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AN ENDLESS OCEAN...
dead cold blue water everywhere...
an endless way...nowhere to hav a break...
black sky...sparkling wid full moon n lovely stars...
a wooden  chinese sticks plat...on d blue ocean...

beautifull decorated wid 4 wooden supporters at 4 ends...
wid white n red transperant curtains...
dat woode plate is covered wid white satin soft bedshit...
colored lightening candles at required places to glow d area...
d most beautifull pair of d world...

                EmbarrassedEmbarrassedMAAN N GEETEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
sleeping at d centre of d wooden plat...
only covered wid a single white satin soft spread till deir chest...
maan's left hand in under geet's neck...further..lacing into her left hand fingers...
geet right hand on maan's bare chest...further lacing into his right hand fingers...
...
both were slipping into each other...
spending d most beautifull n magical moments of d world...
a priceless smile on deir faces...
smile of completeness...
eyes opened...
both staring at sky...
...
geet turns...
rolling on his byceps...staring d blue water...
facing her bare back to him...which is hald visible due to spread...
...
maan too turns...rolling on her...
sticking his bare chest to her back...
resting his head in her neck...
unlacing d finger's of right hand...snaking her waist wid dat hand...
closes d eyes...feeling her breath...
geet smiles...still staring d water...
both r complete...
dey didn't bother where dey r...
dey just want to live dis moment for lifetime...
dey dnt need anything else...
...
dey r just complete being wid each other...
...
as d cold increases..geet shivers...
turning into his arms...hiding her face into his chest...
snaking his waist..tightly..
grabbing him close to gain his warmth...
maan smiles..pulls her more closer..into his arms...
he snakes her fully..wid left hand under her neck further snaking her hairs...
n another hand..snaking her waist...
her cold body strts burning in his hot body...
she clasps herself more n more into him...
...
he pulls d spread up till her neck..avoiding d cold to touch her...
...
d most special moment of d world...
stars sparkling more dan usual to rejoy demself to b eye-witnesed of dose dreams moments...
moon is fully visible...like he is d 1 who is happiest most to b part of dat moment...
...
maan places his head on her ear...resting his cheek into her neck...
whispring - TUM SE HI...<3 <3 <3
...
she slowly takes out her head from his chest to meet his eyes...
her eyes r filled wid love n love...
d almond eyes sparkling like stras filled wid his touch...
she smiles...
moves near to his ear from inside...
maan shivers wid her touch...
she INNOCENTLY QUESTIONS... - TUM SE HI
...
maan repeats lovingly...tum <3 se <3 hi...
geet smiles...
maan - tum se din...tum se hi eat...tum se hi sans..tum se har baat...bass TUM SE HI...
GEET feels d depth of his words...
hugs him ore tight..hiding her face in his neck from inside...
maan grabbz her back - I LOVE U...
She makes a naughty face..to not answer...
geet - I LOVE...BRO...BRO...
maan loves her naughtyness...
he pulls her more saying - u love bro...more dan me...
voices strts becuming louder - bro...get up...bro...
...
maan gets up in a jerk..opening her eyes..."stop shouting gee..."
dev is standing in front of him wid shocking expressions...
maan understood dat he just dreamed like alwz...
he smiled...
dev more confused...
dev - bhai..1st u r still sleeping...top of dat u r smiling...
he checked d time...
6:45am
he got up in a jerk running to his gym...
...
dev shook his head n joined him...
maan even didn't notice him...
maan was totally lost 2day...
omg d dreams...omg...omg...
dev - bro...
maan was still lost in d dream...practicing constantly...
dev - bro aap ka dhyan kaha hai...
maan snapped out of his thout - hmm...
dev - bro..r u ok...u look lost...
maan - noh...m ok...
dev - bro...actually...
maan - kya baat hai dev..kuchh kehna hai...
dev - haan bro..woh...darasal kal party me...
maan a bit conscious - kahin ise pata to nahi chal gaya ke me party me aaya tha...
maan - wo me...actually kal...
dev - bro mene kuchh nahi kiya...me to sirf dance kar raha tha...
he sighed in relief...
maan - kiske sath...
dev - woh annie ki frnd ke sath...aur naintara ne dekh liya...ab...
maan - ab kya..tell her dat u were just dancing...
dev - noh bro..ye ladkiyan na badi aajeb hoti hai..u dnt know..bahot possessive types...
maan was getting interested now..still maintaining straight look...
maan - sari ladkiyan...
dev - obviously bhai...par ab me kya karu...usse manau kaise...
maan - gift her sumthing...
dev's eyes popped.he never expected dat cuming...
dev - wow bro...dat was unexpected from u...
maan uncomfortably - ...woh...mene socha k gift dene se shayad wo tumhe maf kar de...
dev gave a hug to maan...
dev - thnx bro..aap ne meri prob almost solve kar di...aap se tips leni padengi...
maan gave a stirn look...
dev scared n left at once saying thnx...
...
maan again started punching..."mene usse gift ka dea kyu diya...mujhe idea kahan se aaya...ohh goddd..ye ladki mere sath kya kar rahi hai...ladki..geet..ohh god..time kya huva hai..."
maan checked d time
7:15am
maan ran to annie's room...
annie still rolling on d bed...she was smiling in sleep thinking of d dance she shared wid mayank...
maan shook her head - annie..get up...fast...
annie in half sleep - bhai plz sone do na...
maan would never let her sleep 2day...lolll
maan - annie...its already 7:30.gets up fast..tumhe colge jana hai na admission ke liye...
annie thinking.."mayank se b milna...ye me kya soch...sab pohoch jayenge mujse pehle"
she got up at once...
maan - get ready fast..i vil cum wid u...
annie hugged maan - thnq bhai..i love u...
maan went to his room to get ready...
...
had his shower...came out..wrapping a towel around him...
thinking.."me formal lapde pehanu ya fir...office wear hi...aaj tak usne mujhe dekha nahi hai...kya farak padta hai..."
he searched d whole wardrobe...still couldn't chhose anything...
annie came to his room... - bhai m ready...
she was surprised to see all clothes of maan messed on d bed...
annie - bhai...mera 1st day...aapka nahi...aap aur etne confuse...
maan - watever..!!!!...ab mujhe batao ke me kya pehanu...m confused...
annie selected a nice combi clothes...
maan got ready n dey left...
...

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                 Part 21


8:00


mS.GEET HANDA...still in her dreamland...lol
rajji went to her room...
geet was rolling on her bed..hugging pilow tight...smiling in sleep...
rajji felt her odd - di...di...utho...
geet hiding her face in blancket - rajji sone dena...abhi to subah b nahi huyi hai...
rajji pulling her spread - subah huyi hai ya nahi woh to tab pata chalega jab aap bahar aaoge...
geet pulled spread again... - thik hai..dekh lungi...gud night...
rajji rolled her eyes...n went out shouting - mumma...di aaj b colge miss kardegi..dekho...
rano went in to room shouting - geet...chal uth..aaj b colge miss karna hai kya...uthja bachha...
geet annoyed - ye rajji ki to me...mumma thodi der na...
rano noticed d red dress on d desk... - ye dress kisaki hai...
...
geet got at once..taking d dress from her hand...
geet - mumma woh..mene kal li...mujhe achhee lagi toh me...
rano staring at her... - tuze dress achhee lagi...me sapna dekh rahi hu...tune thik se dekha na..ye geans nahi dress hai...
geet rolled her eyes..kept d dress inside...n went to get ready...
...

8:30
geet still at home...
having breakfast hurrily - mumma mujhe jaldi nahi utha sakte the...
rano rolled her eyes - dekha apne..isse uthate uthate mera adha vajan kam ho jata hai..aur ye...
brij - maa...usse kyu daat rahi ho...bachha..mera credit card...
geet made funny face...
brij - jab shopping puri ho jayegi to lauta dena...
geet hugged him...thnq veerji..u r d best...
rajji - baki pyar sham me kar lena...its 8:40
geet said good bye n left hurrily...

8:45
maan n annie reached colge...
maan's eyes werE SEARCHING FOR geet everywhere...
but she was nowhere...
annie's eyes were searching for mayank n all others...
just den nupur peeped from back...
both annie n maan shocked a bit...as if dey r caught...
annie felt bad of her thought looking nupur...
nupur - kise dhund rahi ho...geet ko...
maan cleard his throat at her name...
annie - nupur..ye mere bro hai...maan...
maan - hellow ms.nupur...
nupur - haila...eske dolle te sholle kamal ke haina..hoyyyeee..
annie n maan both cleard deir throats...
maan - actually...
nupur - par ye kya pehen rakha hai...thoda formal pehna chahiye..usse muscles aur achhe se dikhte hai...
maan not understanding wat to reply...
annie - nupur..wo bhai aisehi kapde pehente hai...
annie signalling nupur to shut up... - nupur..baki sab kahan hai...
ranbir n nisha joined dem...
annie introduced dem wid maan...
annie - heyy guys...mayank aur geet kahan hai...
maan missed a bit wid her name...
nupur - baba mayank sharma hamesha library me hi paye jate hai...
maan was sure she is mad too like his geet...his..ahem ahem...
all laughed...
ranbir - aur geet hamesha ki tarah..late...wait i call her...
maan tried all his way to maintain a normal look...
ranbir - kahan hai tu...
geet - aa rahi hu...15 min more...
maan was missing several beats..wanted to hear her voice..but unlucky of him...lol..
nisha snatched phone - sun..tu aati hai tabtak hum aanie ka admission form bhar dete hai...catch u in lev directly...dnt b late...
maan didn't like it...
he came to meet her...to spend sum time wid her...
he made a sad face thinking he vil not get a chance to meet her...
but dere was nothing he could do...than to his hide n seek game...
...
nupur called mayank - baba..aapki padhai khatam ho gayi ho..to office me aajayiyega..hum sab wohi hai...
annie was curiously listening his reply...
mayank - i meet u in 5 min jaan...love u...
annie's expression were unlike her...but she ignored it...
...

all went to office...
maan's eyes were madly searching for a single look of her...
dey did all d procedures..filled d form...
principal - hello mr.khurana...m really glad to meet u...we r dere to help u in any way possible...
all were shocked to see d principal respecting maan so much...
annie felt comfortable...
principal - ms.anwesha..u can join classes from 2day...as d colge is just started..u hav not missed much..u can cope up wid it...
...

dey left d office...
nupur - kya baat hai..aap ki to badi chalti hai...hoyyyeee...
maan was still confused wat to reply her...
mayank - maan aap uski baton ko seriously mat lijiye...she is just kidding..well thnq for trusting us...we all vil take good care of annie...
annie was delighted wid sweetness of mayank...
ranbir n nisha  - ab class chale...
maan - par geet...omg...maan bit his lips...
...
nupur - aap geet ke jante hai...wowww...
annie - nahi bhai nahi jante..wo mene kal bataya tha na..isliye puchh rahe hai...
maan sighed in relief...
annie - bro..me class me ja rahi hu..aap office jao..vil catch u in evening...
...
maan halfheartly nodded in yes...
n started walking...

geet just reached colge...
running through corridore..."heyy babaji..aaj to sir mea bharta hi bana denge...humesha der ho jati hai...bacha lena babaji..."
...
maan stilled at d place..started getting restless...
he smiled..coz he knew,,its her dat alwz makes him restless...
he started searching her...
she was running from corridores...
...
she was in so hurry...she didn't even think of him...coz expecting him in colge is nxt to impossible...she knew...
...
NO much crowd anywhere...
all d areas got lonesum
"ohh god..lec start ho gaya...me to aaj mar gayi...me..."
...


ohh goddd...

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