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FF Deewani, Chapter 28, pg 145 DISABLED (Page 148)

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Hey PariHug
This is by far one of the best update of DEEWANIClap
The amazing thing about ur updates is its length never bothers the reader,becaz they get so engrossed in the storyDay Dreaming
Girl,u have a way with wordsThumbs Up
I absolutely loved how he remembered her words about one heart the moment he gained senses after the fall,that was the beginning of his heart finally winning over his mindWink
I loved his way of expressing his heart feelings & especially when he said -
ab hum kisi bhi roop me do nahi,par har roop me ek hai
That is when he completely surrenders himself to her & accept her wholeheartedly as his soulmate.
I also loved his naughtiness when he tried to scare her about lizzard &
wild ratWink
Nakku's answer about why she accepted her love on their wedding day just left him speechless.She is so right,when u love someone,u don't expect to hear the same from him.But,u always feel the need to let that person know what u truely feel.
I am enjoying Dutta's jelousy towards Gaurav.LOL
Finally Jagtap dada entered,now what role he will play to further tasha's love story that can only be known in ur coming updates.
 
 
But,i will again say -ur best update is yet to come,Nakku's FR & Dutta's acceptance of Nakku's real face.
If u have written so beautifully about him surrendering to Nakku's love then i am sure u will excel in FR wala update.
I also believe unlike in the show,Dutta in ur FF is quite an independent judge of human behaviour,so i am sure he will not shout -DHOKHALOL
 
 
Thanks a lot for this fantastic update.Thumbs Up
Looking forward to the next one.Wink
PoojaSmile

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@ Kiran, lol I'm so happy u edited ur comment...Wink, u liked d pic thanks babez, I knew u wud, oh huni I'm soo glad it bought a smile 2ur face, seriously, first of all I really wanna say I just luv d way u pick each n every detail n tell it d way u fink lol...I luv dat abt u hun, oh btw d connection of Dutta bein alive wid d cell is d fact dat he answered it, but he didn't speak cz of d bad reception lol..Tongue
n even if Dutta did run on battery power, den he wudn't be ne gud widout his sim innit, lol sim being Naku, woteva dey r they'll both be adhoore widout each other...LOL
..Well yeah Dutta's chagned cz of Kishore tellin him about her innocence b4 d crash, so der ain't nuffin 2 hold him bak now...Smile
wen u wrote wife I was lyk huh..but den I membered dat der married lol...cn u believe it I almst 4gtD'oh
well wot can I say Gaurav's bin around alot, so he knows too much, n Naku has known him since childhood, which is where Naku gets her independent personality 4rm lol, well woteva bit of independence she has...LOL
yeh I fink 2 a degree every1 has common sense n no one can be truly as dumb as they show in d serials sumtyms, well I fink she convinces Dutta mainly bcz he's in luv wid her now, so if she ask him 2 jump he js gonna say 'how high babe'...LOLWink
lool yeh berries according 2me, dat  wz d 1st fing u able 2 find out in d wild lol, not apples...LOLEmbarrassed, n even Dutta cnt help it even he knows he's got a chance in d forest alone Wink
 
yeah he makes her sit on his shoulder, lol is dat wot u dream of sitting on ur man's shoulder...LOL, I wud prob flatten him 2 death if i eva sat on ma man's shoulder hehe...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, but yeh I wuda thght u wud've wanted Dutta 2 slip his fingers thru her slit lool, altho dat wudn't be ryt in dat case, d other tym he felt free 2 chek her out, now he's in luv wid her, so he's lookin at her wid respect now, n besides woteva is hers is now his...LOLLOLEmbarrassed
 
yep der finkin shows d direction of der thghts, she alwys luks on d gud side n he on d bad side lol, but u no ur thgt on dem 'dat she's d startn he d end' is actually a much nicer meanin hun...Clap, I soo feel u r actually a part of dis ff lol u really get in2 it, n ur comment really shows dat so thanks darlin', n ur reaction 2 chokin well ditto wid Naku's feelings hun, I'm sure dats how she felt 2...Wink, n if only Dutta looked at us all lyk dat...Day Dreaming
 
His sarcasm cums naturally wen Gaurav is in ? lol, yeh baby der head ova heels 4 each other 2, yeh all der confessions r out, n d hug weren't spose 2b der, but wen I finished writing dat convo it js seemed ryt, in fact der weren't spose 2 b a hug in dat update at all, but I guess der wz...LOL
lol I know u luvin my Dutta, now we're gonna b fighting ova him...TongueTongue
 
yeh d tree scene I actually luved myself, cz 4 d update I had actually make n account n carve d tree offiacially on website, n 4me dats actually becum a memory 4eva, so I jus had 2 create a scene around my tree lol, n made it eternal, n u know d weird part wz, wen I wz gonna write it, the minimuim amount of characters u can use was 2 n d max wz 3, n I wz lyk now what !!!   coz u hav no idea how much I wanted 2use dat pic of d carvin...n u had to hav a sign in d middle...so I wz heartbroken 4 a while, n got n idea of writin ta-sha instead n it turned out even better than I cud imagine...did u click on d link below...Question
 
n babez SR not yet, afta der wedding lool...Evil Smile...boys will b boys, but girls hav cnt giv dem evryting on a plate...spesh Naku
 
...n hey hey wots dis abh Naku meri heroin hogi lol, wen she does suttin gud u say 'meri Naku/my Naku', n wen it doesn't go ur way ur say 'teri'...lmao gal u crack me up literally...Wink
 
...knock knock, cumout of tashaland lol...three's a crowd...hehe...LOLTongue
 
ooohh dw abt Jaggu Dada I luv him already, he's gonna be a real eye opener 4 both Dutta n Naku, everyone plays der part in my ff hun, trust me...Wink
 
huni I luv luv luv ur comment lol, n trust me I'm grinnin 2..Embarrassed so lots of muahzz...Smile
ofc u'd luv d theory wid Dutta n nose ting lol, dat wz d reason he wanted 2 kiss her...I know u 2well...
 
n thank u 4ur comment hun, n notice how u didn't write update soon lol, gud going...ur so satisfied wid dis one, dat u either 4gt or ur nt bothered abt d next one lool...either way suits me...Tongue luv ya babe !Wink
 
 
         
 
 
@ 007, btw not in real lyf ma cheeks ain't cute n chubby lol, do not be decieved LOL, but ur still welcum 2 pull dem, cz once u do dat den 4sure they'd b red...Tongue, will save me 4rm using my blusher loool...LOL, oops I spoke 2 soon, now I gotta pull my blusher out agen...hehe...huni weneva I talk 2u, I always no I'm gonna b in 4 a tough fight wid u lol ur '007', it ain't kwl 2 speak wid u widout a little fight...Tongue.  aaww dw abt taana I'm js kiddin hun, n yeh chik lol, all ma gals r chiks darlin's babez, n wot not lol...n hun ma idea of chik ain't malika sherawat...ClownDead, so dw aisa nahin hoga aur naahin hoga ur safe 4rm badnaami lool...Wink
 
 
 
 
 
@ Alveera, thanks babez, Hug
 
 
 
 
 
@ Mish, no problemo...u take ur tym, I dnt want u2 waste tym here commentin rather den studyin huni, so ur off d hook babez...n d fact dat u luved it is enuff 4me...Hug...ok dat enuff luv lol get bak 2 revision...! Angry LOL
 
 
 
 
 
@ meriyaar, fank u, fank u fank u, cz u sed it 3 tyms I feel obliged 2 say it 3 tyms 2 lol, it adds effect dnt u fink...ok dnt answer dat...im jus goin mad here 4 no apparent reason lol...Wacko
..but no honestly, thank u, n Im glad u thought so, cz it wz Dutta's feelings dat were a little tough 4me 2 bring out...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed, so I got him 2 ask Naku's 1st lool...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed, well I'm glad sum1 lyked d 'almost kiss' lol, everyone's angry wid me cz they didn't kiss, but I want d 1st kiss 2b special...is dat so bad...ConfusedLOL, I will defo try 2 update soon...Wink
 
 
                          
 
 
 
@ Pooja, first of all thanks soo much gal, I hav 2say dat thru ur comment I literally had a sweet smile on my lips dat I cudn't wipe off until I finished readin all ur comment, ur words r in actual fact very sweet n lovely thank u agen, oh god I' so glad u fink dis is so far d best, cz I actually had 2 put a lot of mental stress in dis update lol...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed, it was kinda of a challenge in a way, n oh fank god ur not upset wid d long updates, after dis next one I will defo try n shorten dem tho.
 
Well I guess wid ur comment u covered d whole chpater pretty well hun, n d weird fing is d line u picked happend 2 pop in der at d spare od moment, it js sounded so ryt at d tym, n as 4 her confession of tellin him of her luv on d wedding day, I fink dat bit wz important in d serial itself cz she neva wanted him 2 luv her bak, well she did, but not in dat sense...lol...but she simply wanted him 2 know, I mean it cant possibly b dat bad in real lyk, can it...?? Well ne wy I fink dat point wz overlooked in the drama, so I guess I pointed it out here...Embarrassed
Yeh u'll find out bat Jagtap nex, he's only gonna b in d single update, but his story will hold strong ground in d whole ff itself..Embarrassed, glad u lykin Gaurav tho..Tongue
 
oh no dnt say dat, dnt expect ne fing 4rm future updates lol, js read it as u go along, cz I den I start 2 wonder if everyone's gonna b waitin all dis tym n den it turns out their long wait wud b disappointed by me, n I dnt want dat...lol...but yeh ur defo ryt abt d dhoka part, altho dats his famous lines lol, I'm sure I'll manage 2 squeeze those lines in sumwer hehe...
no no hun, thanks 4ur fantastic comment...Wink
 
 
 
 
 
Thank u girls,
 
 
lots of luv 2u all..

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Hi Tinker, ZABARDAST update, aur kiya kahu mast mast, u have coverd it all, yaar, even the lines that u have used about the ROOP part, that they are both one in any form,  it is good that dutta is a little jaelous of gaurav, because he knows that nakku has spent move time with gaurav the nshe has with dutta and also that gaurav knows nakku a million times more then dutta knows her.. aur Jagtap, i hope he has a honeymoon suit for them at his LOVE HOUSE lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KEEP IT UP YAAR, LOVE YA

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinkerbe11

 
                                                               
 
 
 
@ Kiran, lol I'm so happy u edited ur comment...Wink, u liked d pic thanks babez, I knew u wud, oh huni I'm soo glad it bought a smile 2ur face, seriously, first of all I really wanna say I just luv d way u pick each n every detail n tell it d way u fink lol...I luv dat abt u hun, oh btw d connection of Dutta bein alive wid d cell is d fact dat he answered it, but he didn't speak cz of d bad reception lol..Tongue

OH Get IT now :D

n even if Dutta did run on battery power, den he wudn't be ne gud widout his sim innit, lol sim being Naku, woteva dey r they'll both be adhoore widout each other...LOL

hehehheh Dutta black berry Naku his power sim :P


..Well yeah Dutta's chagned cz of Kishore tellin him about her innocence b4 d crash, so der ain't nuffin 2 hold him bak now...Smile

yeah but D is D , u cant accept him to think right :P
but u like to give surprises , or may be this was a much needed space from outer world thy need :D

wen u wrote wife I was lyk huh..but den I membered dat der married lol...cn u believe it I almst 4gtD'oh


Dont worry hon , im here to remind u that :P

well wot can I say Gaurav's bin around alot, so he knows too much, n Naku has known him since childhood, which is where Naku gets her independent personality 4rm lol, well woteva bit of independence she has...LOL

LOl
 
yeh I fink 2 a degree every1 has common sense n no one can be truly as dumb as they show in d serials sumtyms, well I fink she convinces Dutta mainly bcz he's in luv wid her now, so if she ask him 2 jump he js gonna say 'how high babe'...LOLWink

ehehhehehehh true true !
he is blinded by her Love :P
lool yeh berries according 2me, dat  wz d 1st fing u able 2 find out in d wild lol, not apples...LOLEmbarrassed, n even Dutta cnt help it even he knows he's got a chance in d forest alone Wink

true , good research i must say or should i say , how many time have u lost in jungle :P
 
yeah he makes her sit on his shoulder, lol is dat wot u dream of sitting on ur man's shoulder...LOL, I wud prob flatten him 2 death if i eva sat on ma man's shoulder hehe...Embarrassed,

babes i have weired dreams just like me :P
i love public affection and man showing what he is capable to do and man should be powerful not like some chusa hua mango , k u flatten him :P


 but yeh I wuda thght u wud've wanted Dutta 2 slip his fingers thru her slit lool, altho dat wudn't be ryt in dat case, d other tym he felt free 2 chek her out, now he's in luv wid her, so he's lookin at her wid respect now, n besides woteva is hers is now his...LOLLOLEmbarrassed

OH yeah and i agree now he knows she is all his :P
mental satisafaction :P

 
yep der finkin shows d direction of der thghts, she alwys luks on d gud side n he on d bad side lol, but u no ur thgt on dem 'dat she's d startn he d end' is actually a much nicer meanin hun.
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thanks dear 
.Clap, I soo feel u r actually a part of dis ff lol u really get in2 it, n ur comment really shows dat so thanks darlin', 

actually u know when u write ur update , i got myself to somewhere where the scene is actually happening , when reading this update i was on the tree , looking at them dreamingly :P
n ur reaction 2 chokin well ditto wid Naku's feelings hun, I'm sure dats how she felt 2...Wink, n if only Dutta looked at us all lyk dat...Day Dreaming

I know :D
 
His sarcasm cums naturally wen Gaurav is in ? lol, yeh baby der head ova heels 4 each other 2, yeh all der confessions r out, n d hug weren't spose 2b der, but wen I finished writing dat convo it js seemed ryt, in fact der weren't spose 2 b a hug in dat update at all, but I guess der wz...LOL
lol I know u luvin my Dutta, now we're gonna b fighting ova him...TongueTongue

Bring it on !
 
yeh d tree scene I actually luved myself, cz 4 d update I had actually make n account n carve d tree offiacially on website, n 4me dats actually becum a memory 4eva, so I jus had 2 create a scene around my tree lol, n made it eternal, n u know d weird part wz, wen I wz gonna write it, the minimuim amount of characters u can use was 2 n d max wz 3, n I wz lyk now what !!!   coz u hav no idea how much I wanted 2use dat pic of d carvin...n u had to hav a sign in d middle...so I wz heartbroken 4 a while, n got n idea of writin ta-sha instead n it turned out even better than I cud imagine...did u click on d link below...Question

yes i did and instant5ly fall in love , its like jaise D got the pic , u have kept a memory with taht tree too :P
btw im thinking to plant a tree with K +D on it or may be full name :P

hehehehehhheh
 
n babez SR not yet, afta der wedding lool...Evil Smile...boys will b boys, but girls hav cnt giv dem evryting on a plate...spesh Nakus
thts why i love my Naku :P

...n hey hey wots dis abh Naku meri heroin hogi lol, wen she does suttin gud u say 'meri Naku/my Naku', n wen it doesn't go ur way ur say 'teri'...lmao gal u crack me up literally...Wink

babes it was just a milli second away , i was all ready for it na Wink
 
...knock knock, cumout of tashaland lol...three's a crowd...hehe...LOLTongue

ok then i will shift to Kitaland :P
Kiran and Dutta :P
hehehehhehh
 
ooohh dw abt Jaggu Dada I luv him already, he's gonna be a real eye opener 4 both Dutta n Naku, everyone plays der part in my ff hun, trust me...Wink

completly trsuting u :D
 
huni I luv luv luv ur comment lol, n trust me I'm grinnin 2..Embarrassed so lots of muahzz...Smile
ofc u'd luv d theory wid Dutta n nose ting lol, dat wz d reason he wanted 2 kiss her...I know u 2well..
. yes u do 
n thank u 4ur comment hun, n notice how u didn't write update soon lol, gud going...ur so satisfied wid dis one, dat u either 4gt or ur nt bothered abt d next one lool...either way suits me...Tongue luv ya babe !Wink oh i didnt ,actually u see i was lost in Tasha land so thast why now read 

update soon :D
 
 
         
 
 

Thank u girls,
 
 
lots of luv 2u all..

my comments in blue :D


Edited by kiran255 - 07 May 2011 at 6:26am

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hello hello ...i have been missing in action over here lol

and me getting right to commenting asap


srry for delay


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Hey hey luk who's showed up lol...Shocked
 
god girl ur jus soo early.. !!  LOL

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Originally posted by tinkerbe11

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Hey hey luk who's showed up lol...Shocked
 
god girl ur jus soo early.. !!  LOL


yup fawn here


btw i edited my spot
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