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                Part 5

she was not able to express herself...
how can she express her feeling to a person she nvr seen...


she couldn't tell him how she felt wid his touch...
even he didn't need it...

coz he would hav understood it very  from her moves..how she felt it..
...
suddenly light came...
she bent down OPENING HER EYES...
pickd her mobile n ran without even watching his face 1ce...
she was expressionless...
...
he stood watching her running in dat saree...
he frozed...mesmerized...

he didn't blincked yet...
his eyes were filled coz of not blicking for so much of time...
but he didn't bother it...
all he could think was her...her touch...her skin...her heart beat...her scary face...her lips...
he was stilled wid a smile on his face...

...
his mob rang...
he snapped out...
noticing she was gone...
gone sumwhere he dnt know...
he tried looking for her...
his phone rang again...
he snapped - wat..!!!!
neeva totally scared wid his mood...
neeva - actually sir wo...
maan - will u plz speak...
neeva - sorry sir wo me..actually...meeting ke silsile me...
...
d meeting reminded him where he was...
he was still standing in d lift...


where his life came for sum seconds...
teased him..
spend sum moment wid him...
n again disappeared.
he was not sure whether she was dere or he just dreamed...
he was helpless to make out d truth...
he was about to move out..
his glance moved on d floar..
he bend on his knees...
...
it was a small ear-ring...very small diamond ear-ring..

he picked it in his hand..
moved it closer to his gaze...
he made out d moment wen she turned...
sumthing fell on d floar...
a smile teased his lips...
he kissed d ear-ring softly...
he was now sure dat was real n not a dream...
d ear-ring reminded him her existance wen she was dere...
D MOMENT WEN HE SAW HER ON D GROUND...
dis time he remebered her ear-ring too in her ear...
he could feel her scent allover around him n in d lift..
he was still stucked wid d moment...
...
he was litle confused...
wat would be his reaction...
shud he b happy dat he saw her 1ce again...for wat he was pleeding unknowingly from morning...
he shud be delighted..dat he touch her...his life...his emotions...
he shud b refreshed...for taking in her scent...
he shud b mesmerized for watching her so closely..he actually just gazed every inch of her face..in d light of mobile...
...
or...
he shud b sad...
he shud b sad...dat she gone...she didn't even saw him 1ce...she was gone away...he wanted to see her...
he got restless...
stood up...
again looked at d ear-ring...
said to ear-ring (looking at d ear-rings) - plz...mat karo aisa mere sath...warna..me pagal ho jaunga...
but still he was a bit less restless dan d morning...
d moment she shared wid him..was making him delighted every now n den...
he was happy dat atleast he made sum memories to think of her...
he kept d ear-ring in his wallet...
n moved out...
...

here...
aftr running out from...
she kept running atleast for sumtime...
atopped near a place...which was crowdless...


her heart was beating teribly fast...
her eyes were closed...
she calmed herself...
she is still not understanding wat actually happened in dat few seconds...
she was uncondotionally in a strong bonding wid a stranger..she felt..
wat was dat...
all she remembered was d darkness...
and d warm which she felt in dat stranger...
she didn't even see his face...
how stupid is dat...she murmured...
wen she remembered of d tight hug she gave to him...
a smile teased her lips...
she was not in a state to understand her feeling...
she was scared dat she was in a strangers arms...
she was happy wid a uncertain feeling she felt...
she was eager to know who dat person was...
she was nervous coz of d thout dat how can she feel like dis for a person to whom she has not even seen...
she put her hands on her face...
hiding her face...
tried to calm herself...
probably she wanted to hide d spark dat was clearly shown in her eyes wid d new sensation of feeling she gone through...
d passion she felt in a strangers arms...
he was not a stranger anymore...
but d part of her unseen feelings...
d part of unspoken words...
d part of unheard words...
she slowly put her hands down...
...
she saw rajji standing in front of her...
she snapped out of her thout thinking..wat was she thinking...
how stupid of her to thik of an accident...
dat was just an accident...
dat person was nobody for her n she vil never see him again...
she shook her head...
n looked at rajji..

rajji was staring at her..
geet - wat...!!!!!
rajji - didi etni jaldi aagayi aap saree try karke...
geet - jaldi..matlab...narrowing her eyebrows..
rajji - mujhe laga tha veerji ki shadi ke baad hi aaogi aap..
geet patted on her head...
geet - oyye hello...kya haan...me lift me atak gayi thi..to..
she remembered him..
but immediately became conscious...
rajji - kya..aap dar gayi hongi na andhere me...
geet - to wo...abb..me geet handa hu..me aur darr...haaan...
if dat was just a accident...den why she didn't tell about him...she wondered
rajji - haan haan...wo to mujhe pata hi hai ke apko andhere se****** bikul darr nahi lagta...
geet made a face...
rajji - btw...aap to badi mast lag rahi ho...
geet smiled...
rajji - sach me di..bahot pyare lag rahe ho aap..
geet - wo to hai...geet handa..haan...geet handa kkuch try kare aur uspar suit na ho...dats just nxt to impossible...i mean cumon...its geet...sarree ho ya kuchh b geet par sab kuch achha lagta hai...
...
rajji rolled her eyes...
geet continued wid her blabbereing n selfpreaise...lol...
rajji...helplessly kept listening...
untill dey reach d couner..
...
...

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hey lovely update....d feel...vo ehsaas ...that was very gud....loved it...do continue soon...

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read all the parts ... they're awesome .... very well written ... 

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real cute... could you add the index... i'd like to read the updates a while later again...

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