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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
wow that's awesome part 
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                Part 4


LOCATION LIFT

he was about to turn to look into her...
a big sound came..Wink.
lights went off...
d lift stucked between two floars..
dere was nothing but d drakness in d lift..Shocked.Shocked..
...
geet got scared..Cry.Cry..
hugged d only person in d lift.Wink.Tongue.
burrying her face in his chest...
her hands snaking him tightly..Embarrassed.Embarrassed..
eyes tightly closed...
...
maan shivered wid her touch..Tongue.Tongue.
stood mesmerized wid her soft skin...
he knew it was her..Clap.Clap.his life...
but he could never think she vil ever touch him...
he was frozen at d place..Sleepy..
her high breaths were falling on his chest through his shirt...
her hands tightened around him...
she softly whiepred - mujhe darr lag raha hai..Cry.
...
her words fall on his chest melting his heart.Wink.Tongue..
his hands automatically moved towrds her...
his 1 hand snaked her waist..Embarrassed.Tongue...her bare waist..Tongue.Embarrassed..a soft petal
he could make out she was in saree...
her skin felt like a silk cotton for him...
he would hav never touched sumthing so smooth...
his another hand moved over neck...
inside her hairs.Wink...to d scalp...which was even more smooth...
pulling her closer.Tongue..
wid his cheen touching her head,...
he closed his eyes...
he wanted to feel every moment of it..Tongue.Embarrassed.
he wanted to feel her more
he knew it was her...
he didn't need to watch her face for knowing her...
his heart punded for her...
his heart beats deepened...
her beats slowly strted getting normal wid his warm...
she felt secured...
she loosed her eyes a bit..still closed...
rubbing her cheeck on his chest..Embarrassed.Tongue..
as if she knew him from yrs...
she whispered - mujhe andhere se dar lagta hai..Cry.
maan whispered in her ear - shhh..Embarrassed.Embarrassed.me hu na...
...
her grip tighttened...
he was getting tickles Winkas if sum rose petals were teasing his body..Wink.
he too grabbed her gaining her warm...
a soft smile traced on his lips...
eyes closed..
feeling her to d core...
holding his life in his arms...
he nvr felt so calm b4...
his hand on her waist.Tongue.Tongue.strted tracing slowly...
wid his another pulling her more n more...
she felt sumthing completed her...
...
Suddenly d reality stuck her...
she moved away in fraction of sec...
pushing him away...
maan litle taken aback...
geet - m sorry..Shocked.Shocked.
...
dere was so much of darkness...
both could see each other...
she was scared...
1st wid darkness n den hugging a starnge person...
her blackberry mobile fell from her hand on floar...
...
her eyes were filled.Cry.Cry.
he could make it out wid her voice...
he knew she was scared...
geet was shivering...
he scared a bit..Confused.
tears strted rolling of her eyes.Cry.
geet - m sorry..mujhe andhere se bahot darr lagta hai..kuchh karo na plz..kuchh..Wink.
...
maan immediately put his finger on her lips.Tongue.Tongue..
she shivered wid his touch...
he felt her lips as if two rose petals.Embarrassed.Embarrassed..silky ever...
he could barely watch anything...
geet slowly spoke- plzzz..Smile.
her words made her lips rub on his finger..Wink.
he pulls her towrds him in a jerk...
grabbing her petal soft waist wid his hand...
sticking her to his strong body...
she flattered Shockedher eyes...
she could barely see anything...
but she could feel d burn in his touch...
she was just a inch away from him...
he slowly moved his finger away from her lips...
she breathd highly...
which drive him even more...
...
he took out his mobile from pocket..another blackberry..
still holding her tight to him...
puts d light on her face.Embarrassed..
...
n he saw her...
she seemed nothing less dan a angel...his angel..just his...
her lips seemed more pink dan anything possible.Tongue.
her almond eyes were flattering wid not understanding wat is happening...
he moved his mob to her hairs...
dose curly strands teasing her face..Smile.
her skin...
was soft...or softest dan anything possible...
...
he could smell her...
he felt as if he is dreaming...
is dat possible...
can sumthing be so delicateTongue in dis world.Tongue..
his hand slowly loosed her waist a bit..thinking she may get hurt wid his touch...
his soft touch tickled her mind..
she closed her eyes..
she was totally unaware of wat was hapening...
watever b but she liked it...
maan's gaze remained on her...
she still didn't watch him...
d light of mobile on her eyes wre disturbing her seeing anything..Wink.
she felt as if she unconditionally belonged to sum1 she never seen...
his heart thudded..Embarrassed..
his hand lose her waist softly...
still gazing her madly...
he would hav never asked for sumthing dan it...
n dnt want also..
he just wanted to see her.Tongue.just her.Tongue.only her..Tongue.
he was not getting enough of her...
he didn't blincked even 1ce...
she didn't protest a bit...
...
he moved closer to her face...
her eyes were still closed...
he moved closer to her lips...
she could feel his breaths on her lips.Embarrassed.

she turned in a jerk...
facing opposite to him...
d sudden move of her...made d mob fall on d floar from his hand..
sumthing else also fell...
both didn't bothered to see wat it was..
...
again d lift became darker...
he smiled.Smile.Wink.
she was again scared wid d drakness allover..Shocked.
he can make it out from her breaths...
maan whispered - etna dar lagta hai.Tongue..
geet whispered - haan.Shocked.
...
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today i read your article wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar keep it up.

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amazing amazing loved it.......................one of the best first meet of maaneet i hv read........................dear pl cont soon cant wait to read the next update...........................thanks for the pm

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itz awesome yar.i read this part in fb but it is more interesting in indiaforums bcz ur selection of pics r extraordinary itz bcmng more interesting day by day plz post nxt part soon i wil b w8ting 4r that

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