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LOVE...beyonds...LIMITS thread 1 completed !! (Page 75)

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Awesome fabulous 
loved it 
love u dear
pls cont soon

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me.. 

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...




                 Part 32


2:30 AM
he enters her room from d balcony...
she was sleeping peacefully on d bed under d duvet...
he thinking - ek me hu..jo ese manane etni raat tak jag raha hu...aur ek ye hai jo aaram

se kharate le rahi hai...jo b ho..aaj bacha lena kanhaji plz...
...
he moves near d bed...sitting beside her...
turns on d side by lamp...
moves near to her face whispering - jaan...
...
she almost jumped wid d sudden ghosts voice...screaming...
awww...
b4 she could scream lou...he grabs her mouth wid his hand...
NT - dev...u r hurting me..
dev realizes dat his grab is litle too strong...he looses instantly...
NT throws a pillow on him...
NT - wat d hell r u doing here...mene mana kiya tha na...get out...tumhari nayi gf so

gayi jo mera...
...
b4 she could complete her sentence...
dev places a soft kiss on cheek wid a sorry baby face...
NT looks at him angrily...
dev - plz baby..etna gussa...she is just a frnd...nothing else..
NT - i dnt want ur stupid explanation...leave now...
dev - tum kyu etna gussa ho rahi hai..she is annie's frnd...waise b wo kisi aur se pyar

karti hai...

NT - ohh...usne tumhare is fake dil ke tukde tukde kar diye...
dev - how mean..i hate u...making grumpy face...
NT - great..coz i hate u too...she too making a grumpy face...
dev wid sudden smile - i was kidding..can i ever hate u...ab plz mujse baat karo na..u

havn't talked to me from last night...
NT - u better go..or i vil call guard to throw u out...
dev - r u talking of dev singh khurana to b thrown out...
NT - yes..now go...
dev - baby..she just told me dat she loves sum1 who loves sum1 else...but i dnt know dat

sum1 else...dats y being 1 sum1 i tried to help her sorrow sooth out from dat sum1

else...
NT scratching her head - can u tell d meaning now...
dev - actually mujhe hi meaning nahi pata ke mene abhi kya bola..lekin..i swear..i just

love u baby...
NT - prove it...
dev - ok...i can jump for u from d train...
NT - hav u ever travelled by train in ur lifetime...
dev - no..but still i can...
NT - r u serious..u can jump...
dev - but obvious..train rukte hai jump kar dunga...
...
NT throwing another pillow on his face...ouhhh..i hate u...
dev catching d pillow - now plz..say u gorgave me...
NT - try hard...
dev takes out a diamond ear-rings from his pocket...
Nt'e eyes just popped..screaming.omg..it so pretty...
dev - now vil u hug me..i missed u so much...
NT - me or my hug...
dev - wat u think...
NT - shut up..n hugs him tight...
...


6:45 am

geet still rolling on her pillow...hiding herself in d spread..
searching her mr.chocolaty on d bed wid her had...
but her hand fails...
she opens her eyes in a jerk..sitting on d bed...
she turns around...d whole room...
but finds him nowhere...
...
she closes her eyes..wat exactly happened last night...
she slept on d floar watching him endlessly...
n he was in a deep sleep on d bed...
dey how cum she is on d bed..n he is nowhere...
" aye lo...mujhe jagaya b nahi..aise hi chale gaye...khadus..."
her eyes falls on d plate..food is still dere...
her tummy strts making noise..."mujhe bhook lagi hai..."
...
she decided to sleep more for sum time...as she slept very late..thnks to his killing

face..dat she kept staring...

" hayye rabba...kitne handsum dikh rahe the raat me..matlab din me bhi...overall is just

too charming...ohh god..wats happening to me..."
...
b4 she could get in d spread again...
her eyes fell on d side table to find a letter on it...
she immediately pickd it up...
she blushed thinking its his 1st letter...she hides herself in d spreat wid only hands n head to b seen...
opened it...
reading...

" JAAN (geet blushes)...

gussa ho ke bina bataye chala gaya (geet nods as yes)...but my princess was sleeping so peacefully on d floar (geet makes baby face)...ke mera man nahi huva usse jagane ka (geet smiles)...

by d way..tumhe nahi lagta ki tum bahot moti ho (geet makes gol-gappa face)...muh band karo..makkhi andar chali jayegi (she closes her mouth)...tum uthate huve..mera ye muscles b dard karne lake (geet makes grumpy face)...muh kyu bana
rahi...achha baba...me majak kar raha hu
(geet smiles)...plz aise mat muskurao..warna mera yaha man nahi lagega (geet hides in d spread)...pehle pura padh to lo...tumhare cupboard se tumhari ek taswir li hai aur tumhara dupatta b (geet makes surprising face)...wat...ab ek din sab mere ghar hi aana hai (geet blushes again...)

achha suno..me aaj london ja raha hu (geet eyes fills up)...jaan its about business...bahot importnt meeting hai...ek week me vapas aa jaunga...i promise (geet still foul mood)...tum aise udas ho jaogi to me kaise ja puanga..aur waise b..me nikal chuka hu...i vil miss u (geet nodds a no)...u better miss me...aur haan...jab me vapas nahi aa jata..agar mujhe pata chala ke tumne dobara koi stupid si harkat ki hai..ya khudko hurt kiya hai..den u cnt imagine wat vil u do (geet kisses d letter)...raat ko labon par to nahi diya...aur ab letter ko kiss kar rahi ho...not fair (geet blushes instantly)...ohh god..i vil dye for dis blush of urs (geet
makes naughty faces
)...dnt look naughtily..i may just eat u (geet smiles)...

achha u sleep now..raat ko mujhe ghurne ke chakkar me..so hi nahi payi (geet thinking me ghurti nahi)...achha..raat ko to laga ke mujhe kha hi jaogi (geet thinking..inhe har baat kaise pata chal jati hai..heyy babaji)...tumhara jadugar jo hu...ek aur baat...tum sote huye bilkul.....(geet eyes twinkles in joy)...MISHTY lagti ho...meri mishty (geet blushes)..ok ..dat blush is enough for me to travel till london (geet thinking i vil miss u)...i know..u vil miss me..but i vil miss u more...u sleep now..sapne me milta hu...

- tumhara khadus "

...
geet imeediately hugs d letter as much as possible...
a sudden overburst of all happy emotions..takes over her mind...
she hides herself in d duvet..not stop blushing n smiling...eyes closed...
still kissing d letter under d duvet...

...
maan in plane
takes out geet's pic...
while holding her dupatta in his hand tightly...
kisses d dupatta many times..smelling her scent in it...
maan's smiles on his own childisn behaviour...
"is ladki ne..maan singh khurana ko kya bana diya hai..ek 18 yrs teenager..."
he carrases d pic very lovingly...
places it near to his heart..hugging it softly...
she looks more delicate in d pic...he scares if her pic even get hurt...
trying to feel her in within...
remembering d beautifull time dey shared last night...
d way she saw his face...kisses him...
he was on 9th cloud...
his smile..completeness..was very wekk visible on his face...
he was happiest dat finally she saw his face...
atleast dis hide n sick game in lowered at sum maner
...
still she dnt know anything about him..his name..his personality..his business...his

image in d world..nothing...
...
dey both r like mystarious book for each other...
jiske har panne par ek nayi kahani hai..bas padhte jana hai...aur yuhi ek dusre ko

padhte padhte..zindagi gujar jaye..bas aur kya chahiye...bas ek dusre ko samajhte jana

hai..aur ek dusre ka banate jana hai...
...


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 March 2012 at 12:27am

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged

sooo romantic...
fantastic......

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
WOW mr.khadoos has written a love letter for his princess.that was soooo romantic.....great update.Smile

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
wow first love letter it just awesome ,amazing, wonderful yaar
loved it !!!Hug

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 12:52am | IP Logged
lovely romantic 
latter so romantic
pls cont soon

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 12:57am | IP Logged
wow mr khadoos wrote a love letter that was soooooooooooooooooo romantic.............
i just loved it..............the way u hv explained her each reaction to the leter was awesome as well.........
oh they r going to stay away each other for a week...............will they b able to do it..............

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
mishty awesome updates .....Clap

loved how GEET saw MAAN'S face ..... Blushing

the LETTER was the HIGHLIGHT of the UPDATE .... LOL

plzzzzz update soon ...... Big smile

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