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part 62 ...

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awesome part...loved how the gang trapped hammer...and maneet cute phone talk...update soon

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It was awesom misthy.. Smile Thanx 4 d PM

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Geet's gang is full of life!!! acha phasaya uss kabab mein haddi koLOL
geet feels Dev Singh Khurana is a "king size" name , oh dear then what about your sweet heart haWink I wonder when she will come to know about Annie's this brother!!!
Maneet romantic chat was so sweetEmbarrassed but precap????

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        Tongue thnq for d lovely comments Tongue            

           part 63


neeva - ok sir..me aaj hi manali ki ticket book karwati hun..
maan - if any prob occurs..i vil reach dere soon as possible..
adi - right sir..
saying so adi n neeva made deir way out...
just den his cell rang...

maan - hello...

wattt...????????????????
he shouted in shock...wen he heard litle relac**t voice of his bro...
dev - bro...relax..she is fine now...
maan - par dev..ye sab achanak...
dev - bro..nt ko gussa aa gaya tha..aur gusse me..it was a small accident..relax..
maan seriously - dev..r u happy wid dis relationship...
dev - bro..i love her...n i know how much she loves...its just dat i told her wee need to give time for dis relationship...
maan - watz wrong wid dat..
dev - she misunderstood me...usse laga ke im breaking up wid her...
maan - dev..can u handle or shud i cum dere..
dev - bro..i can handle...bas aap dadi ko kuchh mat...
maan - no dev..its quite serious..i hav to..
dev - bro plz...dadi vil b tensed...i vil sort out..
maan - tumhe to chot nahi lagi na...
dev - no bro..im fine..

saying so dev hanged...only to see nt laying on bed wid sum injuries n eyes closed due to medication...

dev sudden call made maan litle worried for dev n d relationship he is having...
is she good for dev...
he need to hav a look on them...thinking so he decided to hav a chat wid annie n let her talk to him n coz he knows dev iis more open to annie compare to him...
n once again he got buried in his files...

...
EVENING 4pm

geet sitting in her bedroom surrounded by annie nupur n nisha...
boys had no entry 2day...
nupur - tune dresses select ki sare functions ke liye...
geet - umm...shadi ki dress select kar li hai..baki functions se ke liye nahi abhi tak...
nisha - omg..show us na...jaldi jaldi..
geet laughed - dikha rahi hu re..is ladki ko har chiz ki jaldi rehti hai...
annie - sivay shadi ke...
all had a laughter...
geet took out her wedding lehenga selected by maan on deir shopping day...
d moment d wedding dress reached to deir eyes...
every1 mouth went right open as deir eyes twinkled watching d dress...
it was like she herself going to b married...
dat beautifull it was...
it delicate work...d combination of colors...d heavy white designing on her blue lehenga n her white delicate choli wid a diamond clip at back looked flawless...
n d neted white n kind of blue dupatta giving perfect lokk to it..
like d dress has been brought from any princess or sumthing...
annie nisha n nupur literally pounced on dress...while geet rolled her eyes...
nisha - omggg.who selected dis...where did u get dis...
annie - im just flattened on ur choice ya...
geet - meri choice nahi hai..wo to maa...
omggg...
wat was she about to speak...maan...no way..she cnt tell dem about maan like dis..so sudden...it should b special wen she vil told her frnd about her love...
nupur - maa..rano aunty ne...wowww..aunty ki choice to kamal ki hai...me apni shadi ke liye bhi rano aunty ko shopping ke liye le jayngi...hoyyyeee...
every1 rolled deir eyes...
nisha - dis is perfe4ct for wedding...btw..baki functions ke liye...
geet - we vil go day aftr tom for shopping..wat say..???
nisha - y not tom..
geet - arre kal karan n shweta se milne jayenge..i wanna see wat r dey planning..i want everything to b perfect...
annie - ok..i vil inform karan dat we r cuming tom..
nisha - n i vil let boys no...
nupur - he he...ranbir or mayank jalke koyala ban gaye ho gaye..ye soch soch kar ke hum yahan kitna maja kar rahe honge...
nisha - let dem...
gals had a laughter...
just den rajji came in running jumping on bed...
nupur joined her jumping on bed...
while remaining gals rolled deir eyes at d two kids...lolll
rajji - di..me bhi aungi shopping k liye...
geet - okk bachha...ofcorse u vil cum wid us...
rajji wid wide smile - btw..me ye batane aayi thi..nisha didi ke ghar se call aya tha..wo unka no kab se try kar rahe hai..par tum respond hi nahi kar rahi...
dats wen all gals checked deir mobs...
nisha saw 6 missed calls from home...
nupur n geet had no missed calls...
while annie was litle shocked to see 9 missed calls from maan...
all gals conforming deir plans..left for deir respective places..
d moments annie left from deir she immediately called maan..
maan angrily- annie where were u...
annie - sorry bro..cell silent mode pe..so sorry..
maan - cum home fast..i need to talk to u..
annie - m cuming bro..is sumthing serious..
maan - yaah it is..cum fast...
annie - m on my way bhai..
saying so both hanged..

...

geet sitting her room staring at her dress gifted by maan...
d romantic moments of dem while shopping flashed in front of her eyes leaving her turning dark shade of pink..
d way he wrote his name on her skin...
or rather say carved his name on her heart for ever n ever...
it was too mesmerizing...
she hide her face in dat dupatta blushing to herself..
she wanted to see him..talk to him..feel him...
she suddenly missed him like anything...
all she wanted was he at dat moment..
she picked up her cell n called him...
in excitement...she tapped her finger on table..
her sudden and unknown act made her nail hit badly on table breaking d nail...
she winced in pain..
just den he received her call n heard her paining wince...
d injury left her shaken n crying...
d nail broke so badly dat her inner skin could feel d cold air burning it like hell...
she winced again...AAHHH...
maan got worried - kya huva tumhe..r u ok..
she cried - hhmm...
maan could feel her cracking voice in pain..
his heart sunk thinking wat wud hav happened to her..y is she in pain...
he can handle any prob of life...
but no way he can handle a pinch of pain to his angel...
her litle pain gives him unlimited pain in heart like his whole world stops...
maan - jaan...he uttered barely not able to bear her crying voice...
maan - jaan..r u crying..kya huva..tum thik ho na..??
geet crying - maan..chot lag gayi...dard ho raha hai..
saying so she started crying like small innocent baby...
maan - jaan plz...rona band karo..im cuming dere ok..im cuming right now...
geet still crying - hhmm...jaldi aana...
maan imediately picking d keys ran out...
dadi saw him running for his life...
she tried to call him but he was already too far...
maan - me bus aa raha hu..dnt cry shona plz..
she was still like crying..but she liked d word SHONA from his mouth for her...
she wiped her tears...but new trace of tears made its way as a drop of blood came out of nail injury...

...
he totally forgot about his chat wid annie...dat he had called her home to meet him...
n now he himself was out...
d moment he reached near her home..
he instanly made his way to her bedroom hiding from watchmen..
d moment he juped from window...
he saw her sitting on bed crying...blewing over d nail softly to reduce d pain...
as she saw him..she stared crying like a baby again...
he immediately made himself sat near her having a close view of her nail...
he could feel her pain dat she was bearing...
he softly blewed it to reduce d pain n feel better...
geet - maan dard ho raha hai...
he was feeling like he himself is injured...
maan - jaan..plz rona band karo..me kuchh karta hu...
he immediately searched for an aid box...
cleaned it wid detol n placed a cream on it...
to reduce burning sensation...
he was continuously blewing while all dis process...
aftr appying cream...
he looked at her face only to find an eyes closed geet biting her lower lip to stop d tears which wanted to cum out...
he wish he would hav sum magic to make her painless in second...
he slowly uttered - jaan...
she opened her eyes...tears rolled out...
maan kissed her tears...
she made baby face...
maan - jaan..kya karti rehti ho..chot kaise lag gayi..
she cried - galati se...
he couldn't see her cry like dis...
he pulled her on his lap completely..making her sit on his lap..
she made herself comfortable in his arms...
she placed her knees on his chest n her toes n feet resting on his lap...
while she encircled her hands over his neck..hugging him tight as possible...
she completely hide herself into him...
maan knew she is in pain...
he encircled his 1 hand over her wist..hugging her tight..pulling her more into him..
while his other handslipped over her neck inside her hairs..giving a soft massage over her scalp...
she closed her eyes feeling litle better...
for dose moments he completely forgot of everything in d world...
he even forgot to carry his cell...
all he knew was his princess was not well...n dats all mattered for him at dat moment...
he hugged her more tight..n kept kissing d delicate spots of her forehead continuously..
she felt to relief...
d expressions of pain from her face changed ino peace...
while he continuously kept carrasing her delicate forehead wid his lips..
maan - jaan..
she buried her face deep inside d hollow of his neck...nuzzling her nose over his skin...
geet - hmm..
maan reacted to her touch n hugged her tightly as a response...
maan - dard ho raha hai shona...
geet smiled loving his care for her n top of d word shona...
geet - abhi thik lag raha hai..par tabhi bahot dard ho raha tha...
she completed d sentence and 1 more line of tears formed making his shirt wet...
he nuzzled her more into him...signalling her not to cry...
maan - achha..ab rona nahi..me hu na...mera shona...
she liked d words mera shona too much...
she kissed his neck n hugged him tight...
he suddenly remembered of d injuries n pain she passed through wen she hearted herself...
how much she must hav beard dat time...
she cnt bear dis much pain n hurting herself wud hav been so difficult for her...
al because of him...
he cursed himself 1 more time..
n kissed her hairs as her complete face was deep buried inside his neck...
...
dey remained in same position for quite long...
wen she noticed she has not spoken any word from so long...
an her peacefull n soft heartbeats made him realize dat she has fallen in sleep...

"..jaan..tum apna khayal kyu nahi rakhti...haan...tumhari ye dard meri jaan le leta hai geet...mere shona ko taklif ho ye mujhe bilkul achha nahi lagta..me nahi bardasht kar pata...u r my life shona...plz apna khayal rakha karo.."..he pleaded in his mind...

afr sum time...
wen he realized dat she is in deep sleep...
he slowly made her lay on bed in same position she was sleeping hanging on him...
n den slowly he starightened her knees n removed her hands from his neck...
he made her relax properly on bed wid himself bending on her...
he kissed her forehead lovingly...
he loved to see his geet sleeping so calmly...
n her small innocent closed his felt like a small kid is sleeping...
he very gently tucked d loose traces of her behind her ear wid his fingers..n kissed her ear...
she made a soft movement in sleep whispering..." sone do na baba.."
he smiled...her alwz using d word baba..makes him happy...
he likes it..
he lovingly pulled d duvet on her till neck..obviosuly taking care of her finger which was injured...
he kissed d finger lovingly n too too gently..not to hurt her...
" plz take care baby..plz..."..he whispered too emotionally..
n kissed d delicate end of her lips...
a soft smile curved on her lips wid his touch...
he was just waiting for dat smile of hers..
he smile at dat smile of hers..taking a relief dat she is fine...
n left half-heartedly...

QUESTION : how vil dev deal wid his love life...???

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