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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 45)

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part 21
wow loved it...
Angad is going back to India and Kripa doesnt like it at all...
Kripa's parents are so understanding and love her so much...
till Kripa talks about this there will be no-marriagetalk-or-initiation in her house...
love Angad kripa bond and love...
cont soon...

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Thanks Everyone for wonderful comments...
 
@ Monu -  Yeah Monu, bechara Angad, dhai mahine se wait kar raha hai...aab aur kitne din kare aur Kripa usse baat bhi nahi karne deti na...so phone par hi puch liya...
 
@Mittal - Are mittal, diabattes ho jayega agar jyada romantic bana diya to...!!
 
@Deepa - Yeah, Surya was waiting for Kripa's indication, but he forgot that she is his daughter and might be shy to come forward and further she is very attached to him as well as afraid of his reaction to the news...so lets see whats in store for them...
 
Thanks LoverSR, Megha and Sanjana...Thanks all the silent readers...
 
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Part – 22

 

Gayatri, took the medicines and gave it to Surya……

 

S: Kya soch rahi ho?

 

G: Ji kuch nahi…..Abhi Angad se baat ho rahi thi….Surya smiled….

 

S: Kaisa chal raha hai uska kaam…..

 

G: Acha chal raha hai…..abhi kal Atlanta ja raha hain…..Woh next month India jane ka soch raha hain….she said thinking about Kripa…..

 

S: Hmmm…..use ake bhi ab dhai mahine ho gaya…..pata hi nahi chala waqt kaise kat gaya, bachon ke sath….Nahi to soch raha tha….ghar mein 3 mahine kya karunga….Mein bhi abhi office join karne ka soch raha hun…..abhi chal bhi sakta hun…..

 

G: Par itni der baith sakoge vahan…..? she asked frowning…..

 

S: Surya sighed….pata nahi….par abhi leave bhi nahi hai jyada….he said sighing…..

 

Gayatri looked at him worriedly…..He was ok….but still could not stand or sit for long….as his knees throbbed if he did some thing for long…..They had talked to doctor, and he had said that it was normal and it would take atleast 3-4 more months to completely come to normal like before….then too, he needed to be a little careful…..He needed very regular exercise for next 6-7 months and mostly it was good for him, if he continues it for rest of his life……

 

G: Aap without pay leave le lijiye….aur do mahine….ya ghar se kaam karne ki request dijiye…..Mujhe pata hai, ki woh log maan jayenge….akhir 12 saal se yahin par kaam kar rahe hain…..

 

S: Pata nahi Gayatri…..woh log manenge ya nahi….par dekhta hun…..aur 2 weeks hai waise….

 

G: Aap so jaiye…..mein bachon ko dekh kar ati hun….she said getting up….

 

Surya lay down…..thinking….

Gayatri went to Kripa's room and tried to talk to her once more…..but she did not reply…..sighing she went to Arjun's room, who was studying….she kissed his forehead and said goodnight and went to their room….She could not sleep for a long time, thinking about Kripa and her future…as well as about Surya and Angad…..Surya was not fully recovered yet….and going back to work was stressful for him….Yeah he could walk and do everything on his own…..but still standing on his feet too long, or sitting for too long, made his pain worst…..She even thought about Angad….he had become so much a part of their family just in few days, that she got tears in her eyes, thinking about him leaving….and Kripa, she did not know what was in her mind….was she ready for marriage or was she thinking of future education…..For some time she had forgotten about the scholarship thing and was planning about her marriage….but Kripa had been so disappointed by not getting it…..she knew, Kripa was sad, thinking about Angad leaving….she could understand her love…..but was she clear about her future…….was she ready to leave her life and settle to be a wife and daughter in law and adopt to the new environment and traditions in India…? These questions kept nagging her…….

 

S: Gayatri….kya baat hai? Itni bechain kyun ho….he said turning around after midnight…..he had seen how she had been restless for past 3 hours…..He thought she would speak up….but he sighed

 

G: Ji kuch bhi to nahi….aap soye nahi aab tak….She said looking at him surprised….

 

S: Tum itni bechain ho….to mujhe kaise neend ayegi…..bolo….kya baat hai….he said smiling at her…..

 

G: Jee…woh bas….Aap ke office jane ka tension….Angad bhi jane ka soch raha hai…..she said sadly….aur Kripa ka bhavishya….saab itna ulajh gaya hai ki kuch rasta hi nahi dikh raha….Ye ladki thik se decide bhi nahi kar pa rahi hai…ki use age kya karna hai…..Mein shadi ka soch rahi thi….aur woh scholarship ke liye pareshan thi….aab Angad wapas jane ka soch raha hai, to rooth kar baithi hai….Pata nahi kya chahti hai….aur kakisa bhi wahan aass lagaye baithi hai….Mujhe to kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai….Waise Angad Kripa ko support karne ke liye taiyar hai age padhne ke liye….par pata nahi Kripa kya chahti hai….aur aap bhi ussase baat nahi kar rahe hain….Ji woh shayad aap se baat karne mein jhijhak rahi hai…..Akhir aapki beti hai….usse apni shadi ki baat khud thodi na batayegi….Aur aap bhi abhi abhi thik hue….aur aab office jane ki soch rahe ho…..itni der baithkar aap ka phir se kuch problem shuru ho gaya na, to mein kya karungi….she said with tears in her eyes….Surya chuckled at her as she continued to babble, he shook his head and pulled her to him…..

 

S: Are bhagyawan…..kitna soch rahi ho….Itna tension mat lo…..mein to majak kar raha tha…..abhi office nahi jaunga…..promise….he said looking down at her….Gayatri looked up at him frowning….Mein kal Kripa se baat karunga…..tum chinta mat karo….mujhe pata hai aab jyada der karna thik nahi…..Dilip aur Avantika humare haan ka intazar kar rahe hain……Pehle hi unnse itne saal baat nahi karke mujhse bhool hui hai…….dubara galati nahi karunga……aur mujhe yakin hai ki Kripa Angad ek dusare se bahot pyar karte hain, ek dusare ke bina nahi reh sakte..…Mujhe lagta hai ki hume aab uski shadi ka sochna chahiye…..aur agar Kripa ko padhai karni hai to woh aab Angad dekh lega…..Mein ussase kal baat karunga…..tum chinta mat karo….Kal saab thik ho jayega….Mera wada hai tumse….he said kissing her forehead….

Gayatri smiled and kept her head on his shoulder and fell asleep soon…..Surya smiled looking down…..Yes, he thought tomorrow will be a new day for them, indeed…..He was waiting for the right opportunity and it was her here……..Gayatri's worries were all valid, but she needn't worry……..He was with her too…..

 

Kripa on the other side, was as confused…..She did not know what her future held for her….She was sure of one thing though….she wanted to be with Angad forever, even the thought of his leaving made her restless……these few days without him, were a torture…….she missed him so much…..she did not want to talk to any one…..she started filling the tub with hot water and relaxed herself……thoughts of Angad filling her heart soul and mind……

Next day, Kripa came down after having shower early in the morning…….now that her finals were over, she had nothing to do and even Angad was not here….she thought of helping her mom……

 

G: Kripa….chal jaldi se sab table par le ja ye….Papa raah dekh rahe hain breakfast ke liye……Arjun ko bhi bula la…..Subah char baje se padhai kar raha hai….bhook lagi hogi use…..she said smiling…..Kripa smiled slowly and started taking dishes and other things on the table, thanking her mom in her mind for not asking about yesterday night….she had heard her mother calling her twice…..

 

K: Arjun…Kripa shouted from the dining room…..

 

A: Aaya jiji…..panch minute…..abhi nahake aya hun…..

 

K: Thik hai…..jaldi aa….nashta taiyar hai…..

 

S: Good morning beta…..Surya said with a smile coming in the room with the newspaper……

 

K: Good morning papa…

 

Arjun and Gayatri soon came and joined them…..

 

S: Bhai aaj bahot acha lag raha hai….Kitne dinon ke baad sab sath baithkar yahan table par kha rahe hain….he said chuckling….since Kripa had come, they kept eating in bedrooms, initially due to Surya's leg, then due to exams and college and school…..They did not have time to relax and eat together…..some one or the other was always missing…

 

A: Jiji…..jaldi do na…..

 

G: Are….do min shanti se khana to kha le……itni kya jaldi hai…..padhai karne ke liye to pura din time hai…..aur abhi ek hafta baki hai, exams ke liye…..Gayatri scolded, frowning at him…….

 

Arjun made faces and sat quietly while Kripa smiled at him, giving him his plate…..Surya kept his paper down and everyone started eating...Surya looked at Kripa and sighed…..

 

S: Kripa tumhara abhi age ka kya plan hai….Job karna hai, ya age padhai karni hai?

 

Gayatri looked at him and he blinked at her to wait…….Gayatri nodded and started eating her food quietly….yesterday at night Surya told her that today he would speak with Kripa and know about her plans and they would talk with Dilip and Avantika too…..As they were waiting for him to initiate the marriage talk….

 

Kripa stopped eating and played with her food without reply…..

 

K: Woh papa, iske bare mein socha nahi abhi…..she said looking at him slowly…..a little nervous and then looked at her mom….Gayatri raised her eyebrows…..and Kripa shook her head and looked down.

Surya kept quiet and continued eating….

 

G: Kripa khel mat…..khana kha….she said smiling…..Kripa nodded and started eating…

 

Arjun was already done and bid bye to them and ran up to his room……Gayatri frowned at him and shook her head….

 

S: Kripa tum kuch kehna chahti ho mujhse…..he asked when he saw Kripa deep in thoughts…..Kripa jumped a little, coming out of her thougts…

 

K: ji….mera matlab hai ki nahi……papa…..kuch nahi….

 

S: To shayad, kuch batana chahti ho…..? he asked putting his spoon down and drinking his juice….

 

K: Aisi koi baat nahi papa….she said nervous at his angry voice…..

 

S: Magar mein tumse kuch puchana chahta hun…..he said folding his hands and looking at her angrily……

 

Kripa looked up at Gayatri…..for knowing what he was talking…..but Gayatri did not look at her and kept eating her food calmly…..

 

K: Ji papa….she asked looking at him nervously….

 

Surya took out a photo of hers and Angad's from below the newspaper and kept it in front of her…..

 

S: Ye kya hai? Kripa looked at the photo, horrified and frightened…..It was her and Angad's photo taken in Udaipur…..both very close and their faces just apart…..smiling at eachother…….She looked down a little embarrassed as well as frightened….Mere sawal ka jawab do Kripa…..ye kya hai….mein phir puchta hun…..Tum mujhe kuch batana chahti ho?

 

K: Woh papa….woh…..she stammered, not able to look in his eyes…..

 

S: Kripa, meri taraf dekho…..he said angrily……

 

Kripa looked up with tears in her eyes……afraid……

 

S: Aab saab sach sach bolo…ye kitne dinon se chal raha hai, humare pith piche……

 

K: Woh papa, Udaipur mein jab hum mile….to….she could not continue and looked down again…..

 

S: Aur aabhi teen mahine hone ko aye, tumhe India jakar...phir bhi tumne mujhe batana jaruri nahi samjha……

 

Kripa closed her eyes and prayed a little….she needed to speak up now she thought…..

K: Woh mein batane wali thi papa…par, mujhe pata nahi tha ki apko acha lagega ki nahi…..aapne Angad aur Mere bare mein kabhi bataya nahi…..aur Dilip uncle se bhi itne salon se baat nahi ki…….to mujhe malum nahi tha ki….

 

S: Aur agar aaj mein kahoon, ki ye rishta mujhe na pehle manjur tha aur na aaj manjur hai….to……Kripa looked down…..a tear escaped her eye…….but she kept quite….she could not speak…..

 

Gayatri looked at Surya with a frown……But Surya did not look at her…..

 

K: Sorry papa….she whispered…..agar aap ye rishta nahi chahte, to mein wahi karungi jo aap kahenge…..

 

S: Tum Angad ko bhoola paoogi……he asked a little slowly now…..

 

A tear escaped her eye again and she slowly wiped it…….but did not say any thing…..how could she lie to her dad again…..it was not in her hands to forget him…..he had become her life…..She closed her eyes in pain…..her heart breaking in pieces…..this was the pain, which she might have to live all through her life…..she wouldn't go against her dad….because she knew, he loved her as much as she loved Angad….and she knew how much it would hurt them, if she revolted…..She could not give them the pain, knowing they were the people responsible for her existence…..for her upbringing…..for her life……she owed everything to them….then how could she…..but knowing she would not get the love of her life, made her feel lifeless……

 

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder and she opened her eyes and looked up……Her dad was there smiling at her……….

 

S: Itna pyar karti ho humse ki apne pyar ko chodne ke liye taiyar ho gayi……par apne papa ko nahi samajh sakhi na ajj tak……he said with tears in his eyes….jo tumhare liye sirf tumhare bhavishya aur khushiyon ke liye, apna saab kuch chod kar itni dur aa gaya,woh tumhare jeevan ki itni badi khushi kaise chin sakta hai tumse Kripa……Tumhara pyar kaise tum se dur kar sakta hai……..Mein to ye chahta tha, ki tum khud chal ke mere paas aao aur mujhe apni dil ki baat batao….par shayad mere pyar mein kuch kami reh gayi hogi, jo tum mujh se sachai nahi bata saki….he said putting a hand on her head…….Kripa shook her head in denial and hugged his waist tightly, crying……Mein ne aaj tak job hi kiya tumhari khushyon ke liye kiya…...Mein ne zindagi mein tumhare khushi ke alava kuch nahi chaha Kripa…..Par tumhara acha bura dekhna mera farz tha aur hai…..Isiliye sare rishte tod kar, mein tumhe tumhare sapne pure karne ka mauka de raha tha…..aur tumhara sapna, tumhe wanhi le gaya, jahan shayad tumhari manjil thi……he said wiping his tears and smiling at her….

 

K: Sorry papa….she whispered…getting up….

 

 S: Pagli, tumhe kya laga ki mein inkar kar dunga, naraj ho jaunga…..he said laughing a little……Tumne apna jeevan sathi khud dhunda hai, aur mujhe tumhari us sathi par pura bharosa hai…..he said patting her shoulders….He slowly held her shoulder and wiped her face with his hands……Bachpan se aaj tak, tumne jo chaha mein ne woh lakar diya, tumhari haar maang puri ki……Bas uss waqt danta jab tum galat thi……aur pyar karna galti nahi, jeevan ki saab se badi khushi hai…….Mujhe Angad par pura bharosa hai….Aur tum par garv bhi hai……Tumne mujhe sachai nahi batayi…..par meine usi din jaan liya tha, ki tum dono ek dusare se pyar karte ho, jis din tum pehli baar Angad ko mujh se milane layi thi…..he told her smiling….Kripa looked up surprised….Agar apnne beti ki dil ki baat nahi samajh sakta, to aur kuch kaise samajh pata…Angad aur uske gharwale bahot ache hain…..mujhe pura yakin hain ki tumhe woh sari khushiyan denge…..he said kissing her forehead affectionately…..Aur tumhare ma ne bataya mujhe, ki tum pehle ki sari baat janti ho, jiski wajah se hum India chod ke aye yahan….hain na….Kripa nodded at him sadly…..He sighed….mein nahi chahta tha, ki tumhe jabardasti kisi aise bandhan mein bandhna pade, jahan tum nahi jana chahti, jisase tum khush na reh paoo….mein chahta tha ki padho, apna bhavishya khud banao…..Isiliye mein yahan aya…..Mujhe Dilip aur uske gharwalon se koi shikayat nahi thi….Woh saab to bahot ache hai….humari bahot madad bhi ki unhone….haar sukh dukh mein sath diya humara…..To aise parivar se aur Angad jaise ache jeevan sathi agar tumhe mile to mujh se jyada khushi to kisi ko nahi hogi….Tum donon ek dusare ko itna pyar karte ho…..to mujhe kya aitraaz hoga….he said smiling at her….Kripa smiled shyly through her tears….

 

S: Kripa, par ek baat batao…..kya tum shadi ke liye taiyar ho? Ya tum aage sikhna chahti ho…..? Before Kripa could speak, Gayatri spoke up….

 

G: Aage aab Angad sikhayega…..Gayatri got up with a smile…..Aab mein aur kuch nahi janti…..Aap Kripa aur Angad ki shadi ki baat kijiye Dilip bhaisa se…..she said smiling at Kripa……Kripa blushed and looked down….kyun Kripa, thik hai na? She asked putting a hand on her shoulder……Kripa nodded shyly…..Surya and Gayatri smiled at each other and hugged her……..

 

S: Phir bhi Gayatri….mein ek baar Kripa ke dil ki baat bhi janana chahta hun…..he said looking at Kripa….Kripa kaho, tum Angad se abhi shadi karne ke liye taiyar ho…..agar ho, to hi mein Dilip se baat age badhaunga…..nahi to Angad se kahunga ki woh ek do saal intajaar kare…..kaho….tumhara faisla mein janana chahta hun…..he asked looking at her….

 

K: Woh papa….she looked shyly down…..Gayatri chuckled and she looked up at her and hugged her shyly….

 

G: Aap Dilip bhaisa se baat kijiye…..she said smiling at him….and he nodded…..

 

S: Mein bhi yahi chahta tha Kripa….aab jab tum ek dusare se pyar karte ho to shadi jald hi ho jaye…..agar tumhe padhai karni hai, to Angad to tumhe support karne ke liye taiyar hai….Waise bhi Angad ki dadi aur Dilip bhaisa aur Avantika bhabhi bhi isi ka intajar kar rahe hain……Mein ne pehle hi ek baar unka dil dukhaya hai…..aab jab unhone mujhe maaf karke, pehla kadam khud badhaya hai, to mein ye nahi chahta ki humari wajah se in do parivaron mein aur jyada maan mutav ho…..he said kissing her forehead and wiping her eyes…..He then left her and went near the side table and bought a envelop and gave it to Kripa….

 

K: Ye kya hai papa….She asked confused….Gayatri too looked at him with a frown…..Surya grinned at them……

 

S: Ye tumhare India trip mein jo dil se mehnat ki na tunne….uska natija…..aur shayad tumhara bhavishya..…Confused Kripa took the papers and looked down…..then she looked up amazed….she could not believe it….

 

K: Par papa, meine to inhe bheja bhi nahi…..she said confused, looking at them…..

 

S: Pata hai….prithvi ne bheje the…..Then Kripa remembered Harshini had taken her project printouts….

 

G: Magar hai kya ye….

 

S: Are bhagyawan, isne jo India trip mein India ke bare mein likha, wahan ke art ke bare mein logon ke bare mein likha……woh yahan ke ek publishing house ne use book printing ke liye accept kiya hai……unhone kaha, ki jis tarah se isne apne feelings, culture ka description aur baki saab likha hai, ussase woh bahot impress hue…..he grinned at Kripa...bus Kripa ke signatures ki jaroorat hai aur woh 5,000 copies first lot mein nikalenge….phir uski successful sale par aur nikali jayegi……He said smiling hugging Kripa proudly……

 

G: Sach….she said taking the papers from Kripa and reading it…….she had tears in her eyes….Dekha, Kripa dil se ki hui mehnat kabhi bekar nahi jati…..she said holding her cheeks and hugging her…..

 

S: Aur agar ye successful hua, to woh chahte hain, ki tum aur bhi kuch likho Indian arts ke bare mein...woh use analyze karke, tumhe opinions dete rahenge…..he said grinning at her…..I am so proud of you beta…..Yeh to tumhare scholarship se bhi jyada successful sabit ho sakta hai…..he said laughing, Kripa hugged him looking at the papers with new found happiness…..she could not believe that her book was being published, she had never dreamed about going in that direction…..but it seems it had found it's way to her..….Kripa, hume aaj hi un logon se milna hai….unhone books edit kiya hai already….bus wahan terms and conditions padh kar tumhe sign karni hai…..aur phir tumhari book turant publish karne ka plan hai unka….aaj subah phone aya tha….tumhare mobile pe bhi kiya tha….par tumne uthaya nahi shayad…..Kripa remembered she had switched off the phone…..and she nodded at her dad….Aur Gayatri, meine ek faisla aur kiya hai aaj…..agar tumhe thik lage to…..he said looking at her…….Gayatri looked at him surprised

 

G: Kahiye….

 

S: Mein India wapas shift hone ka soch raha hun, apne ghar Udaipur….he said looking at her…….

 

Gayatri and Kripa looked at him stunned…..Gayatri had tears in her eyes….

 

G: Sach keh rahe hain aap? She asked looking in his eyes……

 

S: Mera faisla manjur hai? He asked, even though he knew what her answer was…..Gayatri smiled crying and went and hugged him tightly……….Kripa looked at them with tears as well…..Surya looked at her…..apni beti se itni dur to nahi reh sakta na…..he said patting Kripa's cheeks, hugging Gayatri with one arm……

 

Gayatri wiped her tears happily and looked at him….

 

G: Aaj itni khushi de di aapne ki pata nahi apne aap ko sambhal paoongi ki nahi…….she said laughing….Magar aap karenge kya wahan….

 

Surya then showed her their property papers……Gayatri looked at him….

 

S: Ye dekh rahi ho……ye mittal ji ne jo hotel banai hai na, iska 20 % profit jo humein mil raha tha, isase hi apna gujara bahot achi tarah ho jayega…..par aab Mittal sahab retire hona chahte hain, to woh humara rental agreement terminate karne ke liye taiyar hai……Aab mein woh continue karunga…….He said with a smile……Aur mein woh ghar Arjun aur Kripa ke naam kardiya hai…….he said smiling…..uska jo bhi profits honge, un donon ke account mein barabar distribute ho jayenege…..

 

K: Papa….par….she looked at him confused….

 

S: Nahi beta…meine bahot soch samajh kar ye decision liya hai…….he said smiling at her……

 

Gayatri also nodded her approval and hugged Kripa…..

 

G: Itne dinon se yahi soch rahi thi, ki tumhari shadi ho jayegi, to tu saat samundar par chali jayegi, phir kaise reh paungi tumhare bina…..par bhool gayi thi, ki mujh se jyada tere papa ko is baat ki chinta thi…..dekha na tumhare paas rehne ka acha bahana dhund liya inhone…..she said chuckling…..Kripa also chuckled with tears and hugged her mom and dad…….This was the happiest day of her life…..she wished Angad was with her today…..Suddenly she wanted to call him…..But she did not get the time to do so……

 

S:  Chal beta do ghante mein hume publishing house pahunchana hai….aise mauke bar bar nahi milte…he said smiling….Kripa nodded and quickly got ready…..She wanted to tell Arjun about all this too….but Gayatri told her to keep quiet and let him do his studies…..they all decided to break this news to him only after his exams, so he would not be disturbed……

 

Kripa and Surya went to publishing house and after discussing the terms and other legalities, Kripa finally signed the documents…..They decided to name her book as "Experience the art of India".

After all the formalities were done the publishers congratulated Kripa and welcomed them in their group, telling her that they were looking forward to a long term relation with her…..Kripa smiled and thanked them all and then they walked out…..She was so happy today….she still could not believe that all this was happening…..

 

It was around 3 they came back and Gayatri told them about Damini's call asking them to come for dinner…….Surya immediately agreed…..He ate light lunch as they missed one, as they were late and went up to get some rest as his leg had started paining...Kripa ran up to her room to call Angad…..

 

A: Mil gaya time phone karne ke liye…..

 

K: hmmm…..naraj ho….

 

A: aur nahi to kya….kal kyun kata mera phone…he scolded her angrily….

 

K: acha baba maffi…..please…….aab to maaf kar do….

 

A: Ek shart par…..

 

K: bolo…..

 

A: Abhi nahi…ane par bolunga…..he said laughing….Chalo Kripa mein rakhta hun….mere flight ka time ho gaya hai, mera naam announce kar rahe hain….he said chuckling…..raat ko Atlanta pahunchne par baat karunga…

 

K: Par Angad……but he had already kept the phone….she made faces at the phone and throwed it aside……..

 

K: Ab bilkul nahi bataunga, kuch bhi nahi bataungi…..abhi to India jayega, na tabhi malum hoga use…..she said angrily….gadha….then she bit her tongue…..making faces…..she slept on her stomach and thought about today's day…..It was the happiest day of her life……She would be Angad's bride soon…..She blushed at the thought and smiled…..

 

She started calling Prithvi to thank him, but stopped…..she would personally thank him today in the evening…..she was so lucky to have friends like him and Harshini……

 

In the evening around 7 they went to Damini's house….On the way, they dropped Arjun at his friend's house, when he declined to come….Harshini's parents were already there…..Prithvi was out with Harshini….and Damini told Kripa that they would be back soon…….Surya and Gayatri shared there news with all of them…….everyone was overjoyed and congratulated them all…..They had lots of questions and time flew….Prithvi and Harshini were back and got to know about it…..Harshini ran to Kripa and hugged her grinning…….

 

H: Congrats….She said smiling at her…..She had known about the book as well as Angad and Kripa….but their moving away completely was news to them…….

 

K: Thanks Harshini…..

 

H: Thanks mujhe nahi….Prithvi ko bol……tu humesha galat logon ko thanks bolti ho….she said laughing…..Kripa laughed…

 

K: yeah right….par meri is kamyabi ke piche tera bhi to haath tha…..she said hugging her….Then she saw prithvi and smiled at him…..

 

P: Ek dum barabar kaha Kripa…..isne teri assignment ke bare mein bataya mujhe….kaha tha ki tumne bahot acha likha hai…..tabhi to mujhe yeh idea sucha……par janta nahi tha ki woh print karne ke liye taiyar honge ya nahi…..So, tumhe nahi bataya…..batakar nahi milta, to tumhe phir dukh hota…..Kripa smiled and went to him and hugged him ….

 

K: Thanks Prithvi…..

 

P: Thanks to mujhe tumhe karna chahiye…..he said chuckling…..

 

K: Woh kyun?

 

P: are woh publishers ne phone kiya aur meri tareef karne lage…..he chuckled…..kahne lage, ki meine ek diamond ko dhund nikala hai…..woh itna impress hue tumhare writing se…..bol rahe the, ki tum ne jo apne feelings usme likhe hain, they were so heart touching, ki unhe yakeen hain ki yeh ek successful book banega….he said grinning…..Chalo tumhare sath, mein bhi thoda famous hua….he said chuckling….

 

They all had a wonderful time together, all talking about the marriage plans; Surya's shifting plans etc….

Late night, they reached home and Kripa was fast asleep within few minutes……Surya and Gayatri went to her room and saw she was already asleep and but a satisfied smile, was still there on her face………..They looked at each other and went back to their room happily……

 

S: Tum mere decision se khush ho na Gayatri….? Gayatri looked at him and smiled…..she went near him and sat next to him…..

 

G: Aaj se pahle itni khushi kabhi nahi thi….

 

S: Jhooti…….he said laughing…..

 

G: Aap is umr mein mujhe jhooti bol rahe hain…..she asked frowning….

 

S: Aur nahi to kya…..Bachon ko pehli baar jab god mein uthaya, tab bhi yahi kaha tha tumne…..he said chuckling…..Gayatri laughed at him and kept her head on his chest…..Surya gathered her in his arms and closed his eyes……satisfied at his decisions…..

 

G: Kakisa ko ye baat bata de?

 

S: Nahi….pahele, pura apna aage kya karna hai, final kar le….phir phone karke ek sath batayenge…..Angad ke ane ke baad….he said smiling….Gayatri nodded smiling…….

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Reserved awesome , di i love it Surya he is best father i can tell he is going to shift India for his family and kripa's khushi awesome..i wish angad come soon and he got this news...di ab jaldi se dilip aur surya ki baat kara do shadi ke liye LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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