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LOVE...beyonds...LIMITS thread 1 completed !! (Page 70)

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged

IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me.. 

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...




                 Part 28


N HE SAW HER...
...
wrapped in a beautiful blue color...on a resting chair wid eyes closed...

she looked calm...beautifull...delicate...
d satin blue cloth also seemed less silky compare to her white skin...
he saw her as if he was watching her for d 1st time...
...
he could feel wat she gone through watching d situation of room...
she entered room like a storm...
her almond eyes were red crying continuously...
her body seemed numb wid d pain of hurting him..wid her stupid words...
she wanted to see him...
she wanted to meet him...
she wanted to touch him...wanted to b in his arms..tightly holding him..
she wanted to hear his heart beat..resting her head calmly on his chest...
all she wanted was him n only him...
...
"
rah me roshni...
...ne hai kyu hath chhoda
is taraf sham ne...
...kyu hai apna muh moda
yu...ke har subha...
...ek bereh si raat ban gayi..

hai kya ye jo...
...tere merer...darmilyan hai..
andekhi ansuni...
...koi dasatan hai...
lagane lagi...
...ab zindagi...khali..kahli...
lagane lagi...
...har sans bhi..kahli khali

bin tere...bin tere...bin tere...
koi khalish hai hawaon me...binn tere...

bin tere...bin tere...bin tere...
koi khalish hai hawaon me...binn tere...
"

her pain turned in anger...
started breaking every single thing of room...
her words.." i dnt..." haunted her...
she broke d glass of dressing table wid her bare hands...
she broke every single thing of her room...
she was wild..mad...on herslef...
no voice from outside...reached till her ear...
she was a dead body..couldn't hear a single cry..scream of her parents..who were pleading for her to cum out...

...
he slowly slowly moved closer to her...
she was still wid same position eyes closed..
he find her odd...
he knew how restless she get wid him around...
den y...y is she so calm 2day...
she might b sleeping..he thout...
...
his gaze started moving down...
reached till her hands...
he couldn't believe wat he saw...
d blood oozing out of her both hands wid many injury marks...
tears rolled of his eyes wid sudden pain...
he bent on his knees...
dat blood looked like haunting..teasing him...hurting him more...
he touched her hand slowly...
she didn't move..didn't protest...
rested deir like a dead body...
he kissed her skin softly...
d tear rolled from his eye on her skin..bringing her back from dat dead situation to dis life again...
dat dead world in which she was lost from d morning...
...
he feeled her skin wen he touched her...
he understood she is not sleeping..she is awake...
but still not opening her eyes..rested dere...he thout..
...
his gaze moved to her feet...
goddd...
her feet filled wid glass peices ruthlessly sticked in her feet...oozing blood out...
his pain increased...
...
her delicate skin suffered through dis pain..bocz of his stupidity...he couldn't stop hating himself...
his hand n lips reached her feet...
he slowly touched her tore..her feet wid his hands...
kissing dem softly...
bringing her slowly slowly back to dis world again...
back from dat haunting world...where she couldn't listen to anybody..couldn't hear..couldn't feel anybody..not even her family...
...
den wat is wid him...
it was possible... for him..only him...
he had dat magic..power...to touch her soul n bring her back to her senses...
...
he started feeling her skin..dat she is alive..awake...
...
she didn't protest him...still kept her eyes closed...

all he expected sitting in car...

dat wen he vil meet her..
she vil fight wid him..scold him..wak him...
but it was sumthing very diff...he felt...
she was actually a angel...his delicate princess...
who was cnt bear his distance...
his anger...
his small anger made her body dead numb...
how vil she b able to strong storms of life..he wondered...
but he knew..dis is d last time..he vil never let any sorrow touch her...not even her shadow...

PRECAP : heart started to beat again...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 March 2012 at 12:17am

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
brilliant update
luved it
way way way tooo
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
omg ur updates simply leave me breathless with its sheer innocence, simplicity and so much of love that is so well captured by u in words...
simply love it

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged

Please let her see his face

I cant bear it any longer!

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
ufff...lovely...tooo gud..do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
thanks for the double update..............
finally maan has come to c his princess.................
his heart must b wrenching in pain after seeing his delicate princess like this.........he will b never getting angry @ her after this.............
cant wait for the next update

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
2 good!!!
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keep it up
luved d way u bringing life back in Geet wid Maan's gentle touch

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