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dmg 3 wd kash...# 2..LOVE U (Page 16)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KSG-ROOP

gr8 part Clap yaar loved it..............................
she should chose armaan only..................
continue soon.....................
 


thnx soo much dearrr.....
fr ans u hav 2 w8 fr d next part..Tongue

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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
nice part
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessrashida

nice part
thnxSmile
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged

part 42...

 
all ob thm r w8ing fr...ridz answr..
ridz=mera faisla ye hai..k me...
she waz about to cmplt her linez wen d couch cumz n say si tym o gya hai macth start krna hoga...
all ov.thm again contcrte on d match btw armn n adi...

bb court...ridz waz wearing track suit

....as if she iz also playng...she wishing armn best ov luck wd her eyez..
 

inaly d match start..
thy start playing like young boyz...

ridz remember her n armn meetng at bb court..

 

n suddnly cum bk to reality seeng thm both playing.

.she put handz on her stomach...
ridz=dkha ap ki wja se mama match e nae khel skti nae to me b khelti...
she said making pouting face....

adi hav done3 basktz n armn hav done 2...

v less tym iz left...
thy both r in full...plying mood..
if adi did last baskt thn he won d match..
bt if armn did it thn there will b tie ofcorse..

all d audience w8ng fr d final baskt
armn ran to baskt d ball..wen his foot slip n he hardly fall on ground..
his elbow hurt badly..
ridz=aarrmmmnnnn..she shoutd..n ran twrdz him....
armn gt up..cleang hiz hand..
ridz=hold hiz hand..armn kya hua tmhy lgi to nai na..r u ok...
dkho kitni chot ae hai...dard o rha o ga na..
she waz it in single breath..with teary eyes...
armn=hold her hand

...bbssskktt...sssshh..i m fine minr injury hai..
ridz=bht ho gya koi match nae o a...she waz gtng emotional..
armn=make her calm ....jan bas last baskt plz.....plzzzzzzzzzzz
he start behavng like a kid..
ridz=last??
armn=ha last pka.....


adi was watchg all thz nw hiz sprtz spirit gone less..
he waz nt intrstd much in match nw..
adi =bs yae dkhna tha ridhima....tmny aj zbn se chahy na kha o..
.bt..aj thi tm armn ki side,,,,he was lost in thougtz..wen armn did d last baskt n won d match...

all d people in d favour armn gathrd around himm...ridz ran twrdz him n hugz him tightly...
m hardly kiss him on cheekz
bt armn waz ny happy with thz...succees...

armn go terdz adi..
armn=hey adi,,
adi=oh congrtz man..
armn=fr wat
adi=match jitny k liye..
armn=match to me t jita na jb tm last play me khlty...
adi=matlb?
armn=mtlb tmhra dyhan kae aur tha...
adi=nai sjiad tmhy jitna tha..
armn=change d topc ...any wayz u r a gud plyr...
adi=ha jb tk muje koi suppot krta tha tb tk
he left d court sayong these wrdz..left armn confusd..
armn=still thinkg wat he said..


in AR home...

armn=aaoooohhhh...
ridz=cleang hiz woundz...blowing hz elbw..dard o rha hai na...
she ask in very soft tone..
armn=who was contoiusly gazing her beauty..said...ha bht...he waz in tezng mood..
ridz=mene to mdcn b lga di hai ab dard o rha hai?
armn=nai ek aur mdcn hai agr wo mil jati to.....in naughty mood..
ridz=stil dnt undrstand...knsi jaldi btao me wo b lga du?
armn=smile heartdly at her innocnce...
n said ek choti si pyari se kis...
ridz=nw undrstand...glard him armnnnn.....
n about to go wen he stop him plz naaaa

...tmhary hubby ko dard o rha hai na..
ridz=meltd at her huuby..
ridz=mitate him awwww...mery huubby ko dard o rha hai?n sit beside him..
armn=hhmmmm...making put..
ridz=kha drd ho rha meri jan ko..
armn pointd twrdz hiz elbw..
ridz softly kiss hiz elbw..
armn pointd twrdz hiz head..
she sotly kiss hiz head..
thn he poitd twrdz his chhekz...yha b plzz.
ridz softly kiss hiz both cheekz...
thz tym ridz ask...aur?
armn juz smile..n she softly press hiz lipz wd her...
n ty broke it wdout bcmg pasnate...
n hugz him tightly..
armn coverd hiz handz on her back...n softly kiss her hairz...

ridz=armn mera dl bht kamzor hogya hai...me tmhari ek choti si tklif b
ab bardasht nai krskti jb tmhy chot lgeto me..
armn=shhhhh put fingr on her lipz...mera pyar tmhy kamzor nai takt dy ga ridhima...
ar me kbi tmhary sath na b rhu to...
ridz=put handz on hiz mouth...agr dobara tmny aesi bat ki to..
armn=kiss her handz,,,n n hold hiz earz...acha baba sorryy...ainda nai kru ga pkaaa....


in sanjivini...

adi=was in hiz cabin ....lost in thoughtz...thinkng..
about hw ridz waz cheering fr armn in bb court..
hw she ran twrdz him wen he gt hurt..
adi=he open hiz drw n take out d pic  ov ridz ..he look at d pic..
give an authntic smile...tmsy armn ki zra si tklif bardsht nai hui
 ridhima aur muje jo tmny puro zindagi k liye dard dy dia
...uska kya...he again put her pic in drw...n agian lost in thougtz..

in corridor..

ridhima=armn wo mr mehta ki case fila tmhary pas hai?
armn=nai to..i guess wo adi k pas hai..
ridz=oh me le k ati hu..
armn=nai tm ruko me le k ata hu..

he go inside d cabin n sw thier iz no 1 there..he start finding the file..
armn=yha to kae nai hai...shaid drw me..ho..
he  opn d drw in which therz iz ridz pic...


to b cont.......



Edited by ilyasesha - 11 March 2011 at 12:10pm

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged

ok guyz do commtnz here iz d nxt part..

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
love ur work....
i hope i all comes true....
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged

that was simply amazing part....

superb............

loved AR scene..............

n adi...gosh..man get over her......

nw wats gonna happen.......

thnx for the pm.................

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates
loved it
loved AR scene
ufff adi get over her 
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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