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loved both the parts...

annie n karan...nice...

dev is concerned abt his relationship...but maan made him understand,...

loved the convo between maan n geet...

continue soon...

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Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment...
Here is another update for you all...
Just Part 54 now!!!!  n Part 55 tonight!!!!
 
 
*Part 54*

 

he fell on bed on his stomach..hugging d pillow tight...

 

...

here geet hid herself compeltely inside d duvet...

zalli kahin ki...

geet tu bhi na...awahhi...chapad chapad karti rehti hai...

kya soch rahe honge mere bare me...

jarur me majak banayenge...

 

she instantly msged him...

 

"...KHABARDAR JO MERA MAJAK UDANE KE BARE ME SOCHA BHI TOH..."

 

MAAN READ D MSG...

smiled...

didn't reply back..which was a tease in her language...

 

geet..." dekha..reply bhi nahi kiya..jarur mujhpar has rahe honge..me bhi na..express ki

 

tarah shuru hoti hu to bolti hi jati hu...aur wo..dusht kahin ke mujhpar has rahe

 

honge...babaji(looking up inside d duvet)..."

 

...

 

morning in college...

hameer's anger was breaking all d limits...

his read furious eyes wud kill anybody on d sopt...

he was not able to bear d fact dat...she didn't cum to his party...

he waited for her...waited like hell till d moment party ended...

geet was d reason he held d party in matter of few hors...

he had no reason..he created d reason n held d party...

n she

she didn't cum for party...

" how dare u not listen to me GEET ..??...how dare u..."

his anger was becuming worst wid each passing second for geet...

but no momber of group is reached yet...

his was beaking...his coll was breaking...

he wasn't able to bear d fact...

y geet didn't listen to him...

yyy bloody yyy

geet shud listen to me...

 

" to kya huva ke hum etne saal door rahe hai...use pata hai na ke wo mere liye kya mayane

 

rakhti hai..fir bhi..wo aise kaise kar sakti hai..aur agar uspar chillaunga to uski pyari

 

si ankhon me ansoon aa jayenge..wo rote huye achee nahi likhti...par use datana to hoga

 

na..warna wo agli baar meri baat kaise manegi..."

 

his thouts were running like express in his mind..while his eyes were stilled on d

 

door...waiting for her...

 

his thouts distracted by nisha's entry wid annie...

hameer instantly made himself comfortable...

acting as if he is fine..nothing happened...

he smiled at d galz...

gals too relucantly smiled at him n took deir places...

hameer - heyy gals..bas tum dono..baki sab kahan hai..mayank..geet...

nisha - wo sab bhi aate hi honge..lec ke liye abhi time hai na...

hameer - ohh..how was ur day ystrday...u guys didn't cum for party..i was litle

 

disappointed...

annie could feel litle disappointment in his voice...

annie - actually..i went to dinner wid a frnd of mine..so baki sab bhi nahi aaye...

hameer looked at annie wid litle anger..slight..so dat she could not understand...

 

" ohh..so she is d reason..tabhi me sochu..meri geet etni achee hai..wo jarur atti..par

 

ye usko group..galat logon se dosti karli hai usne..i dnt like it.geet ko unse dosti

 

todni hogi..i dnt like dem..."

 

hameer's thout distracted by nisha's voice...

nisha - kahan kho gaye...

hameer - nahi kuchh nahi..i really wanted u all to cum..

annie - may b sum other time...

 

right den...

geet entered wid ranbir,mayank n nupur...

hameer's eyes glitered wid sudden happiness which didn't go unnoticed by annie...

she could feel sumthing uncertain..sumthing different in his face..specially eyes...

 

nupur - ranbir tujhe apna sir pyara nahi kya...

ranbir - aur apne baal..right...

mayank - vil u guys just stop now...

nisha - kya huva..

geet - puchh mat yaar...kaunsi bure time pe ye log mujhe gate ke idhar mile..wahan se

 

jhagad rahe...

nupur - ye sab ranbi ka fault hai...

ranbir - oyye chudail..apni galati to tujhe kabhi dikhati nah..hai na...

annie - chill guys..stop fighting now..

 

hameer inerrupted - hi guys...

all 4 gave him a smile - hi..

hameer - hi geet..tum kal party me nahi aayi..i waited for u..i mean i waited for u

 

all...

geet clearing her throat - sorry hameer..i was litle busy ystrday...

hameer suddenly - busy..wid whom..

geet surprisingly - sorry..??

hameer smiled..easing situation - i mean..u all were together ystrday..roaming n all..i

 

meant in dat way...

ranbir didn't let geet speak - yes..we were..me n geet were gone for shopping...

hameer expression were filled wid anger n hatredness for ranbir..

like he could kill ranbir on d sopt right den...

geet didn't deny..as she was also searching for sum excuse..n ranbirr helped her..

geet - ya..we were gone to shopping..

hameer felt sad - i so happily gave cards..u wud hav cum atleast for sum time..

mayank - may b sum other time..

 

...

b4 hameer could speak further...

d lecturer entered n deir chat went to an end...

but hameer's anger tookover all his mind...

he didn't like ranbir's closeness towrds geet...

he didn't like geet taking his side...

dis is wrong...

geet shud only take my side...geet..

i hav to scold her for being so ignorent towrds me...

 

...

while maan's morning went very well...

whole night..her words..kept buzzing in his mind like a beautifull lyrical song...

n he slept smiling..whole night..loving dis new feelings to d core...

aftr gym wid dev...dev was on time 2day

maan had his breakfast silently...not letting any1 doubt his different behaviour...

he silently made his way to office...

now-a-days...

staff started liking dis new sweet...non-angry maan...

except sum particar incidents..he wud hardly scold anybody...

while neeva was 9th cloud..for maan being so sweet to her...

he didn't scold her..rather smile..whenever he was alone in cabin...

she didn't like ystrday wen maan went out at lunch time so suddenly...

dat too for 3 hrs..n wen he came back..for her shock..he was changed into different

 

dress...

but she consoled herself thinking..he might hav went home..

neeva knocked

maan - cum in

neeva - so mr.khanna had called ystrday..but as u were not in office..he talked to me

 

about him project..he wanted sum changes in his project...he sounded very urgent..as u

 

were not having any meeting 2dya..so i told mr.khanna to meet u 2day at 3:30 in KC...

maan - neeva..i guess u hav forgot..im d boss here n u r my secretary..who hav gave u d

 

right to held a meeting without asking me or adi...

neeva looked at him heart broken...

she was so hapy dat he is changing sumwhere...but in another seconds..he behaves as if i

 

do not exist in his personal life...

i think im expecting too much..

how can i forget he is MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

i shud give him more time...i shud strt dreaming without his interest...

...

neeva - m really sorry sir..adi sir was again ver busy..m really sorry..i vil not repeat

 

it again...

maan - u can leave..

neeva - yes sir..

...

maan sighed resting his head on back chair..." i wanted to meet geet..dis stupid urgent

 

meeting...she is so careless about ur food...god dis gal is making me insane..she n her

 

window..both making me mmad day by day...i was too rude to neeva..dere must be sumthing

 

importnt otherwise..she wud hav not done dat..."

 

...

 

 

aftr lectures..in canteen...

 

mayank - jisne jitna research kiya hai..i want all material in colge tom..no1 vil

 

miss..fair enough...

geet thinking.." heyy babaji..mene to shuruvat bhi nahi ki hai..eska matlab aaj raat

 

mujhe sara kaam karna padega..maan meri madat karenge na.madat..har waqt mujhe chidhate

 

rahenge..kal ki baat ko lec..duffer..."

annie - kya soch rahi hai geet...apni shakal dekh..kaise bana rakhi hai..

geet - nahi..woh..actually me soch rahi thi..parso nahi ho sakta..

mayank - bilkul nahi geet..bahot ho gaya tera..etna achha topic diya...aur ab nakhre kar

 

rahi hai..

nupur - mayank..mene bhi thoda hi research kiya hai...

ranbir gave a evil smile to nupur...while nupur slapped his arms...

nisha - im done wid my work..yeppyyy

annie - m almost done..made a baby face..

mayank - to bachhe dono chidiya..nupur n geet..both of u..i want ur pen-drives tom in my

 

hand...or u both r dead...

both nodded like puppets...

geet - guys..we shud leave now..mujhe ghar jakar khana bhi khana hai..

all looked at geet litle confused...

d gal who loves junk food..is talking about eating at home...

right den..dey noticed her change in dressing dress...

dey didn't noticed till yet...

ranbir - wat d freak is it now..????

geet - wat...?????

annie - tere kapdo k kya huva..

nupur giggled - mumma ne sare kapde fek diye honge...

mayank - waise tu isme jyada achhee lag rahi hai..

ranbir teased - aur ladki bhi..

geet slapped hi arms..

ranbir - y is every1 behind my arms..school ki bell hai kya..jo bhi aata hai baja ke

 

chala jata hai...

nisha gave a weired look... - joke of century...oughhh..grow up ranbi..

ranbir - im grown up..u need to grow up..

geet - i think we were talking about my dress n not ranbir's empty head...

 

hameer entered...

hameer - wat r u guys discussing...

mayank - nothing much..just geet's dressing style...our eyes so used to watch her in

 

western clothes...she is looking very different in indian wears...

hameer smiled - dats true...geet is looking very pretty...

geet gave a normal smile..not showing much interest...

nisha - true..geet..tere pe kuchh bhi achha lagega...

hameer - i totally agree wid nisha...

geet - enough of me now...shall we discuss about project..mayank u were saying

 

sumthing...

nupur - mayank u vil help me na..

mayank - do i hav an option...

nupur giggled - no...

mayank - den...

all laughed...

ranbir - geet..tujhe bhi help chahiye kya...

hameer didn't like dat...who is he to help her...

 

geet thinking.." agar ranbir ne meri help ki..to maan kaise help karenge..aur is buddhu

 

ko tu kuchh aata jata hai nahi...aur maan ke sath time spend karne ka bahana bhi mil

 

jayega...geet..tu bhi jhalli hai bilkul..maan ke sath time spend karne ke liye tujhe

 

bahane ki jarurat thodi hai..."

 

hameer - geet..u look lost..even i can help u..if u need...

ranbir coughed...

geet smiled - hameer..i think u shud concentrate on ur project 1st...aur ranbir veerji

 

meri help karne wale hai..mene unhe pehle hi bol diya...

ranbir - ok..par aaj complete kar dena..

geet - haan re...i think we shud leave now...

hameer - um..geet..can i hav ur cell phone no..if u dnt mind...

annie looked at him suspiciously...

geet smiled - hameer..we r not good frnd enough..its hardly 2 days i know u..and i dnt

 

give my no easily...wen we vil b good frnds..i myself vil give my no to u...plz dnt take

 

me wrong...

hameer - no ofcroz not...i understand..i vil wait for d day..

geet smiled...

 

"..nUMBER to tum dogi geet..aaj nahi to ka..me halat hi aise bana dunga ke tum aakar apna

 

no mujhe dogi...dats my promise to u hunny..."...hameer thout...

 

...

aftr noon...

 

maan thinking..."ye ladki na..m sure isne abhitak lunch nahi kiya hoga...i better msg

 

her..."

 

maan immediately took out his mob...

 

" jaan..hav ur luch on time...n i mean on time...- MAAN "

 

geet in her bedroom...

received d msg...she smiled cutely...

replied back...

 

" aur aap bhi lunch time pe kar l;ena..dis is an order..n 1 more think..i want wid me in

 

d evening..u promised me dat u vil help in my project...i vil b waiting.."

 

maan read d msg..smiled...

replied back...

 

" u need not make excuses for pending time wid me..just order..n m dere..."

 

geet read...blushed..den making naughty face...

 

" aye lo..bahane banana apki ada hai..mujhe sach me kaam hai..project research ka last

 

day hai n i want u on time..if u came late..u hav tp pay for it..."

 

maan read..smiled..

replied back...

 

" n wat exactly d punishment vil b..."

 

geet replied back..

 

" dats me u already knows..u cnt make it on time..."

 

maan replied back...

 

" i vil b on time at 7 in our bedroom...happy now.."

 

geet read..blushed..

replied back...

 

" ahem..ahem...our..???? "

 

maan read...smiled on his childish sweetheart...

replied back...

 

" ok..wud b..."

 

geet replied back...

 

" din me sapne..??...interesting..."

 

maan replied...

 

" kya kare..rat me tum ghode bechkar so rahi hoti ho..."

 

geet frowned..

replied back...

 

" me ghode bechke naho soti..aur aap sham me 7 baje pohich jayiye..no late..clear

 

enough.."

 

maan smiled reading it..

" yes MAM..now hav ur lunch..me also having.."..replied back..

 

...

aftr munch..geet made her way to bed...

while maan mde his way for meeting...

...

geet rolling on bed..not feeling sleepy...

she looked out side...resting her chin on pillow...n her body resting on stomach...

...

it was raining out side...

d most beautiful part of her life...

dis rain gave her maan...her life...her dreams.her love...

d way dis clouds hides d sky in his embrace..d same way her maan hides her in his

 

embrace...

every drop of rain..makes her feel her maan...

like deir relationship in totally connected to dis rain...

d way dose drop touches d earth...satisfying his thrust...

d same way her maan touches her satisfying her feeling...

she alwz loved d rain...

but d realization dat dis rain conneceted two heart..making it 1 forever...she loved d

 

rain even more...

 

suddenly she remembered her slam book...

" mujhe MAAN ke bare me kitna kuchh pata hai..aur mene kuchh fill bhi nahi kiya book

 

me..m so stupid.."

 

she immediately raon to her slam book...

n sat on bed...keeping slam book in front...

it was mid aftrnoon..but it was dark..as clouds were increasing n increasing...

she knew..slowly slowly dis beautifull calm raining vil turn into a strong storm...making

 

d whole world realize its importntance...

she switched on d light...

 

n started feeling...

 

" name - GEET+MAAN = MANEET...? "

 

" 1st intimate touch - ??..he is possessive which i love d most...unhe achha nahi

 

lagta jab me apna dhyan nahi rakhti..aise ek gusse wala pal barish ki bundon me yaadgar

 

ban gaya...wen i GEET... touched d lips of d person MAAN who is most special to me in

 

dis whole world...???...HUM...HUM ? TUM...TUM...HUM ? TUM..??? "

 

...

B4 she could fill further...

her door knocked...

she immeditaely put d slam book in safe place n opened d door..only to find her wud b

 

bhabhi LEHER standing in front of her wid a big smile...

 

geet - bhabhi..aap..kaise hai..

leher - me bilkul thik hu...aap kaisi hai geet...

 

both proceed towrds hall continueing deir chit-chat...

geet - i wud love to...

leher smiled - thnx geet...ab chale..hum sham tak jaldi aa jayenge...

rano - bachhiyon..chandni chauk me jyada mat ruk na..wo area etna safe nahi hai..jitni

 

jaldi ho sake utni jaldi wahan se nilkal jana...

leher - dnt worry mumma...hum chandni chauk ja hi nahi rahe..baki areas me dekh lenge...

rano smiled...

n both gals left...

...

 

SPOILERS : etni barish..project..shopping...AB TERA KYA HOGA GEET...:P :P

 

 

 

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