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Rishte-AK FF - Pg-95-Epilogue-DEC-27-2011 (Page 15)

vamita Goldie
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShelDev

Aww Mitu what a bang on meeting of AK
Loved it...perfect place to  meet....lol
So already the two are dreaming about each other...how romantic...
Looking forward to see how they fall in love....
Beautiful update....
Pls continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Thanks Shel.....You are right.......Surya and Dilip's family are the diciples of Srinathji and Dadi's trust in him is still as same as ever.....how could I break her trust!!Smile
 
 

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nine2

Awsome!!..so it was front of shrinathji that they tied their knot n at that holy place they met eachother after 17 years...very nice meeting..hopefully angad will find out soon that this is d same kripa...maybe frm kanan that... kripa came frm U.S n then he will tell her what happened..n kripa n angad can stick together to fulfill angad's dada's last wish...plz continue soon..n thanks for the pm!! :)
Thanks dear......Yeah you are right......Some times trust in God can make miracles happen.....!!Dadi has enough trust for everyone including Surya's family!!
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_mittal

hey di another great part
 
finally AK meet eachother and alreday felt something
 
so angad is really looking for kripa
 
wow i hope kripa also comes to know about her marriage
 
pelaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
 
love ya
 
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Thanks Mittal.....Yeah, Angad is very much in to his family and loves them all......So, how could he not fulfil his dadi's wish!!
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
amazin updates di
sorry 4 d late reply......exams wer goin on
loved AK meeting......
cant wait 4 dem 2 fall in luv
cont soon...
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by love_KYPH

amazin updates di
sorry 4 d late reply......exams wer goin on
loved AK meeting......
cant wait 4 dem 2 fall in luv
cont soon...
Thanks dear.....No prob....Best wishes for your exams...
 
 

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged

PART- 8

 

Angad too was memorized by those eyes……..those beautiful eyes and smile kept haunting him all through the night....

 

Next day, Kripa woke up early and got ready to go to Kanan's house……she already told Mr. Scott about her plans to go to Kanan's house early and was given permission…..She dressed in light pink chudidar…..and put on light makeup…..she took another dress and her new ghaghra and jwellery with her and her nightdress, in case she did  not have time to come and change and if she had to stay the night…...Sukhdev promised to drop her at the venue at around 9 am…..

 

Soon she arrived at the given address…..and was surprised to see the hotel……It was very different from the hotels she had seen….and it felt very familiar……She got down at the gate, as the security said that today, they were not allowed to take the cars inside….. After checking her invitation card they let her in…….She walked through the gates…..and saw a huge fountain in front of the courtyard…….a board Mittal Group of Hotels was written on either side of the walls……….when she looked at the huge old door of the hotel……….she felt as if she was in different era……..the two guards stood on either side of the gate wearing traditional rajasthani soldier dress…….they had sword with them…..They opened the door for her with a slight smile and she entered in……….The main living area was huge……..and was decorated with silk and flowers……huge chandlier was hanging in the midst and the reception area at the far away corner…………But what really hit her was a memory of running down those huge stairs……her mom asking to drink the milk………she looked around amazed as it all felt familiar, but it also felt different……Suddenly, there was a hand on her arm….and she looked up….Kanan was grinning at her….

 

Ka: Hai na khubsurat…..mujhe bhi bahut acha laga tha….isiliye to ye venue select kiya maine…..she said smiling…..

 

K: Ye….kiska hai kanan…..kya yeh sachmuch hotel hai….she asked….looking around….

 

Ka: Haan philal to hotel hi hai….Nishant ke papa Mr. Ashok Mittal chalate hain….. Par unhone to sirf rent kiya hua hai……Yahan ke kisi purane parivaron ka hai…..aaj kal to itna sab maintain karna bahut mushkil hai….aur us par taxes bhi badh gaye hain….so yahan papa, aise ghar rent par ya khareedkar, unhe hotel ki tarah chalate hain…….

 

Kripa just smiled and looked around……..

 

Ka: chalo mein tumhe tour de deti hun…

 

K: Nahi kanan….aaj to tumhari shadi hai…..

 

Ka: Are to kya hua….shadi to raat ko hai….abhi saab nashta kar rahe hain……chalo adhe ghante mein tumhe sab batati hun, phir nashta karke, tujhe bhi mehendi lagwate hain……chalo……Kripa could not say no…….she slowly walked from room to room……..big rooms…..lots of artwork…..big beds…….which suited the artistic image of the room……..huge mirrors and rajashthani paintings…..it felt wonderful….but aside from that, there were some rooms which felt too familiar, but she could not make out………then they entered the big dinning hall……….and when Kripa looked at the walls………She looked at the photos on the wall, shocked to her feet……..She looked at each photo and could not believe what she was seeing…….she felt a little dizzy…….there were photos of her taya tayi and mom and dad……….There was a photo of herself as well with all the family members……….This was there house……….she looked around in awe and surprise……This house belonged to her family…..the reality stuck her and she was too shocked to notice any thing………..Yeh hain woh log jinka yeh ghar hai…….Kanan was saying….but Kripa wasn't listning………she touched the chairs the table in the big house……….Kripa….Kripa…..

Kripa looked at her…..her face pale……

 

Ka: kya hua teri tabiyat to thik hai na…..ye le pani pi le….she gave her some water from the table……….Kripa drank the water and sat there for some time……Kya hua tujhe……

 

K: Kanan…..ye…she said looking around and slowly took a deep breathe…..Ye mere mama papa hai, aur ye mere taya tayi…..she said looking at the photos behind her……Kanan looked at her shocked and then looked at the photos behind them…….Kripa then did some thing, which she had done countless times, when she was a child………she went to the corner old desk…..and opened the drawer….and saw what she was looking for…..the old album…….she saw coutless times with her dad, almost everyday…….for some reason there were only two or three memories she had of this house……but it all fell in places now…….Kanan was stunned to see her taking out the album and looking through the photos, as if she has done it countless times……..Kripa….she said frowning….

 

Kripa looked up and showed her each and every photo…..pointing out to her dad and mom and her taya tayi…….she then showed her, her photo…….Kanan was stunned beyond belief…..

 

Ka: This is your house? She asked loudly…….everyone around stopped what they were doing and looked at them with disbelief……….

 

Kripa too noticed everyone looking at her and just nodded and looked down with tears……..tears of joy…..she was in her home…..she could not believe it……how could destiny bring her back to the place where she was born…….

 

K: I was born in this very same house…….I believe….though I don't remember much, mom used to say that we have an ancestral home, which they rented, but I was born in the very same home….so this must be it……she said looking at the photos, behind her…….Same photo of her taya tayi was with them in US and how could she not recognize her own parents.……There was a buzz around the room and Kripa looked up……the hotel manager and others came to greet her and they said they were happy to see some face from old royalties of Rajashthan…..Kripa got up a little embarrassed……but she just smiled and greeted them….looking at the photos again…….How come her parents never told her about all this…….she thought looking around……..

 

Ka: Vow I can't believe it…..she said laughing……and here I am showing you your own house……

Kripa laughed through tears…..

 

K: It is my house…..but still unfamiliar…..doesn't feel like it is my home…..but still feels as if it is….she said shrugging and looking around.….

 

Ka: I understand….you came here after what how many years....

 

K: 17 she said smiling at the photos in the album….she slowly closed the album and kept it at the same place from where she took it out……She stood there for couple of minutes to get her emotions under control……She touched the old furniture and the windows trying to remember some thing…….but nothing came……She then slowly turned around with a smile, it was Kanan's marriage and it was held in their house…..She chuckled at the irony of it……But she was happy for Kanan…..She had become a very close friend in these couple of months..…….Chalo aab…..Today is your big day…..and I am happy that you are going to be married here………she said grinning…..where is the marriage going to take place……

 

Ka: Backyard…..in the gardens….mein vahan le jati tumhe….but I am not allowed to go out….she said smiling….

 

K: Koi baat nahi….baad mein dekh lenge….

 

Ka: chalo ab upar chale…..nashta karlo aur phir mehendi lagan ke liye bhi to baithna hai, she said grinning…..Bahot saal ho gaye, meine mehendi nahi lagayi aab tak..….They walked up the stairs….Kripa held the old railings…..with new fascination……..I still can't believe it…..tumhne kabhi bataya nahi, ki tum rajashthan ki ho aur woh bhi itne bade parivar ki ho….?

 

K: Purkhon ka to mujhe pata tha kanan…..par ye ghar…ye sab ke bare mein nahi…….She said frowning..….she wanted to call her mom and ask about all this….she had so many questions….Kanan…..she stopped her with a hand on her arm…..mere sath aao…na….

 

Ka: par kahan Kripa…..

 

K: Mandir…..she said pulling her down and running with kanan…..

 

Some one called out to Kanan….kanan sambhal ke beti……lehenga pehenke bhag mat, gir jaogi…..Kripa stopped immediately….turning to kanan…..

 

K: Sorry…..mein tumhe aise…

 

Ka: Koi baat nahi….chalein…..she said chuckling……she could understand  Kripa's eagerness….

 

Kripa nodded and slowly they walked to the room, next to the huge kitchen…..for some reason, Kripa found her way on her own to the room……But, she could feel the eyes of the staff on her…….She felt as if she was in scrutinity……She walked in a little shaken.….And there was the idol of Srinathji…….She looked up at the idol ….who was decorated from head to toe….the room was decorated wonderfully with huge flower pots and colourful clothes…….Flowers and the dhup smell filled the room……..Kripa bowed before the God and tears flowed from her cheeks……..why did she feel so emotional coming to this place, this all felt so familiar..….why was she feeling uneasy, but still as if she was pulled by some force to this place……..it felt like she was in some different world…..as if clock had turned back………and as if she never had left this place…….

 

Ka: Kripa…..Kanan came next to her and kept a hand on her shoulder….kya hua…..Kripa quickly wiped her face and tried to smile…….She did not have words to describe her feelings….It was too overwhelming……

 

K: Kuch nahi kanan….pata nahi kyun, magar….she said laughing through her tears…..and shrugged……she wiped her tears…..chal ab chalte hain….she said after some time……Kanan silently got up and went up with her……

She introduced her to her mom and dad and they were surprised to hear about Kripa……..they were happy to have her here and asked her to have her breakfast……she could see, that just a word that she was the daughter of this family, was enough to get her so much attention, that she felt like running away……..Kanan's mom was asking her to eat, her aunt was telling the mehendi person, to do the best on Kripa's hand, many others came and said hi and introduced them self……It felt so odd.……after breakfast, Kripa sat to apply mehendi on her hands, the local people did their best and within an hour her hands and legs were full, with beautiful design and soon the color appeared on her hands…...

 

Ka: Vow Kripa…..kehte hain…..ki mehendi ka rang jitna gehra hota hai…..uske pati usase utna jyada pyar karte hain…..Kripa blushed at that…..

 

K: Tumhari bhi to kitni dark hui hai…

 

Ka: aur nahi to kya…..Nishant mujse bahut pyar karte hain…..pata hai mujhe….she said with a confident smile……

 

K: So, how did you meet Nishant….?

 

Ka: We met when I slipped during a tour and broke my leg…..she said laughing…..and he was my doctor…..

 

K: Medical romance…..? Kripa asked grinning……

 

Ka: Hmmm something like that……she said smiling…..but we were friends before that……it was just he did not see me as more until then…..she laughed….it took a broken leg to make him love me……

 

K: Vow….so from when do you know him…..

 

Ka: Oh….may be from last 6-7 years……..can't remember…….she said shrugging…….

 

K: Vow…..Kanan then gave Kripa a gift box…..yeh kya hai…?

 

Ka: A small gift from a friend…….

 

K: No Kanan……I can't accept this….she said slowly…

 

Ka: Kripa…..agar tumne ye nahi liya…to mein naraz ho jaungi…..khas tere liye lekar ayi hun….ma ke sath jake…..chal ub ye le…..Ghagra hai…..shaddi mein pehnnana…..sath mein mathching jwellery bhi hai…..thik hai?

 

K: Thanks a lot kanan……vaise meine bhi ghagra kharida tha tere shadi ke liye….

 

Ka: koi baat nahi…..kal vidai ke time pehen lena…..thik hai…….aaj ye pehen le….please….It took me 5 hours to select this one for you…..Kripa looked at her as if she was joking…..but knew she wasn't…..

 

K: Thank you so much…….

 

Ka: Aur ek baar thank you bologi na to ye le lungi……..she said glaring at Kripa……

 

Kripa laughed….nahi bolungi………she said with a smile……..

 

Kripa met some of Kanan's friends and relatives and they all sang songs…..did some rajashthani dances……Kripa too joined them learning the steps soon…..It was in all wonderful experience for Kripa…..she even went out to see the backyard gardens and was surprised to see how big the gardens were and very well maintained too….She couldn't believe that her parents never told her about this huge house and that they were well know amongst old royalities……She took lots of picture…..around the house, during the function, etc…….

 

In the evening, they all got ready for the Barat to come…….Kripa took out the dress which Kanan had given her and was surprised……It was just beautiful…….peacock blue and dark purple shade…….she had never seen so wonderful work on any clothes ever……When she wore the ghaghra……..she felt like she was some one else……..she circled round and round delighted……she wore the jwellery and did light makeup….when she was done…..she could not believe it was her…..she had never owned such wonderful clothes ever before…..she always wore simple soft cotton dresses or some Punjabi dresses with light work…..this was some thing from bridal magazine…….she thought and blushed at her thought…..she shook her head and hit her head ……lightly……when she walked in Kanan's room…..Kanan was delighted to see her…..She was still having her hair and make up done by a beautician……

 

Ka: I knew it would look wonderful on you……you are looking just amazing she said laughing at her….

 

K: Thanks Kanan…..this is just very very nice…..I never owned any thing like this….thank you so much….and this is for you and Nishant………

 

Ka: Thanks…..She said taking the present…..kya hai isme……?

 

K: Nishant jiju ke sath dekh lena……she said laughing……..Kanan grinned and nodded……

 

Around evening 8 o'clock the barat arrived……..Kanan was ready by then…….she looked lovely in the red bridal ghaghra……and lots of jwellery….her hands filled with bangles……….Kripa took out some of her photos….kanan insisted her to pose and asked her cousin to take some of Kripa's pictures as well……..

 

Later Kanan's friends and counsins pulled Kripa downstairs to see the barat…..It was a grand ceremony……huge lights and big pots were carried by people…..there were people who were singing and dancing….. she could see Kanan's would be husband behind on a horse…..a empty doli was kept aside, fully decorated……..and then she saw him again…..dancing with some people……..laughing…..grinning at Nishant………..He looked amazing in Indian clothes…..she thought.....her body reacted so strongly at the sight of him, that she could feel sweat on her forehead……she did not know what was going on……she was confused at such a huge reaction to a person, who she did not even know till yesterday……She slowly slipped out of the crowd and went behind……breathing deeply to calm her self……..she slowly walked up and stood near the window, where no one was there……..she looked down at the barat…….it all looked so wonderful……especially……..as if he knew that she was looking, his gaze went up and then there he saw her………..for a few minutes it was just like yesterday…..where there was no one but them…….Kripa just stood there and kept looking……until, some one from behind interrupted Angad and told him to move forward……..he slowly gave them a smile and moved forward, but not without looking up once more………but Kripa had disappeared inside by then……..

 

Angad was memorized by the site of her……it felt as if she belonged there……..she looked beautiful in traditional rajashthani ghaghra......just as he imagined his bride would be.….suddenly, he frowned at the way his thoughts were going…….It wasn't right for him, to think about some one, when he had to fulfill his promise to his grandparents…….but still, he kept looking up to get a glance of her till they reached the door…..but to his disappointment he could not see her……..

 

Kripa went to Kanan's room silently…..deep in her own thoughts, in her own turmoil………pata nahi aisa lagta hai ki mein use janti hun……..aisa lagta hai jaise woh mere bahut kareeb hai…..mein un ankhon mein aise kyun kho jati hun, ki mera sudh budh kho de ti hun………she thought with a new tension……..

 

Ka: Kripa…..

 

K: Hmmm….

 

Ka: Kya soch rahi ho…..barat kaisi hai….? kaash mein bhi dekh sakti….

 

K: Kripa laughed…..don't worry Kanan….soon you will be able to see you dulhe raja…..she said……and laughed when Kanan blushed……..

 

At that time, kanan's cousins came in along with her mother………her mother covered Kanan with Ghunghat and asked Kripa to come down…….Kripa followed them behind slowly…..her heart beating wildly…..she shivered at the thought of coming face to face with him again, but she could not hide here for ever……….so she slowly followed them down………

 

They reached the mandap, which was beautifully decorated with pots one above the other…..flowers and lights everywhere………The marriage ceremony began and she spotted her team a little far away…..she immediately went there to greet them and they complimented her for the way she looked and the lovely dress…..She came back near the mandap, on Kanan's request and sat a little far away as the ceremony continued…..she was so immersed in the ceremony that she forgot all about Angad for some time…..kanan and Nishant got up for pheras…..Her gaze then went to the person on the opposite side of the mandap….who was looking at her rather than the ceremony…..she looked away, a little shyly, blushing at his constant staring and walked behind the pots, to stay clear of his gaze…...But could not help her self and kept gazing at him from behind the pots…..It was as if she had some deep connection to him……she was so attracted to him, that her gaze constantly went to him after every few minutes, and he too kept gazing at her all the time……at  last the ceremony was done and Kanan and Nishant were announced husband and wife…..Kanan's face of still covered with ghunghat…….

 

Other side Angad was in deep thoughts and a little disappointed as well, for the turn of events…..at one side he had to fulfill his promise and other side, he was attracted to this stranger……….how could all this happen in such short time………

 

His parents were sitting behind along with dadi with their old friends……….Kartik was with his friends and Aliyah was with Nishants cousins….....He kept staring at the lovely angel, who was off limits for him……….he swallowed hard………For few seconds there, he wanted to forget everything and go to her and talk……….but he stopped him self……

 

After the ceremony…..Kripa's team came to the stage and congradulated her and her husband and went to have dinner……On Kanan's request Kripa got permission to stay the night with Kanan and they said there bye's later thanking her again to invite them……..

 

Later when everyone started coming to bless and congradulate the couple, including Kripa, Kanan, told Nishant about Kripa's real identity……….

 

N: Vow…..really…..Kripa was a little embarrassed with all the attention, but she kept quite…...it is so nice to have you here for our wedding……one min….papa…..he called out….and then introduced his parents to her……..They were stunned as well, but then were delighted and talked to her about her parents and asked about there where abouts…..after a few minutes, they excused them self to attend to other guests and promised to get in touch tomorrow with her……within few minutes the word spread about this and there was a buzz around…….Kripa felt under scruitinity by everyone……She felt a little weird, as people kept looking at her and talking quietly….…she left the venue and went inside…..she walked to the temple area and sat there…….it was very peaceful there…….she felt a little normal after what happened out there..…How come everyone knew their family? Were they really so well known? Why had her dad and mom never told her about it….?

 

Outside, it did not take long for Angad's family to know about it as well………they were stunned to hear that Kripa was here……in this very house……But Angad still had no idea about it…….He was with Kartik, having dinner with other friends……….

 

Dilip, Avantika and Devyani, could not believe it was real……..how could Kripa be here, and never come to even meet them…….? Were Suryabhan and Gayatri here as well? These questions were behind each ones mind……..Devyani slowly got up……she had tears in her eyes………she slowly walked inside the house……and went to the temple area………and then she saw her……….sitting infront of the idol and singing a lovely bhajan…….She just stood there and kept listening……she had a beautiful voice..……she knew from the bottom of her heart that she was Kripa……she did not have to look at her…….she could feel it……tears flowed from her eyes…….Her Kripa was here, where she belonged…….how she had waited to see this day……..And above all the miracle, she was again in front of their Thakurji, who was the witness of the union of her and Angad…..She had accepted her as her grand-daughter-in-law, in front of this very idol…………

 

D: Kripa….she whispered…...

 

Kripa stopped singing….and turned around immediately…….to see who was calling her……

 

K: Jee….she said with a smile and getting up….

 

D: Meri Kripa….Meri laddo…….she said looking at her lovely face with tears in her eyes…..

 

Kripa was taken aback….

 

K: Jee, sorry meine apko pehchana nahi…….she said slowly…..

 

Dadi could not say a word, she just went to her and hugged her tightly……..Thakurji aapne aaj itni khushi de di, ki abb aur kuch mangne ki himmat hi nahi mujhme…….she said crying….touching Kripa's face and hands…..Kripa just kept staring at her with confusion and tears of her own…..she did not understand any of these……..she did not know who she was….

 

She saw a couple of more people near the temple entrance, who were staring at her…….Kripa did not know what to speak or what to do…..she just stood there and waited for them to tell her some thing of what was going on…..But then remembered that today morning when she was seeing through the album, she had seen them in it…….Might be some friends of her dad……..But Kripa was not sure at all…….

 

Dilip: Ma….he said slowly, sensing Kripa's discomfort……he went near her and kept a hand on her shoulder…..

 

D: Dadi slowly took her glasses and wiped her tears……Dilip…..dekh na kaun hai….humari Kripa…..she said with tears….

 

Dilip: Haan ma…..bahut pyari hai…..he said slowly looking at her…..Beta, tum akele ayi ho….tumhare mama papa?

 

K: Nahi uncle….mein to yahan apne college team ke sath ayi hun……mama papa to US mein hai…..Kanan ne shadi par invite kiya….to hum sab….mera matlab hai mera team aur mere professor yahan shadi ke liye aye…..sorry uncle, par meine aap ko pehchana nahi…..she said slowly with regret…..

 

A: Magar hum tujhe us din se jante hain, jis din tu is ghar mein paida hui thi……..Inhi ki to Kripa hai tu….she said pointing towards the idol……. coming forward and touching her head with tears……

 

Dilip: Hum tumhare papa ke bahut purane dost hain……..Mera naam Dilip Rathod hai……Yeh meri ma aur yeh meri patni Avantika…..he said as a way of introduction……

 

N: Kitni pyari ho gayi…..bilkul apni ma jaisi…..Kaisi hai Gayatri?

 

K: Jee ma thik hai….When she said her mom's name, she felt as if they knew them well……

 

Kanan's cousin Shruti came to call her….

 

S: Kripa, Kanan bula rahi hai tuzhe…..

 

D: Ja beta hum bad mein baat karenge…….

 

Dilip: Kab tak ho beta yahan…..?

 

K: Ji mein aur do din hun, phir Mumbai se meri flight hai……

 

A: Jao beta, kanan bula rahi hai na…..hum milte hain tumhe thodi der baad….

 

K: Jee aunty…Namaste….she said smiling at dadi and slowly started walking out……..

 

D: beta kya tum yahin ruki ho?

 

K: nahi uncle....dusre hotel mein hoon

 

Dadi: apne ghar ke hote, dusari jagah Kyun ruki ho?

 

K: Jee…woh mujhe pata nahi tha ki ye humara ghar hai….mama papa aur meri tasveer dekhi tab pata chala…..she said looking down….

 

Dadi just sighed….

 

Dilip: Ma woh college ke sath aai hai na to Surya ne bataya nahi hoga….he said slowly…..

 

A: Haan haan….Kripa tum jao beta, dulhan ko kuch chahiye hoga to…..hum badmein baat karenge….

 

K: Jii….and she slowly turned around and left …...She was in huge delima……she slowly walked out thinking about what all happened today……It all felt some thing of a dream…..not reality….she did not even know these people, and they all seem to be so happy to meet her…..how was it possible, that her dad never told her that they had friends here……

 

After Kripa went out devyani just stood there and stared at the door....

 

Dilip: Ma....

 

D: Bhagwan bhi kaise kaise khel khelt hai....

 

A: par kitni pyari lag rahi thi na Kripa.....she said with a smile.....

 

They slowly went out to join there guest.....Mr. Mittal was an old friend.....so Dilip was free to go inside the hotel any time....

 

Ka: are Kripa kahan chali gayi thi....

 

K: bus andar gayi thi thodi der ke liye

 

S: chalo Kripa, wahan chalo.... Ghumar dalte hain.....shruti called out...

 

K: nahi.... Tum sab jao.....mera maan nahi hai....

 

S: chalo na....bada majha ayega....pata hain woh yahan ke saabse ache kalakar hain....chalo na….she said pulling her

 

K: thik hai....chalo....she said with a smile.....when she started dancing with the other girls twirling round and round, she forgot everything and danced till her feet hurt...... It felt so nice and natural to dance amongst them.... At last when the music ended, there was a loud cheer around them.......Kripa shyly thanked them and went to kanan

 

Ka: mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna Acha dance bhi kar leti ho....."

 

K: Indian society mein ma haar saal humei participate karati thi....so thodi bahut ati hai....Aur parson hotel mein thode rajashthani kalakar aye the.....to unse thode steps sikhen

 

Ka: vow…..you are good at it…..she said grinning…..

 

Angad stood a little far and kept looking at Kripa....he was memorized by her beauty, by her enthusiasm.....light sweat on her forehead made her more attractive.....her shy smile made her look so innocent and lovely....it was killing him to keep his distance....

 

He looked up to the sky...as if to complain about it......loud cheer among the people bought him back to earth....as she walked away, he felt his heart breaking into pieces....he swallowed hard and looked away as some boys made comment about what a beauty she was.....he did not know how long he stood there in his own turmoil.....

 

D: devarji...devarji....Divya called Angad

 

A: oh sorry....ji bhabhi....he said rubbing his hands one over the other....

 

D: kya soch rahe hain.....?

 

A: ummm kuch bhi to nahi.....Bas aise he..... Bataiye kuch kaam tha kya? he asked a little distracted.....looking for Kripa in the crowd….

 

D: Jisko aap ki nazare dhund rahi hai, woh to gayi…..khana khane…..dulhan ke saath….

 

A: Bhabhi aap bhi na kuch bhi sochti rahti hai…..

 

D: Devarji, jab se aye ho apki najar to usse hi dekh rahi hai…….kyun….she said grinning….

 

A: Nazroon ka kya hai bhabhi….ye to sapne dekhne ke liye hi hote hain na…..par is dil ko malum hai, ki ye sapne kabhi pure nahi honge…..he said looking down sadly….but then smiled at her again, controlling his emotions……

 

D: Acha chaliye…..hum apko aisi khabar sunate hain ki appka dil khush ho jayega…..she said smiling….

 

A: Angad grinned at her…..to mein kya chacha banane wala hun?

 

Divya's eyes grew big….

 

D: Dhat…..besharam….jaiye devarji….hum apko kuch nahi batayenge….bhabhi se aise baat karte hain? She said angrily….turning around…..

 

A: Sorry….sorry bhabhi….maafi….he said holding his ears and making faces….please bataiye na….kya baat hai….aap kya batana chahti hai…..

 

D: Ek shart hai…..

 

A: Kya?

 

D: Neki deni hogi…..

 

A: Hmmmm….do mahinon mein to aap bilkul hi badal gayi….pahele din to gift lene se bhi jhijhak rahi thi….aur aaj….he grinned….

 

D: Aur nahi to kya…..aap ne behan mana hain hame….

 

A: Baab re, aab to teen teen behenon ke farmaishen puri karni hogi……chaliye…..mil jayegi…..aab to bataiye…..baat kya hai……

 

Divya held his arm and pulled him in the house…..

 

A: Are bhabhi….kahan lekar ja rahe ho….

 

D: Aao to sahi devarji…..

 

Angad followed her…..till she went and stood before Surya, Gayatri and Kripa's photo…..

 

D: Jante hain ye kaun hai….?

 

A: Haan…Kripa….Jisse dadaji ne mere liye chuna hai….he said slowly with heavy heart………

 

D: To suniye devarji….jiske sapne aap ki ankhe dekh rahi hai….woh wahi hai……she said pointing to Kripa's photo…….

 

Angad was confused…….and looked at Divya….

 

A: Matlab…..

 

D: Kripa…..jise aap ke liye dada dadi ne chuna hai……..woh wahi Kripa hai, jiske sapne aapki ankhen dekh rahi hai…….she said grinning at him……

 

It took full minute for Angad to understand what she was saying…..his mouth fell open….and he kept looking at Divya…..

 

D: Devarji…..kya hua….ho gaye na hosh gum…..aab meri nekki….she said smiling….opening her hands…..

 

A: bhabhi….bhabhi….app sach bol rahi hai….Kripa, Kripa wahi hai……sach….? He asked lifting her up and twirling her round and round……

 

D: Haan devarji….aapki Kripa…..she said laughing…..aab mujhe niche utariye…..bahut daar lag raha hai…..she said with closed eyes…..Angad slowly put her down….

 

A: I can't believe this…..Ye kaise ho sakta hai…….

 

D: Ye to Srinathji ki hi Kripa hai…..jo woh khud aapke paas aa gayi…..

 

A: Aap ne thik kaha bhabhi……Jab Srinathji ke mandir mein pahli baar dekha use….aisa laga ki….baas dekhta rahun…..aur jab usne apna naam Kripa kaha, ek pal ke liye maan mein khayal bhi aya ki shayad yeh meri Kripa hi ho…..par…..

 

D: Acha ji……pehele hi mulakat ho gayi….

 

A: Woh…bhabhi…..kal mandir mein…..

 

Dadi: Jo tumhe laga, woh wahi nikli…..hai na….Dekh na mere Srinathji ke samne hi phir se tum dono mile…..Unki leela to aprampar hai….jahan vishwas hota hai na, wahan to bhagwan bhi mil jate hain…..dadi said with tears in her eyes…..aur dekh na, paheli najar mein usko tere dil mein bhi basa diya…….she said laughing……

 

A: Dadi….he said going to her….and hugging her tightly…..bilkul thik kaha aapne….aapka vishwas hi tha jo, aaj woh khud yahan ayi……

 

Dadi hugged her and after giving him a pat on his cheek

D: To kaisi lagi meri bahu….? She asked smiling at him….

 

A: Dadi, chaho to aaj hi le aun ghar……? He asked grinning….

 

D: Pagal….she said pinching his cheeks and walking out with tears……

 

D: To devarji…..humari nekki uddhar rahi…..jis din devraniji ko le ayenge na….uss din soot samet lungi…..she said holding his cheeks……

 

A: Mujhe us din ka intajar rahega bhabhi…..naav lakha haar bhi mangogi na to mil jayegi…..he said grinning….

 

D: Hmmmm….shayad bahut jaldi mein hain aap…..par mujhe nahi lagta itna assan hai……pahele tumhare sasurji ko manana padega…..badmein kudi ko….she said mischiviously and went out…..laughing……when she saw Angad's red face……..

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
wowowo Di kya part hai awesome ..kripa come to her house ans she even remember her her life there and after she know this is her Haveli wow ...Angad ko usski Dulhan ka pata chal gaya ...Dadi and all khanna family feels great after knowing about kripa's arrival..great i looking how angad going to make kripa his with his sasurjee's permission ab angad gaya kaam se .....i love to se possessive and caring angad ..kripa should know ab her childhood marriage with angad.Thank you di for this part and pm.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
amazin update di
wow m glad angad's family noes bout kripa nw
cant wait 4 AK scenes nw...
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