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#4 ARSH FF- A HOPE TO BE LOVED PART 54 updated (Page 131)

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Nice part.

update soon.

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Aishi brilliant part....Big smile

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged

Part 53 :

Armaan set on the bed taking a deep breath... He opened the drawer and takes out a photo.. Shilpa's photo.. With a sad smile he keeps caressing the pic.. " You dont know how much i love you Shilpa... I regret for what i have done.. I regret leaving you behind there... "
His thoughts drift back to that night.. Still the memories were fresh in his mind.. The way he touched her.. The way she responded to his every touch.. The spark between them.. Never had he felt like that ever in his life... And after such a blissful night he was soo irritated when he got the call from office.. There was a urgent conference to be held in dheli.. And he was needed there as soon as possible.. He remembered how he argued for long time not willing to leave.. He knew if he had to go it would be for a long time.. But his heart wasnt willing to do this... How could he think of leaving her all of a sudden.. When there relationship was improving.. He remembered how he called Rahul trying to convince him to go.. But as Rahul said being the owner of the company he was needed there.. He had to do this for the company's future... After a big time of talking finally he decided to do this... But now he regretted not telling her.. How stupid of him to come here without informing her.. He remember whenever he calls her she speaks less.. Their talk always ended in a abrupt manner.. He knew she was upset with him.. He hated the way she is getting away from him..
Armaan slowly walks upto the window and look outside... How he wish he could tell her he never regretted their moment... Infact he knew how much he cherished their moments.. It was hard to forget her soft touch.. her fragrance.. Her beautiful soul.. A tear ran down his cheek as he gave thought about it... " I miss you Shilpa... I really Miss you... "

On the other hand Shilpa was a changed person.. As Weeks kept passing she became more tough.. She became a hard person .. No emotions were left with her... She tried to make herself more strong.. She didint have strength to bear anymore pain... Her life has been too cruel to her.. Muskaan noticed Shilpa's behavior.. She was worried seeing the change in Shilpa... She had become too weak.. her health was becoming worse... And she became unresponsive to every talk.. Muskaan didint like the change in Shilpa.. She knew Armaan's depature has effected her badly.. Shilpa was taking all too badly.. She knew she had to do something.. Before it was too late...
Rahul comes from office and notice Muskaan in a deep thought.. Slowly he walks upto her and take a seat beside her..
Rahul : Muskaan.. Whats wrong.. u look tensed..
As Muskaan notice him she moves closer urgently...
Muskaan : Rahul.. I need a favor from you.. Plss
Rahul : What is it Muskaan.. Tell me..
Muskaan : ( Sadly ) Rahul.. will u plss go back to Armaan.. And bring him back here...
Rahul : Muskaan.. Will u plss tell me whats going on...
Muskaan : Rahul... Shilpa's health is getting worse.. I have noticed how she have changed... I guess she really needs Armaan... Plss get him back.. I cant see her like this...
Rahul : Muskaan.. U are hiding something from me..
Muskaan : Rahul.. You have to talk to Armaan.. then only you will get to know whats wrong.. Plss Rahul..
Rahul : Dont worry Muskaan.. I will leave tomorrow.. U dont worry...

Next Day :

Armaan sleeply walk upto his door as he heared a loud knock.. As he opens the door he notice Rahul walking inside in a hurry...
Armaan : ( Stunned ) Rahul.. what are you doing here...
Rahul : I am here to help u dude... You are taking too much time here.. Do u even realise it has been a month now..
Armaan silently walks and sits beside him.. and takes a sign..
Armaan : I know Rahul... But i am done now.. Conference ended today..
Rahul : ( Baffled ) what the hell.. Uhggg i have come here for nothing... You should have told me that u are done with it...
Armaan : ( Smiles ) First of all how can i tell when u didint inform me... And bro.. I am really happy to see you...
Rahul :( Smiles back ) Same here bro.. But tell me.. Whats wrong between.. Even Shilpa looks quite upset these days...
Armaan takes a deep breath and spills out everything to Rahul... As he ends his talk Rahul stares at him shocked...
Rahul : Are you out of your mind.. You told me you would be in your best behavior.. Armaan such a big step soo soon...
Armaan runs a hand in his hair...
Armaan : Rahul plss... It just happened.. I cant take it back now...
Rahul : hmm.. But tell me do u regret.. U know..
Armaan : Why would i regret Rahul.. Infact i love being with her.. I guess i love her a lot.. U donno how hard it has been for me to stay away from her like this.. I guess she is upset that i went without telling her..
Rahul : yes u are an idiot... Why the hell u didint tell her...
Armaan : I thought she would be upset... I guess i have made it more complicated..
Rahul : Yes you have.. Now relax.. We will leave soon...

Shilpa walks out of the room panting... She clutches the door hard trying to steady herself.. Her head felt heavy.. She felt a sudden pain in her stomach.. Shilpa slides down feeling a bad pain in her body.. Before she knew she the darkness elopes her fully...

Armaan walks into the airport when he gets a sudden call from Muskaan..
Muskaan : Armaan.. Plss come back as soon as possible.. Shilpa...
Armaan : Muskaan.. Whats wrong... what happen to Shilpa...
Muskaan : She fainted suddenly.. she is in a bad condition.. Plss come back..
Armaan keeps staring at the phone stunned by the news.. He felt the fear rise in his heart...

He walks into the hospital with a thudding heart... With every step he took his fear kept rising.. You cant leave me Shilpa.... His heart kept crying out the words.. Rahul moved with him equally worried..As Armaan ran up to Muskaan he saw her tear strained face.. And it made his fear rise...
Armaan : ( holds her hand ) Muskaan is everything fine.. Shilpa...
Rahul : ( Moves beside her ) Muskaan.. Tell us.. Is she fine...
Muskaan : ( sobs ) Armaan.. Shilpa is not doing well... She is still unconscious..
Armaan felt his heart stop as he heared the words.. No this cant happen..
Muskaan : Not only that.. Just now we got to know that....
Rahul : You got to know what Muskaan...
Armaan : ( Softly ) Plss Muskaan.. Tell me...
Muskaan looks at him in the eye and speaks...
Muskaan : ( whispers ) Armaan... Shilpa... She is pregnant...
As the words hit him hard he looked at her stunned.. Was he hearing correct.. He didint knew how to react.. Either be happy with the news or sad with her condition... Armaan slowly walks upto the chair and sit silently staring at the space.. He didint knew how long he sat like this... But he came back to world when Muskaan gave him a nudge...
Muskaan : ( Softly ) Armaan.. Would you like to meet Shilpa.. She is still unconscious.. But u could go and see her...
Armaan looks up at her and slowly nods.. He slowly walks inside the room and look at her.. His heart went out for her at once.. His eyes welled up seeing her in such a bad condition.. She looked soo weak and fragile.. The guilt in his heart kept rising.. Slowly he takes a seat beside her and holds her hand....
Armaan : ( softly ) Shilpa... I am so sorry for all this.. My heart is breaking seeing you like this.. And i am responsible for your health.. I am soo sorry.. Plss wake up for me.. Fight with me.. Shout .. Do watever u want.. But plss come back.. plsss
Still she lay there unresponsive.. He felt tears spill out of his eyes...
Armaan : I really love u Shilpa... Plss dont do this to me.. Plss dont punish me like this.. I cant live without you.. this one month has been a pain for me.. The pain of staying away from you.. Plss came back to me...
Armaan slowly moves his hand to her stomach and caress it lightly... He gives a light kiss on her stomach and moves close to her face.. Still in tears he rubs his forehead with hers trying to feel her...
Armaan : I promise i will take care of you both.. I have been careless.. I know that.. But plss give me one chance.. I will make it up for you.. Our baby... We will make it happen Shilpa... Just once.. Plss wake up.. Dont leave me like this.. You have to be back for me... I love u.. I really love u .. I cant stay away from you Shilpa.. I cant.....

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri
Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)

Ajnabi se huye kyun pal saare
Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin
Ik gani dehaayi cha gayi hai
Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi
Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri
Reh gayi ankahi bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)

Raah mein roshni ni hai kyun haath choda
Iss taraf shaam ne kyun hai apna muh moda
Yun ke har subah ik bereham si baat ban gayi
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali khaali
Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lost and lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere .. lost and lonely ..

NOTE : Ohh i donno how this part came up.. Pretty lame i guess.. soo i hope the new track is more promising.. Plss do comment and give me ur views...Embarrassed


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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
yippppppppppeeee i am 1stDancingParty
bhabhi my guess was right Dancing
Shilpa is pregnant gr8
Armaan realised his mistake
now Armaan is back to Shilpa
hope everything gets better between them soon
loved ur updatei
it was awesssommee
continue soon

Edited by -poornima- - 13 April 2011 at 11:26pm

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Superb update...finally ARMAAN is back to his shona...and yayy shona is pregnent..but still she is unconcious...plz update soon...and the song in end was amazing...

Edited by soniaraheja - 13 April 2011 at 11:07pm

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Nice part.

Update soon.

Thanks for PM.Smile

Edited by rtjks - 13 April 2011 at 11:50pm

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
awesome update

Edited by -Prithi- - 13 April 2011 at 11:37pm
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awesome part
loved it
thanks for pm hun
luv yaaa

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