name keeping ceremony….They had just thrown Gayatri away from their life as if she never belonged to them….maybe she did not….He was guilty for hurting her as well…

 

S: Mujhe maaf kardijiye kakisa….pata nahi…jab Kripa ki maang mein sindoor dekha, to kya ho gaya tha…..mano aise laga, ki Kripa ki zindagi yahan tham si jayegi….aisa laga mano uska bhavishya yahan rehkar barbad ho jayega…..Bhaisa ke haar waqt Kripa ke ladki hone ki wajah se jo dabav padta, ussase bhi gussa ata….. mujhe ussi daar aur gusse ne ye faisla lene par majboor kar diya…..Apne beti ke bare mein sochte sochte mein itna swarthy ho gaya ki aapke, gayatri ke, bhaisa aur bhabhi ke ankhon mein chupe ansu ko dekh hi nahi sakha…..

 

Devyani held Surya's face and made him look at her….

 

D: Nahi beta….apne bachon ke bhavishya ke bare mein sochne ka sab ma baap ka kartavya hai….tum swarthy nahi the….tum to apna farz nibha rahe the……Kripa aaj jo kuch bhi hai, jo sanskar usme hain, woh sab tumhari hi diye hui hai……..Shayad ye thode saal ki judai jaroori thi…..Shayad ye vidhata ka likha hua tha…..Jo bhi ho….woh saab ho gaya…..na to iske bare mein sochkar apna man maila karna, na dukh…..Kripa aur Angad ko milna tha….so mile….hum saab phir ek hue….aur kya chahiye….Bhagwan ki leela to aprampar hai….Kripa ko sanjog yahin le aya…..Shayad tere kakasa, ye jante the….she wiped his tears and kept a hand on his head…….chal aab Srinathji ko pranam kar….aur sham ki tayari kar…..aaj mere Radha Kishan phir se jud ne wale hain….she said smiling…..Surya smiled and did as she told and took prashad and got up...They came out to see Kripa and Angad having some fruits…..

 

A: Ma…khane se to mana kiya in donon ne…..par phal aur dudh de diya meine….she said chuckling….

 

D: Dekha Surya…..hum chahe kitna hi soche ke bache purani riti rivaj todde….aaj ke naye badalti duniya ko apnaye……..par sanskaron ka khel dekho……bache apne aap un sanskaron mein bandh jate hain, unhe na kehne ki jaroorat hoti hai, na batane ki…..she sat down chuckling…..Angad and Kripa smiled at her……once finished they touched the feet of all elders and started going out….

 

Divya: Kripa ek minute ruko…..Divya said coming to them and handing her a plate…..Ye puja ki samagri…..she said smiling….Kripa smiled and thanked her….and they were on their way….

 

They reached the temple and went in together smiling at each other…….They met the Guruji, who had come yesterday and he happily took the plate and did the puja…..he blessed them both and gave them Prasad….

 



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Awesome  , great full of emotional and love filled part di..love the way Surya and Gaytri went back to their home and how they come to know about all things which gine change while they move to America ...I love Dadi and Surya Talk so much its too good and look like mom got her son back after long wait and family become one again '

Angad and kripa both agar to meet each other good their marriage date coming near ..love the way angad show his love and concern for surya so sweet damad kam beta hai angad

Thank you so much di for this part and pmClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap


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