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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update tink
you know you gonna kill me one day through your ff... i just love itπŸ˜‰
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as related to its length for me you can make it more lengthy i would love that.
today's update awesome and i can't express it in words love itπŸ˜›

the naughtiness of dutta amazing dear and angry becoz of gaurav who teached everything to naku
love the lizard and rat scene πŸ˜›
first man and women or  last man and women  πŸ˜›

the symbol of love on  tree as tasha  that becoz you use tasha word which we like.
so jagtap is next

all above i love it and it was the update am looking for😳

thanks dear for pm and fab update

love it



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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Suvi7884

Dekho dekho aunty ji Im fiiirsssht!!

Do pyar karne wale jungle mein khooo gaye traalalala
 
Kiss nahi karne diya?😑
 
Ek baat poochoon? Naraaz mat hona..what if someone's a pirate?πŸ€” Usko toh, ek aankh, ek haath, and ek taang hoti hai na..and girls arent pirates...oth fir..

 
 
mujhe dikhaye deta hai lol...unlike ur pirates i don't hav only one eye...aye aye captain...(cudn't help it)πŸ˜†...hey dats prob y d pirates say dat lol, get it ...eye..eye...cz dey wished they had 2 eyes n dats der way of sayin dat even if dey ain't got 2 eyes on der face, dey still got 2 eyes thru der speech lool...πŸ˜†
 
 
 
n as 4 der taang n arms well i reckon dat pirates rarely hav girfriends lol, so they can jus luk in d mirror n consider d reflection 2b der adhoora hissaa lol..get it, it's adhoora bcz they ain't got it, but it's complete wen they c der reflection, n dnt ask me if they got a mirror lol, they're pirates, they're at sea lol...im sure dat cud b a pretty gud substitute lool...aur kuch meri maa...any bhoot, keere makhore, aliens, or supernatural beings lool...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
 
 
n yess no kiss, now u know how i feel..😳😳
 
ok, so no comment on d actual update lol...nice, thnks, now i know how much u luv me..jus kiddin, i know ur busy...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
okay i better reply to everyone else's comments too, cz den I wanna get on wid d nex update lol...πŸ˜›, hey u know hu ur personality reminds me of, u remind me of 'chutki' 4rm ddlj, u'v got her traits thru ur speech, so wenever u talk, i can imagine u like her, can i call u dat, my darlin' little chutki, it suits ur happy go lucky type personality soo much...😊😳
 
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

 

 
mujhe dikhaye deta hai lol...unlike ur pirates i don't hav only one eye...aye aye captain...(cudn't help it)πŸ˜†...hey dats prob y d pirates say dat lol, get it ...eye..eye...cz dey wished they had 2 eyes n dats der way of sayin dat even if dey ain't got 2 eyes on der face, dey still got 2 eyes thru der speech lool...πŸ˜†
 
 
 
n as 4 der taang n arms well i reckon dat pirates rarely hav girfriends lol, so they can jus luk in d mirror n consider d reflection 2b der adhoora hissaa lol..get it, it's adhoora bcz they ain't got it, but it's complete wen they c der reflection, n dnt ask me if they got a mirror lol, they're pirates, they're at sea lol...im sure dat cud b a pretty gud substitute lool...aur kuch meri maa...any bhoot, keere makhore, aliens, or supernatural beings lool...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
 
 
n yess no kiss, now u know how i feel..😳😳
 
ok, so no comment on d actual update lol...nice, thnks, now i know how much u luv me..jus kiddin, i know ur busy...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
okay i better reply to everyone else's comments too, cz den I wanna get on wid d nex update lol...πŸ˜›, hey u know hu ur personality reminds me of, u remind me of 'chutki' 4rm ddlj, u'v got her traits thru ur speech, so wenever u talk, i can imagine u like her, can i call u dat, my darlin' little chutki, it suits ur happy go lucky type personality soo much...😊😳
 
 
 

🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣OMG Aunty...eye eye🀣🀣...no keede makode..though if I find a organ that there is three of..toh zaroor poochongi🀣
.I told u na, lambi comments on every single update once I get back...ofcourse by the time I finish commenting the year might be finished🀣 
ofcourse u can call me chutki😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

                                                                      

 
 
                                                                         
 
 
 
 
     @ Chutki, ur all dun lol, but 4 wot its worth thanks, hun..πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
@ Sophia, I luv u 2 lol, but I wud luv u so muh more if u edited ur spot lool...πŸ˜›, u ran n neva came bak, kahin tume Forst Gump ka bhoot to nahin lag gaya lol...
 
 
 
 
@ Azmiya, still w8n...πŸ˜›
 
 
 
 
@ 007, πŸ€—my cheeks r here...   πŸ˜†...n babez Dutta will always b pissed wen he hears Gaurav's name lol...exactly aur kya mangon gi, but still ur impatient lol, wen am I gonna win...πŸ˜†...yeh Naku's hand in the way hehe...it needs 2b ryt tym lol, I know der in jungle n wot better tym, but tings r nu, so she see's tings thru gal's point of view n he thru men's, dats d way tings r lol...n hey hey, i didn't make u w8 long it was 2 friggin days lol...y is everyone so ardent on makin me luk lyk d bad guy lol, i tried 2 put such a nice chapter 2gva just 4u guys aur tu mujhe taana de rahi hai...not fair......hehe...js kiddin, I will try 2 do it quick babez, n fanks 4 comment and reading chik...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
@ Kiran...er...OMG...ur still missin lol...πŸ˜†
 
 
                                 
 
 
 
 
@ Nakusha, dat feels so weird to write lol, it feels lyk I'm writin to my own character lol...oops sorry to gt carried away der...😳...thanks a lot and I will try to update soon hun...😊
 
 
 
 
@ aamirkhanfan, thank u darlin'...πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
 
 
@ meow, oohhh thank u babez 4 ur maha awesome comment...πŸ€—...hehe...lol yep next tym, n u no der will b a next tym lol, but nt too soon...n dnt ask y lol...u know soon enuff...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
@ Usha, u ain't bak yet...πŸ˜†, n thank u for commentin on pic, trust me I luv it 2...😍..😊
 
 
 
 
@ Fawn, u still gayab lol...I am amazed...no truly...πŸ˜†
 
 
 
 
@ yoyo, ofc aaww babe n u w8d so long 4d tasha scenes lol, btw I hope everytings kwl at home yeh, pm me...😊...n as 4 d update dnt mention it hun..πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
 
 
@ Vika, hey girl...yep sure ting...take ut tym chik...πŸ˜›
 
 
 
 
@ mnx12, thank u very much 4 commenting, n thanks for reading dis update its only lovely cz u say so hun...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
@ Swapna, hey girl...finally I'm reaching d star of d day lol...first of all thank u, thank u, and thank u...πŸ˜ƒ.   I'm glad u lyked d pic, n yeh 2tell d truth even I felt lyk dat wen I 1st carved d initials in d tree lol...it's really touching, even 4me...😳, yep exactly dats y I wanted 2 make sure Dutta knew of her innocent nature, so he wudn't hold bak on his feelings, n wot better place dent he isolated forest lol...😳, yep sum tings will neva change not even in d ff's lol, dats js way 2 much of Naku, lol I bet wen she was born her 1st word wz prob Saab too...🀣...πŸ˜†...n yeh Dutta finkin of lightin d fire lol, it wz js 2 show dat he finks being a man he knows how 2 fend 4himslf, but den Naku knwing better makes him realise dat being 'a man', dnt mean everyting lol...😳. 
Gaurav will always be here to make Dutta stay possesive ova Naku, n yeh being drunk n in luv, it jus show dats u can b stupid widout being drunk lol...well luv makes u do stupid fings I guess, n it got d better of Dutta 2...hehe...
n thanks for lykin d convo between dem afta dat, yeh hard  believe but Dutta wants 2 try his luck in luv now, so he has 2 make d first move, since he was d one dat made d last move to seperate 4rm her......n yeh he js wanted Naku 2 know dat it weren't easy 4him either, he wanted her 2 know how much he'd bin fighting wid himself...πŸ˜›, n dat dialogue wid Naku saying 'she didn't expect nuffin' was wot I felt she shuda hav said in d drama, cz wen she told him she luved him she didn't really watn her 2 luv him bak...well she did but u know wot  I mean lol...😳😳
...n yep it's tru, wen sum1 answers wid such selfless actions, den one can b forced 2 believe dat they are no less than n angel...😳😳, yeh dat lines agen 4rm Saint Kabir, dats y I actually used dat song in dis update cz of those lines, n plus it went wid d title, it was all jus coming 2geva step by step I cudnt' believe dat part myself lol...trust me wen I wz writing dis one it felt weird 2me...πŸ˜³πŸ€”
n yeh all d confessions in whole I had to make dat part intese cz der luv is 2 complex to jus say I luv u an get on wid it lool, n plus dat ain't my style, if my dream guy said dat n expected me 2 4giv him, den I b lyk woteva, u gotta do better den dat lol...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
d hug weren't spose 2 b der actually but cz of d convo I cudn't imagine it widout it, so yeh u can say I was mentally forced 2 put dat part der...πŸ˜†...well she dnt memeba Sups exactly but yeh she understands dis guys extent, n havin her background sanskaars lol, she scared 2 take dat risk, in case he dnt stop n she cant ask him 2 stop lol...d gals crazy abt him...πŸ€ͺ..πŸ˜†...well it ain't gonna b plain sailin 4 Dutta afta dis lol, d tables r turnin, 1st she wz runnin afta him, n now he's runnin afta her lol...weird dat innit...😊...dw Dutta will be makin n effort u'll c soon...n yeh possessive Dutta will always b around dis ff lol...trust me, it's jus in his character, he cnt help it...πŸ˜›
aha Jagtap Dada, the title of d nex chapter lol, he'll do alot 4dem, u'll understand wot he has 2 giv 2dis newly wedded couple lol..πŸ˜‰
pls dw abt FR yet, it is cumin, soon, lol, i feel lyk Im givin u a trailer in n oral manner lol...πŸ˜†
well thanks 4 lykin long update hun, n hun dnt thank me 4readin ur comment lol, cz if ur comments boring den wot do u suggest mine is...lol...???😳 πŸ€” 
n being classed as β­οΈ of d day wudn't live up a 'boring comment' lol, n dnt say dat agen, I giv d updates, n u guys giv d comments, it's fair trade lol...tc hun, n thanks 4ur comment agen, I'm luvin d length extension wid each post lol...ni-ice...πŸ˜‰  πŸ€— well I hoe u end up readin dis comment...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
 
@ Ranjana, aaww huni, dnt say dat, d killin part lol, not d 'i love it' part πŸ˜†, n babez u already hav expressed 'in words' how much u lyked d update, u r awesome js lyk ur commentπŸ€—
...n 1st man n woman, n last scene wz js 2 show d way both of them fink differently, Naku seeing positive, n Dutta negative lol...πŸ˜†n lizard n rat scene yeh, i can relate 2 dat, cz I'm shit scared of both lol, in fact if I saw dat in d jungle I wud b running a mile in no tym lool...πŸ˜†
n yep I've made the tasha official in my ff, I luved d idea of carving it into d tree, so instead I made a scene around it...😳😳, fanks agen babez, n ur more den welcum..😊
 
 
 
 
 
Thank u girls
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

                                                                      

 
 
                                                                         
 
 
 
 
   

 
 
@ 007, πŸ€—my cheeks r here...   πŸ˜†...n babez Dutta will always b pissed wen he hears Gaurav's name lol...exactly aur kya mangon gi, but still ur impatient lol, wen am I gonna win...πŸ˜†...yeh Naku's hand in the way hehe...it needs 2b ryt tym lol, I know der in jungle n wot better tym, but tings r nu, so she see's tings thru gal's point of view n he thru men's, dats d way tings r lol...n hey hey, i didn't make u w8 long it was 2 friggin days lol...y is everyone so ardent on makin me luk lyk d bad guy lol, i tried 2 put such a nice chapter 2gva just 4u guys aur tu mujhe taana de rahi hai...not fair......hehe...js kiddin, I will try 2 do it quick babez, n fanks 4 comment and reading chik...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 

 
Thank u girls
 
 
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Your welcome TinksπŸ˜† awee ur cheeks are so red n chubby..now I will pull them twiceπŸ˜† Well not so soon..I will not let u win that easily honey...u r inn for a tough fight with 007..lol tana aur mein nahi nahi meri itne majaal kaha saabπŸ˜†U think me as a  chick..
😳kaunsi...Malika sherawat..nahiii aisa nahi ho saktaaaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Edited by meghaparti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update tink too good
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey bbe read ur update las nyt..n loved it...wil give ful analysis on monday...x
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited MY spot and sooo Love the update TInkuuu <3

You are awesome baby :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it loved it loved it!!!!! especially Dutta's confession that was by far the best bit of this chapter! really found the almost a kiss scene so beautiful could just feel naku's emotions and Dutta's bechaniya. lol. thanks for teh pm hun and update soon. xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey PariπŸ€—
This is by far one of the best update of DEEWANIπŸ‘
The amazing thing about ur updates is its length never bothers the reader,becaz they get so engrossed in the story😍
Girl,u have a way with wordsπŸ‘πŸΌ
I absolutely loved how he remembered her words about one heart the moment he gained senses after the fall,that was the beginning of his heart finally winning over his mindπŸ˜‰
I loved his way of expressing his heart feelings & especially when he said -
ab hum kisi bhi roop me do nahi,par har roop me ek hai
That is when he completely surrenders himself to her & accept her wholeheartedly as his soulmate.
I also loved his naughtiness when he tried to scare her about lizzard &
wild ratπŸ˜‰
Nakku's answer about why she accepted her love on their wedding day just left him speechless.She is so right,when u love someone,u don't expect to hear the same from him.But,u always feel the need to let that person know what u truely feel.
I am enjoying Dutta's jelousy towards Gaurav.πŸ˜†
Finally Jagtap dada entered,now what role he will play to further tasha's love story that can only be known in ur coming updates.
 
 
But,i will again say -ur best update is yet to come,Nakku's FR & Dutta's acceptance of Nakku's real face.
If u have written so beautifully about him surrendering to Nakku's love then i am sure u will excel in FR wala update.
I also believe unlike in the show,Dutta in ur FF is quite an independent judge of human behaviour,so i am sure he will not shout -DHOKHAπŸ˜†
 
 
Thanks a lot for this fantastic update.πŸ‘πŸΌ
Looking forward to the next one.πŸ˜‰
Pooja😊