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amazing update
cont soon

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awsome update,
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awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
loving the precap
thanks 4 da pm

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LOVELY UPDATE ....... Day Dreaming

plzzzzzzzzz continue soon ..... Thumbs Up

want to c MAAN in the party with GEET .....  Blushing

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hey lyke ur ff. pm me da update

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                Part 10



how can she sleep...
stoling sum1 else's sleeps...mishty wondered...
...

maan directly moved for dine...
mutely had his food...
he was scared he may just smile unneccessarily proving himself stupid...

but trying a lot he couldn't controlled d smile of his face...
dadi noticed dat hidden smile...
dadi was a bit shocked...rather say surprised...a pleasnat surprise...
a soft smile placed on dadi 's face...
dadi signaled annie to see maan's face...
annie too noticed d smile...
unaware of it...maan was mute...
dadi maan - maan bete...aap thik hai na...
maan - kyu dadi maa...kay baat hai...
dadi - pata nahi hume kuchh thik nahi lag raha...
maan panicked - dadi maa apki tabiyat to thik hai na...me abhi doctor ko bula lata hu...
annie was enjoying d scene...
dadi - haan..doctor ko to bulana hi padega..aaj kal hum din me b sapne dekhne lage hai..lagta dawayiyon ka overdose ho raha hai...
maan was confused... - din me sapne...
annie started laughing...
maan came too know dadi maa was upto sumthing...
dadi smiled - aaj pehli baar apke is cute se chehre par smile dekhi hai...
maan - dadi maa..me cute nahi hu..mene kitni baar kaha hai..plzzz...
annie - my cutest bro...
just dev joined...
kissed annie on her forehead...
dev - ye achha hai...maan bhai cutest...aur me...
making a baby face...
dadi - aur aap sweetest...
dev smiled...

maan - dev...tumhara colge kaisa chal raha hai...
dev - bro..its just awesum being in colge...
winks at annie...
annie - haan..etni sari...
maan looked at annie...
dadi - etni sari book hai ...kafi badi libraby hai colge me unke...
dev rolled his eyes...
maan - dadi maa..aap kab gayi thi dev ke colge...
annie - wo bhai..us din me lekar gayi thi...dev bhai se milne..
maan - hmm...
dadi completed her dinner n left saying goodnight...
...
den n annie looking at each other...signaling sumthing...
maan noticed it...
dev - bhai...aap etne sweet kyu ho...
maan - kya naam hai...
annie almost coughed...
dev - bhai wo..nai...naintara..i mean..NT...
maan - kitne din ke liye hai..
dev - bhai..i guess dis time forever...
maan looked at him - u guess...u r not sure...
dev - bhai..m not sure yet...u know me...
maan - yah i know u dats y m asking...
dev - let me spend sum more time vod her...know her better..den i can cum to a decision...
maan - d moment u vil decide...u vil join KC...
dev - bhai...
maan looked at him...
dev - bhai..sure...m tooo exciiiteddd...
putting a smiley on face...
maan leaves...
...
annie strts laughing openly...
dev throws a spoon on her...
dev - annie ki bachee...

annie - ab tumhara kya hoga...bhai ke samne 2 min me tumhari mmm...mm...shuru ho jati hai...how vil u manage in KC...
dev - its still has time..
annie - wat r u upto...
...
dev n annie continues wid deir giggling...

maan went to his room...
locked d door unlike him...
directly moved to bed...again unlike him...
he was d 1 who use to sit for sumtime in d study aftr dinner...
but y was it different 2day...
was it d joy in his mind...dat he vil see her tom...if he wants..ofcorz he wants...lol
he cuddled up in d spread..rolling on d pillow...
as if he is trying to feel her sumwhere...
he closed his eyes...
...
she sat on him...
he suddenly opened his eyes...
he was heartly delighted to see her sitting cutely on his stomach...
maan - tum yahan kya kar rahi..
geet keeps quite...
maan looks into her eyes...
u every time he sees her...he finds her more beautifull dan b4...he wondered...

maan - kyu..kar rahi ho mera sath aisa...1 din..1 din me me kya se kya ban gaya hu...tum...
b4 he could complete...
she disappeared...
he knew dat was gonna happen any way...
he smiled on his own desire of thinking her sitting on his stomach...
he put d spread completely hiding his face in it...
screamed - wat is happening...
...
slowly dossed off...
to meet her in his dreams...as he is doing from d morning itself...lol

7:30
as 1 of his rules..he was used off practicing carrate daily in d morning may b almost from 5yrs...
but y didn't wake up 2day...
may b he didn't sleep properly d whole night...
he waked up in a jerk..looking at d time...
" me abhitak so raha hu...wat is wrong wid me...ohh man...m getting mad...
he gets out of bed immediately...
practices for sumtime...
obviosuly..thinking of her...
how much he practiced n how much he dreamed...dats upto him now...lol
n went to get fresh up...

8:30
geet still rolling in her spread...
hating d sunrays dat alwz annoys her every single morning...
she hided her face in d pillow..n tried to slip again...
a voice whispered near her ear - wake up jaan...

she get up in a jerk...sitting on d bed...
looking here n dere...wid her eyes fluttering in half sleep...
probably now she knew..dat she imagined...
she patted her head...
n went to get fresh...

8:45
maan got ready ready in his office dress...
n went to meet annie purposely...
annie was still rolling on d bed..
maan - annie..get up fast...
annie - bhai plz..thodi der...
maan - utho bachha...tumhe bahar jana hai na..
maan bit his lip...
annie got up - apko kaise pata..
maan - i mean..tumhe kahin jana ho to...dekho kitna waqt ho gaya...
annie lloking at d time...
got out of bed in a jerk - omg..me late ho janugi..geet to mujhe mar hi dalegi...
d word geet blessed him a smile...
maan innocently - kon mar dalegi...
annie getting ready fastly - wo kal mall me meri frnd ban gayi thi...me ussi ke colge me admission le rahi hu...for MBA...
maan was 9th cloud...
his smile was nowhere to stop 2day...
his life itself cuming towrds him..without puttingmuch effort...as if he ever scared to put any effort...
annie - aaj me uske group se mil rahi hu...vil back in d evening n night me ek party hai...y dnt u cum for d party bhai...
maan was waiting for dose words..
maan - me wahan kya karunga..i dnt attend parties..u know...
annie - yah...i vil take dev bhai..
dats was a thumb down for maan...as if he cared...
he very well knew d surprise...no 1 vil recognze him..thnx to GEET...
MAAN - OK..U TAKE CARE...
maan leaves for office...
does he really think...??.he vil able to work in d office...at d point he knew where his life was...dat was impossible...he knew...

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SHE GOT FRESH UP...
came out wid a towel wrapped a round her...
looked for dresses...wat to wear...
she wud hav checked almost 20 dresses..still she didn't like any...
but y she wanted to look special 2day...as if she is going to meet him..she wondered..
patted her wet hairs...n took a white dress..

slipped in it...moved out...
brij was sitting on d couch looking into sum files...
geet carrased his hairs...n wrapped her hands softly around his shoulder...
brij knew she was upto sumthing...
brij - kya baat hai bachha...maska aur mujhe...hmm...
geet - veerji m so happy..aapki shadi pass aa rahi hai...omggg...omggg
brij - kitne paise chahiye...

geet made a baby face...
brij shook his head...took his wallet out n give her..creadit card...
she jumped in joy...
geet - thnq veer ji..i love u so much...
brij loves her watching happy...
geet was about to leave...
rano - geet..nashta to kar le...
geet made a baby face at brij...
brij - aa..mumma..uske chocolate milkshake dedo..its really good for health...
brij winked at her...geet giglled
rano - achha ji...geet ke bhaiyya...
geet had her choclate milkshake...
kissed rajji...n left...

10:30 am
LOCATION KC
...
maan in his cabin...working wid a important file...
neeva came in wid 1 file...sat infront of him...
lost in him...
maan asked for d file..still looking in his file...
she didn't respond...
maan looked at her...
she snapped out of her thouts...
handed over d file n left at once...feeling embarrased...
maan just recalled d moment d way he was lost in geet n didn't respond to annie's ques...

a soft smile placed his lips...
neeva noticed d smile on his face through d blinds...
she was happy like anything.."wo b muskura rahe hai..."
...
here maan was in his own world...checked d time...10:34
he immediately called annie...
annie - ji bhai...
maan not understanding wat to say her..he dnt hav topic...
he just wanted to hear her voice if she is around annie...
annie - bhai...helloo...
maan - annie tum thik se pohoch gayi..kahin jane wali thi na...
annie - nahi bhai..bas..10 min me pohoch jaungi...
maan disappointedly - hmm..mujhe thodi thodi der me call karti rehna..actually tumhe jyada pata nahi hai delhi ke bare me isliye...
annie - ji bhai..thnq..
maan didn't want to cut d call until she reach n he hear her voice...
maan - paise vagaisa thik se le liye na...
annie - haan bhai..paise b...
suddenly she gets a missed call from geet...
annie - bhai me apse baad me baat karu..wo meri mall wali frnd call kar rahi hai...
maan heart pounded...but he controlled himself..
n halfheartly cut d call...
n continued wid his work...checking d time in every 5 min as if it vil move fast...lol

11:10
annie n geet reached at d same time...
ranbir was already waiting for dem...
ranbir was delighted looking geet so beautifull...

annie hand shaked wid ranbir..wid formal intro..
nisha n mayank also came within 5 min...
annie introduced herself wid dem...
as usual ms.NUPUR NHUSHAN...aur time...as dey all knew...
11:35
maan called annie...
n d same moment nupur reached dere...
annie - ji bhai...me phoch gayi hu...sare frnds bhi aagaye hai...
...
geet - omg..nupur...
maan's heart missed a bit hearing her voice...
nupur - kya huva...wid conscious expressions...
geet - tu lipstic lagana bhool gayi...ohh no..ab mayank kya hoga...
every1 strted laughing...
maan too smiled loving her naughtyness...
nupur made a baby face...
mayank - geet ki bachee...jab tera aayega na..chun chun ke badla lunga...

geet blushed...unlike her...
everyone shocked watching her blushed...
nisha checked her forehead...
maan was getting curious...
annie - ab..bhai..me aapse baad me baat karti hu..bye..
b4 maan could say anything..she cut d call...
inshort MAAN KA POPAT HO GAYA...LOL
...

mayank was delighted was to see nupur looking pretty...

nisha caught him..he blushed...
nupur - me kaisi lag rahi hu...
ranbir - bahot sari lag rahi hai...ab chal
nupur made a face..
annie - tum bahot pyari lag rahi ho...

nupur kissed her cheek...
geet - tere kiss ka adress wrong ho gaya...
n winks at mayank...
mayank rolled his eyes...
dey moved on...

PRECAP : ms.chocolaty..my ms.chocolaty...omg...

 
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