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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me.. 

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...





                Part 3


LOCATION MALL
...
here rajji selected sum dresses for her...
geet - finally u r done...ab mere liye kuchh t-shirts dekhte hai chal..
rajji - no ways...mumma ne bola hai ke did ke liye kuchh sarees select karna...
geet rolled her eyes...
geet - ohh...not again...
rajji - lets go...
geet made a face...
geet - arre haan...me to tujhe batana hi bhool gayi thi...me b na bilkul zalli hu...wo mumma ka phone aaya tha..ke jab wo sath hongi tab sarees dekhenge abhi philhal t-shirts dekh lete hai...

rajji showed her d call from mumma...
rajji - jab tum wo khel rahi thi..kya keh rahi thi..aisi barish me to kisika ka b man karega jhoom utheneka...
...
geet makde funny face..
rajji -
tab mumma ka phone aaya tha ke tere liye sarees hi loo..koi bahana nahi chahiye...
geet -
aye lo...me to majak kar rahi thi...wo kay hai na...mere pass jyada nayi t-shrts bachi hi nahi hai...
rajji - didi..hum abhi veerji ki shadi ke shopping kar rahe hai...payjama party ke liye nahi...
...
geet -
yah right...!!!!
rajji -
dnt tell me..ke aap shadi ke functions me b wo phati jeans aur wo pote jaise t-shirts pehen ne wale ho...
n strts laughing...
geet too strts laughing...
 
rajji draggs her to saree collections...
...
geet was a bit less interested in sarees dan rajji...
she was just glancing d sarees...
not liking any1...
rajji chose sum of dem...
n asked her to try it...
geet -
ha ha...achha joke hai...
rajji -
didi...
geet -
rajji...etni sarees pehente pehente yahi raat ho jayegi...
rajji -
achha..to isme se koi ek select karlo...
geet selected 1
d saree was white brasso saree wid black ending n black designing...
smooth like silk...
shining in black n white shades...
...
geet moved to trial room...

here maan meets anwesha...
anwesha was stuck in between sum dresses...
very confused..which to take n which to not...
maan -
kya baat hai..tumne etni jaldi kyu bulwaya...sab thik hai na...
anwesha -
kuchh thik nahi he bhai...
maan got tensed... -
wat happend
anwesha -
ye dekho na..mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha...konsi lu aur konsi nahi...
maan rolled his eyes...in anger...

anwesha made a cute face -
plz bhai...
...
maan sits beside her...
picked 1 red dress from it...
d moment he touched d dress...
he imagined her wearing d same dress...
his eyes melted in her looks..
...red dress..red lipstick..red cheecks...
he sizzled wid a single thout of her...
...MAAN SINGH KHURANA n colors...loLLL
...
he hidingly kept it beside...
picked another 1...a blue colored dress wid light designs...
he advised annie to try it...
annie too liked it..
she moved to trial room...
..
he immediately picked up dat red dress in his hand...
smelled d dress softly...
he felt as if he is feeling her...
he immediately bought dat dress b4 annie cums...
...
he waited for annie to cum out...
she was taking too much time...
...

here geet was trying her saree...
almost done wid saree...
she made d pallu small sized resting on her shoulder...
giving full view of her waist...
which made her look more sizzling n sexy...
black sleeveless blouse...
she was looking nothing less dan a princess...
she came out trial room...
n moved out of place to rajji...
d moment she left...
maan came in from other side looking for annie...
he stood frozen...

he could feel sumthing...
but not understanding wat was it...
he closed his eyes...
he undertood was was he feeling...
he was feeling her smeel...
which he nvr smelled b4 but still he could make out it was her...
he searched for her...
but she was not dere...
he stood d same place...
called annie..
anwesha - haan bhai..bass 2 min..me aa..
maan -
annie mujhe kuch jaruri kaam hai..me office ja raha hu...
n cuts d call..
anni shaking her head... -
bhai b na..har waqt kaam...
...
maan walked towrds lift...
unaware of d fact dat...
his life is waiting for him in d lift...

he gets in d lift..
lift was empty...
he looked opposite to door...
giving his glance outside through d glass...
for one look of her...
he knew how can she b dere...??
but his heart was over powering his brain...
...
geet saw d lift getting closed...
her life is closing in d form of a lift...
she ran towrds lift...
lift was about to close..
she hold d door to get in...
she get in...

he smelled her...
closed his eyes thinking of her...
but could not make out where is she...????
she was in her own world...
she sighed in relief dat she got d lift...
small small happiness alwz mattered a lot for her...
her heavy breaths made him sealized dat she is dere...
close to him...
he was turns to meet her eyes...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 05 March 2012 at 11:16pm

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Awesome update

Loved it

loved maan's restlessness

loved the sister scene 

 Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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OMG
Awesomeeeee
loved it
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thank u soo much


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