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LOVE...beyonds...LIMITS thread 1 completed !! (Page 14)

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
OMG !!! loved it angelic Clap
hayeeeee kia conversation thi .... very enjoyable .... can't w8 for next update .... Big smile
updateeeeeeeeeee soon !!!!! Dancing

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Great updates...:))
poor maan geet ke pyaar mein he gets distracted
love the precap 
Plz cont soon and

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anuandavi

Hey, where is the index? Have you not written the index then do it please. It becomes easy.


Give us an index pleasssssssssseeeeeeee. It really becomes easy dear.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
ANGELIC not fair we all r w8ng for update ..... Cry

thoda time nikal k update kar do yaar .... Day Dreaming

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged

IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me.. 

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...





                Part 8


LOCATION KHURANA MANSION

maan reached home...straight to his room...
changed into vest n tracks...
n went to gym...
practicing his punches...

his muscles were perfectly shaped...toned muscles...
body was seducing like anything...
perfest shape of bycpes...
well shaped n prominent chest n curves...
he was practicing as if never b4...
he never came to gym at dis hour of day...
but he was nowhere in selfcontrol 2day...
sum1 else controlled him 2day...
he was physical present in d gym but not mentally...
her smile...her muddy clothes in rain...her shoes...her ear-rings...curli hairs...her
 cheeks..
her lips..her almond eyes...her white skin..her saree...her featherely softed waist...her breaths..her scared face...her expressions...
he was getting it allover again...
he punched as hardly as possible...
but nothing seemed to work...
...
its a most romantic emotion of d world...
it can heppen wid anybody...
d world seems more beautifull...u feel like smiling unneccessarily...nothing else matters for u...ur world strts revolving around dat person...
but it was definitely difficult in case of MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

he stopped punching...
closed his eyes tight..
tried his level best not to think of her...
just 1 sec he again strted thinking of her
he was all d way smiling wen she was around...
his eyes felt pleasnt looking her..as if dey were waiting for her from so much of yrs...
his hearted thudded..strted beating fast...
as if dat heart was just waiting for her to beat from yrs...
he was still not able to sense why hw was thinking fo her...
he was not normal enough to make out dat it is love at 1st sight...
he was MAAN SINGH KHURANA...n in his dictionary...d word LOVE doesn't exist...
den y...
y is he thinking of her at every single second of his life..he wondered..
he opened his eyes...
he was all sweat wid practicing...
he took his sweaty vest out...
his body looked more prominent aftr pratice...
his hairs were almost drenched wid sweat...
he moves his hairs behind...
...
came to room...pickd d towel...
stood infront of mirror...drying himself...
he remebered her wen she was dancing in rain...wid so much of happiness...
he moved to bathroom...
puts on d shower...
n stand below it...
d drops of water...were making him wet every second...

his eyes were closed...
he was feeling as if he is geeting wet in dat rain wid her...
d way she was enjoying d rain...
he almost smiled...
his life was almost stopped...
he didn't seem to notice anything...unaware of everything dat was happening wid him...
all he could think to picture her in his mind...
...
he kept thinking n thinking...

HANDA HOUSE

geet done wid her dinner...
n moved to herbedroom taking chocolate milkshake in her hand...

maan was very well knew...he cnt get out off his thouts...
he called d dictative agency to get information about her...
d ditactige gave her all d information about her...
GEET HANDA
DAUGHTER OF HANDA'S...
ONE OF D FAMOUS FAMILIES OF DELHI LIKE KHURANA'S
AGE - 20
COMPLETING MBA
MOB NO - xxx
He cut d call..
he was happy...
dat he know her now...
who is she...
wat is she...

9:30
GEET iS DONE WID CHOCOLATE MILKSHAKE...
she is quite forgot mall scene...
she is thinking for calling annie ti info her about sunday's plan...
she called her number...

here maan came out of room for dinner...
passing from annie's room...
annie's phone rang...
maan stopped...
maan - annie...annie...tumhara phone...annie...
annie - bhai me washroom me hu..plz jara dekhiye na kiska phone hai...
maan shook his head..
entered annie's room..
till d time he reach ...call cut..
geet called again..
maan was about to leave...
d phone rang again...
maan picked d mobile...
d name was diplaying...GEET...


maan's eyes popped...
m dreaming..m definitely dreaming...
he thout of not receiving d call...
but his heart didn't allow him to do so..
he picked d call...
b4 he could say a word...
geet - aye lo...etni der lagti hai...phone uthane me...

maan was dumb stuck hearing her voice...
he knew its her...
a smile teased his lips...
geet kept blabbering...
geet - pata hai...me kab se try kar rahi hu...annie kahin tumhari kanpoor line kharab to nahi ho gayi na...
n started laughing...
maan almost widely smiled...unlike him..
geet - aye lo..ab koi jawab nahi...jarur muh pe chocolate hogi hai na...pata hai mene b abhi chocolate khayi..its was yummyyy...omg m still lost in its test...
maan's mouth went dry...
b4 he could say a word..
geet - mujhe pata tha...achha wo sab chhodo...tum ne etni der se kyu phone uthaya...achha wo sab chhodo...kal ki puri planning ho gayi...v vil rock..yeppy...
maan smiled at d word yeppy...
it was same fresh as she spoke in d morning while playing...
geet - kal subah hum XXX ke yahan milenege...actually wo humare group ki sabse fav place hai...hum hamesha wohi milte hai...to kal subah 11 baje tu wahan aa jana...der mat karna...

maan's wanted to say atleast a word...
geet - haan..waise humesha der to mehi karti hu..mujhe na subah ke time pe sona me etna maza aata hai..omg...i just love it...subah ki kiran chehre par aaye aur pillow me sir chhupana...he he...
maan - aa...

geet - waise me kahan thi..haan...11 baje ke baad...hum sab bahot maza karenge...lunch mere frnd ki taraf se treat hai...aaj usse fasa diya mene..he he...

maan smiles..making sure she is mad...
geet - haan to me kya keh rahi thi...
(maan thinking...kab se tum hi toh keh rahi ho)
geet - lunch ke baad movie...na shahrukh..no salman..lol...ab tum puchhogi aisa kyu to darasl ek frnd ko salman pasand hai aur ek ko shahrukh..to fight rokne ke liye...haan...aur raat me...meri taraf se party hai...cool na...it vil b fun...but its a surprise types...
maan thinks..surprise...
geet - i thought so...tum yahi soch rahi ho na ke kya surprise hai..mene unme se kisiko nahi bataya...ab wo log puri raat nahi so payenge...he he he...
maan thinks..sach me pagal hai..etni naughty...
geet - wo to me hu...
maan smiled as if she read his mind...
geet - achha chalo me tumhe bata hi deti hu...actually mene socha hai ke i vil keep masks outside.every 1 has too wear it n den cum in...so no1 vil recognize any 1...dey u shud hav to choose 1 person..dat may b a boy or a gal..DAT PERSON VIL BECUM UR DATE...N U HAV TO STAY WID DAT PERSON THROUGHOUT D PARTY...overall it vil b fun...wat u say...i know tum...
maan - me kuchh bolu...
...


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 05 March 2012 at 11:34pm

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
lovelyyy update dear 
cont sooon
i do read ur Update on fb also ...........
thnx for d PM Hug

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