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Experiments in lov (mayur ff) PART5, pg 16 UPDATE (Page 3)

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged
nice concept.
nice promo.
waiting for ur update.
thanks for the pm.
plz plz plz add d URL whn u snd us pms.

arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

The story seems really very interesting
Do cont. it
waiting for the 1st part
thanx 4 ur PM

arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

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interesting concept dear!

</font><font color="#666666" size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">looking forward to the first update</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">do continue soon</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Best Of Luck for ur exams Thumbs Up</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">nd plz pm me whenever u'll update Smile</font>

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arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

nice promo.......cont soon.....nd thnx for thrpm
arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahakmev

it's interesting i would love to read it
arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

congosssss for new ff

awesome concept

sounds very interesting

the promo is rockinggggg

american romance.......

continue whenever possible

all the best for ur exams, mine too are going on
thks dear n all d bst 2 u too. N ya american romance concept i would lov 2 write on it
arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

nice concept.
nice promo.
waiting for ur update.
thanks for the pm.
plz plz plz add d URL whn u snd us pms.
thks 4 ur comment dear. I want 2 ask whats URL?
arjunkidiwani Groupbie

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
part 1 (do read intro first)

Mayank ws d only son of his parent so he ws lit spoiled, vry much practical n one grl man. I mean vry loyal towads nups. She is d only grl as gf in his lif bt nt to forget he is vry much flirty n that is towarlds every grl.
Nups parents died long ago so she is d single member in her family .
As u know that mayur r cauple from long time n they did many smal smal experiments in their relationship so lets move furthur.

Nups hs won a scolership for doing MBA in america n mayank took admision in d same university 4 which nups won scolership. As his parents r so much rich so he didn't faced any problem in that. Mayank parents know nups as his frd vry well n they lik her vry much as she used 2 com 2 their home since childhood so she is a family member 4 them.

Now sene begins.
M. Hi nups mujhe yhan kyun bulaya...? Itne raat ko or is sunsan garden mae. Irada kya a lit teasing tone
N. Shut up a sweet n worning tone...mujhe tumse bohat impt baat krne hai.
M. Kya hua baby, is evrything is ok?
N. No mayu...actuly main tumse kehna chahte thi ki i can't go america.
M. What ? Bt kyun?
N. B practical mayu. U know i hd won scolarship bt nw i m thinking ki vhan apne living kase manag karuge. Part time job kr k bhi main apna rent plus extra expense nhi manage kr pauge...
M shocked at this
N. Isse accha hai ki main yhan rh kr job kr kam se kam anath ashram mae rh tho sakte hue. N i m sure mane itna accha score kiya hai ki i'll get a gud job.
N. No daut that u will get it bt d point is y u will sacrifice ur dreams n aims jst bcoz of a smal sily type of problem.
N. Mayu its nt a smal problem...
M. Yes it is. I hv a flat at hd bought it when i ws too smal n we used 2 liv there. Actly i dont remembered anythng as i ws smal child when we shifted here, mom hd told me . So u cn liv with me. What say.
N. Bt mayu baby what will peple would say.
M. Come on nups thats america nt india. No one hv time to see others jst b ready baby we r going to america.
N. She smiles n hugs mayu.
Sudenly they see something n togetherly say 'ye barbade kiski ho rhi hai'....actuly wo kisi ki baraat ja rhi hoti hai n they jst cant digest d fact ki log shadi kr k kush kase se rh sakte hai n nups says
N. Main tho kabhi shadi na god.
M. Realy nups i jst can't understand kisi k sath rehna hai tho itna drama kis lea? Thats y i lov america vhan koi so caled restrictions nhi hai.
N. Ya right.
Aftr that they hv some takings with each other n soon 1 weak pased in a blink of eyes n they finaly going to america no actuly they reached there. They reached to new yolk.
Nups all dreams were coming true when they were in taxi she ws amazed to see such a beautiful n developed placed. Its nt lik that she never heard bt such things bt hearing n watchng from own eyes always hv a difference. 4 mayu it ws normal as he hd seen this place many times. Soon they reached to their flat. This flat hd two bedrooms a attached bathroom. Big drawing plus dinning room. Kiten n storeroon all mantained properly. Soon a weak passed. Mayu hd made comfertable to nups in america. He hd shown whole city to her so that she become familer here befor there batch get start n nups also catched evrything quickly. They were living in diffent room. Evry thing ws settled when they hd first day in their university.

Morning 9.00 am , outside university
Nups watch a cauple n says
N. See mayu hw they r kising in public without any fear
N. Nups u r saying lik this that u watched it first time, come on with in a weak u watched out this hundreds of times.
N. Ya bt its a university...
M. Shuhhh...he puts finger on nups lips n rubbing them with his fingers he says lets do a kiss on public place 2 mak 2 confortable.
Nups throught starts geting dry on this bt with all aferts she says
N. Mayu i jst said its a university vase bhi u kised me many times when we r on some alone places.
M. Bt nups a want a kiss...plz, n he maks a puppy face n nups get melted
N. Ok fine... N mayank tooks nups behind a tree holding her arms.
N. Mayu....
B4 she could say any thing mayank lips were on nups lips. Nups respond back. Mayank hands were on nups waste holding her top tightly n nups hands were holding mayu's neck tigtly. Both were going breathless n don't want 2 break d kiss bt a voice made them 2 come back to world saying 'so we hv a new lov birds in colledge' n they turned back 2 see d person. It ws a american grl n they jst smiled towards her n asked whos she? And smiling back she said ' hi i m suzane n my frds cal me suze'
M. Its nice 2 meet u suze... Then they talked to each other n d hesitation b/w three of them gone with in a hour they become comfertable with each other . They got 2 know that she is their classmate. Days were passing gud n mayur met many more people who became their frds. With in two months mayur hd a frd gang in which along with suze , bob, samrat n gunjan ws also there. They all were their class mates. There six bubbies gang rocks d whole coledge. Suze n bob were americans n soon they became cauple aftr breaking up with their old once. Gunjan n sami were indians bt they always had lived in america . Sami hd a crush on gungi n some were gungi also liks him bt no offical anouncement yet that they r cauple. So in short final cauples r lik that
Mayank n nupur
Suze n bob
Samrat n gunjan

Suze n bob also started living together n they always used to think that mayur also liv in a relationship lik them. Nt only suze n bob bt d whole frd circle used to think d same n it ws super cool according to them.
One day there whole gang get together to their home. They enjoyed alot. They hd some drinks bt nt so strong one that they lose their senses. Only suze n bob were 'tallee'(so much drunk) rest were ok. Aftr dinner sam asked gungi to drop her n she said yes so they left . Suze ws in kiten with nups n bob ws with mayank talking in drawingroom.

N. Suze y don't u stay here. U r drunk...nups says this while cleaning kitchen.
S. No nups its nt posible today.
N. Y?
S. Bcoz bob n me decided to sex today.
N. Whats sex?...dam shocked.

Drawing room
M. What sex?...Shocked
B. Yes sex y r u so shocked. U r so shocked lik this that u never did this with nups.
M. No.,i didn't...(says stratly))
B. he ws taking a sip of drink when aftr hearding this he throws out saying...what?

N. Yes we didn't
S. R u joking nups. U both r living under d same shelter since abt six months n u didn't done this even once. Bob n i hd this countless times since we started living together.

Drawing room
B. Yes countless times. U dont know mayank hw much i enjoy when i taste saxy body body....she is so bold man.

S. He makes me crazy nups when he in on me n makes lov with me. He becomes so wild sometimes.
N. Dont u feel pain!...asks hesitatingly..
S. Pain is d symbol of realman. If a grl feel pain that means man is doing all this perfectly.

M. Don't she stops u on hights...
B. Stops! No ways ways mayank rather she uncourges me.
M. How?
B. By making that sexy sounds n moams...

N. N i used u thing that sounds r shown only in film u mak thdm weared.
S. Come out of films... This age in 4 action nt ur silly reactions aftr hearing abt it.

B. Vase i want 2 ask something from u.
M. what?
B. R u vargan?...
M. He remains silent
B. No ways... N he bust out laughing
Listening his sounds suze n nups comes out. Bob tel suze that they r vargan n suze says 'i know that' laughing with him living mayur embared they leave from there. Mayur know that they r drunk too much so they'll 4get all his tomorrow morning ,they know abt their frds vry well that they will 4get this bt would happned if they were nt drunk. ''That means they should experiment this'' they both thought in their minds.

Edited by arjunkidiwani - 04 March 2011 at 3:54pm

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