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Naku the guy is definitely in love with you, it's so obvious but he's clearly having trouble admitting it to himself, lagta haike tera Dutta khud selarne par maajboor hogaya hai... he said whilst grabbing a banana and consuming in just two bites, and tossing the skin in the garbage can behind him, as he left, not bothering to give Naku any further explanation of the whatever he'd just told her.
As Naku stared at his back moving away from her she wondered if Gaurav had said anything to Dutta, Saab was already irritated by him since he'd landed in Patil Niwas, and Dutta had seem to be keeping a keen eye on her ever since, he'd even made her sleep in the same room as him, she would often see him glance at her from the side of her eyes whenever she was in the room, and sometimes even in the reflection of the mirror, was Saab beginning to develop feelings for her, thought Naku, trying hard to keep herself calm.
Gee even naku noticed hes eyeing her up due to gauravs darr hahahaha...gee i want a scne wer dutta n naku r in same room at night..jus like we hav 1 in on tely lol but beter ofc...btw sory cudnt help pointin it out...actualy leav it ul jus get all senti...its no biggie lol
Who are you, and what do you want, asked Baji to the man causing a fuss outside the Patil Niwas gates.
The angered aged man introduced himself as Rahul's father, and the man with him that was standing tall was his lawyer.
...I am going to press charges against you Mister...do you understand, mera beta hospital meinhai aur apni aakhri saansein gin raha hai... threatened the old man.
Eh, apni jabaan ko lagaam de samjha kya budhe...if your son is still in hospital alive, I would say that you should consider yourself lucky, do you get that, and if you decided to go ahead and press charges than I'll assure you that your son won't be counting last breaths anymore, he'll be dead before you know it...
The doctor's have said my son had been in a coma for six days, and his critical condition is not giving a positive outlook, said the defeated old man, thinking about his son's condition.
Well than consider yourself lucky, 'cause if you go any further as regards to legal action than...yeh samajh le budhe, said Baji with his finger pointed in his face, ...ke Court tho tab pohanche ga jab teri taange tere shareer pe rahegi, chup chap apne bete ka ilaajkara, aur goli ho yahan se... warna tere bete ki laash akele nahin jalegi, uske saath teri dono taange ka bhi swahaa hoga... now piss of while you still got your legs to carry you... warned Baji.
Rahul's father had left with his face covered with sweat and fear, he could see it was of no use talking to thise ill-mannered young boy, dragging his good for nothing lawyer away with him. They clearly were gangsters of some kind thought Rahul's father while leaving as fast as possible, and these kind of people never knew how to deal without getting dirty, he was better off leaving the situation alone.
Yeah that's what I thought, thougth Baji to himself.
Aye Sahib had organised a pooja at the nearby Mandir, as it was her late husband's death anniversary, and wanted Dutta to perform the pooja along with his wife, the next morning.
Gaurav's words were still running in Dutta's head, was Dutta's heart really calling out to him, was he really playing deaf on purpose. He needed to get out of there, everything was suddenly playing part in tormenting him, it was like Naku was filled in the very air he was breathing in, within an instant he'd grabbed his car keys, and left without talking to anyone, but before he could leave, Ayi Sahib had called out to him and let him know of the pooja the next day, and expected him to be there, he'd left without answering, but acknowledging his head in a yes once, giving his acceptance.
All i can say is... Kissa tera, teri daastan, Chehra tera khud kare bayan, Kisi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya, Tu maan jaa, Haan maan jaa… Kahin naa laage mann, Kya hai yeh sunapan, Mujhe tum bata do….Is this love?
Baji did you do it...answer me damn it...Baji Rahul's gone into a coma since the past week, and all his friends are saying it was some guy with a gun that beat him up continuously.
Listen Roops I want you to go inside and not to speak of this again, do you understand, kyunki agar Bhauko pata chal gaya na, tho woh saala Rahul to zinda bi nahin rahega...samjhi, aur agar tu apne sar ek khoon ka bhoj le sakti hai...tho jaa...jaake Bhau ko sabbatade... Roops left without further argument, just like Baji had intended, at least she wouldn't tell Bhau now or else Dutta would have made Baji dead meat first, for taking such an irrational decision, without telling him.
Baji didn't want Dutta to get hold of Rahul, or else he would have had to give the guy double beatings which meant he'd probably have to wait for him to get better before he could actually feel he pain, which he definitely couldn't let Dutta get there first.
He'd tracked Rahul down in some alley and beaten the crap out of him until the boy was spilling blood out from his guts, and constantly hit around his head with the handle of his gun.
He'd pistol whipped Rahul so bad with the other end of his gun that Baji hadn't even realised when he'd lost conscious.
Rahul's friends had tried to help him but Baji had grabbed one the boys arms and bent it back totally until he'd heard a crack, making his arm literally dislocated or possibly even broken.
Baji had thrown Rahul's limp body outside his home like rubbish, and thought that his parents deserved to at least cry over his dead body, unless he were still alive, but chances seemed pretty slim to Baji, but he couldn't care a damn, serves him right, how dare he try and assault his Roops.
Dutta had driven to the boxing club, and had grabbed the bottles full of Whiskey and wanted to drown himself in his drink, fully so he could wash out anything that reminded him of Nakusha.
He'd gulped down a whole quarter of the bottle in one go, but somehow he couldn't get the images of Naku's face out from his mind, and nor could he stop thinking about her dancing, than Gaurav's words echoed in his ears again and again and again.
What was it about Naku, that bothered him, could he love her, did he develop feelings for her, if he was than why didn't he want to accept her, was it because she betrayed him or was because of her colour...no as soon as her colour had popped into his head he'd automatically made a decision that colour had nothing to do with it. Awww love u my gadheee..ur soo cute...Ever since she'd come into his house it was always her ordinary things that she'd do or say but make him see such an extraordinary point of view of certain things, almost like she'd enlightened him, before he knew it a smile creep-ed up on his face remembering how she first was when she landed their doorstep. How scared she'd been but for her father she put up a front of bravery, without thinking about herself first... wait... had Dutta overlooked all her traits in one moment had he forgot that she was capable of such kindness, whatever she did, she did in the most unselfish way, but than if she were in love with him, than that could as well be why she put on this fake front, and she was always alert of Supriya, like she envied her or something.
Thinking all this was all too much, he wanted to get away from all this mess, not drown himself right back in it. His footsteps were starting to get unco-ordinated and his sight were starting to blur at certain points, but this didn't stop him from drinking, he'd drank even more.nakku kab aayegi apne saab ko rokne le kiye...
...As Dutta stared at his drink smiling to his own reflection, and saying ...dekh Naku aaj main pee raha hoon aur mujhe rokhne wala koi nahin hai...abh kya tu mujhe rokhegi nahi... he said in a buzzing tone with his eyes slightly lowered because of the spirit, ...ya phir tujhe meri parwa hi nahi... he said through a sarcastic smile.
Saab... Naku's voice had said from behind him, Dutta was suddenly shocked and looked behind him from where the voice had come, only to find it empty. Saab...Saab...Saab...her voice had overlapped itself twice than thrice and so on...peene se dard nahin jaata... her voice echoed in his ears again and again, making him look around frantically standing up and carrying out a random search for Naku. Lol chalo naku nahi usski awaaz hi sahi lmaoo...Where did she come from thought Dutta, the door was locked there way no way she could come in... as he carried on looking for hopelessly. Awww bless this is rely reminding me of dutta in d serial...*sigh* She was haunting him now, there was no place he could be free of her, he thought while taking even larger gulps of the alcohol, but than his eyes had laid on the large punching bag... the punching bag she had thought was light as feather and tried to punch it with all her might, as he walked closer to it, still holding his bottle in one hand, he touched it while letting out a determined grin on his face remembering the way she'd jumped up and down, and the pain she'd been in... but than all of a sudden the memory of the bangles had hit him, the pain she went through that night would have been far more worse than this punching bag, he thought, wondering where she found the courage to swallow so much pain, remembering her tortured face that night killed him, without thinking he'd smashed the bottle that only had literally a sip of spirit in it, against the wall with so much force, but he didn't pull his hand back he held his hand against the wall for the glass to forced into his own skin as did it Naku's that night. Ouch ouch!! Man dont u kno ur hurtin her even more now!! Btw i was totaly expecting this lol...but wanted him 2 rmmba wedding night scne aswel wen he 1ce agen broke d bangles in her wrist...
Saab ! Gasped Naku's voice which was highly echoed than usual...ahhh abh aarahi hai jab saab ne apna kaam kar diya lol...chalo theek hai...abh hame bandage wala scne dekhne ko mile ga...*tashaland* ...
Tu... said Dutta finally accepting that she was here which ever way she'd come in, ...tuyahan kya kar rahi... mujhe akela kyun nahin chod deti... he shouted, while closing his eyes in pain to have once again witnessed Naku before him. Waise if the door was locked how did she come in?!??!!
Saab aapko dard hoga... she said as she walked up close to him too calm than usual, observed Dutta, ...aur mat piyo Saab, she'd said. But when Dutta looked up she was gone again. Oh its only dutta ke brain ka locha...no naku...YET...
Tu kyun mujhe akela nahin chod deti, jab bi main yeh sochta hoon ke main tere ko bhool gaya, tu aake mere saamne kadi ho jati hai... kyun, kyun...kyun aayi tu yahan...aur abh tera magsat kya hai...tu yehdekhne ayi hai ke main kaise thoot raha hoon...yahan kaise mere andhar ki antar aatma ko tune hila ke rakha diya hai... Dutta had just carried on. Awww bles u gona make me cry now tinky...it rely hurts 2 see him like this...spesh wen he sed how hes broken n stf...
Saab...main aap koakela kaise chodegi...main tho aap hi ke kehene pe aayi hai...aap hi ne mujhe bulaya...main aap ki awaaz ko mana nahin kar sakti Saab... she said staring straight into his eyes, but strangely it was him who was trying to refuse eye contact. It was like the room was spinning around him, but he'd walked up to his next bottle and started on that instead, he couldn't understand the things going on around him these days, as he looked back her and begun saying... main sab samajhta hoon Naku, yeh dong jo teri ankhon mein hai...teri beymaani mujhe baad mein samajh main aayi lekin dikhayi tho deti hai... he said with a voice that had sounded drunk now.
Saab...aap meri ankhon mein dekhiye...aap ko kyadikkhaye deta hai...she asked walking up close to him with a care free smile, which was very unlike Naku, but somehow he couldn't refuse her...
As Dutta stared he'd remembered getting lost into her blue eyes before, her eyes were always on his mind since the day she'd arrived, she'd been a total mystery to him since day one, and today he stared into her eyes and all he found was a reflection of himself in the deep intensity of the blue colour, looking back at him. True love ey <3
He was confused now, was seeing himself the answer she was looking for, he thought with a frown and confusion.
Kya huwa Saab...kya dikaye diya aapko, she questioned, apna chehra dekh kar chonk gaye Saab... she asked, ...kyun Saab, jo aap ne dekha wohi sach hai, aap khud se dokha nahin kar sakte na Saab... she said, ...kyunki agar aisa ho sakta tho aaj aap ko apni khud ki chavi dikhaye nahi deti Saab...jochehra aapne dekha wohi sachai hai, main tho aap hi ka ansha hoon Saab...main aapko wohi bataygi jo aap sunna chahte hai, main aap mein samay hoon Saab...abh aap chahakar bhi mujhe apne aap se alag nahi kar paoge...mujhe yahan laane wale bhi aap hi ho Saab, main yahan se chali to jayegi lekin aap mujhe apni aatma se kabhi nahin mitaa paoge, main aap main bas chuki hoon... aur aap mujhe main... she finsihed.
Er dus ansha mean ur shadow??? Btw loved this nakus speech...evn tho its not rely her der but dutta knows exactly wa shes gona say...wel its his imagination...2sides 2 it..1 refusing 2 beliv hes in love n da other1 tryng his best 2 persuade him...ukno like d good n bad agnlekinda thng...good 1 in nakus avtar tho n bad 1.. him...er sory if i confused u lol jus wrote woteva cme 2 my mind n haf of it dsnt evn mke sens loooll
Nahin...nahin jhoot hai yeh... tu mujhe phir se dokha de rahi hai, tu mujhe andhar se torna chahti hai, lekin main nahin tootega... yeh Dutta tujhe apni kamzori nahin bane dega he said...maana ke main tere se pyar karta hain, lekin pyar karne ka yeh matlab nahin..ke mujhe tumko apnana hoga, samjhi tum...main Dutta Sriram Patil apne pyar ka tukhrata hoon..., he said in his josh, ...main tumhe apna ne se inkaar karta hoon, sunna tumne, he finished only to turn around and find the room around him empty, with just shattered glass.
Phewww so the truth finally came out...he admits hes in love...bethes gona tink bout this part l8r o sma n actualy think about it properly... ?s himslf as usual lol...man u described everythng soo beautifuly..i cud totaly visualise all this hapening..SUPERB!!
Everybody had made their way to the temple, and Baji had already been informed by Dutta that he will meet them there, and told Ayi Sahib that he would collect Naku and bring him there herself, and told everyone else to make there way there, this news left everyone shocked but happy, and so obeyed Dutta's orders happily.
Even Naku had been shocked, but when she thought back to Gaurav's comment she felt that maybe he had some truth in his speech, and got ready happily, and awaited Dutta's return as he'd spent the night out, but Baji had told Naku there was nothing to worry about.
Dutta had returned and to Naku's surprise he was already dressed and ready to leave, she'd got up from the couch to leave, but when she saw his face, something was wrong she knew it. As he entered his room with his hands in both pockets, he told her that she weren't going anywhere with him and to pack her bags she was leaving, she would be returned to her home in the basti, and the name of Nakusha would never exist in his life again. Naku had nothing to say, she had no words that could aid her out of this one sided conversation, as she looked on in shock, and watched Dutta leave without saying anything more.
Gaurav had left with the rest of the household members as Ayi Sahib had told him join them, and not to worry about Naku as she had her husband to come with.
Naku didn't know how long she'd spent crying, sitting on that couch, when Kaale had come to Dutta's room and told Naku that the Pandit's that were suppose to do the pooja were downstairs and wanted to speak with a member of the house immediately.
Naku had been shocked at what she'd heard, the pandit's were apparently held at gunpoint and were replaced with goons that worked for someone by the name of Anna, and one of the pandit's had said how the Amrit had been poisoned too, Kaale had tried to call Dutta as soon as he'd heard this information but when his call failed he understood that the cells must have been switched off as they must have entered the Mandir for the pooja.
Naku hadn't even thought twice before she began running on foot towards the Mandir, but than eventually Kaale had catched up with her with one of the jeeps, and told her to jump in, upon reaching the mandir, she ran up the steps and saw Dutta and the rest of the family members were about to drink the Amrit, and had pushed it away from Dutta's hands making the whole lota drop in the process.
Upon everyones anger and questions Naku had answered that the Pandits doing the pooja were fakes, and that the real Pandit's were seated in Kaale's jeep. Without further delay, Anna's men had pulled out their weapons and led Dutta down the stairs, with Naku trailing them behind regardless of the goon telling her to stop, even Dutta's glare hadn't stopped her.
Aaahh i had loved that scne man...the look of duttas face was jus awsum!! Ha naku folowing em...oh dutta giving his killer looks lekin naku ko abh koi nahi rok sakta...not wen her saabs life isi n danger...BIG NOO!
Eventually Dutta had tactfully tackled the whole situation, and causing a shootout to take place, Baji told Gaurav to get the family to safety, and Baji told him he would take care of Naku, as he was the closest, but before Baji could get to her, Naku had saw one two men ready to hit Dutta from behind, and Naku without thinking had got in the way and tried to guard Dutta with herself towards the men, and instead took the beats from the bats on her own back, while she squealed in pain, but not removing herself from her Saab.
When Dutta had seen Naku get hit by the men, he had no doubt shot them dead in an instant but Naku was at the verge of losing her conscious but tried to remain awake, before she could fall Gaurav had made his way towards Naku shouting her name to keep her alert, but before he could catch her Dutta had managed to wrap his arms around her waist before him, catching her in his arms before she hit the ground, and gave Gaurav a look to move away, while Gaurav stared back at Dutta with his breathing growing more and more heavy.
Everybody had returned safely, except Naku, who was lying in Dutta's room unconscious, while she'd been out, Dutta had announced to his household members that he had decided to free Naku from the bond he'd forced her into, not because he thought of her to be innocent but because he'd had enough of the whole fiasco, but after what she'd done today for his family, there was no way he could hold her against his wishes and decided to free her of his marriage to him too, and when she wakes up, he will break the news to her.
Baji had told Gaurav of the house that Dutta had not too far from there, and told him to go and collect Naku's family from the basti, as she saved his family he would sure to repay the favour, Gaurav had refused to go at first but than went when Ayi Sahib had assured him that Naku will be safe, and maybe for the moment Dutta's decision was right, and so gave in to the idea, and besides they won't be too far either.
Aww das nice lekin mujhe darr hai ke if naku gos 2 stay der aswel...den morey wil surely b able 2 trak her down since moreys men keep constant watch at nakus basti home...inih so they wil folow babi n crew wer eva they go...haina...
Dutta couldn't believe how Naku had defended him by taking the beats there in front of the mandir, part of him had wanted to hug her in comfort Awww u shud hav man...dil khush ho jata... lekin beech mein tumhari ego aageyi na KMH banke pfftt
and part of him was scared to get too close, what if he couldn't let go of her, and what if she broke his heart once again, he just couldn't bear to think of the pain to lose love again, especially one that had started from betrayal, he thought.
When Naku had woken up, her face had shown her happiness when she saw Saab before her, but not for long, when he broke the news to her, she was absolutely stunned, he still believed that she was guilty. But this time she knew she had a chance to say goodbye, to the man that possessed her heart, her family had already been shifted overnight as Gaurav had went to help them move, and Naku well she was given one more night as his wife and than she would be disregarded of, she thought.
Dutta knew he was in love with her, but for the first time in his life been scared to ta accept the fate before him, after the incident today he could tell that there was certainly something about Naku that a part of him wanted to believe, but couldn't begin to bring himself to take the risk.
Naku had no more tears to help her relieve her pain, even they had abandoned her, she sat quietly in the midst of the night and stared out in the dark window at the black night sky, and wondered why Bappa had brought them this fate, was there ever any point to this relationship, was there ever supposed to be an end for it, or was it all just one big mistake, she thought as her eyes forced themselves to sleep.
Naku had been ready to leave in the morning, but before leaving the room with Dutta, she'd stopped him before he could leave the room and handed back to him his mangalsutra and a box of small vermilion, and told him that as she was now free of this relationship, there was no need for it. But before she left she told him... Saab... Dutta had just closed his eyes and waited for her to speak, ...aap ne kabhi socha ke Bappa ne hum kyun milaya... she'd said. Main jaanti hoon ke aap pyar main vishwaas nahin karte, lekin aap yeh jaan lo Saab ke jab main issghar mein aayi thi tho mere paas kuch nahin tha, lekin Bappa ne mujhe isi ghar mein mera sab kuch dilaa diya, aur iska saboot hai aap kadil Saab, aapk ka dil main apne saath le jaarahi hai... agar iss Naku ki saansein chal rahi hai tho sirf aapke dhadkan ki waje se, aur yahan Saab... she said pointing to his chest, lightly while moving closer to him delicately, ...aapki Naku apna dil chod ke jaarahi hai, she cried finally managing to get some moisture in her dry eyes. Aap ne kabhi socha hai Saab ke Bappa ne sab ko do haath diye hai, do ankhein, two arms, two legs, ...lekin dil sirf ek...kyun Saab...woh iss liye kyunki humare dil ki dusri jodi kisi ek ko milti hai, aur usse dhoonde par hi humaredil ko apna dusra adhoora hissaa milta hai, she said.
Wow u go girl!!! She totally opening her heart out...not caring of his reaction..attitute 2 it... since shes got nothing 2 lose now...all her world was around dutta n since she leaving shes dsnt need 2 b scared of wat might happen nxt...she lost d only thng she thought was hers...loved loved loved this part man...totaly reminded me of went ash wer stuck in d car b4 JMM n naku was bein stubborn n wudn get off...n poured her heart out 4 d 1st tym...ahhh beautiful momories...
Mujhse is sab main koi farak nahin parta...said Dutta, agar main tumse pyar kar bhi loon, tho iskayeh matlab nahin hai ke main tumhe apna loon, jo ladkhi ne mujhe pehli mulakaat se hi dokha diya uss pe main apni poori zindagi bharosa kaise karoon... he questioned, stubbornly, knowing he'd already fallen in love with her, but she didn't know, and neither would she know.
Hmm now i actually wonder ke iss ke in lazoon mein kitni sachai hai...the fact that the dsnt care bout it at all jus shwsss how hard he is tryin 2 persuade naku 2 beliv it all n not just her but himself aswel cuz d truth rly is...evn hes finidn it hard 2 let her go...
Main aapse yeh nahin poochegi Saab ke aap mujhse pyar karte ho ke nahin...lekin main aap se itna zaroor poochegi...ke main aap ke bager kaise jiyegi Saab, iss duniya mein main sirf ek alminsaan hai, lekin meri duniya sirf aap hain Saab...bolo Saab main kaise jiyegi aap ke bina... she sobbed, ...yeh chaand, yeh suraj, yeh dharti, yeh aasaman... yeh sab to mere liye bekaar hojayega, tho phir mere jeene ka kya faida... she said as she looked at him, and made her way out his room and straight to the car next to Baji, without bidding anybody goodbye, but before Baji could say anything and drive off, Dutta had called from behind and said he was to join them too.
Dutta told Baji that he would drive and told him to get in the back instead, when Dutta had gotten into the front seat, Naku had simultaneously opened her door to go to the back, but Dutta had grabbed her wrist, acting upon his reflex, and stopped her, ...kahan jaa rahi hai, chote bache ki tarah zidd matt kar aur chup chap yahi re, he ordered. Naku hadn't wanted to glance in his direction she felt frustrated at him for making such a decision, he'd married her with his own choice, and now he was going to rid of her with his own choice, how come every time it came to her, no one would ever ask her of her opinion, whether it was her sister, her dark colour, and now her marriage.
Hahaha now naku showing an attitude..can jus imagin it all wit naku frowing a lil wit tears in her eyes...lukin ahead lol...loved it how dutta 1ce agen held her wrist...shows his possessiveness... kya kare lol kuch aadatein chutatit tnahi hai LOL
Dutta had been glancing at Naku time and time again, trying to figure our her expressions on her face, he'd even slipped the care off track a couple of times, when his phone had rang.
It was Kishore, the money the account had been transferred from was none other than Sudarshan, and Kishore had told him that the letter that was written by Supriya was sent to the forensic labs and did not match Supriya's handwriting, and was forged, and he told Bhau that he would send a copy of the documents to Dutta's laptop along with the certificate stating the fake handwriting of Supriya's letter, ...Bhau, Nakusha bekasoor hai, he'd said, making Dutta even more shocked as he stared at Naku and at the same time trying to give his attention to the road, wondering if he was about to make the biggest mistake in his life.
Omg if this had hapend in d serial it wudv been like dream cum tru!! Imagine wat cud hav hapend durin JMM *missy daydream* awww oh wel wat we ddnt get den...wel get it now...thnx 2 our lovely tink ...mwahh
Bhau...Bhau... Baji's voice had interrupted Dutta's thoughts and informed that two cars had been tailing their car since they'd hit the main road, and now they were inching closer.
Dutta was shocked at the fact that he'd missed such a obvious thing as he glanced back in the rear view mirror, making Naku look back too, but he carefully turned the car towards the left, and than left again and lost them, ...tu chinta matt kar Naku main tujhe kuch nahin hone dunga, said Dutta as he told her to hold onto the side bar for support, but before he could say anything further, a car had come from nowhere and hit them sideways causing there car to go off track and hang at the edge of the cliff, Baji had acted quickly and left from the rear end, while Dutta tried to help Naku out but before they could jump out, but it was of no use, the car had fallen along with Dutta and Naku hand in hand, leaving Baji behind to witness the car blow up before him, and shouting Bhaaauuu !
Awww loved it how his 1st reaction 2 wa baji sed was his concern bout naku... awww bless him..er them lol...feeling sooo hapy...JMM TIME!!!wi *missy doin DINCHAK DINCHAK baji ishtyle* Mayb now wel get bandage scnes... *MISSY TAKES A BIG SIGH AHHH*
Okay fanks 4 helpin choose d title Kiran.., n Mish I'm soo glad dat u did ur revision hun, at least if no one likes dis update den it'll still be worth suttin lol...
I'm nt sure if dis chapter came out the way i wanted it 2 lol, had a few distractions at home while updatin...so sorry if u guys finks ders ne fing lackin...
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