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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 31)

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by malluangel

hey! Unhappy you promised to pm me!
i forgive u this time, but pleaseeeeeeee pm me next time Big smile

anywho, i caught up on all i missed and that was one lovely journey! i love how youre threading this together, from her trip to her falling in love and then the tearful departure. i cant wait till he gets there, but im guessing that its gonna be a rought road Ermm o well, wo cheez hi kya, jismein paane main asaani hoon? adab adab Tongue
 
Thanks dear and I am sorry.....may be you did not get added.....accept the buddy request once I send it......Will surely pm you......
 
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 13
nice part...................wow Angad is angry on Kripa or he was busy at the moment? i love Kripa Arjun bonding...................cont soon................
Thanks Deepa.......!! You will know soon!!

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PART - 14

 

She got up in the morning, when her alaram went off…..she looked at the phone for any missed calls…..but there were none…..she looked at the cell phone with a sad sigh and got up…..She went to wake Arjun and quickly got ready….She prepared light breakfast and also made some lunch for everyone….After having breakfast, she dropped Arjun to the bus stop….thankfully he did not object when she came to drop him and she got ready to go to hospital…..Within hour she was in the hospital…..

 

S: Aagayi beta…..jetlag gaya ki nahi…..? Nind ayi raat ko…

 

K: Haan papa….aap kaise ho?

 

S: Mein ek dum thik hun…..jaldi breakfast do bahut bhook lagi hai…..he said smiling….Kripa potioned the bed and  helped him sit properly with Gayatri's help and gave him his breakfast….She asked Gayatri to eat as well….

 

G: Kripa, tum ne khaya….she asked frowning…..Kripa looked a little pale and her eyes were red too….

 

K: Nahi ma…mujhe bhook nahi hai….

 

G: Chup chap baith aur humare sath kha…..she said angrily…..apna dhyan nahi rakhegi, to humara kaise rakhegi…..chal aab….mujhe kuch nahi sunana…..

 

S: Beta, itna tension kyun le rahi ho…..sab thik ho jayega…..shayad bahut dinon se chute nahi li thi na…he said laughing…..chalo kha lo……Kripa sighed and ate a little slowly….how could she tell them, that she was not only tensed about her dad, but her new found love…..she did not want to tense them now, telling her about her visit…..

 

K: Ma….tum abb ghar jao…..aur aaram karo…..mein aaj din mein papa ke sath rehti hun…..sham ko aa jana ….Arjun ke sath…..

 

S: Haan Gayatri….tum jao….mein meri beti ke sath kuch waqt bitana chahta hun….waise bhi kitne dinon ke baad ayi hai…..he said smiling at Kripa….

 

G: Thik hai….tu ruk ja….vaise bhi thode kaam adhure rah gaye hain…..aur library mein bhi thoda kaam hai….mein sham ka khana leke ati hun…..she said…dopahar ka khana?

 

K: Are ma…mein le ayi hun…..aur aapke liye bhi paka kar rakha hai….she said smiling….

 

G: Kitni samajhdar ho gayi hai….she said putting a hand on her head…..chal abhi mein chalun….phone karte rehna….

 

K: Ma….mein har ek do ghante mein apko phone karlungi…..app jaiye ab aur aram kijiye…..she said packing all the stuff to take home….at last Gayatri was gone…..Surya fell asleep after talking to her for 10-15 min and Kripa kept looking at her cell phone….she had tried to call Angad in the morning too….but still there was no answer on his cell……The doctor came for the morning round and asked the nurse, to do some tests……In the afternoon, Surya was wheeled to do some x-rays and blood test……Kripa accompanied him….but his eyes were closed all the way, as he was in pain……by the time they were back in the room, he was all exhausted and fell asleep immediately….Kripa kept looking at her dad…..he was so pale and lifeless…..it was not like him at all…..she started sobbing again….how had this happened….she had dreamed about meeting her parents, celebrating her home coming……she dreamed about telling them about her going to their family house…..but when she came here, she found her dad was……

 

she wiped her tears and blowed her nose slowly not to disturb him…..Around 4 doctor came to visit her….

 

D: Miss. Kripa….

 

K: Yes doctor….

 

D: I would like to speak with you in my office please….if you have some time…

 

K: Sure….she said following him….

 

D: We want you to please switch off your phone, while you are in the hospital, Miss. Kripa….It interferes with some of our equipments….he said apologistically….

 

When they were in his room, he asked her to sit and switched on the x-ray lights…..

 

D: Miss. Kripa….. it turns out that your dad has a dislocated knee….we have done tests and x-rays since last 2 days to get clear picture of what is going on……we would like to perform immediate surgery to reposition it, without further delay…..Kripa suddenly got up frightened….her eyes filled with tears….

 

D: Miss. Kripa, are you ok….I am sorry to give you this news….may be your mom or some other relative….

 

K: No…its ok……she said wiping her tears…...sorry…Is he going to be alright….I mean the surgery…

 

D: As far as I can tell you there are good chances that he would be as good as before….though it might take some time…..He would need lots of support and patience…..

 

K: When would you like to do the surgery? She asked concerned….

 

D: If its ok with you, we would like to perform the surgery today itself, but it is not one time procedure….he might need another surgery later…..I can tell about it only, when this surgery is done…..Some times, we can't reconstruct the knee in one go, as he might have knee instability or joint stiffness in later stage…..so, we will do one thing at a time and then see about how to go from there, he said sympathetically …..I could see the schedule and see what time, we can take him in the theater….Is that ok with you?

 

Kripa nodded with tears….

 

D: Don't worry Miss. Kripa….we will take good care of him….he has a good will power and is strong and healthy enough to get through this…..he said with a smile….

 

Kripa nodded and got up….

 

D: I will be back after some time, to discuss the details with you later…..he said getting up……he walked out of the room and Kripa numbly walked out…..she took her cell phone and called her mom….

 

K: Mama…..woh…..woh….She couldn't say any thing as tears gathered in her eyes….

 

G: Kya hua Kripa….kuch bol na….papa thik to hai na….she asked worried….

 

K: Woh thik hai….par doctor ne kaha hai ki woh papa ka knee dislocate ho gaya hai….aur aaj hi surgery karenge….aap aona mama jaldi yahan….mujhe bahot tension aa raha hai….she said wiping her eyes…

 

G: Beta, himmat se kam le…..aise  rote nahi hai….acha sun, mein Arjun ko Harshini ke yahan drop karke thodi der mein pohonchti hun….tu chinta mat kar….sab thik ho jayega…..she said with tears in her eyes….mein bas khana pack kar rahi thi….thodi der mein aa jaungi….tu papa ke paas beith…..aur tension mat lena….thik hai….

 

K: Ji mama…..bye….she said keeping the phone down….

 

She went in the room….Surya was still sleeping….she kept wiping her eyes and sat there for a long time…..Then she saw Gayatri coming in the room…

 

K: Mama…she said getting up and hugging her…

 

G: Pagli…rona bandh kar aab…..kuch nahi hoga…..agar operation nahi karenge, to papa thik kaise honge? She asked frowning at her…..doctor ne aur kuch kaha…..

 

K: Woh thodi der baad aakar sab batayenge….aur procedure samjhayenge….Gayatri nodded and wiped Kripa's tears….

 

They sat there quietly till doctor came to tell them about the surgery….It was decided to do the surgery at around 10, as no other slots were available and the operation theaters were full….Gayatri and Kripa listened to him and asked some questions and after some time he was gone, giving them instructions to follow before surgery…..

Surya was awake in the evening, but was still in pain…..

 

G: Kaise hain aap, Gayatri went to him with a smile….

 

S: Dard hai…..

 

G: Haan….woh apka knee dislocate ho gaya hai…to abhi surgery karenge…..phir thik lagega apko….

 

S: Hmmm….Doctor ki abhi thodi baat suni meine….jaise Srinathji ki iccha….he said with a smile……

 

G: Aap tension mat lijiye…..sab thik ho jayega….Srinathji par bharosa rakhiye……

 

S: Kripa beta…..yahan aao…..are beta….kaisa haal bana liya hai apna….yehi to pariksha ki ghadi hoti hai…aise paristhitiyon mein agar himmat har jaogi, to kaise chalega…..chal ab jakar kuch kha le…..kuch bhi nahi khaya na tune subah se….he asked angrily….Gayatri sighed shaking her head….Kripa was far too emotional and attached….

 

G: Chal Kripa….garam garam khana hai…..kha le….mein aur arjun ghar mein kha kar aye hain….tum donon ke liye le ayi thi….par doctors ke order hai ki papa nahi kha sakte….tu jaldi jaldi kha le…she said taking out the food and giving her it in a plate….Kripa hardly ate 2 chapati's and said, she couldn't eat more….Gayatri did not force her….and told her to go and freshen up…..

 

At last, at around 8 Surya was made ready for the surgery…..Surya smiled at both of them….and went off….

Prithvi had called couple of times….and Gayatri conveyed him about the surgery…..He was about to come to hospital, but Gayatri told him not to, as the surgery would take around 4-5 hours and there was nothing to do here but wait, so instead told him to collect Arjun from Harshini's house and take him home….

 

It was a long wait and they both paced near the theater to hear from the doctor….at last around 1 doctor told them,  that Surya was stable and the procedure went properly…. He said he is confident that Surya would be able to walk just fine after his physio therapy….and there was no need for another surgery……Gayatri and Kripa thanked him a little relieved and waited in the room…..After an hour, Surya was bought in and Kripa and Gayatri sat with a sigh….Nurse told them that he had gained consciousness earlier and again fell asleep due to medications…..They thanked her and waited for Surya to wake up…..It was around 4 in the morning, when Surya opened his eyes and murmured some thing….Kripa and Gayatri immediately went to him….He did not speak any thing but smiled…..Kripa called the nurse and doctor came to examine him immediately….He said everything was fine…and was gone soon…..They waited for another couple of hours, sleeping on the chair for some time…..At 6 Gayatri woke Kripa up…….

 

G: Kripa beta, aab ghar ja aur arram kar……Arjun ko Prithvi directly school le janewala hai….mein use thodi der mein phone karke, inke bare mein batati hun…..aur haan, breakfast aur khana le ane ki jarurat nahi hai….mein yahan kuch kha lungi……thik hai….

 

K: Ma….mein rukti hun yahan….

 

G: nahi beta….kitni thak gayi hai…ja jake aaram kar…..agar tu bhi bimar pad gayi, to mein kaise sambhal paungi sab kuch…..aaram kar le…sham ko ana papa se milne….mein phone karungi tumhe…thik hai….she said putting a hand on her cheek…..

 

Kripa nodded….and hugged her mom…....

 

She went and kissed her dad on his cheek and slowly walked out of the room…..She was dead tired……she just wanted to go and hit the bed for some time…..She drove home carefully…..thinking about her dad and then about Angad….she then remembered, that her cell phone was off….she sighed and pushed the Garage door open, when she was near the house….but as soon as she came near…..she saw some one sitting on the steps….It was still a little dark, and she got frightened, she could not see who it was clearly..….Though there neighbor hood was safe, no one would ever guarantee……She started taking out her phone from the purse, to call 911, with shaky hands…..when her hands stilled……When she was near, she looked at the person and was shocked to see Angad there……..She threw her cell phone on the side seat……parked the car and opened the car door and ran out….Angad was standing just outside the car garage…..

 

K: Angad she whispered…..Angad nodded with a smile and Kripa immediately ran to him and hugged him tightly…..tears pouring down her cheeks…..

 

A: Kaisi ho….? He asked a little concerned….Kripa just shook her head and kept crying…..Chalo andar chalein….bahar thand mein kulfi jum gayi hain…..2 ghante se wait kar raha hun….aur tumhara cell phone bhi nahi lag raha tha……kakasa kaise hain? he asked combing her hairs….

 

K: Sorry….she said wiping her tears…..woh papa ka surgery hua tha raat ko…..cell phone allow nahi karte hospital mein…..to….

 

A: Koi baat nahi….andar chalo….itni thaki hui lag rahi ho….ki lagta hai abhi gir jaogi…..

 

K: Tum yahan….abhi? she asked looking up…..Tum next week ane wale the na….

 

A: To thoda jaldi aa gaya…..humesha tumhara sath nibhane ka vada kiya hai….aise waqt mein akele kaise chodta…..Kripa broke in sobs and hugged him tightly….Angad hugged her closing his eyes….this 24 hours were so frustrating and tiring….he could not talk to her….did not know how she was…..as soon as he heard that her dad had met with an accident, he told Dilip he wanted to go….Dadi and Avantika also agreed immediately and he was soon on his way…..Kripa slowly wiped her tears and stood back…Angad's hands were still on her shoulder…

 

K: Chalo…andar chalo…..mein mera purse aur phone le ati hun car se….she said with a small smile….

 

A: Mein front door par rukta hun….mera saman sabh wahin hai…

 

K: Ek min….ye lo…spare key….she said pulling one from below the mat in front of the door in the garage…..

 

A: Thik hain….tum andar chalo….tumhare haath kitne thande pad gaye hain…..mein ata hun…..he said running out….

 

Kripa nodded and opened the house door, closing the garage door behind her……

 

She kept her shoes and walked in side….Angad had already bought his bag and was removing his jacket…

 

K: Lao mein closet mein rakh deti hun….Angad gave her the jacket and she hanged it for him…..Angad kept looking at her….she looked so tired and worn out, so different from the girl he had known couple of days ago..…..He went to her immediately and hugged her…..

 

Kripa closed her eyes with a sigh….she was so happy he was here…..it felt as if half her tension has left her.....

 

K: Chalo, tumhe guest room dikhati hun….tum bhi to thak gaye ho…..she said looking at him….

 

Angad kissed her forehead and smiled at her…..chalo….he said slowly….He took his bags and followed Kripa upstairs….looking around…..Lots of photos of hers and Arjuns were framed on the wall…..There were some family pictures on the walls next to the steps….he grinned looking at the photos…..Kripa showed him the guest room and showed other rooms around…..it was not so big…just 5 bedrooms upstairs, 4 of which were already occupied….one was guest room, though she thought they never had any guests here…..Angad was the first to come and stay….Harshini came some times…..but she usually slept in Kripa's room after studying…..

 

A: Waise Kripa Kakasa kaise hain….kahan chot ayi hai? Aur operation….?

 

Kripa detailed him about the accident, his knee dislocation and the surgery in detail….

 

K: Mein abb jaun…..thoda fresh hoke aati hun…..kal subah se hospital mein thi….to

 

A: Tum jao…mujhe kuch chahiye ho to mein dhund loonga…..he said going to her and kissing her forehead….Kripa shyly looked down and went to her room…..She took her bath….wore a jeans and T-shirt and came out of the room….she was about to knock Angad's door but at last moment opted out and went down to prepare breakfast….To her surprise Angad was already there, making tea….he had already put some bread in the toaster and was cutting some fruits…..Ok my skills are limited to toast tea and cutting fruits…..he said grinning at her when he saw her at the door….Kripa smiled and went in…..

 

K: bahot ho gaya itna hi…..waise jyada bhook bhi nahi hai….

 

Angad looked at her with new fascination, he had seen Kripa only in Indian dresses, when she was in India…..but today, she looked totally different in jeans and t-shirt, she looked wonderful…..she wore no make up, no jwellery……he was about to go to her when…..Phone started ringing….and Kripa quickly ran to pick it up, her heart beating heavily, thinking about how Angad had been looking at her……she picked up the phone…..it was her mom…..

 

G: Kripa….pahunch gayi? Aur nashta kiya na….kal barabar se khana bhi nahi khaya tune…..

 

K: Haan ma mein pahunch gayi thik se….. abhi nahakar ayi hun…..thodi der mein nashta karlungi….she said looking at Angad who was grinning at her….Papa kaise hain…..she asked looking at the phone……playing with the keys nervously…..

 

G: Thik hai…..Jara Prithvi ko phone kar de na tu hi…..mera battery down hai….no. bhi nahi hai….aur sun…..Lunch mein yahin kar lungi….tu mat lana…..sham ko Arjun ke sath hi ana….thik hai….?

 

K: Ji ma…

 

G: Mein rakhti hun….apna dhyan rakhna….bye

 

K: Bye mama…she kept the phone and sighed then she dialed Prithvi's no. indicating Angad to wait for few minutes….Angad nodded and arranged the tray, while Kripa talked to Prithvi….

 

K: Prithvi Kripa bol rahi hun….

 

P: Hi, Kripa uncle kaise hain?

 

K: haan papa thik hai…..Mein ghar aa gayi hun……Arjun uth gaya…..?

 

P: Haan ye lo baat karo….tabse phone ki raah dekh raha hai…..

 

A: jiji….papa kaise hain…..surgery ho gayi? he asked worriedly…..

 

K: Papa thik hai, Arjun, tu chinta mat kar…..sham ko chalte hain milne…..school ke liye taiyar ho gaye?

 

A: Haan….abhi thodi der mein nikalta hun….

 

K: Mein tumhara lunch box le aun school?

 

A: Nahi jiji, mama ne canteen mein khane ke liye 3 $ diye hain….aap aaram kar lo…..mein canteen mein kha lunga….

 

K: Thik hai….sham ko bus se aa jana….mein bus stop aa jaungi…..thik hai….

 

A: Thik hai jiji…bye…...ye lo Prithvi bhaiya se baat karo…..

 

P: Kripa, mein aur ma hospital ja rahe hain thodi der baad….kuch le jana hai?

 

K: Nahi….mom ne kaha hai ki woh wahin kuch kha legi…..sham ko mein Arjun ko bus stop se pick kar lungi…..Thanks Prithvi….Out of the corner of her eye….she saw Angad coming near her with a tray…..she smiled at him….

 

P: Kripa, sab khud karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai….dost kisliye hote hai…..chal ab mein jata hun….Arjun ko school chod dunga aur mom aur mein hospital khana le jayenge uncle aunty ke liye, tum aaram karna…ok…..bye…take care…..

 

K: Bye Prithvi….Thanks… She kept the phone and looked at Angad…..he was putting the tray on the table…..

 

A: Aise kya dekh rahi ho? He asked grinning…

 

Kripa shyly smiled….and then sighed….

 

K: Angad…ek hafte pahle, hum ek dusare ko jante bhi nahi the….phir bhi, aaj mere liye tum sab kuch chod kar, mera sath dene aa gaye, woh bhi itni dur? She asked blinking her tears…..

 

Angad sighed and took her in his arms….She rested her head on his shoulder….

 

A: Kripa thode rishte khoon ke hote hain….aur thode dil ke…..humdonon ka parivar khoon se na sahi, dil se to juda hua hai…..itne pidiyon se chali ayi ye dosti aise hi thodi na todi ja sakti hain……aur phir jis din humare dil jud gaye, tum mujh se aur mein tum se jud gaya…..phir bhala, mein kaise na aata……aagar aaj na ata, to mein apne hi najron se gir jata…..mera pyar sacha hai….aur tumhare sare dard mere bhi to hai…..agar tumhe takleef ho rahi ho, to mein kaise hath pe hath dhare bhaithe rehta…..he said carrsing her shoulders….

 

K: Papa ne to sare rishte tod diye the, yahan ane ke baad….iske bavjood uncleji, auntieji aur dadi ne itna sab kiya….she said sadly….

 

A: Kakasa ki jagah agar mein hota na, to mein bhi shayad yahi karta….Kripa looked up surprised….Haan Kripa….mein Kartik bhaiya ke sath bahut se gaun me jakar kalakaronko humari company mein ane ke liye incentives deta tha….tab kayi baar, meine chote bachon ko dekha, jinki shadi ho gayi hai……unka bachpan chinta dekh bahut dukh hota hai….Uncle ne jo kiya sahi kiya….bachon ke bhavishya se khelna bahot bada paap hai…..Dekho na agar woh yahan na le ate tumhe, to aaj jo tum ho woh na hoti…..jitne confidence se tumne sab sambhala hai, woh shayad na kar pati….aaj jo kuch tum ho unhike karan to ho…..varna vahan rehti, to shayad tumhare college ke pahele hi dadi, shadi ki baat ched deti….he said sadly….his dadi was a little old fashioned, even though she was very nice…..aur ab tak to 2-3 bache bhi hote humare…..he said chuckling…..Kripa smiled shyly….

 

K: dhatt…..bachein….itni jaldi?

 

A: aur nahi to kya….do weeks pahele hi dadi kartik ko keh rahi thi ki parpote ka muh dikhaye…..For Gods sake abhi ek saal bhi nahi hua ki…..he said rolling his eyes…..Kripa chuckled…

 

K: Tum mere confidence ki baat kar rahe ho….jab se ayi hoon, sirf roti hi rahi hun…..papa mama aur Arjun sab mujhe samjhate rahe…..ki sab thik ho jayega…..balki hona ye chahiye tha ki mein papa ka khayal rakhti….

 

A: Tumhe pata hai, jab koi admi marta hai na, to woh to khushi se chala jata hai….par, baki log dukhi hote hain…..waise hi jise chot lagti hai, ussase jyada dard, uske parivar valon ko hoti hai…..kyun ki unhe pata hai ki woh unka dard bant bhi nahi sakte…..helpless feel karte hain, jab apne logon ko takleef mein dekhte hain….Aur mujhe pura yakin hai, ki tum akele sab handle kar sakti ho….par apne papa ka dard dekhkar tumhe takleef hoti hai….he said smiling at her….and touching her cheeks…

 

K: Itni achi tarah se mujhe kab se samjhne lage….

 

A: Insan ko pehchanane ke liye ek hi mulakat kafi hai….he said hugging her….. chalo ab nashta kar lo…..chai bhi thandi ho gayi hai….lau mein garam kardeta hun….he said getting up…..

 

K: Nahi….uski jaroorat nahi….ye thik hai….she said holding his hands….not wanting to let him go…They ate their breakfast and sat there together not wanting to let go……Angad smiled as he saw her hands tightly holding his arms….

 

A: Waise ek baat kahon, mujhe bhi tumhe chodne ka bilkul man nahi kar raha, he whispered in her ears with a smile…..mujhe laga, tum Indian dresses mein achi lagti ho…..par jab aaj tumhe niche dekha, to laga jaise dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi hai….. he whispered and got up suddenly with her in his arms and turned her around, surprised Kripa looked at him and he started singing with a smile and started dancing with her……..

 

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dhadakan  jaraa ruk gayee hai, kahee jindagee bah gayee hai

palakon mein yaadon kee dolee, bheetar khushee has rahee hai

ye khushee tum ho, tum hee tum  meree jaanam  karu ayetabaar

 

He sang turning her around and she smiled and joined her steps with him….chuckling….his one hand on her waist and the other touched her cheeks….

 

cheharon ke mele me, chehare the gum

yek cheharaa thaa mai, yek cheharaa the tum

jaane kyaa, tum ne de diyaa

muz ko jahaan mil gayaa……

 

he said turning around with a grin…..making her laugh when he took her in his arms again…..

 

hothhon par baat rahe, baaton mein soor bahe

suron mane geet wahee, tumhaaree hee baat kahe

mit jaaoo sapanon kee aagosh mein

bheeg jaaoo yaadon kee bauchhaar mein

 

He stopped and looked at her lips and she looked at him, for a second forgetting all about the song…..and then suddenly Angad smiled and started singing again…….Kripa still in the magic of the moment, stood there looking at Angad who was singing looking at her and going around her ……and then taking her in his arms and swaying to the rythem…….

 

milate hee aankho ne, rishtaa pahachaanaa

yehasaas seene me, saanson ne jaanaa

choopake se, pyaar chhoo gayaa

dilaa ke yek, janam nayaa

dhadakan  jaraa ruk gayee hai, kahee jindagee bah gayee hai

palakon mein yaadon kee dolee, bheetar khushee has rahee hai

ye khushee tum ho, tum hee tum  meree jaanam  karu ayetabaar

dhadakan  jaraa ruk gayee hai, kahee jindagee bah gayee hai

 

….the song ended, but they were still in eachothers arms looking at each other…………At last Kripa smiled and hugged him tightly…..chuckling……..Kripa smiled and closed his arms tightly, putting his head on hers…….

 

A: Jao aab jake thoda aram karo…..he said slowly…..pulling her up to her room and leaving her at her door………she slowly nodded and closed the door……..looking at him shyly…….

 

Angad scratched his head grinning…….she felt so nice in his arms when they were dancing together….and she matched his steps so well that it felt natural to do so………When they were together talking he felt like singing and the song sort of drifted out of his mouth on its own and the time stilled with just the both of them…..he sighed and slowly walked to his room……..He was atlease partly successful in relieving her from her stress he thought sighing……..

 

It was almost 11 by the time he entered his room…..but could not sleep for a long time…….thinking of Kripa just a door away, that too alone in the house, made him feel like going to her and taking her in his arms again…..but he knew he could not do that……He fell asleep in his room, after a long time……..Kripa's alaram started ringing at 3…..she got up with a jerk…..after washing her face, She went to Angad's room, but he was still asleep….she smiled  slowly and closed the door, remembering the song Angad sang today……it felt so nice to be in his arms once again…..she felt her body a little relaxed for the first time since she came from India, a little relieved.…..she went down and called her mom at the hospital….Her mother assured her that Surya was alright and had some lunch in the afternoon and was asleep……Kripa promised to come in the evening…..She went and prepared some instant soup and sandwiches for everyone, thinking about how to tell her parents about Angad…..After thinking about it for a long time she atlast decided to tell her mom the truth and let her decide, Angad's words " sachai chipane se bhi nahi chipti" came to her mind and she did not want to keep lying to her mom…..it was better to get the air cleared before…..satisfied she went up and got ready to pick Arjun……She went to Angad's room to tell him…..he was awake and came out of bathroom washing his face…..

 

K: Hi….neend ho gayi….

 

A: Hmmm…..kahin ja rahi ho?

 

K: bas yahan bus stop tak….arjun ko le ana hai….mein 10-15 min me ayi….Niche sandwich aur soup rakha hai….tumhe bhook lagi ho to….

 

A: Nahi tum jake aao….phir sath mein khate hain….he said smiling….they looked at each other for a moment

 

K: Thik hai….mein ati hun….she said slowly closing the door…….

 

She waited for the bus impatiently…..when she saw the bus coming she sighed….Soon Arjun jumped out to the bus with his other friends….

 

A: Hi jiji…..Ye pakdo na….he said giving her his bag…..Kripa shook her head and took the bag…..

 

K: kaisa raha tumhara aaj ka din….

 

A: Acha tha….Papa kaise hain jiji? He asked looking at her….

 

K: Bilkul thik hai….she said putting a hand on his shoulder….aab chalenge na hum….khud hi dekh lena….Sun….ghar mein mere ek dost aye hain….

 

A: Really….boy friend ya girl friend….?

 

K: Arjun tu bhi na…..acha doston ko gift pasand aye? She asked diverting him from his question..….

 

A: Are jiji bahot pasand aye……thank you so much… Kripa smiled at him….and they walked in silence for a  minute or so…..

 

K: khana khaya tumne….? Kripa asked looking at him…

 

A: hmmm….magar phir wahi phike boiled veges….bread cheese….ewww….mujhe bahot bhook lagi hai….

 

K: Meine soup aur sandwich banaye hain….woh kha lena….thodi der mein khana banadungi…..mama papa ke liye bhi le jayege….she said, unlocking the door…..

 

A: Mein kuch madad kar dun?

 

K: Nahi mein karlungi….she said pinching his cheeks and kissing him lightly…..thank you so much for asking…..

 

A: Are jiji….apko sabse achi khabar to dena bhul hi gaya……aaj meine jab Grayson ko gift diya na…..you won't believe it but she kissed me….he said carrsing his cheeks with a grin…mera first kiss jiji…..I can't believe it…..

Kripa chuckled….

 

K: Ek number ka badmash ho raha hai tu……padhai par dhyan de….ma ko pata chala na ki school me ye sab kar raha hai to teri to chutti ho jayegi school mein…..Ja upar jake muh haath dho le….. Arjun looked at her…..

 

A: Aapke dost kahan hai….aapane bataya nahi….boy friend ya girl friend? He asked with a smile…. she took his bag and throwed it on him slowly…Her face red with embarrassment…..God this Arjun was going to keep bugging her now….he was so small still he was too smart for his age……

 

K: jaldi hath muh dho le…..bhook nahi lagi….she asked showing him the soup….

 

Arjun grinned ….abhi aya….he said running to his room…..Angad grinned …he was in the family room reading a magazine……

 

As soon as Arjun went up, Angad came to the kitchen…..

 

Kripa blushed looking at him…..she knew he had heard everything…….

 

A: aab to use pata chal hi jayega, ki tumhara dost boy hai….phir kya karogi…..he whispered in her ear….

 

Kripa blushed even more…..and went away from him, switching on the stove…she took out the veges for preparing dinner….and cleaned the kitchen without looking at Angad…..she could feel him watching though….with a grin on his face…..

 

Angad on the other side, was loving each minute…..Kripa looked so lovely…..in the morning she was too tired….but now a little color had returned back on her face….she looked more herself……..and the way she blushed made him crazy….

 

Arjun came down the stairs ……rushing in the kitchen and stopped suddenly at the sight of Angad…..he looked at him and then at Kripa……

 

Ar: I can't believe this….jiji….boyfriend? he asked with a grin…..

 

Angad chuckled…..

 

An: Angad Rathod…..Angad said giving a hand for a shake….

 

Ar: Hi…Arjun Suryabhan Singh….he said shaking his hand….

 

An: So, why can't you believe it? America mein to saab ke boy friends hote hain…..aaj tumko bhi to kiss mili hai….he asked grinning….

 

Ar: Hote hain….par jiji….no way…..I never thought….any ways…..I hope your intentions are honorable towards my sister…….he asked seriously…..Kripa choked on the water she was drinking…..and Angad could not help but chuckle……

 

An: Kaunse movie mein dialogue dekhi hai yeh? He asked laughing…..

 

Ar: Can't remember….haan may be father of the bride…ya aur kuch…he said grinning at Angad.…Angad started laughing…..

 

K: Arjun apni bak bak bandh kar aur apna sandwich kha le……..phir jakar home work kar lena…..she said frowning at him…..

 

An: I assure you dude….your sister is safe with me…..Mujhe khushi hui ki tum apni behen ka itna khayal rakhte ho….he said smiling sweetly at Kripa…..Kripa frowned at both of them and shook her head…..

 

Ar: Good choice jiji…..I like your BF…

 

An: So friends? He asked giving him his hands….

 

Ar: Cool….he said shaking his hands….where do you stay?

 

An: I came from India…..

 

Ar: Baap re jiji….Aap inhe India se le ayi…..he asked looking at his sister……..Kripa closed her eyes and prayed for some patience…….

 

An: ye nahi le ayi….mein khud aya….aaj……he said smiling at him….

 

Ar: Jiji ke liye….?

 

An: Aise hi kuch samajh lo…

 

Ar: Are you gonna marry her? He asked his eyes widening…..

 

Angad looked at him and nodded slowly.…..God, what else could he say….

 

Ar: Oh my God….Jiji….he said….looking at her sis, who was too shocked to say a word….Hmmm….to aap mere hone wale jiju ho….vow cool…..

 

An: Hey but our secret ok….saaleji..…Abhi papa ko mat batana…..pehle hi unki tabiyat thik nahi hai….unhe aur pareshan nahi karna chahiye na….

 

Ar: I swear…I won't tell a word…...he said crossing his heart……and grinning at Angad…….

 

Kripa hardly spoke a word or so after that…..Once they were done, Arjun asked Angad to come to his room to play some video games and Angad followed him, looking back at Kripa who was looking at him…..he blowed a flying kiss and grinned when she blushed…..She kept her head on her chair and closed her eyes….God ye Arjun meri jaan nikalega….she thought…..

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hi i'm the first again
 
arjun-armaan scene was nice
arjun's dialogue also was nice
 
do continue soon


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wow Angad come early for kripa so sweet true lover.....kripa also going to feel little better after his moral support ...she is brave and very understanding handle every thing very well.I love arjun look like he is going to become angad's buddy...

I think angad will meet first gaayatri and after surya how he will react i am scared LOLThank you di for this part and pm...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
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Hi Vamita, part was simply vow.. God I loved arjun Character.
Thanks for the pm
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part 14
wow Angad has come few days earlier....................very nice of him.................Kripa is very much samajdhaar.................handling everything................Arjun is a big mouth.................but like him...............cont soon.................dunno how her parents are gonna react now.......................
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that was so adorableeeeeeee
omg! aww arjun n angad rocked this update!
well ok, first off all he came! i mean i kinda thought with all the where did he go stuff he was already on a plane, but then he came and was so amazing!
and loved the aa scene poor kripa stuck with the two boys LOL
update fast please! and hope AK dont get in trouble!

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