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IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me.. 

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...





                Part 7


maan in conference room...
maan - hello mr.sinha...m glad u r here...ms.gee...

he paused...
neeva looked surprisingly at him...
mr.snha also a bit surprised...
maan singh khurana n talking wrong...dat was sumthing impossible...
but it was happening...wid maan singh khurana...
maan - i mean ms.neeva vil present d introductiry part n myself vil present d important points...
neeva continued wid her part...
maan was nowhere listening...
he was still lost in her looks in dat saree...
he woud hav never imagoned dat sumbody can look so beautifull in saree...
though she was wearing a black n white saree...
but every single color he found in her...how...he wondered...
dere was pink..dere was red...dere was blue in her ear-rings...
he was dreaming of her as if she only giving d presentation...
a smile teased his lips..
neeva noticed he is smiling at her...

she too smiled...
maan controlled himself...
neeva is done wid part
...
its was maan's turn..
he was nervous for d 1st time in life...
he was scared he may speak up sumthing rubbish...he may say her name...
he was fumbling...
he was smiling unneccessarily...

he suhow completed d important point...
handed over remaining part to adi...
adi completed his remaing meeting..
mean while...
he hurrily moved to house...

...
geet reached hom...
hugged mumma...
showed her d saree she was wearing...
rano liked d saree..
geet - mumma mujhe bhook lagi hai...
rajji rolled her eyes n went to her room...
rano - mera bachha...abhi kahana laga deti hu...
geet - mumma mujhe chocolate ki bhook lagi hai...
rano - aise bhook ka naam hota hai kay..chocolate ki bhook...bachha khana kha le fir chocolate kha lena...
geet made a baby face...
n moved to papaji
sat on papaji's lap making baby face...
papaji - kay huva bachha..kisne meri bachee ka dil dukhaya...
rano came dere
rano - nahi jo woh...
geet - papaji mujhe chocolate khani hai...
papaji took her to d kitchen...
n give a big chocolate from fridge...

geet smilingly took d chocolate n moved to her room...
 
rano - aap hi ne usse ziddi bana diya hai...ab woh khana nahi khayegi...
papaji - khayegi..me khilaunga usse...bass...
rano rolled her eyes n continued wid her work...

geet changed d saree...
went on conference call wid nupur,mayank,nisha n ranbir...
geet - heyya...
mayank - tu zinda hai...????


geet - ha ha..joke of d day...
nisha - tu colge kyu nahi aaj...
ranbir - agar nahi aana tha..to batana to tha...hum b nahi aate na...
geet - actually me aaj shopping ke liye gayi thi...
nupur - shopping...wowww...mayank mujhe b shopping karni hai...
geet giggles...
mayank - geet ki bachee..tu mil...nupur uske bhai ke shadi...
nupur makes a face..
nisha - tu bolti to hum b chalte na shopping ke liye...canteen me bethe bethe pak gaye...
geet - kyu lec nahi the kya...
ranbir - tere bina lec...r u serious...
mayank - tumhari vajah se meri lec miss hi gaye...
geet - oyye..hoyye..mela bachha...
ranbir -  kya kya kharida...
nupur - oyye chamche tu chup kar...puchh to aise lag raha hai jaise ladki hai...
nisha - m sure geet ne saree li hogi...

all strts laughing...
geet makes baby face... - wo mumma...
all strts laughing loudly...
nupur - wo pata hai..isliye kehati hu..jara ladkiyon wali harkate kiya kar...taki mumma ko jabardasti na karni pade...
mayank - kyu bigad rahi hai usse...pure group me ek wohi ladki hai jo normal hai...
nisha - mayank..monday ke lec attend karne hai na...??
mupur - nishu...monday ko iska aisa band bajayenge na...ke
geet - nupur...teri daat me b shadi hi hoti hai na...band n all
mayank strts laughing...
ranbir - kyu meri nupur ko paka rahe ho...
nupur - i love u ranbir..ek tu hi hai...

nisha softly smiles..
mayank - dekh rahi hai na nishu...hum dono to ho gaye paraye..
geet - me hu na...
ranbir - aur me b...
nupur - aur me b...ye ranbir to pagal hai...
geet - aye lo..abhi toh...
mayank - geet tu kab se nupur ki baton par yakin karne lagi...
nupur - achha ji..tum milo muje..ek kiss b nahi...she pauses...
nupur bhushes...
all except mayank strts giggling...
nupur - i mean woh..
mayank keeps quite
geet - mayank..esliye jada bol mat...warna tujhe...kisss nahi milegi
n strts laughing again...
mayank - bye...
all - byyye...
mayank - oyye...me sach me nahi ja raha...
geet - heyy guys...aaj me mall me gayi thi na...
ranbir - nishu..mujhe thodi der baat utha dena...dossing offf
geet made a face...
nupur - mujhe b...
geet rolled her eyes...
nishu - par mujhe kaun uthyega...
all 3 gigleing...
geet - me nahi pakaungi promise...
mayank - chocolate ki kasam kha...
geet thinks for a min...n den say...choclate ki kasam...halfheartedly...
all 4 now curious to know...
geet - haan...jab me mall gayi thi na...to ek ladki se frndship ho gayi...
ranbir - omg..kaun hai woh...kya naam hai...
mayank n nisha - muh band karo...laal tapak rahi hai...
geet laughs...
geet - actually wo last month hi india aayi hai...her name is anwesha...as in annie...
mayank - hmmm...
nupur rubbing her teeth - kya hm...
mayank shuts up
ranbir - kal ka kya planning he..teri vajah se aaj ka din pura flop ho gaya...we were bored like hell...
geet - kal hum ghumne chalte hai..usse tum sab se b mila dungi...
nisha - par wo aayegi kya...
nupur - agar usne mana kiya toh...
geet - actuall ussi ne kaha ke kal ke liye kuchh plan karte...
mayank - thik hai...to fir kal subah 11 baje..wat say...v vil meet at our usual place...
nisha - dats superb...
ranbir - lunch b bahar karenge..it vil b fun...
nupur - haan..aur ranbir ki taraf se sabke liye party raat me...
ranbir makes a face..
geet - ok done...kal 11 baje...aftr lunch..movie...yeppy...
nupur - omg...shahrukh ki movie...
nisha - no..ways..salman ki movie...omg...
ranbir rolled his eyes...
mayank - great...dat means..movie cancel...
geet - best option...giggling...
ranbir - salman aur sharukh chhodke aur koi movie dekhnge..taki no fight...
nupur - ranbi tune finally school jana shuru kar diya na..tabhi aisi akalmandi wali baten karne laga hai...
ranbir makes a face
ranbir - ab tu to join karne se rahi..to mene kar liya...
nishu - mayank dekh ranbir kya keh raha teri miss kisss ke bare me...
geet - wo to sirf kisss ki hi tuitions leti hai...mayank sir se...

mayank n nupur blushed..rolling deir eyes...
nupur - ok ok...movie ke baad...ghar vapas...
all 3 shocked...
nishu - wo raat me tu party dene wali thi uska kya...
nupur - oyye me kab denewali thi...aajkal tune din me b pina shuru kar diya...
ranbir started laughing - good one meri sherni...
geet - ok...party meri taraf se...but party vil b special...hmmm...v vil hav fun...

ranbir - wat fun...tere dimag me kya pak raha hai...
nishu - aaj koi mall me mila tha kya jisne tera screw aur b dhila kar diya...
mayank - kya baat hai nishu..lage raho...
nupur - ok.keep it as a surprise...
geet - it is...ok den..see u tom 11...
mayank - zinda rehna..
nisha - annie ko b bata dena...
ranbir - bye all...
nupur - haan haan..jaldi soja..kal jo kharcha hoga uske baat tuse 2 din nind nahi aayegi...
ranbir - tu mil kal...mrs.kiss sharama..i mean...mrs.mayank sharma...
nupur blushes...
mayank - abbe..meri kyu baja raha hai...
...
wis chit chat..
finally call overs...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 05 March 2012 at 11:29pm

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
hey...its good1..
plz pm me too...Smile

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
lovely update so geet ziddi hain..............
maan aur stammering..............lagtha hain geet ki wajay se pagal ho jayega........
geet ki dosti sab ke saath bahut achi hain.............
ab dhekna yeh hain ki anni ki wajay se kaise maan aur geet kareeb athey hain............
precap acha lag raha hain...........
pl cont soon

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
hey its too good...poor maan geet ke pyar mein distracted.....loved the friends chit-chat.....waiting 4 maneet call.....update soon...thanx 4 the pm

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lovely update

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awesome update .lovely....
poor maan geet ke pyar mein distracted.
precap nice. 
pls cont soon.

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Wow yaar. Nice update. You have shown a beautiful friendship here.. And Maan ki to band baj rahi he. Har jagah and har kisi me use Geet nazar aa rahi he. WOW.

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Embarrassedhey its was totally awesome lokking forward to next part plz update soonEmbarrassed

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